Hello everyone .. I am not new here..i never thought I would write from here..please read my A/N at the end..this ff starts from the point where ragini’s truth is out infront of laksh ..but swara and sanskar are not married for real they reveal it with the help of laksh…so here goes…
Laksh drags ragini to maheshwari family .Ragini is numb..as soon as she enter maheshwari family she stumbles feeling dizzy ..and is about to fall but swara and sanskar hold her..
Swara: laksh she is not well..
Laksh: this another of her trick swara…I wont fall for this one..
Sanskar : lucky look at her she seems ill..
Laksh: I don’t care bhai..
He drags her inside and pushes her . and he plays the video…
Ragini stands up shocked…she felt as if her world is crashing in front of her…
Everyone is shocked to see her true colours..
ragini comes to dadi..
ragini: dadi I didn’t do this trust me…da
a burning sensation is felt across her cheek..ragini holds her cheek in pain..
ragini: dadima..u believe this..this is all a
swara: conspiracy..
ragini goes to swara…
ragini : haa swara..
swara: u will say this only na that this is all planned by me…
AP: I never expected this from u ragini u spoiled three lives..because of swara and sanskar had to marry ..because of u swalak had to separate.. I feel so ashamed of u..
Ragini: vo…
Laksh: stop ur dramas ragini..we believed u once now it will not happen…
Ragini : why don’t u trust me..i didn’t do this…
She falls on her knees..
Sanskar: I want to trust u ragini…but I am the witness to ur deeds…
Swara: we were half sisters but I always thought of u as my soul sister..but u ..u snatched my love from me..u didn’t care about ma baba..today I hate u ragini…
tears were continuously falling from ragini’s eyes
DP: I don’t want this girl in my house any more..
Sumi: ragini atleast change now…come lets go from here..
Shekar: sumi she cant come with us…I am ashamed to say that she is my daughter…she wont step in my house…
Swara: baba..how can we leave her…she didn’t respect relations…but we have to ..please baba…
Shekar: okay for u I will allow her but she has to sign divorce papers..
He goes to laksh
Shekar: laksh beta this is the only way we could say sorry to u..
A broad smile comes on laksh’s face …while swara, sanskar and sumi r shocked..ragini is standing still..fighting an unknown battle..finally she moves forward and signs on divorce papers..
Laskh mocks her..
Laksh: this is u r love..for mere shelter u signed on divorce papers…
Ragini looks at him with painful look and snorts..
She leaves mm alone like a dead body..
Gadodias also decide to leave…
Laksh: one minute papa..
Gadodias wait…
Laksh comes to swara and bends on knees…
Laksh: swara I was wrong to u..I loved u but trusted ragini …please accept my sorry as well as my love for u…
Sanskar looks broken while swara is taken back…
Swara: sorry laksh..u r my sister’s husband…
AP: haan laksh also swara is married to sanskar..
Swara: no badi maa..we r not married..it was our plan to bring out ragini’s truth…but now I cant accept laksh..ragini snatched my love but I cant snatch her love..besids I love sanskar..
Sanskar was even more shocked now…
Sanskar: swara what r u saying..i don’t love u…I LOVE RAGINI…
SO THAT’S IT GUYS…it’s a ragsan and swalak ff
Precap: ragini’s POV is she guilty
So yeah many of u may not like this..if i should say sorry to anyone its raglak fans i am so sorry guys..
This is a dedication to all ragsan fans…there was a controversy guys..and ragsan being bro sis is coming again and again..so for them…if ragsan r bro and sis then please do tell me ragini’s elder sister swara ,doesn’t she get the first right of being sister to sanskar..
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Shri dear superb dear, loved it.
Thank u rehna dear
aww shri i love u love u lots dear am so much happy dr but pls add ragsan in title dr or else u know what will happen. i know that u don’t stop in middle. how is ur uncle. thank u so much
Thanks mk…it was severe accident..he got operated today …but ff was also imp..and I won’t put ragsan in title…let me see how the bashers r gonna break me…love u too dear
its nice please try to make it as raglak as i love them.it is just my opinion sry .but i like ur ff even if it is ragsan also i will read it …..
fabulous mindblowing shri. don’t stop in middle. Eagerly waiting for further chappy. LOVE U SO MUCH FOR THIS FF. AM OBESSED FOR RAGSAN
You know what ????????? I love you yaar Shri. ????????? I can’t stop laughing god please and you very well know why. Kudos girl for this point to start you story I don’t know whether I will be able to read further but I will take time and surely will read. I really love you so much Shri I can’t tell you how much. But you brought a bright smile on my face ??????????
wow…shri…another ff…its like a treat…awesome…please post next part soon…really waiting how they fell in love
awesome
amazing dear update sooon. Thank u soooo much for RAGSAN because am crazy fan for RAGSAN
Yaar ragsan pls it nice and continue this ff .
Fantastic my dear sista, I love the way Sanskar said: “SWARA WHAT ARE YOU SAYING, I DON’T LOVE YOU, I LOVE RAGINI!” The smile on my face got brighter and brighter, love you??❤❤❤.
FABULOUS. WAITING FOR NEXT PART. I LOVE U FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL FF
you are absolutey wrong ragini called sanskaar as haer brother that doesn’t mean that he becomes swara’s brother, because he is her muhbola bhai and not real one so your this concept is totally wrong . secondly though swasan are not married but raglak are so u are writing the story of a girl with her jethji it would have been better if u would have started from sanskaars entry. as a writer u should know how to respect relations and specially marriage. u people in ur stories always say to give importance to story and not the pairs so please learn to do the same.if u urself are not capable of respecting marriage then don’t give a wrong message in the society. so ur second point is also wrong. and thirdly if ragini was negative in the serial that doesn’t mean that u people will always take its revenge by making swara negative in ur stories because it wasn’t our fault.
Hello. I was really waiting to reply. Ragini divorced laksh and swara and sanskar’s marriage was fake. You understood this? Great.
Now get one point straight a girl marrying her Jeth when he is not really married to swara that word doesn’t make sense.
You understand fiction no then please don’t blame ranveer Singh that he is encouraging more gang rapes with his book your dreams are mine now.
Ohho and about swara being negative if you compare the FFS where ragini is negative in Swasan FFS is too high. It is her story let her decide who she wants to keep negative.
Revenge Gosh she has lot better work than that
hey dear even i was waiting to reply of course it is fiction but it does not mean that u can make a joke of emotions ok and please read my comment clearly i said that swasan are not married but raglak are so it is quite awkard to marry ur jeth and haven’t u watched fictions earlier ragini called sanskaar her brother than swara does not become his sister and sanskaar is laksh’s big brother so according to that he is even ragini’s big bro i hope u understood.
hey dhruvi….i would like to answer on the last part of your comment….writers are not taking “REVENGE” as you are putting it…its their story ……and why will we take revenge on you people…it wasn’t anyone’s fault how the tracks in the serial shaped up…….and its writers choice if they want to show any one negative…….
Hey dhruvi thanks for the concern…and did I mention any where that swara is negative ..no dear …I have some thing for this ff and regarding marriage…in the show also raglak were married but still Laksh married kavya…and if my sis calls someone as bhai…I don’t know what u think of them but he becomes my bhai….
Shri don’t worry you will not get zero comments for sure. And Ya I understand their Jalebi like explanations. You continue da. And most hilarious was swara is sanskar’s wife first then she is ragini’s sister ROFL. ???????. They never make sense Chuck it
Goti kalti maar. You heard that dialogue. No? so sad. Hope you understand the meaning of it. Read my comment too I said raglak are divorced in this story. Did not read? Awww read it once again. Has she made fun of any relation I don’t see that. You know I searched with the help of durbin also. And you have heard of vali and sugreeva? So you mean to say Ramayan was wrong? For the time being in this story ragini is divorcee of Laksh. And your last point ???????
Sanskar is Lakshya’s brother so he is ragini’s brother so according to your earlier theory Lakshya is brother of ragini ??????? phew. You really complicated everything like a Jalebi. Read Your Own comment first understand what you said then reply
Of course how will u get it with the durbin also tum logo ki doch ki Tara ghatiya Jo jai but never mind u know wat tum logo ka iq and logic na bohot weak lagta hai ok answer my one question only big ur sis is married nd ur jiju consider s u as his sis than his wife also became his sis ryt
But dhruvi u said ragsan r bro and sis so Swasan ka bro sis relation came up but have I ever mentioned Laksh as someone’s bro…no
respecting marriage and don’t give any wrong msg to society…first my point it’s not wrong bcz ragini s not biological daughter of sumi…if it’s mean I accept that….and coming to ur point…first u should blame many series cvs like ssk uttran not shri….u didn’t see ssk serial…In that serial first premium married to roli, simar do fake marriage with sid and again prem roli divorced prem simar and roli sid married…likewise uttran also…In that series u did not see any wrong msg to society….Thn how can u see wrong in shri ff…she also do same like that….raglak divorce swasan fake marriage…what’s wrong in that….
Sry dear….One mistake..biological daughter of suji..not sumi…
Don’t throw that ghatiyapan now. That shows your mindset and the question you are asking gosh can you grow up before copying someone else’s thoughts. And clearly she hasn’t made fun of any relation or emotion here. Raglak are divorced and Swasan marriage was fake. This is shrilatha’s story not rashmi sharma production and definitely not yours so stop throwing this and if you can’t read don’t read as simple as that. She has enough rights to decide what she wants to write and about her opinion. You need not poke your nose as ragini hasn’t called sanskar a bro in this story.
i never comment on any sanskar and
ragini ff bcoz i dont like them..im here just to clear a point which u said in ur A/N about d bro sis thing then let me tell u one thing that in swaragini there was a particular epi where ragini and sanskar met in a temple and there she called sanskar as her brother..that is the reason why SWASAN fans call them bro sis..bt in serial the makers never showed like this between SWASAN..
and if ragini calls someone as her brother that does nt make that same person swara’s brother..and dont call me as a basher coz i didnt bash u..
thank u..
Why doesn’t it make swara’s brother? Swara is ragini’s sister na. No did I watched any wrong serial?
no no u did nt watch any other serial..bt i think u missed dat epi where she called him as brother..bt a lot of times we read stories where the female lead falls in love with her brother’s friend..and they marry each other..
bt according to ur point those ffs are wrong coz then the female lead becomes the sister of that person..
swara and ragini r step sister..and ragini calls sanskar as her muhbola bhai nt swara..
i hv nt said anything about her story though i hv a lot of points to clear im just saying about her A/N
thank u..
Hey Sally!
No dear you didn’t watch the wrong serial. You did watch Swaragini only, which had Swara and Ragini as the leads, Swalak as the intro and rag____san as a non-existent pair .
Ragini called Sanskar as “Bhaiya.” — It is a fact and has nothing to do with Swara.
It means that Ragini considers Sanskar as her brother, not Swara, even though she is Ragini’s sister, before being her sister she is Sanskar’s wife.
Also Ragini is Sanskar’s Sister-in-law, which makes Ragini, not Swara his sister.
Regards ?
Hello dr writer I am not here to bash u as ur storyline is good n I like it too ur showing a different angle in story n in starting I alos thought that it will be a RagSan pair cz I like them together but aftet watching SwaSan n RagLak cemestry I started to prefer the pairs as SwaSan n RagLak more n I believe every writer has write to potray the character as they want. Its ur ff ur concept u can show tgem how u want. I love all SwaSan, RagSan, RagLak n SwaLak but ya I prepfer SwaSan n RagLak more. But my preference n I am not going to bother u with this. I like ur story but I just want to clear a single point u said if Rag_San r bro sis then Swa_San also shout be bro sis automatically but dr in India will call our jethji means brother in law does that make our husband also our brother n we call Saali means sis in law so is that our wife is alos our sis. No ri8. So I think we should to mix up the equation of realtion like this. I think I made my pov clear n again I am not here to bash u as I am like RagSan also.
If u want to show SwaSan as bro sis then show it but for that u have to make them bro sis directly not throw Ragini cz then on ur ff both Swaragini will becm Sanskar’s sis n then u have to bring another female lead fir him n then it won’t be a Ragsan ff anymore.
Step sister is not sister? In which dimension ????? by the way there is a difference brothers friend and brother’s brother we know that. So and the point you are talking about ragini calling sanskar her muh bola bhai let me clear you no ragsan author started their story after that point they have started before that or completely out of the serial. Do pay a visit once you will realize. I’m also talking about her author note only you are welcome for this thank you and for the next thank you ?
Akka swara is Sanskar’ s wife before being ragini’ s sister yahavi says that…first swara married Sanskar and then she was born…to sumi…akka they want to break me…but I have u love I will not stop this ff..even with zero comments I will finish it with proper ending only and that too at that stage where I want to end it …thank u akka love u
Shrilatha, that wasn’t meant like about who was born first, it meant that Swara has more responsibilities as a wife than as a sister after marriage and vice versa also.
Sally, even if Rag_____San authors start their FF before that scene, Rag____San were and will remain bro sis only in Swaragini.
Well, moreover no one ever said that they are siblings.
P.S — Shrilatha you can continue writing, no one stopped you. Best of luck!
Hahahha Shri the best joke of the year ????and Yahavi my dear basher don’t start bashing anyone else, because Shri has many supporters, who will read her stories
Hey crazy! Do you really think that I will be scared by the number of people who think she is “right” ? It’s your absolute stupidity to think that! This article was posted by her so I have my business with her not with her “supporters” or you, sweethearts.
Stay Disturbed ?
and please continue ur story because if not then u will say that due to some bashers u couldn’t continue ur story and plaese try to look beyond pairs only pairs are not important and i know if u will write this story all are going to read because they are just concerned about pairs not the message that the story gives and by writing this story u are just giving them support and nothing else even if write this story it will not be a difference to swasan and raglak fans it will only affect ragsan fans and the message that this story helds will only go to them raglak and swasan fans are not affected
Awesome dear friend
shri dear plz mention it’s ragsan in ur title….plz dear…bcz u know about that na…plz i request u dear…bcz I don’t want my shri scold from others….i can’t tolerate someone scold or using bad words against any writer….now days it’s only happen to every ragsan writer….Sally abhi and others too….
already Mavo start thz concept but bcz of her frnds she stopped….i didn’t want u to stop thz….waiting for u….tkcr dear…
I totally agree with you asra….this bashing is getting on my nerves and is really pissing me off….they just can’t bash any writer or a character or a pair….writers should really be respected…..and please tell mavo to start writing again…she shouldn’t stop because of few people when many other fans are waiting for her amazing ffs
Jayanti relax let them bash but I am not weak…because I am not wrong…love u guys for ur support…thank u so much
Awesome
guys please now lets put an end to this fight…its been over 6 months the show has wrapped the actors have moved on and taken up other shows….please how long will we fight like this….its high time…..forgive and forget ……lets retain the good memories of the show…….swaragini and sanlak are , were and will always remain the strong pillars of the show…had any one of these characters not been there the show would not have been what it was
Eeeeeeeee!!!!!!! Shriiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!!!!!!!! First of all a big hug and I really loveeee u dear ??????? amazing prologue !!!!!! Wowwww !!!!!! The way sanky said I don’t love u swara ….. I Love ragini !!! That was amazing dear !!!!!! Please update soon dear !!!!! Will be eagerly waiting for this ff !!!!! Now I read all the comments and please don’t listen to the bashers !!!! Please continue dear ??????? loveeee uuuuuu ????? keep smiling and take care ???
Awesum…loved it dii???
I dont think just calling someone as brother they will become brother and sister; if they are really meant to feel as brother sister means only they will become brother and sister; in serial rags called sanskar only once as brother but n no of times they called eachother as freinds and they mean it and they feel it so they freinds more than any relation through out the series.
Swara and ragini call adrash as bhaiya n no of time in series so were they become real brother and sister in the serial; if you consider ragini and sanskar brother and sister for just calling once as brother in serial then swaragini are also sister to adrash through the serial know! So according to point them of raglak and swasan cant be consider as married couple becoz for laksh ragini will become sister and for sanskar swara will become sister then the roots of serial will be totally wrong according to your view .
But in reality they never consider as bother and sister in series ( adrash and swaragini) they just adressed him as bother but never consider him as bother nor have real brother and sister feeling to them. But in reality adrash is jiju of swaragini as he elder brother of sanlak and swaragini always consider him as elder bother of sanlak only not there brother in reality; so just adressing someone brother they will never brother and sister realationship ; if they mean it truly and feel it whole heartedly only they become truly brother and sister.
So once calling him brother once in temple ragini will never become sanskar sister and they were always freinds through the series neither brother sister nor jiju and sali becoz they never adressed eachother as just like through the serial ( except in song during ragini dancing in uttara engagement) if you people rember in any secen they adressed eachother as jiju and sali you can say me!
So ragini and sanskar are only freinds and adress eachother by there serial names only through out the series .
So swasan and raglak and swalak are real pairs in the series and ragsan is expected pair or hoped in the serial for the ragsan fans(i.e reel pair in the real serial)
And shrilatha as i said ragsan or not/never be sister and brother as they dont mean for eachother in that way… So obiviously swasan can not be brother and sister in anyway as they are one real pair in serial.
P.S : in swaragini among four pairs three are real pairs in serial and reel pair by there fans only and they dont have brother and sister pair there/existed in serial it just imagination of only swasan fans in serial as ragsan fans imaging them as pair in ff.
Note: sorry if i stated anything wrong but this my pov as i watched serial throughout the serial as a loyal viewer towards the serial.
Neither swasan are brother and sister nor ragsan are brother and sister in the series.
If you dont like that particular pair ignore there ff but dont figtht for the fictional charecters after finishing of series also.
Instead that fight for vahe and temish freindship which are really exit in the world as they are not fictional.
Whatever justification u give but u are still wrong but we cannot explain the same thing again and again write and now it’s the humble request of all swasan and raglak fans that please please and please write this story because we all wanna see how much u people can go for a pair and disrespect relations
We are disrespecting relationship and what about you guys?
Awe!!it’s really interesting.. Eagerly waiting fr nxt one.. I m still, thinking in which angle ragsan becomes bro-sis..if anyone called anybody brother or something den dat relationship is final..oh! God till now I don’t know abt dis very sad na..I try to remember when de hell ragini tied rakki to sanskar..after all rakki to celebrated in swaragini na..and I know u will continue dis ff..so lukng forward to know wat will happen next..luv u..meet u in next part..till den tc..
superb dear
First plz change the title…..I don’t like ragini ….and rag…………..San tho baat nahi….I never go inside any of those FFs….first of all…ragini did address sanskaar as Bhai…as moh Bola Bhai….that doesn’t make him the Bhai of swara.i understand the desperation of some…well most of ragini and tej fans…..one side they defend ragini saying she only loved lakshya,she is sati savitri bhal bhal … And the other side they make ragini ka love story with almost all actors in TV industry ??? .I understand most of them don’t like lakshya and some namish….so they r after sanskaar in most of the FFs.swa…..lak atleast had Abit of love story as lakshya loved swara….but ragini obsession and love everything thing was lakshya…..there was no where any angel for ragini.
Sorry to burst ur bubble this non existing couple never existed In fictional serial as well.i justed commented because of ur note….it exactly shows ur immaturity…and lack of understanding abt sacred relationships.
Title I won’t change no matter what ..if we have paired ragini with all the stars then at the same time swara is also paired with someone else…so I think I cleared the point.and sacred relationship…swa____________ San were faking marriage that was fine no…and r u thinking about getting me a marriage proposal sorry Iam too young to marry.so don’t worry about my views regarding sacred relation ship
if you are too young to marry why are you playing with relations…
i seriously thinking that you need a doctor that too a mental doctor who can do your treatment…dont mind but the way you said i am too young to marry i said what i felt
Whatever justification u give but u are still wrong but we cannot explain the same thing again and again write and now it’s the humble request of all swasan and raglak fans that please please and please write this story because we all wanna see how much u people can go for a pair and disrespect relations
Rosey first of all you need a mental doctor and if you insult my friend I will slap you very hard that you never can speak ill about my friend?????
Oh rosey…thanks for u r concern why don’t u recommend me to the person whom u visit…of all the swa_____________ San fans I wanted to interact with u…u have a special place in my heart.. I might already listen to them once but u no chance at all…and about me..u r friend was teaching me about sacred values and relations ..like a mom..so I thought she was thinking about marriage ptoposal
If she was teaching you like mother why don’t you behave like mother in law and about us Swasan fans we don’t need any doctor…at least we are better than you are double face people’s…we just like SwaSan…
But you all sometimes RagLak some times Rag_San I mean you all have made joke of that Ragini character…think about it…I seriously felt sorry for that character Ragini…she is pissing in between two men well you all said you love Ragini then at least give respect to her…show your love but you all are showing her image as a two timer I mean playing with two what a great love…well I’m out of. Here hope you understand my POV and yah next time mention that it’s your story so I stay 100 feet away from it…you know I never have taken part in all these fighting stuff but you forced me to comment…bye and and yah next time mention that it’s your story so I stay 100 feet away from it
awesome dear
i thought it’s raglak.. but you need not say sorry shri, it’s author’s own choice on whom to write. everyone has their own pov… all the best shri. l this is amazing concept, do continue. write an raglak os if possible..
Astra truly Iam sorry dear u r comment made me respect raglak fans more…and about raglak os I write a raglak ff called dare which started my love story…do read it
so another drama started by rag____san fans….lol i saw swaragini tittle n read it…when i saw authors name got it whose ff it is…so u r saying abt ur logic…can i ask one question to u…if suppose u have married sister n ur jiju considered u as sister…then ur sister n ur jiju will be bro-sis or what..?he consider u like sister…but not his wife…so get that point…how raglak fans will get hurt if their pair is made bro-sis…if they r fans of raglak(as they r fictionally real)they will definetly get hurt…so stop hurting swasan fans intentionally..if u kept title as ur couple we will not even look..but u mentioned swaragini..so commenting…
and thank u for giving us so much time?we swasan fans got our answers by ur attention seeking??
Thanks seeba unfortunately neither ragini nor Sanskar told me that they r bro sis..when they will inform Me I will see to it..and about raglak fans none of them said anything…and about title ..I think I am the author..had about drama yes it’s started that too with high voltage…enjoy it
??????? I love for this.
lol…i asked u one question…not abt ragini or sanskar…answer that…not something else…ofcourse we(swasan fans) never make raglak as bro-sis even in our ffs..they may be negative but never bro-sis…bcs we know the value of marriage…and ofcourse i will not be surprise…if u make them as bro-sis also…bcs we know u can ship ragini with anyone…but buddy…all will not be like that…try once making shivika arshi ishveer or anyother as bro-sis and pair them…post on their pgs… will see fans reaction…
p.s-sorry shivika ishveer n arshi fans for using ur pious couple name…
lol…i asked u one question…not abt ragini or sanskar…answer that…not something else…ofcourse we(swasan fans) never make raglak as bro-sis even in our ffs..they may be negative but never bro-sis…bcs we know the value of marriage…and ofcourse i will not be surprise…if u make them as bro-sis also…bcs we know u can ship ragini with anyone…but buddy…all will not be like that…try once making shivika arshi ishveer or anyother as bro-sis and pair them…post on their pgs… will see fans reaction…
p.s-sorry shivika ishveer n arshi fans for using ur pious couple name…
Shri I love you❤❤❤
Oh ur question na I don’t have a sis
so that only i mentioned if suppose…well u dont have answer
OK guys first thing a big wala thank u for my readers for reading it…second..I don’t take revenge…because I am arrogant I don’t think people r up-to mark to take revenge…third swara is not negative…she might look like but not especially not like the way Swa_______san ff create ragini. Fourth my readers , my friends,my dear swa _______ San fans who have commented. But not bashed .and the one who want to bash further…every one I will never stop my ff neither I will discontinue nor I will change my plot or pairs…thanks
u no need to stop also…but i think i asked one question n waiting for ur reply….so reply to me…eagerly waiting..
shrilata ji, you are just showing your immaturity, you by doing all this you are degrading your favourite Ragini by joing her with anybody. Even i think what people start calling her who are fan of their favourite couple.
And all those fan who says couples don’t matter plz get a life dear
THIS IS YOUR WAY TO PROVE HOW COUPLE MATTERS
and we are openly saying yes for us couples matters thats why we read swasan ff atleast we don’t degrade our couple by joing with others and if any writer do that we warn them.
IF WE ARE WRONG IN DOING THIS then I AM PRODLY SAYING WE WILL DO IT AGAIN AND AGAIN.
You guys need a serious life plzz STOP DEGRADING RAGINI SO MUCH THAT PEOPLE STOP EVEN TALKING ABOUT HER.
Already others couples fans start bashing her so badly and you guys are always ready to add fuel in that.
Its nobody mistake that ragini become evil in serial, its her life she did what she wanted to do it, nobody forced her
I HOPE YOU KNOW
WE ARE RESPONSIBLE FOR OUR KARMA
same gone with Ragini
I am immature I am devil ..I am a kid …this is my way..
i just want to say one thing dear u guys can write anything which happens or not happens in reality but there is truth SWASAN and RAGLAK is couple which will remain a couple throught out the time whether it is reel or real becoz swaragini serial was based on them. Even people know them now almost throughout the world also by just these mere imaginations you guys can’t prove this wrong. They were are and will remain couple only.
this something reality and it applies to everyone one person made for one and that is their soulmate, similarly SWASAN and RAGLAK are shown soulmate in serial also after goinv through so many hardships.
Don’t mind miss but just making fun of relations and moral values, you are just degrading the relationship these couple share.
And coming to pairs plzz before saying to others first see yourself becoz yes couples matters thats why people read their ff otherwise there are so many stuff which give so much message to people they can read and this is fact.
Coming to swasan fans when they know sanskar and ragini share brother sister relationship, why they will read their ff as n we and our society allow a brother and sister marriage and its law also. and these types of things make really big issues.
Being story good doesn’t mean that brother sister become husband wife.
When from the day ragini’s marriage fixed with laksh she herself told that she assumed laksh as his husband and atlast did everything to get him.
I think those people who support ragini and sanskar as a couple, might be this type relly happens in their society as after that only people write story.
If we are against any story we have strong reasons regarding that story becoz we don’t like to degrade the relations.
We love SwaraSanskar becoz we find that every girl should have self respect which Swara chooses when it was necessary (is it wrong to like swara, if yes then every girl who stand for herself and her self respect then they are wrong). Sanskar, he proved a good human being (he was wrong no doubt but atleast by the time his revenge get deep atleast he understood, what he is doing wrong then by swara’s help he came out of that revenge. He chooses right path and try everything to become good person, never try to force swara for his love ( if we like Sanskar, then we can be wrong dear).
We live on a society, we follow some rules and regulations for our goodness only thats why they are made. Is it wrong ?
You can give thousand of answer for your justification but a truth always remain truth only and IN FUTURE ALSO IT WILL REMAIN TRUTH THAT
SWASAN and RAGLAK are COUPLE and ALWAYS remain COUPLE.
Sorry sus…but this is ff…fiction…so don’t worry about anything…and also Iam not starting swaragini season two with ragsan and swalak…this an ff..try to read this as ff
You ragini fans mostly says
try to see story not couples so plzzzz what message your stories give
1. Leave your husband marry your jeth
2. Do every wrong thing to get what you want.
3. Relationships are usless things
4. if someone try to show you good path, hurt that person to any extent.
5. etc etc
I will never be amaze if one day
you youself start doing these type of becoz supporting wrong things means you prefer those things.
I love and will always real couples who are made for each other
Atleast in relationship I don’t like to assume anything wrong
Nope dear our messages r don’t poke ur nose in others matters if by mistake u do that then just leave from there and love is more important than false relations…and no need to bend for others..
??????? I have dropped off the bed Shri. I’m just reading your replies Kudos girl and I love you. I don’t know I feel like saying it again and again. You are an inspiration to me today ?
Awesome reply my dear Shri, I love you for this❤
ohh so woww what a good upbringing you got
head off to your family
If someone say right thing
hahaha now i pity you guys all
sus jiiii……don’t u worry about them…it doesn’t concern you and don’t go on families and upbringing….mind the language
I loved it! Mujhe aaya Mazza. Therefore, I am on Team Shrilatha???
Well, even if I hadn’t liked it, even then I would have been on your side. It is a matter of your literary liberty. I love Ragsan as a pair and you are writing on it. Good luck ?
And don’t worry, we are with you???
And this has been added to my favourite comments. ??????? straight no Jalebis thank god.
Some comments caused me to open my refrigerator, take out the bottle with the coldest water, and drink the entire bottle of water!!!!
Aisi aisi baatein aur aisi aisi justifications ??????
I am a debater, you an imagine my state ????
Sus Jii. She hasn’t made fun of anything here. She just put her point forward. And we don’t do either go n check our works then speak.
? Same here. A debater. ?????? and they don’t understand the sarcasm and revert that is like bury your head inside the water
And u r m
Sorry I meant ur my inspiration all along
we are not like u sally jiiii, shri ji or bela jii
who make fun of scared things. These are part of our lives
Make fun of scared things? Ab ye kya naya point hai????
I’m always in team Shri????
Hello dr writer I am not here to bash u as ur storyline is good n I like it too ur showing a different angle in story n in starting I alos thought that it will be a RagSan pair cz I like them together but aftet watching SwaSan n RagLak cemestry I started to prefer the pairs as SwaSan n RagLak more n I believe every writer has write to potray the character as they want. Its ur ff ur concept u can show tgem how u want. I love all SwaSan, RagSan, RagLak n SwaLak but ya I prepfer SwaSan n RagLak more. But my preference n I am not going to bother u with this. I like ur story but I just want to clear a single point u said if Rag_San r bro sis then Swa_San also shout be bro sis automatically but dr in India will call our jethji means brother in law does that make our husband also our brother n we call Saali means sis in law so is that our wife is alos our sis. No ri8. So I think we should to mix up the equation of realtion like this. I think I made my pov clear n again I am not here to bash u as I am like RagSan also.
If u want to show SwaSan as bro sis then show it but for that u have to make them bro sis directly not throw Ragini cz then on ur ff both Swaragini will becm Sanskar’s sis n then u have to bring another female lead fir him n then it won’t be a Ragsan ff anymore……
you love ragsan
we get that
you think swasan are siblings, we get that too
its ur wish
but the fact that u told u wont mention it as ragsan because u want the swasan fans to read it and be hurt by what ur telling that’s downright mean
we may call them as rag—san or whatever, but we also mention swasan in the ff name so that people who don’t like the couple don’t have to read
this was a petty trick and that too for an author to do. an author is supposed to be fond of her story and love all characters. focus on ur main couple but dont vilify the rest after the chapter’s done
as a reader, this was disappointing. as a writer, this was hurtful
pls continue ur ff, ur plot, ur pairs. that’s not the problem
but also mention that it is ragsan because hurting ppl is not the way to feel happy about ur story
hello dear…firstly…coming to ur author note…it made me rofl???and got to know how much u value relationships..i think u watched swaragini serial…obvio u will..as u r ragini fan…so in that serial…durga prasad is there…i hope you remember him…sujatha is also there…sujatha always mentioned dp as bhaisaa or something like that i think..that makes dp and ap bro-sis or what…?pls tell me…i’m so confused??lol…god knows u n ur logics…that to special mentions to swasan fans…well..well..i know…u guys want our attention…i hope you r getting it?but so sad that your non-existing couple is never ever existed also?be in your shell…give us attention and make yourself fun??feeling pity on some fans…bcs of ur attention seeking,all couple fans are laughing and horrified that u will make them as pair with ur fav. anyways concentrate on ur ffs than us..all the best to ur all ffs
Thank u Kat for u best wishes…and about sujatha and dp…u want to know my logic…in south India…sisters husband is called bava…and also would be is called bava…some girls even call their husband as bava…so now do u get my logic…u bring the book of values and logic..u even bring ragsan and make ragini tie the Rakhi It won’t affect me…and about attention seeking…I am sure my title was not swaragini please read me…it was swaragini. My side story ..involving swara there is swalak track…my a/ n made u laugh people say its good to make someone laugh no need to thank me…
i’m telugu girl…so i know that…but if our jiju consider us as sister means..wife and husband relationship will not change…so i hope u understand…
Kat considering is different and nagging to consider is different…we love ragsan that is Clearly our choice..why u guys bring this again and again…
what we nagged…in our stories we are making them as bro sis bcs in serial they considered…i got ur point…but if u guys make swasan like that…we will point out…bcs who on the earth can see fictionally real couple as bro-sis…i got ur feelings also…but if ppl are making fun of our pair then how we suppose to sit quiet…sorry to hurt u…ragini n sanskar are not n never pair in serial…so if u like them its ok…and for us they are bro-sis bcs we are considering like serial…its ur ff ur wish…but i just want to say…dont give these type of author notes…that is so pointless…and hurted us to the core…best of luck for your this ff..good night…
Awesome dear…intersting..don’t mind the bashers.. Nice one.. Waiting for next update
Ragini fans just treat ragini as like a pr*stitute..they join nagini with any famous character they want even if itz sanskar, ranveer,manik anyone..ragini fans are just behind them..they just cant satisfy them selves ragini wuth laksh..dey want many many perdons behind ragini..eventhough that third rated ragini havnt any class to satnd with them..but ragini fans though wahh wahh..and they will givr explanation that itz their freedom to chose to imagine qny couple..but dnt u guys have any shame while stole others husband..nahiii..u guys are shqmeless creatures..atleast sometimes cinsider laksh also..bechara laksh..kya karum his wifes fans just behind of other mens..bichy ppls
Don’t u dare it’s neither ragini nor swara…and if u use this kind of language.the even I can and don’t forget in our ff swara is associated with someone else…so do u think even she is like that..and ragini is better than swara so if ragini us third grade and swara is not even third grade…don’t make me open my mouth about how swara became Mahan Swara..and if I talk I don’t commit my self to onscreen I’ll even talk about off screen…and u can imagine what is coming
And one more thing……..please talk in a respectful language…….its shri’s story and I don’t think that u have any right to comment on it….if you don’t want to read it no one is requesting you but don’t say thing…….I love all the pairs of the serial…but u know one thing is there that ragsan and raglak fans don’t comment trash in swasan ffs……..so u please concentrate on swasan ffs and don’t spread negativity over here…….and since u have rated ragini as third grade I would like to say that it won’t affect neither tejaswi ma’am nor her fans but it shows what kind of a person u are…… And ragini is paired with other actors u are saying naa…it shows creativity …which some people lack
p.s. sorry shri dear but she got personal and I can’t let any writer be insulted
Nice comment. Really nice comment. I mean, wow!
Swasan fans lecturing people on “Sanctity of marriage”, “EMOTIONS(oh bhai, please chup ho jao!) and now you(I will assume you are a girl since I know a girl named Pavani) is verbally abusing a FICTIONAL character to prove your point. Double standards much, baby?????
Ya right, baby. Cause rational adults don’t jump on people and start ranting. So many people here have respectfully put their point forward, right or wrong. That is the way we roll in this world. If you want to express your opinions, fine, please spare us from your filthy mouth. ???
As a Ragini fan, I am pissed off. As a woman, I am outraged. Kindly do see what you type. You are clearly escalating matters here. And you called me shameless. Don’t. I personally always keep Swara and Sanskaar positive in all Swaragini related or continued stories of mine. I know shame. I don’t need your certificate for this.
So yes. My rant was because your comment really triggered in me my Angry Young Woman Avatar. Ragini is a fictional character and she is being paired with other fictional characters because hey, the woman portraying her was so classy and beautiful that all the handsome hunks out there would look good with her. My point. With this, I rest my case?
You don’t have any rights to insult anyone, if you do then I will complain to TU
Miss Pavani?
Wow let me keep my doubts about your sanity aside coz Im not your shadow.
Give me one link of an ff where the following things are done by ragini fans.
Ragini is paired with other actor without her proper divorce. Or she is cheating on her husband. Get me one ff written by a ” ragini fan ”
Then talk about someone’s character.
i never expected this…just to make our swasan fans hurt u guys are doing this…great…and very good writers like bela are supporting…sorry to mention ur name bela dear…from now got a lesson that we should not read even swaragini ffs…its ur ff dear…but the way u r behaving is so immature…it will be good to you if u change ur attitude..and coming to ur author not..sorry to say this…it is not at all good to use this…but just want to make u understand…if ur father consider ur maasi as sister…then by your logic…your mother and father are also bro-sis…sorry for hurting u by saying this…i just applied your logic to your question and hope u got ur answer…and mention couples in your couple..
p.s-once again sorry for bringing ur family…but just want to make u understand…
I only know how to play the game of Blood Relations, cause that comes into use while I am giving my competitions????. So no comments on her AN.
I don’t mind my name being brought up, as I said to Pavani, I always maintain Swara and Sanskaar Maheshwari in all my SR continued stories as positive and strong. We are a SERIOUSLY divided fandom which achieved the feat of pissing off even the actors who played our favourite roles. We don’t need to add more fuel to the fire. SR ended long back and the serial which took its place has even managed to come in the Top 10, itna time ho Gaya hai.
Let us all RATIONAL people start this trend.
#UnitedWeStand. No hate. Whichever pair we like, we write on it. I am writing on Raglak, a story with Ragsan is on the way, IB OS on the way and Twinj OS just completed. ?.
Anybody who wants to ask me how I am managing should not ask. Idk myself?????
Sorry ritu I can understand but I will never change my attitude…changing for someone is not me….and about my dad and massi…considering her as a sister is his wish completely but my neighbours don’t always nag them no saying they r bro sis…if it is Swasan problem let them come to me..why ru so concerned about ragsan…we like them we love them then why do u want to interfere….once I said Swasan r bro and sis u just couldn’t tolerate then what u think we r emotionless people…
in serial ragini mentioned him as bhai in one scene..and ragini and sanskar are not even pair…from starting it is raglak vs swa___lak…and after that swasan…i’m not concerned of ragini…but for sanskar…ofcourse i will be..bcs i’m swasan n sanskar big fan..and tbh,i dont involve in debates and fights…i clarified ur doubt…which is asked by u…i never said u r emotional less or something…and swasan are not bro-sis…they are wife and husband…atleast fictionally real couple…still u r mentioning swasan as that…so it will hurt us…and some r saying they r hurt bcs we are saying ragini n sanskar as bro-sis…well,it is ragini who mentioned sanskar as brother…if u didnt watch that episode…its ur prblm…anyways…all the best to ur ff…end of discussion..gud nyt…
Shri I would like to clear one thing here. You know there was a serial Kumkum in that the girl got married to her husband’s brother and it was a super hit serial and the explanation they gave while the marriage was like Dewar can also mean dwitiya var. For this story if ragini marries sanskar who is her Jeth doesn’t matter because here she hasn’t called him a bro. And leave all the serials I give you best example Ramayana sugreeva and vali incident. Your move is justified. And yes we call our sister’s husband bhava in south India and also we call the person to who we are going to get married also as bhava if they are our relative like our bua’s son or mama’s son. And there are so many stories and real incidents when a girl is married to her sister’s husband. So where are you making fun of relation. I think I put it straight and in most understanding way.
Yeah akka
here dear sally, you give example of Ramayan
i really hope you see in tv or read it
your these words only justify if husband dies and then she maary his brother. Atleast see something good and genuine and get real msg from that.
again giving wrong example and wrong things
Definatly a girl marry to her would be husband dever, that happens before marriage.
No doubt by supporting these types of things you are showing what exactly taught to you and what you guys like to do.
ohh sally dear i saw that serial kumkum Juhi parmer and what his dever name is yaa Sumit in that and Husband name was Jatin. You know i liked that serial very much.
But you really know why sumit married to his bhabhi
okay let me clear in in bold letters
BECOZ SUMIT BROTHER DIED
i hope you what is died means yaa wo mar gaya tha
THEN HE MARRIED TO HIS BHABHI WHILE SHE WAS PREGENT AT THAT TIME
and this concept is follwed now a days also
You read the full comment dear half reading is injurious to mind and I said it to Shri as she is the author. And consider the circumstances here sanskar loves ragini and she is divorced and his marriage with swara was fake. So what’s wrong still the explanation applies
And here ragini is divorced so sanskar is no more her Jeth. So keep your explanation aside.
Awesome shri diii!!!! !!! I loved the prologue!! ? n sanskaar’s dialogue ?? when I started reading I thought it’ll be again raglak n swasan but I’m so happy it is other way round……. Thank u so much for ragsan!!!!!! ? ? ? ? I would be waiting for the next update… Take care n keep smiling dear ‘!!!!!?????
OK guys stop this ..thanks for everyone who supported me..Sally akka Bela di asra…jayanti…and others who said I was wrong sorry but Iam like this manufacturing defect won’t change for anyone….so continue doing this forever I won’t stop my work
??????? you are my sachin tendulkar. Sachin sachin
Oops
Shrilatha shrilatha
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such a defensive reply
i see you managed to answer everyone’s comment but you couldn’t answer my disappointed comment
why is that?
calling urself immature or a manufacturing defect doesn’t mean anything
it’s ur story. i mean what i said.
write whatever u want
swasan as bro sis anything
but don’t give comments in author’s note degrading the characters
in the story, anything is possible depending on each person’s moral compass
but pls do show the same respect outside of the chapter as well
Akriti I don’t know where I missed u…okay my a/ n Iam so sorry I really can’t see where have I degraded the character…I put forth my question the question which was haunting me for long…clearing my doubt is it wrong
Swasan fans let’s not give attention which the author wants….we saw the cheap mentality…we can never steep that low to match their level…the author proved herself …no more to say. Jitna BHI edits banaye or jitney bhi FF baney….it won’t change the fact that swasan is the pair and we have loads of real moments which we watched on screen….unlike some non existing pairs….so chill guys… And ignore it.
It’s just a suggestion to my fellow swasanians
Oh hello you have a cheap mentality, you brought out my angry avatar now no one can save you from me??
Hai again u real moments ended six months back.u go n enjoy but before going a small correction u don’t have to stoop u need to jump to reach our level…otherwise u will blame us later on why r u so high
well we can see how u people are ignoring the so called “ATTENTION” u think shri wants….and give your suggestion to them some where else not here….don’t spread negativity swastika and u can’t match writers level…because its much much much much more higher than yours……this comment of yours is actually showing someone’s cheap mentality
good luck to you..
Please jayanti. Unless your name is Google, stop behaving like you know everything.
You are blindly supporting Shrilatha, np but then dont blame someone else when u r urselves wrong.
In more thing- go round, a round, a round and f**k off!
Thank you thank you very very much at first I thought it was raglak but feeling much more happy that its ragsan looking forward for this ff to start . If possible update first episode soon .
Awesome..!! Awesome..!! Awesome..!! Shriiuii, loved it sooo much dear..!! Good to see a bhai behen lover writing on our EVER HEAVENLY COUPLE SWASAN.!
Coming to ur episode, Superb start dear, “Sanskar: Ragini what r u saying..i don’t love u…I LOVE ONLY MY SWARA” <<—– I loved when Sanskar said this.! It made smile Wide and so damn proud as well.! It was sooo beautiful..!!
M eagerly waiting for next part..!! More than you m excited here..!! Continue soon dear..!! Thnk u.. ;-*
Wow dear what a reply, a world wide recognise HEAVENLY COUPLE
LOVE U swasan, what you guys taught us great things, love u guyss alot
and special Thanks to all ragini lovers who are giving HEAVENLY COUPLES SO MUCH ATTENTION THAT NEEDED THEM FOR OTHERS ALSO.
Ohh very Good … why nit afterall everybody want SWARA SANSKAR, THEY ARE SO IN LOVE COUPLE.
Now i get it SWARA SANSKAR are for each other na, how can others leave in peace. They want them .. ohh now
Go on Kakali
..u saw that great…and yeah I am creative…thanks for loving it…
Best wishes for ur this ff…..being a writer is a tough job. But dont u think dat u are promoting fights instead…..adding the couple name in d title is a simple request to avoid issues and misunderstandings……those who are fans of dat couple will read it and those who dislike dem will not read it….
Its too simple dear…..just keep aside ur ego…..show some maturity.
You are some couple’s fan dat never existed and its not ur fault dat u like dem but it certainly doesnt make sense dat how can u like someone dat never existed…..whether its swasan or raglak fans all are too emotionally attached to them and so they dont like swaps in couples….ok fine leave dis matter….u r free to post on whichever couple u like….but d simple request is to mention d couple itself in title…..and moreover u know how much fights are there among diff groups of SR…. so why are u promoting d fights?? The serial has been off air for nearly 6 months now and people are hell bent upon degrading the glory of SR….
See writing is passion….being author is a tough job……author holds many responsibilities regarding his her creations….try to respect an author’s job……writing is not easy…..
I dont know how u take it on writing fictions but for authors they ake writing as worship…dey respect reader’s opinions too…….
Dont try to show ur immaturity…..respect writers and this profession…..
I am not discouraging u…. u r doing a fab job…all i want is just post rag____san in d title as well……
And one thing u must remember…since d couple u chose was never to be….therefore its natural for d fans of original couples to be upset with you….but they certainly dont have d right to bash u……
ooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmggggggggggggggggg useless concepttt with uselesss writersss and her uselesss army… betaaa kindlyy use some brain before writing anything crap..muu chukk krrr muu uthaa krr kucchh naa likh diyaa karo… and what stupid logicss u r saying??? and tell mee firstt how will u slap rosey?? will u parcel a slap?? by cutting your hand??? or imaginary slap??? kindly mind yourr stupid tonguee.. andd what u want to sorry to only raglak fans?? we swasan fanss dontt need your blo*dy sorryy.. barii aii apnay aap ko mahaan samjhnay wali.. kindly goo and get someee wisdom in your pea size head and then talk with readers.. dont know the why of how to talk with readers andd thinking yourselff as a queen of someee big empire.. huhhh i only want to say sorry to raglak fanss huhhh.. for swasan fanss u havee too touch their feet for forgiveness.. andd yourr thiss storyy will surelyy flopp :).. thankuu too muchh sweet talkss i did naa noo problemm will surellyy say something moree… till then byeeeeee
andd yeahh kindly ignoree gramatical mistakess because the writer likee u i dontt want to waste my time in editing.. 🙂 thankuuu
I just have one question..
are you writing this story because you love ragsan? or because you wanted to show that swasan are brother and sister?
it’s the same qn.. just has 2 parts.. 😛
Not fair Anjali ?
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You didn’t tell me you started new stories, I’m still halfway between Mr Maheshwari and I, damnnn, got loads to catch up on, yaar, meri train bahot slow jaa rahi hai ?
Aaj achcha hua that I saw you here and decided to check for new updates, or else my train wouldn’t have moved, it would’ve stayed there ?
This was the small complaint I had ? Other than that, hiiiiii, how are you? Long time no talkkkk ?
Nice shri.i am also from south India especially from AP.but don’t the stop the ff for the negative comments.RAGSAN fans will stand for u.waiting for next part.????
One thing is making me confuse?? Why u post this post?? To get many comments?? Butt awwwww imm sooooo sorrrrryyyyy u put your foot on axe by yourself becoz by creating this mess in next epi u will not going to get these many comments.. what u thought if u will say sorry to raglak fanss then they will comment?? Nopessss andd u naa i think only ragini fan who knowss u can even put her as a couple with dp,rp alsoo.. because raglak fans i saw many times very much loyal towards the couple but those u only wantss ragini paired her with manyyyy then whats wrong in pairing her with dp and rp??? U naa surely thinking about this also.. it will help u in next concept of your story..
Who* and think*…… andd yeah plzzz stop replying like an idiot to the readers.. being a writer first rule is too talk politely.. soo u have to learn this first and i think your frnds also need this…..marriage is not jokee once before writing put yourself in that girl’s place.. if u want fiction doesnt mean that u start writing too much fantasies…
Don’t need to apologise, even I got mistakened it to be RagLak and SwaSan, what to do, love them two ?
I haven’t got anything nice to say so I’m sorry, I should keep my mouth shut and zipped because it’s your story, your opinion, your forum page and your mindset, nothing of mine is here. . . ?
Good luck for all your stories and what you’re showing, hoping a RagLak story from you, if it’s okay with you, I don’t want to force my opinions on you. If I miss to see it then could you please kindly message me ? If possible then on SwaSan too but it’s okay if you don’t wish to. . .
And in my opinion, no ones brother-sister on that show, nor Rag Lak and neither Swa San, Rag San and Swa Lak . . . ?
Have a good day and take care Shrilatha. . . ✨
Hey Shrilatha!
Good morning dear! I have a looong comment coming ahead. But I have a big day today so I don’t have much time for you 2 Kodi people! So will comment later, wait for it!