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Home»Fan Fiction»Swaragini_A Game Of Obsession and Revenge (Chapter- 1)
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Swaragini_A Game Of Obsession and Revenge (Chapter- 1)

pankhBy pankhMay 26, 201762 Comments4 Mins Read
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Thnx guys for the immense support..Most of u were asking of pairs..Well since its a swaragini ff, ultimately the pairs will be SwaSan and RagLak..and both will have equal importance here I can assure u that..here’s the first chapter..plz do tell me how was it.. Stay blessed πŸ™‚
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Chapter 1- First Move

Maheshwari’s Food Agency, Mumbai

“Well done Sanskar..m so proud of u..” Durga Prasad Maheshwari patted Sanskar after they bagged another big contract because of him..
He then turned towards Laksh who was shamelessly checking the receptionist out-“Laksh..I hope u will learn something from Sanskar..its time u also become responsible..”

Hearing no reply from him he raised his pitch -“Lakshh..” He frowned but Laksh was too deaf to hear .

“Lakshhhh..”He fumed with a much higher notch and Laksh shivered waking up from his wild dreams-“Ye..yes..yes Dad..”

DP barged-“Enough of ur carelessness..Laksh m warning u now..be serious and become responsible or else I have to take strict actions against u.” He left fuming.

Laksh clenched his fist in anger-” f**k responsible..even if I will bag any project still he will scold me..he just needs a reason to scold me..and what responsiblity he was talking about..what does we people do rather than betraying everyone..”

Sanskar patted Laksh’s shoulder to calm him-“That’s business Lucky..nd dont feel bad of Dad’s word..He is just worried for u. And besides he is probably right..u have to join business someday..den why not today..Today we have organised an interview to select a suitable legal advisor for our company and I don’t know anything you are accompanying me in this..”

Laksh was baffled-“Today..no way..Today I owe a date to Jenny..and m damn busy..and besides what’s the need for such a hurry..I will join some other day..plz Bhai..”

Sanskar was in no mood to get convinced-“No plz..its final Lucky.. no more arguments..u better join me”

“Okay” Laksh finally surrendered..”But one question..do we have girl candidates also in the interview.”

“Luckyyyy…”Sanskar playfully punched Laksh’s shoulder..and they both chuckled.

RECEPTION HALL

Sitting at the edge of the Sofa, Ragini was nervously waiting for her turn. It was their first step towards justice but she was hell worried. Every ten or twenty minutes later, one or the other person was coming out of the Interview Room disappointed with the rejection and she couldn’t help but smirk. But thinking about her own rejection was making her restless. She just cant afford a rejection. Taking a deep breath she headed towards the Convocation hall when her name was announced.

Classic Heritage Resort, Kandivali, Mumbai

Dressed in a perfectly body hugging swimming costume, Swara glanced the
delectating blue lagoon of the resort. She knew she don’t know swimming and would be drowning in a couple of minutes if she jumped inside but that’s what she wanted. Without giving a second thought she jumped inside the pool and as expected withing a blink of eye she started asphyxiating while trying to swim..

“Help..somebody Help” she bawled loudly struggling amid those water which was overpowering her..

Hearing her scream, people gathered there whispering who should jump inside the pool to save her while Swara was still struggling in the pool and finally loses her consiousness. They turned towards the direction of splashing sound of water which echoed from the other side of the pool..

A masculine creature reached towards her, lifted her up and brought her towards the shore of the pool. “Pump the water out of her body else it can be fatal” stated an middle aged women.

He squished her stomach and after oozing out some water from her mouth Swara finally opened her eyes.. “Hey..Are u fine” the person asked out of concern. Swara nodded and whispered a gentle thanks while he helped her in getting up.

Crowd disappeared sensing the situation was now under control. “By the way May I know what were u doing inside the swimming pool if u don’t know how to swim” asked the Man out of curiosity.

“Well..maybe I wanted u to save me.” She curtly replied but then chuckled when his brow cocked up in confusion. “Joking” she chuckled again and he too joined her a second later.

“Sahil..Sahil Sengupta..”he extended his hand and she shook it with hers smirking wide at the success of her first move -“Swara..Swara Bose..”
……………………….

Need to stop it here..else it would become too long..plz do share ur reviews and thnx for reading.. πŸ™‚

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    62 Comments

    1. Arjuna on May 26, 2017 7:39 am

      AWESOME

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:50 pm

        Thnx Arjuna..?

    2. Soumya on May 26, 2017 7:50 am

      Thanks 4 raglak

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:50 pm

        Thnx πŸ™‚

    3. sindhura on May 26, 2017 8:30 am

      Its true dear..in swaragini only 2 pairs exist one our HEAVENLY COUPLE SWASAN and CUTEST RAGLAK..i adore both of dem..but sad ki most ppl ignore hotty laksh for sanskar…swasan aΓ±d raglak made some spcl place in our heart..eventhough i love swasan love more madly but i also adore raglak..missing SR so much especially our swasan..

      Btw the chappy was awsm..post nxt part soon

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:51 pm

        Thnx Sindhura..and yeah dear me 2 missing SR a lot.. πŸ™‚

    4. Aadya114 on May 26, 2017 8:37 am

      It was really awesome. Waiting for the next update and thank u for raglak

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:52 pm

        Thnx Aadya.. πŸ™‚ take care.

    5. Pearly on May 26, 2017 8:38 am

      Awesome

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:53 pm

        Thnx dear.. πŸ™‚

    6. Aamy on May 26, 2017 8:39 am

      Superb

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:53 pm

        Thnx Aamy. πŸ™‚

    7. Naagin on May 26, 2017 8:54 am

      Waiting eagerly pls uploaded soon ?????

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:54 pm

        Thnx dear..will post soon. πŸ™‚

    8. phoniex on May 26, 2017 9:12 am

      Amazing start pankh

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:54 pm

        Thnx dear…I so liked ur user name.. πŸ™‚

    9. anu on May 26, 2017 9:42 am

      nyc
      can u tell me the pairs reveal it

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:55 pm

        Thnx Anu..nd the pairs are SwaSan and RagLak.. πŸ™‚

    10. IME on May 26, 2017 9:47 am

      Awesome
      Thanks for SwaSan and RagLak
      update soon

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:56 pm

        Thnx dear.. πŸ™‚ stay blessed..

    11. Sherin on May 26, 2017 10:00 am

      Awesome nd thanks fr raglak swasan

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:56 pm

        Thnx Sherin.. πŸ™‚

    12. Saumya_K on May 26, 2017 10:08 am

      Amzng

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:57 pm

        Thnx Saumya.. πŸ™‚

    13. Elizebathlovely on May 26, 2017 10:38 am

      superb

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:57 pm

        Thnx πŸ™‚ take care.

    14. Malu on May 26, 2017 10:59 am

      Awesome part

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:58 pm

        Thnx Malu.. πŸ™‚

    15. gayathri.visu on May 26, 2017 11:00 am

      Amazing start… Thanks for Swasan.

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:59 pm

        Thnx Gayathri.. πŸ™‚

    16. Anju on May 26, 2017 11:01 am

      superb

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 9:59 pm

        Thnx Anju.. πŸ™‚

    17. Neptune on May 26, 2017 11:47 am

      awesome pankh i loved it and the concept is really very interesting and thanks for swasan and raglak dear would love to read further………

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 10:00 pm

        Thnx dear.. πŸ™‚ m glad u liked it.. πŸ™‚

    18. Asw on May 26, 2017 12:39 pm

      Amazing keep going

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 10:01 pm

        Thnx a ton πŸ™‚

    19. Simi on May 26, 2017 2:16 pm

      Awesome..

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 10:02 pm

        Thnx Simi. πŸ™‚

    20. Sus on May 26, 2017 2:33 pm

      its really good dear

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 10:02 pm

        Thnx millions.. πŸ™‚

    21. kat on May 26, 2017 3:16 pm

      nyc

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 10:03 pm

        Thnx Kat.. πŸ™‚

    22. Aarushi_99 on May 26, 2017 3:29 pm

      Loved the start! It’s a really interesting concept.. Would love to read more!
      And thanks for SwaSan and RagLak!
      Update soon, take care!

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 10:03 pm

        Thnx a ton dear.. πŸ™‚ stay blessed..

    23. independent on May 26, 2017 3:31 pm

      Interesting

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 10:04 pm

        Thnx dear.. πŸ™‚

    24. Kumu on May 26, 2017 4:17 pm

      Interesting..continue soon..
      thank you for SWASAN??

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 10:05 pm

        Thnx Kumu.. πŸ™‚

    25. Aasthu on May 26, 2017 4:22 pm

      Interesting…..Laksh shamelessly checking out girls in front of his father was funny…Ragini smirking at the rejection of other candidates and worrying about her result was also good to see….happy that Swara’s plan came to a success….I loved the chapter but I felt it to be incomplete….you could have added Ragini’s interview part too….

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 10:12 pm

        Thnx Aasthu.. πŸ™‚ yeah dear I also thought to add the interview part but the chapter became too long to digest..will add that part in nxt one..and m really glad after reading ur honest opinion dear..being a writer there is always a room for improvement and I genuinely liked u helped me do better..thnx again.. πŸ™‚

    26. IQRA222 on May 26, 2017 6:56 pm

      it was an awesome part
      lucky’s character is too funny
      and happy for swara
      waiting for ragu to get selected and succeed too
      thanks for raglak and swasan
      waiting for the next part

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 10:20 pm

        Thnx dear..will post the nxt one soon πŸ™‚

    27. Ammu on May 26, 2017 9:30 pm

      Interesting episode and thanks a lot for Raglak story. Eagerly waiting for Raglak scenes. Plz post next part ASAP

      • pankh on May 26, 2017 10:21 pm

        Thnx Ammu.. πŸ™‚

    28. pari on May 26, 2017 10:57 pm

      It’s interesting thnxx for swasan

    29. Pramudi on May 26, 2017 10:59 pm

      Interesting dear.
      Thanks for swasan & raglak.

    30. avika on May 27, 2017 6:52 am

      Nice

    31. Seebu_s on May 27, 2017 7:33 am

      interesting…continue soon?

    32. A.xx on May 27, 2017 3:56 pm

      nice xx

    33. ritu on May 29, 2017 10:15 am

      interesting

    34. veena on May 29, 2017 4:36 pm

      nice dear…thanks for swasan?

    35. meera_s on May 30, 2017 6:49 pm

      nice

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