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Swaragini-Zehnaseeb(My Fate) Season 2 Episode 17 MAHA-EPISODE

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Evening
AP:Vidya bring Ammu its tym for mehandi.
Vidya: ji dadi
Vidya goes to Ammu’s room
Ammu was abt to check the phone.
Vidya: Ammu chalo..
Ammu: ji bhabhi…
Vidya: Ammu u r looking beautiful.
Ammu smiles.
Vidya brings her down.
Mehandi function starts.
Lady: ji naam kya likhna hain?
Sujtha: Nihaal so ‘N’
The lady writes N on her Ammu..other ladies also get mehandi on their hands
Mehandi function gets over.

At night Laksh reaches MM
Swara: How was the meeting Laksh?

Laksh: It was ok. How was the function.
Swara: was gud everyone was missing u.
Laksh: where is Ammu? And kids?
Swara: they slept.
Laksh:hmm..did u hd ur fud?
Swara: no..
Laksh: then come lets have fud.
They have fud
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The nxt day
AP:Ammu beta get ready for haldi beta.
Swara: i’ll make her ready Vidya beta u check on the boys.
Swara enters into Ammu’s room.
Swara:Ammu come wear this dress.
Swara hands over a dress to Ammu ..she comes out wearing it
Swara: u r looking beautiful come sit till haldi..u sit with me ..coz Ammu i am gonna miss u very much.
Ammu: Badi maa you promised tell me abt mumma..
Swara: now?..u really want to knw
Ammu: yes i want to
Swara: 20 yrs before i was 9 months pregnant and Ragini was 7 months pregnant Uttara was the first member in the family to give a girl child and papa ji havesaid tht he will give half of the property to Uttara and the rst half to tht bahu who will giver a daughter..And then came tht dreadful day came..me Ragini and one of our servent were only at home and i started to have pain…Ragini took the car and on our way Ragini smashed the car to a truck When i opened my eyes i was in the hospital and i was told..tht i lost my daughter..
Tears flow frm her eyes.
Swara: not only my child but Adarsh bhai and Pari bhabhi also lost their life. And baba..he was in comma for 18 years.
But Ragini and u were safe…Becoz of Ragini i lost my child our fmily lost their happiness..
Ammu hugs Swara.
Ammu: sry badi maa…i didn’t knw all these
Swara: so wat now i have u..wat else a mother want..
Vidya: Ammu Swara chichi haldi aa gaya.
Swara and Vidya takes Ammu downstairs..Everyone applies halti on her..
Last was Laksh.

Laksh: let u get all the happiness.
After Halti Ammu goes to her room.
Laksh: Ammu..
Ammu: ji bade papa.
Laksh sits on the bed.
Laksh: Ammu come sit ..u’ll not ur mehandi to ur bade papa?
Ammu shows her mehandi.
Laksh: so N for Nihaal.
Ammu looks on.
Laksh: wat about D?
Ammu: Dhrvu bhaiya and Dhyan bhaiya.
Laksh: and L?

Ammu: Laksh papa.
Laksh: and S
Ammu:Sanskar papa
Laksh: and A?
Ammu: Aarush..
Ammu stops as she realises wat she just said.
Laksh: Ammu who is Aarush?
Ammu: woh he a friend..Veer uncle’s son..
Laksh: how come he is just a friend?
Ammu: haan Laksh papa he ia just a friend.
Laksh: then how come to took his name..
Ammu: Laksh papa u said A..so
Laksh: so why his name Ammu ur name starts with A ur Aman bhaiyu’s name starts with A..ur badi dadi’s name start with A.
Ammu: Laksh papa woh..
Laksh: i thought u were like Ragini ..but u r not her..
Ammu: pls Laksh papa..hw can u tk care side even after knwing she killed ur daughter.
Laksh: who told u abt this?
Ammu: Swara maa.
Laksh: Ammu ur Swara maa is blind..its not lyk tht it was an accident
Ammu: Swara maa told hw Mumma smashed the car infront of the truck.
Laksh: so tht wat ur Swara maa told…do u anything wat happened before tht..do u knw hw ur papa and mumma’s marriage happened hw my and ur Swara maa’s marriage happened?..do u know from where u got ur name….do u knw who our Ammu was? Didn’t ur Swara maa tell u all these?
Ammu: Laksh papa wat r u telling…
Laksh: Ragini has suffered throughout her life..and her greatest strength is her family….not us its the Rathores…do u knw why does even after being my and Swara’s son Shrawu went with Ragini?
Ammu: i don’t knw anything Laksh papa.
Laksh: Ragini was 5 years old wen me and Sanskar saw her for the first tym..me Sanskar and Rithwik was in same collage and so was Swara but we had one more friend Aman Singha…
FB Shows.
Ragini and Aman’s friend..their love Aman proposing Ragini..Everyone saying Sanskar and Swara to be GF and BF…
Riku’s marriage and the RagMan’s wedding preparation..Bachelor party Swara and Aman’s accident..

FB Ends..
Laksh: it was Aman’s last wish tht Sanskar should marry Ragini….but he didn’t say it simply..
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FB Shows
Aman reading Sanskar dairy and comes to knw Sanskar loves Ragini.
Ragini and Sanskar’s marriage SwaLak’a marriage Swara’s jealousy towards Ragini.
Ragini coming to knw abt Aman’s recording abt Sanskar
Ragini and Jaan.
Swara telling Ragini tht she is najayis..she accuses Jaan and Ragini to be in a relationship…Ragini telling Janki is alive and dadi telling tht Jaan is Janki’s nephew.
Swara giving birth to twin boys Swara and Laksh seperation
Their suffering in 7 years abt Sparsh and Shrawu…
Ragini and Jaan taking care of Shrawu as their son.
Rathores treating Laksh as their son.
Maheshwaris misunderstood abt RagJan.

All confussions clear.
RagJan engagement.
Sanskar and Swara coming to RM.
Swalak patch up.
Swara Ragini patch up.
Ragini saves Sparsh from an accident.
Sanskar Jaan and Anushka.
Sanskar and Ragini’s marriage.
FB Ends
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Ammu is in tears..
Laksh: then this accident happened..and tht too becoz on half way Ragini was not feeling better and she saw the truck inorder to save Swara she smashed the car but she was unaware tht Adarsh bhaiya was coming behind them and ….
This is wat happened..still she took everything on her head…
Ammu: Laksh papa i didn’t knw all these..
Laksh: day before yday i stayed home wen all went for shopping ..i called ur phone and found it to be here..and then i got a call..its was Ragini..do u knw wat she said? She thought it was u who answered the call..she said tht she knws tht u love smone else and now i knw its him Aarush ri8.
Ammu: wat mumma..how did she knw..
Laksh: thts ur mumma..
Ammu: Laksh papa i don’t knw wat to say but nw i knw he don’t love me..
Laksh: r u sure?
Ammu: yes..i don’t want anymore things to go wrong..and Laksh papa tell me does papa knws hw this accident happened?
Laksh: i don’t knw after tht day Sanskar never spoke abt it. But one thing is sure he still loves Ragini the most..he is just pretenting tht he hates her
Swara: Ammu come and have ur fud.
Ammu: Bade papa lets go down.
They go and have lunch.
Sanskar: Ammu u cried?
Laksh: woh …
Swara: i knw…
Sanskar: come on Ammu u r my brave girl.
AP: Sanskar u r saying lyk she is going for a war.
Swara:maa..
Sanskar: i cant belive my lil girl is goning to get married.
After lunch.
Ammu: bade papa then why did mumma left me here?
Laksh: i don’t knw there will sm big reason behind it..coz i trust her more than anyone.
Ammu: Thank u Laksh papa..if u hadn’t told me all these then i would have..
Laksh: Ammu till ur mumma is with u nothing will happen against ur wish.
Vidya: Ammu ..
Ammu: ji bhabhi…Laksh papa..so have u forgiven Mumma..
Laksh: she hvnt done anything wrong..it was our misunderstanding.
Ammu hugs him..and goes
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Rathores reach Kolkata.
Ragini: I think we should not go to MM right now.
Shrawu: but why mumma?
Ragini: i don’t want to create a scene there..and Dhruv told Ammu agreed by her own wish not by any force.
Muku: still Ragu..
Riku: if she wants tht then let it be.
Rathore: till then we have our house here.
They leaves to RM(in Kolkata)
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@MM
Ammu takes her phone and reads the msg..
“Pls listen to me ..i knw u r angry with me for taking u along with me ..but beta mumma hv a big reason for it nw u’ll not understand ..i knw u r doing this marriage to show ur anger but beta don’t do this..if u feel it is a sacrifice…pls just think abt it once..tell ur papa if u don’t want this marriage to happen…and pls don’t hat me beta..ur Ragini mumma”
Ammu: mumma…no mumma i cant hate u ….and i’ll never sry for tht day mumma.pls forgive me…and mumma i am sry i’ll have to this marriage becoz he doesn’t love me…and now i also don’t love him..he is just a friend ..thts all
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@RM
Rathore: Princess…
Ragini: papa i am fine…come on get ready fast…
Taru: dadu ..its ur pothi’s wedding …dont come there lyk its ur wedding..
Taru laughs with Shrawu and Janki..
Janki gives high fi to both…
Rathore: acha ji i am old..and wat abt ur dadi?
Shrawu: oh ho..she is ever green..kyun Taru?
Rathore: oh ho madam u r evergreen and i am old huh?
Janki smiles…
Rathore: now i’ll show u who is old..
Rathore picks Janki up…
Janki: Raghu..put me down kids r here…
Taru and Shrawu open their mouth seeing it
Taru: solid hain yaar..
Shrawu: bilkul yaar..
Rathore(audiable only to Janki): now stop blushing..otherwise i’ll go crazy again.
Janki playfully hit his shoulders.
Janki: kush toh sharam karo…
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Its Ni8..
@MM
Ammu is getting ready…she is wearing a red goold lehanga…
With jwellary and hair fully done..
Voice: looking beautiful.
She is shockd to hear tht voice.
Ammu: Aarush!
Ammu turns back and sees Aarush there.
Aarush: kaise ho?
Ammu: Aarush u here at this tym..wat if smone sees us?
Aarush: oh hp..stop yaar…and don’t wry i’ll go nw i just came here to tell u smthing.
Ammu: tell me wat?
Aarush comes close to her.
Ammu: Aarush..
Aarush holds Ammu’s hand..
Aarush: I LOVE U Ammu.

Ammu is shocked..
Aarush keeps his hand on his check and close his eyes..
Aarush: pls don’t slap me for this ..
Aarush slowly opens his eyes.
Aarush: i knw u r shocked see ..i was trying to control myself but i couldn’t i kw its ur wedding today in some tym…but i cant live without telling u this..I love u Ammu..but forget it here itself…and get ready beautiful bride..he is waiting….
He goes…
Tears comes frm her eyes..Those words..was tht which she wanted to hear…but nw it was too late….
She sat on the bed….
Her thoughts ran to Ragini’s msg…Laksh telling her not to do this marriage….Aarush’s msg..he coming and confessing his love…time spend by them …
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Sparsh: baraath aa gaya…
Swara: Sanskar Laksh chalo….
Maheshwaris welcome Chauhans.
Nihaal sit in the mandap..
AP: Swara Vidya bring Ammu.
Dhruv: no i’ll bring her..
Aman: me too..
Dhruv and Aman brings Ammu.
Ammu is coming lyk a lifeless body she tires maximum to avoid her pain..and control her tears..
Laksh sees Ammu and goes to her.
Ammu signals him tht she is ok.
Swara makes her sit in the mandap.
All these things happened ..ran in her thoughts..
She looks staright and sees Aarush standing with his parents..looking and smiling at her.
Pandit ji starts the ritual he asks Nihaal’s sister to do gadbandhan….
Ammu closes her eyes…
She remembes time spen by them in Delhi Aarush getting close to her ..she remembers he telling her i love u..
Ammu opens her eyes but she couldn’t find Aarush..she sees Rathores…she looks at Laksh..
Ammu stands up..
Everyone is shocked.
Swara: Ammu wat happened?
Ammu: i cant do this marriage.

Sanskar: wat r u saying beta.
Ammu: haan papa..i cant sacrifice my love…i can t see him in pain….
Swara: wat r u talking beta?
Ammu: sry Nihaal but i cant marry u …
Sanskar: Ammu wat r u saying..
Ammu: sry papa…sry but i cant do this..Nihhal i don’t want to spoil ur life.
Aman: Ammu ..pls…stop this drama.
Sparsh: haan Ammu stop this nonsense.
Ammu: no i cant..
Ammu folds her hands.
Ammu: sry everyone.
Ammu is abt to go then realises tht her pallu is tied to Nihaal’s shawl.
She removes her pallu and runs…

Aman; Ammu stop.
But Taru and Shrawu stop them..
Ammu looks at Ragini.
Ragini signals her to go.
Ammu runs..
Ammu sees outside Aarush is walking away.
Ammu: Aarush…
Aarush: i knw its happening in my head..
Ammu: Aarush
Aarush: no its happening in my head.
Ammu tuns to him.
Ammu: phattu Aarush.
Aarush turns back.
Aarush: Ammu

Ammu: r u not attending my wedding?
Aarush: to call me u came here and tht to lyk this ..
Ammu hugs him
Ammu: tum na sach mein phattu ho…who else does anything lyk this?..do u have h some sense?..u came to my house right before my wedding to confess ur love..phattu..hero samjhtha hain khud ko
Aarush: oh i see…and u ..u were suppressing ur love all this tym ri8.
Ammu: don’t blame me u only made me do this..
Aarush hugs her back..
Aarush: whatever ..nw i am not gonna leave u to anyone..i love u Ammu and i cant live without u…i love u..will u marry me..
Ammu: do i hv any other option?
Aarush hugs her tight…
Aarush touches Ammu’s bindhi with is of sindoor and applies it on her hair line….
Aarush: welcome to our new life…Mrs Takur…

Ammu touches her hairline…
Ammu: thanku for making me a part of it…
Aarush : just a second..
He takes out an mangalsutra frm his pocket.
Ammu: this is the same which u gave me wen we were in Delhi…
Aarush: i couldn’t keep it away frm me
Aarush make her wear it…
Tears come from her eyes..
Aarush: now don’t start ..
Ammu sees him.
Ammu wipes tears on Aarush’s face..
Ammu: now who is flooding?
They hug each other more tight…
All comes there..
Seeing them Aarush removes his jacket and makes her wear it.
Sanskar sees Ammu with sindoor and mangalsutra.
Sanskar: how could u do this?
Swara: Ammu why r u being lyk ur mother…do u want everyone to hate u?
Ammu: pls Swara maa not a word aganist my mumma.
Ragini hears this nd becomes happy.
Rathore keeps hand on Ragini’s shoulder.
Ammu: haan i knw everything abt u all..and i knw it was just an accident…
Swara: u have become lyk her ..completely..
Ammu: not me ..Swara maa its u who have become lyk the old version of u…
Sujatha: Ammu wat are u talking abt.
Laksh: if she wants tht then let she have it.
Sanskar: then wat will we tell to Nihaal and his family.
Sparsh: dad they left…
Laksh looks on
FB Starts
Laksh tells everyone tht he have to attend a meeting in Delhi..
He doesn’t go to Delhi but goes to Nihaal’s house Laksh meets them and tell them everything…
Nihaal: Laksh uncle then we should stop this marriage.
Laksh: she wont agree tht..
NIhaal: then let tht happen wat destiny wants..i am with u uncle..all of us r …
Laksh smiles and hugs him
FB Ends.
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Ammu goes and hugs Ragini
Ammu: sry mumma for everything i said on tht day.
Ragini: no bacha..its ok..
Sanskar: well done Mrs Rathore..for taking ur revenge u took my daughter to ur side…
Ragini: u r mistakn Mr.Maheshwari she is my daughter also.
Swara: Ragini u r gonna pay for all these.
Juhi hugs Ammu

Veer: welcme to the family beta.
Ammu goes to take blessings frm Sanskar.
Sanskar: don’t come near me…just go and be with ur mumma not me.
Dhruv Vidya Dhyaan and DP gives Ammu and Aarush blessings…
Ammu: i promise u papa ….i’ll make everything fine…
Ragini gets a call..
Ragini: papa chalo lets go back…

Taru: bua wat happened?
Riku: come ..lets leave..
Rathores give blessings to Ammu and Aarush.
Ammu(in mind): wat happened to mumma?
Laksh comes and hugs her.
Laksh: keep my daughter happy ok..
Aarush nodes his head…
Veer: i’ll get the car…
Veer Juhi and Aarush goes.
Ammu: Laksh papa mumma got a call after tht she was behaving different.
Laksh: isn’t ..there is smthing more beta..we will have to find it…
Ammu: we will soon..find it out.
Laksh makes her sit in the car…
They leaves….
Takurs welcome Ammu.
Aarush shows her their room.

Aarush looks the door.
Aarush comes closer to her..He removes his jacket on her..
He touches her hands She closes her eyes..
He makes her turn around
He comes forward.
Ammu opens her eyes.
Ammu: Aarush i want to tell u smthing..
Aarush: abhi?
Ammu: haan abhi..
Aarush: ok tell…
Ammu tells abt everything…
Aarush: so Aman se Ammu..and Ragini Aman and Sanskar se Anamika..not bad..
Ammu; Aarush do u think its a joke..
Aarush: come on..no not at all…i am there with we will make Ragini and Sankar uncle one…till then my pyaari wife u take rest.
Aarush picks her up and places on the bed..
Aarush: don’t wry just sleep…
They sleeps
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Precap: Dectective Ammu Aarush and Laksh

I hope u like this episode….i knw tht i don’t knw how to write romantic scenes..and i knw i messed it up..sry for disappointing u..and i’ll try maximum to be regular..love u all and thank u

Aditi.Ayansh

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