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Home»Fan Fiction»Swaragini (A Passionate Love Story) Chapter 58
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Swaragini (A Passionate Love Story) Chapter 58

administratorBy administratorDecember 30, 201541 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey guys, i would like to end Atriya’s track as my fans arent liking it and i write this ff only so that u all like it.And also those who dont know how Swara lost her child, let me tell u that when Swasan got seperated, Swara went out of house and met with an accident with Sanskaar’s car.He took her to hospital with Dilwale team, and then when Swasan were not on talking terms, doctor informed Sanskaar that swara lost her child in the accident.Hope u remeber it now guys……..

Recap:Laksh blamed Swara for Annpurna’s condition.Raglak argued.

Next morning,Laksh comes to Annapurna’s room and sees Swara taking care of her.
Laksh:jootha dikaawa kyun karne aayi ho?(Why r u showing off?)
Swara:Laksh please, wo meri badi maa hain!(She is my badi maa).And nobody can stop me from taking care of her.
She looks at Laksh teary eyed and goes.
Laksh caresses Annapurna’s face.She wakes up and wants Swara.
Laksh:Ussi ki waje se yeh sab hua hain maa,(all this happened because of her ma)
Annapurna:Nahi Laksh, ussi ne tho meri jaan bachaayi(no laksh, she saved my life)
Laksh:kaise?(how?)
Annapurna:When i was thrown out of the van, i rolled and my head was about to hit a stone but Swara put her hand near my head and herself got hurt.
Laksh gets shocked and teary eyed.
Laksh:Aap nahi janti maa, maine usse bohat taklif pauchayi hain(U dont know maa, i have hurt her a lot.)
He goes while Annapurna gets thinking.

Swara finds it difficult to drink water as her hand is injured.Laksh puts a straw it it.She looks on and drinks the water.
Swara:Thanks
Laksh:I should thank u for whatever u did for maa, i am sorry swara.I know i have hurt u a lot.Cant u forgive this friend of urs.I know i cannot be forgiven.Still….
He cries and folds his hand.Swara cries and forgives him.
Swara:Why should i forgive u when i was not at all angry with u!U were right at ur place Laksh!
He hugs her.They cry.
Swara:Actually i should apologize to u!
Laksh:Why?
Swara tells him everything.He gets shocked and angry on Dp.She explains him that Bade papa didnt do anything wrong.That woman betrayed him.All family members come there.Dp apologizes to Laksh for slapping hi.He says i am responsible for Annapurna’s condition.Sujata blesses Swara and Ragini.
Sujata:Bhaghwan aise bahu sab ko de!(May god give daughters in laws like u always)
Swara looks at Sanskaar and smiles.
Ragini gets teary eyed looking at Laksh and goes.

Ragini makes Annapurna sleep and goes to her room.Laksh comes there and apologizes to her.
Laksh:U know Ragini, main tumhaare like houn hi nahi! Tum mujhe chod kar apni zindagi sawarlo!(I dont deserve u! Leave me and make ur life better!)
Ragini shushes him.
Ragini:Meri zindagi tumne hi tho sawari hain mujhse shaadi karke!(u only made my life better by marrying me!)
She forgives him.
They hug and cry.She turns to go and he pulls her closer.
Laksh:Waise, hot lag rahi ho iss saree mein(By the way, u r looking hot in that saree!)
Ragini:Laksh!
He romances with her and she smiles.

Sanskaar pulls Swara in the kitchen.
Swara:Ohoo patidev! Bare romantic mood mein ho!(Ohoo husband! U r in such a romantic mood!)
Sanskaar:suro se itni khubsurati se bani ho tum, ke chand bhi deewana tera!(U r so beautifully made by tune that even moon is a fan of urs!)
Swara:Wow! Peotry!
Sanskaar:Hum shayar tho nahi par ae hasseena dekhe tujkho mujhko shayeri aagayi!(I am not a poet but hey beautiful, by seeing u i am knowing poetry)
She smiles.
Swara:I want ice cubes!
Sanskaar:I am getting romantic with u and u want Ice cubes?
Swara smiles and nods.
He opens the fridge and take out ice cubes for her.She eats it with pleasure.He smiles seeing her childishness.He too joins her and eat ice cubes.He gets mischievous and holds an ice cube in his hand.He walks to her.She understands his gesture.
Swara:Sanskaar!
She walks back.She stops at the wall.He walks to her.She closes her eyes.He smiles and make the ice cube touch her cheeks softly.She smiles and blushes while her eyes are closed.He comes near her and kisses her cheek.She shies and hugs him.They have a romantic moment.

Next morning, Doorbell rings.Swara(she is wearing a green coloured salwar kameez) opens the door and gets shocked seeing Atriya.She smirks and says hi Swara.She gets in while Swara tries to stop her.Annapurna gets shocked and afraid seeing her and says she is my kidnapper.All get shocked and look at her.Swaragini look at Dp asking for an answer.Dp smiles and signs asking them to wait.

Atriya:Main yahan isiliye aayi houn kyunke Dp ne kaha hain ke wo mujhe iss ghar ke malkin banaae ge(I came here as Dp said that he will make me the owner of this house.)
Swaragini burst out laughing.
Ragini:U r such a fool!
Atriya:What?
Swara:She means u r stupid!
U r so greedy that u fell in our trap.
Dp and team laugh.
Atriya looks on cluelessly.

Swara comes and slaps her.
Swara:This is for kidnapping my badi maa.
Ragini comes and slaps her again.
Ragini:This is for creating misunderstanding between me and my husband.
Sanskaar comes and slaps her.
Sanskaar:I gave u this slap coz of u my Swara was blamed.
Laksh comes and slaps her.
Laksh:This is for trying to ruin our family.
Dp comes and slaps her.
Dp:This is for blackmailing me for so many years and for betraying me.
All eyes her angrily.
Atriya looks at them angrily and teary eyed.

Police come and arrest Atriya.She gets shocked and looks at them.They smile.
Swara waves bye to her.
She goes and all smile.Dp thank Swaragini again.
Sanlak:And what about us?
Sujata gives them a chocolate each and says this if for u.
All laugh.Annapurna gets teary eyed.All cry and hug happily.

Precap:Parineeta’s godh barai.

Credit goes to:Heera

Hey guys, comment how it was and please give me ur ideas…..please…..love u loads……

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41 Comments

  1. Riya on December 30, 2015 11:56 am

    Nice track.:-) πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  2. surbhi on December 30, 2015 12:07 pm

    Superb
    I like the slaps scene

  3. kritika on December 30, 2015 12:08 pm

    nice..
    bt plzz make swara pregnant

  4. sindhuja on December 30, 2015 12:19 pm

    slap after slap… nice!!! keep it up!!

  5. ruhi on December 30, 2015 12:24 pm

    Thanks…now I remember how she rlost her child

  6. akku on December 30, 2015 12:27 pm

    nice

  7. Tania on December 30, 2015 12:33 pm

    How sweet!!

  8. Shanaya on December 30, 2015 12:43 pm

    Superb slap scene

    ??
    Awesome

  9. sravya on December 30, 2015 1:17 pm

    awesome

  10. Sravya Sri on December 30, 2015 1:42 pm

    Ha ha funny
    Nice slaps…

  11. Sahima(fan of abhigya) on December 30, 2015 1:45 pm

    Wow. The slapping scene was awesome. I can’t stop my laugh. It was very good.

  12. anu on December 30, 2015 3:07 pm

    if it real. i felt like that i am the most happiest person

  13. Jyotika patel on December 30, 2015 3:07 pm

    Good one

  14. jiya on December 30, 2015 3:23 pm

    nice…………. and slap scene was awesome one

  15. swara on December 30, 2015 3:35 pm

    i like slap scene very much by the way episode is very nice.

  16. Tara on December 30, 2015 4:18 pm

    Hahaa good slap scene. Guyz kavita is asking swara to unite her with sanskar after their divorce. Swara leaves MM with teary eyed

  17. aqsa on December 30, 2015 4:34 pm

    Superb fab ? ? ? ? waiting for next part

  18. Nita on December 30, 2015 4:58 pm

    Oh God.,, so many slaps!! She would have got all her teeth broken…. πŸ˜€ Very nice and funny too…

  19. shabrin on December 30, 2015 6:04 pm

    OMG! ! ! Slap after slap…..poor Atriya ?

  20. ritu mishra on December 30, 2015 8:55 pm

    sab jhut..upload karte hai..swara ko phle laksh k sath jod k tamasha bnaya bechari ka…fr kavita ko bhej k fr tamasha bna…uski khud ki sister phle shadi krwayi fr shadi tod di..duffer ragini bastard…swara ko uska pyar kabhi nhi mil sakta..swara ne to apne pyar k liye sanskar or kavita ko bhi mila diya..but maheshwari family..laksh or sanskar ka kya farz hai…kuch bhi nhi…so ye jhute updates mat hi dale..

    • Kritika on December 31, 2015 11:24 am

      Whats ur problem??
      Problem tumme hai.. jise problem hai wo khud adjust kare..
      Writing is our passion n its even increases our vocabulary.
      N rahi baat serial ki..unhe jo dikhana hai wo dikhaye.. we Swaragini fans are with them in all thick and thins.. of trp’s also..
      N HERA IGNORE THIS #ritu mishra’s POST..
      WE ARE WITH U..
      U CONTINUE WRITING..

    • aqsa on January 1, 2016 4:02 pm

      Ritu if you have any problem then why do not you stop reading this ff we are very happy with these guys

  21. nive on December 30, 2015 9:20 pm

    Ha ha ha… slap scene was nice : D πŸ˜€

  22. raksha on December 30, 2015 11:15 pm

    Superb yaar next part soon yaar . y yaar all of the the writers r not posting the next part plzzz yaar I am waiting from morning onwards for the next update of all the writers plzzz next part yaar

  23. khushi on December 31, 2015 11:50 am

    thanks heera for giving such a nice slap scene

  24. rupsikha? on December 31, 2015 12:29 pm

    Yeah! Agree wid u kritika…@ritu mishra don’t say lyk dat yr…sbki koi na koi passion hota h …n kya jhute updates?waise 2mhe pta toh h na ki yeh ek fan fiction h?

    Don’t hurt anyone ok..

  25. Nidha on December 31, 2015 5:33 pm

    Hey guys ….y u all didn’t update any ff…pls update it soon……waiting for it

  26. shreyanshi on December 31, 2015 7:14 pm

    Why dere z no fanfiction today ???
    πŸ™

    • amilu on December 31, 2015 9:26 pm

      me too thinking the samee ????

    • prit on December 31, 2015 9:39 pm

      No ff till 4 January due to holiday of telly update team…they r not accepting d posting of ff.

  27. amilu on December 31, 2015 8:12 pm

    update it fast yaar waiting since yesterday

  28. Harshita on December 31, 2015 11:47 pm

    Hahhaa.. slapping scene was awsmm.. AP can also slap her.. n say this z for molesting me..

  29. maroosh on January 1, 2016 10:39 pm

    why there is no update
    where r the all writers
    I m waiting for the updates from 30th Dec but didn’t get any update.

  30. Vinu on January 2, 2016 7:15 am

    Update the next episode fast yaar plz plz plz plz plz plz………since two days not even a episode was written…….please update fast

  31. Kitu on January 2, 2016 6:38 pm

    Pls update the next part soon .from 30 Dec no one has written any update .pls writers post ur updates we r waiting for it .plzzzzzzz update as soon as possible pllzzzz.

  32. Harshita on January 2, 2016 6:56 pm

    Posting fan fiction is stopped ????????????
    Not even a single update of fan fiction is their of any serial
    Plz tell if anyone knows

    • Ranaji(narendran) on January 2, 2016 7:00 pm

      It will be posted on jan4th

  33. Divi on January 2, 2016 9:52 pm

    Guys wat happen …..wat abt new swasan chapters…..y u guys nt updating…..pls update it fast….I m so much eager 2 read it

  34. poo on January 4, 2016 12:09 am

    Yaar nw it is 4th January na… πŸ™ I mean nw they can post it right …..seriously missing it very badly …… :'(

  35. Nidha on January 4, 2016 6:18 am

    It’s Jan 4……phir bhi koi ff nahi update kiya

  36. Harshita on January 4, 2016 8:19 am

    Plz now toh at least post a ff missing very badly

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