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Home»Fan Fiction»Swaragini-Zehnaseeb(My Fate) Episode 33
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Swaragini-Zehnaseeb(My Fate) Episode 33

administratorBy administratorApril 18, 201636 Comments5 Mins Read
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Sry for the confussion guys..Jaan is actually Janki’s elder cousin sister’s son…And Shrawu and Sparsh are SwaLak’s kids..No one other than Sujatha and Dhruv knws tht Laksh’s son’s name is Shrawan….Only Laksh Ragini and Jaan knws Laksh’s other son’s name is Sparsh ok….
My previous episodes link…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=swaragini+zehnaseeb
Thanx for ur lovely comments guys..keep commenting guys love u all 🙂
Recap: The new Rathore family.
Sparsh: Dad..
Sanskar hides his wallet.
Sanskar: Haan champ.
Sparsh: i am getting bored…anyway we have nxt i week holiday becoz of some camp in school..can we go to sm place?
Sanskar: which plae do u want to go?
Dhruv hears it.
Dhruv: what abt Delhi?
Sparsh: haan dad Delhi is fine.
Sanskar: Champ u go and ask dad ji.if he agrees we will go.
Sparsh: yah..lets go Dhruv bhaiya.
They leave
Swara comes in Sanskar’room
Sanskar: do u want anything Swara?
Swara: Sanskar pls forgive me.
Sanskar: i have forgiven u ..nw pls go..
Swara: I want to thank u for whatever u r doing for Sparsh. Even though he is not ur son.
Sanskar: Swara, Sparsh is my brother’s son so he is lyk my son only.
Swara: Sanskar ..r u ok?
Sanskar: hw can i be ok?. I lost my brother i lost my wife…my love..my life….nw its just Sparsh..i want him to be happy..
AP: Swara..
Swara: Sanskar Maa is calling me..
She goes…
Sanskar looks at the photos in his table on one phot its him and Sparsh and on another its him and Laksh.
Sanskar: i am sry Lucky….
Sparsh: papa dadu maan gaye…
Sanskar: ok then Sparsh we will go to Delhi tomorrow by our private plane ok?
Sparsh: ok..
Sanskar: nw u go and pack
Sparsh leaves
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Nxt day
@RM
Ragini comes down..
Janki: Raghu u say.
Rathore: No u say..laksh u say..
Laksh: U r big ri8 so u say..
Rathore: den maa ji will tell
Ragini sees them.
Ragini: papa maa Lucky wat happened?
Rathore: Princess Riku wants to say smthing to u
Riku Muku dadi Taru Shrawu and Mehta’s were abt to go out.
(Rathore has already disused abt Jaan and Ragini to everyone except Ragini Jaan Taru and Shrawu.)
Riku(in mind): Kaha fasa diya aapne papa.
Riku: woh Ragu..
Janki: Raghu ….Riku ko pareshaan karna band karo…
Laksh: Ragini woh Riku Muku Taru Shrawu dadi and Mehta’s are going out..ri8..toh i ws thinking its been so many days tht me papa and maa ..sat together..so if u don’t mind can u and Jaan go smwhere out?
Jaan: acha toh massi u r throwing us away huh?
Ragini: its ok na Jaan ..come lets go.
Shrawu: I will also go wit Daddu and Mumma…
JHaan: of course…
Ragini Jaan and Shrawu leaves..
Rathores and Mehtas smile
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Maheshwari family is in their private plane..
Swara is sitting alone Sanskar and Sparsh are sitting together…She sees them and thinks of laksh..she imagines Laksh and Sparsh sitting together …
Suddenly Sparesh comes to her.
Sparsh: Mumma
Swara: haan Sparsh.
Sparsh sits wit her.
Sparsh: do u knw mumma 2 new students joined our class..
Swara: oh thts nice.
Sparsh: Mumma they r twin brothers..i wish i also had one twin brother.
Swara: Sparsh tumhe dadi bula rahe hain.
Tears comes frm Swara’s eyes.
Swara(in mind): u have a twin brother Sparsh….
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Maheshwaris reach Delhi.
They have a house in Delhi they stay there..
Kids: come we want to go for side seeing…
DP: Haan lets go.
They Maheshwaries leave.
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RagJanShr..r in a mall..
Ragini and Jaan r doing shopping for Taru and Shrawu.
Ragini take same cloths for Taru and Shrawu.
Ragini: Jaan hw is it?
Jaan: very gud..ask Shrawu also.
Ragini: Shrawu ..
Shrawu: haan mumma.
Jaan: Sharwu hw is this dress?
Shrawu: Daddu same to same dress
Ragini: hain ek tumhare liye aur ek Taru keliye.
Sharwu: ek dum twins jaise hain na daddu..
Ragini gets disturbed hearing this..
Jaan: Shrawu iski colour uthna acha nahi hain ..ri8.
Shrawu: kyun aapko acha nahi laga.
Jaan nodes his head in no..And shows lyk vomiting..
Shrawu laughs..
Jaan also laughs ..
They see Ragini who is giving Jaan a deadly look..
Jaan and Shrawu stop laughing.
Shrawu: Daddu woh i am going to games section..meet me there after shopping ..
Shrawu(in mind): Bach gaye.
Jaan: no Ragini don’t look at me lyk tht..i ws just joking…
Shrawu runs to Jaan..and ask him to bend down.
Sharwu whispers in his ears: If smthing happends then Aman dude ko yaad karna..bagwaan tumhare raksha kare..
Shrawu runs from there.
Ragini: Mr.Jaan…
Jaan: Hmm Ragini see lets go there and select…come come..
Jaan walks ahead of Ragini. Ragini smiles…
Jaan and ragini selects dress for the kids..
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Maheshwaris reach tht same mall..
Precap: Swara sees Ragini with Jaan and Shrawu.
Well guys i am going to start a new FF..Swaragini Nazideekiyan…its a RagLak FF……
A smile is happiness u’ll find it ri8 under ur nose….So keep smiling..
Have a great day buddies ..love ur Sarika Shah 😀

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36 Comments

  1. S @meer on April 18, 2016 3:38 pm

    hey nice one pls upd@te the next episode…love you

    • Sarika Shah on April 18, 2016 4:05 pm

      Thanx Sam.. love u too 😀

  2. Tuba on April 18, 2016 3:53 pm

    Thank u Sarika for a RagLak ff cant wait for u to start it I cant tell u how eager I am!!
    And haan Sameer is the first one to comment haan oh ho! Congratulations!

    • Sarika Shah on April 18, 2016 4:31 pm

      Thank u Tuba….haan Sam ,,,,wat to tell..simply amazing..
      Love u yaar 🙂

  3. Sindhu rm on April 18, 2016 4:05 pm

    Dont tell me she will again start against ragini
    Seriously in this ff swara has no job expect
    Doudting on all

    • Sarika Shah on April 18, 2016 4:32 pm

      Dont worry Sindhu di..Swara is positive nw…
      Thanx for ur comment ..love u di 🙂

  4. ammy on April 18, 2016 5:07 pm

    Interesting yaar.update nxt part soon

    • Sarika Shah on April 18, 2016 6:00 pm

      Thanx yaar Ammy 🙂

  5. Lila on April 18, 2016 5:19 pm

    Good…plz ragsan reunion fast

    • Sarika Shah on April 18, 2016 6:04 pm

      Yh i’ll Lila..Thanx 🙂

  6. rakhi on April 18, 2016 5:22 pm

    Nyc one

    • Sarika Shah on April 18, 2016 6:04 pm

      Thanx Rakhi 🙂

  7. stoneheart on April 18, 2016 5:35 pm

    swara Batman hai kya sab kuch wahi dekhti hai??
    pls thoda zada nai hua ??
    laksh k pyar ka kya hua?

    • Sarika Shah on April 18, 2016 6:34 pm

      Arrey kaha thi aap..maine aapka comment bahut miss kiya…Laksh ke bare mein janne keliye thoda indezaar kijiye 😀

  8. Leia on April 18, 2016 5:43 pm

    OMG!!! Supper excited for the amazing news. Ragini and Lakesh FF.
    I like seeing the cemetery between Jaan and Ragini their moment together with Sarawa they almost looked like family almost. FAINALY Sanskar coconut head start working after 7 years and reales what he lost. Will love to read a cheaper from his point of view maybe it will readem him in my eye since am not a big fan of him at the moment. Can’t imagine how swara or ragini will react seeing my each other specialy if she came to know about her kid being raise by none other then her sister. Another great chapter I can almost see there will be anothet Maha cheaper will all the hint you leaving :D.
    Now I have to go back and pary the new fanfiction will be post soon.

    • Sarika Shah on April 18, 2016 6:36 pm

      Thank u Leia for this wonderful comment…i loved it..Thanx for showing support lyk this…and yh i have posted My new FFs intro…. love u lots ..
      😀

    • Leia on April 18, 2016 9:45 pm

      Love you too Sarika *hugs*… Really tried searching for it with no luck :(. could you please share the link if its available.

    • Sarika Shah on April 19, 2016 8:19 am

      Of course Leia…www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-nazdeekiyaan-raglak-intro/
      🙂 Thanx dear

  9. taiana on April 18, 2016 6:00 pm

    Amazing n im so happy to know ur going to start a new ff n that too on my fav couple raglak<3<3<3 Thank u soo much for that.. Post the next part soon n also ur new ff:D

    • Sarika Shah on April 18, 2016 10:19 pm

      Thank u so much Taiana … 🙂

  10. Dhara on April 18, 2016 6:04 pm

    Nice

    • Sarika Shah on April 18, 2016 10:21 pm

      Thanx Dhara 🙂

  11. Elina on April 18, 2016 6:05 pm

    I really like ur ff dear n its a very nice update plz update the next epi today itself please……. I like Jaan n ragini together some more scenes of them plzz….

    • Sarika Shah on April 18, 2016 10:22 pm

      Thank u soo muxh Elina..love u ….yh ill do some more RagJan scenes 🙂

  12. kriya on April 18, 2016 6:38 pm

    awsm epi……cant wait for next part n ur new ff…….

    • Sarika Shah on April 18, 2016 10:33 pm

      Thank u Kriya ….Thank u soo much 🙂

  13. Nigam on April 18, 2016 7:54 pm

    How can janaki cousin sister’s son can be a pair to ragini he is also a brother too ragini…don’t make confuse through u r relations

    • Sarika Shah on April 18, 2016 10:33 pm

      Nigam i am sry…see pls try to accept it yes i knw i am confussed … 🙂

  14. lovely on April 18, 2016 9:47 pm

    thanks for another ragini ff

    • Sarika Shah on April 19, 2016 8:20 am

      Thank u Lovely 🙂

  15. Nuszat (T!B!H!) (~Nusz) on April 18, 2016 10:19 pm

    Like always it’s amazing, love you..~Nusz

    • Sarika Shah on April 19, 2016 8:22 am

      Thank u bestie…love u .. 🙂

  16. pavani on April 18, 2016 10:35 pm

    Don’t make Sanky week he is right in his point of view actually ragini never trusted him jitna trust vo laksh ko kiya utna sanky pe kyu nahi karpayi ass she never loved him its true nd this silly laksh have draged it nd she went with him she never tried to clear their misunderstanding its not fair

    • Sarika Shah on April 19, 2016 8:37 am

      di woh actually Ragini loved him but she never expressed it to him in the correct way…thts y dis misunderstanding occured..thanx for ur lovely comment di ?

  17. sinzo on April 19, 2016 5:32 pm

    soo sweet episode…..i loved it?

    • Sarika Shah on April 20, 2016 11:49 am

      Thank u Sinzo?

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