Hey everyone thank you so much for liking my first fan fiction.
This is part 2.
As the family separates and go to each other’s friend abhi asks swara about what’s been going on with life and swara tells him everything. He remembers how sanskaar and laksh were looking at him before. Abhi tells swara to forget all that and let’s go dance. (This is just a plan to see sanskaar and lakshs reaction). They both start dancing when sanskaar comes and pulls swara and starts dancing with her. Swara says what the heck sanskaar why did you stop me dancing with abhi. Sanskaar replies because I can’t see you dancing with anyone else since I …. Swara says what i……
Sanskaar says what i mean is I care about you and I don’t think abhi seems right. Swara rolls her eyes and says now that we started dancing let’s finish it. Mohabbat barse plays in the background. Abhi in his head thinks I was right I should focus on swara and sanskaar love story not laksh. Laksh from far gets jealous and drinks.
Laksh in a drunkard state tells everyone how he loves swara so much and starts saying bad things about sanskaar and ragini. The whole family gets embarrassed due to him. Swara then gets angry and slaps him.
Promo: sanskaar car breaks down and they have to stay in a hotel in one room since their were no other rooms available.
Credit to: Mumina
14 Comments
I liked it very much. Plz upload the next part.
Yaar I wish mein iss writer ko ek jor se jhappi de pati…. (BTW I’M A GIRL)
so awesome………
Love SWASAN……
thanks a lotttttttttt dear.
Thank you so much……
Loved it…………. And love SWASAN always.
Actually I like SWASAN and SWALAK both ?
Nice
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liked when swara slapped laksh 4 saying against sanskar.
Nice..continue dear
hey,mumina
I like your fan fiction very mch
Plz dont stop it
Keep writing
hope tm real swaragini ki writter hoti
Nice one dear..
So nice,but its too short plz make it long because I like it very much so need more scenes of swasan.plz consider my request.
Ok
Where is ragini pls make raglak soon. Epi is so nice
Thank you so much I’ll start typing part 3
it s realy very nice n lykd wen sanskaar pulled swara n also wrn swara gave a tight slap 2 laksh
Great work yaar….loved the swasan pair…i just wanted to give a suggestion that maintain the suspense …dnt tell before wts going to happen like u said abt abhi…and make sure that the description is a bit long…its just a suggestion dnt mind
Thnx and don’t worry I don’t mind.
It was good but pls dont show lakshya in a negative chatacter. I like him so much. U can show his love story with rags. And where is ragini u didnt mention about her