Thank you guys for comments and also silent readers..
Here we go..
Sanskar in broken state sitting near swara..
He is holding her hand.
That touch showed a promise of being with her throughout this life…
It’s showed a trust, value of their relationship..
Sanskar looks her..
I guess his tears will stop only if she opens her eyes..
Sanskar with lots of struggle and difficulty started talking ” swara.. Why are you doing like this.. You know how much it hurts me.. Oh God.. What I’m talking.. How do you know that I’m feeling bad?! Till now I didn’t told you na..”
” you know one thing swara.. When the first time I saw you, you were looking me like you have never met a boy before.. I thought you are so immature.. But you proved me wrong.. You acted so mature in our marriage decision and also when solving problems between Ragini and Laksh.. After then nithi told me that you use to show attitude to everyone.. But I don’t remember even once you hurted me.. Why swara?! I need an answer for this.. ”
He looked her she is still in the same state…
He continues” I guess you don’t like Neha.. I saw a irritating reaction in you whenever Neha comes close to me.. You have to answer me why?!..
He can’t talk anymore.. His words are broken.. He wants to cry hard. But doctor advised him that it will make her weak.. So he controlled.
Sanskar ” swara.. They are telling me that I should give you the hope of life.. But.. But what do they know that you are the only hope of my life.. You can’t go just like this leaving me alone in this world.. Come back swara.. We need you.. If raglak fights again who will solve it.. Who will play with ma and Pappa.. Who will tease Arjun.. Who will be for me in this world.. ”
He looked her. He felt a slight movement in her hand..
” swara listen.. I was about to tell you something today.. This may be the world’s worst proposal… No boy would have proposed his girlfriend in this state.. But swara.. I know you are hearing me.. You have to come back to answer all my questions and also to hear that I LOVE YOU swara.. I LOVE YOU..
He was broken. He bowed his head and placed his face in her hand..
She slowly very slowly opened her eyes.. But he doesn’t noticed her..
He continues ” I want to see all the mornings by holding your hand.. I want see your face at the end of the day.. I want share all my happiness with you.. I want to be with you throughout my life.. Sometimes spending time with some people will give happiness.. You gave me such a happiness swara.. Now please don’t snatch my happiness from me.. I LOVE YOU SWARA.. I LOVE YOU..
Swara looks him.. Her eyes are rolling with tears..
Sanskar turned up and looked her.
She smiles.. That moment he saw that she came to conscious he was out of this world..
All his thinks and thoughts are now jammed.. He don’t want anything other than this..
Swara smiles..
Sanskar (emotionally) : swara.. Thank you sooo much swara.. I’m..
He can’t talk.. A bunch of happiness stopped his words..
Swara (very slowly) : This is.. the.. world’s.. best.. proposal…
He got surprised, happy, amazed all kind of good feelings happened at same time..
Doctor : you please wait outside..
Sanskar looked her.. He placed a sweet kiss on her forehead.. She smiled and closed her eyes slowly..
He moved out..
All the family members waiting outside are curious on seeing him..
Sanskar nodes happily..
All became very happy..
Screen freezes…
Precap : swasan…
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26 Comments
Superb epi yar #Adithi…
Make it longer yar plzzzz nd plzzzz uptade nxttt part as soon as possible plzzz yar
awesome
super I think 2 this s worlds best proposal dr
wow vry nice..sanskar dialogue awesome…i felt like crying…..waiting for next
Omg now I want to jump in excitement. I knew it will be full of swasan..
pls pls make it long….ur ff s very nice one….waiting 4 nxt epi….
Emotional,very nice yaar.
BTW she is her fiance why he is telling that no big would proposed to his girlfriend in this way. They are officially engaged.
Dear.. Even after you married to one you have to live your life with him /her will be a condition.. Real happiness is one that if you love your partner or you married to your loved one..
Wow what a pruposal yaar
Simply super
Wooow…nice episode..I loved it…update soon …
Awesome
wow..adithi ..you made my day..truly world’s best proposal..first time commenting here..but was awesome..plz make it bit lengthy if possible…n plz update soon..
Aww cho chweet
Really superb……i just dont have 2 express it….bcz its so emotional and i loved it….
nice
Superb yar.
Really its world’s best proposal which dragged swara from death. That’s called true love.waiting for next episode eagerly.
Swara is out of danger all happy. Yipeeeeeeeee.
it was amazng..plz one more epi plzzzzz
Superb episode can’t express in words really it’s awesome
Love ua ff.. The best ff so far…!! U pls write more and more episodes..!
Fabulous plz upload soon
Superb yr felt bad 4 swara at the beginning but later it was awesome
superb episode dear
Really its best proposal ….
You are doing really great job. The creative heads of swaragini need to learn from you, they just keep on insulting relations and story revolving around swara and villians all the time. Your story is quite nice…no villians, respecting the relations and most important justice to every character. Romance is also potrayed in a cute manner and the storyline is also interesting and not the same old stupid ones. Everyday I wait eagerly for your updates n everything is awsome. Just wanna say that you are doing a great job…Keep it up????