Hey guys this is neptunezzz here!!
So let’s start:-
This is going to be really very different it’s not like a swasan or raglak story but also SWARAGINI story…
So it will have few changes… And I actually wanted to clear out some points.. It’s all my point of view.. No offense to any of the character!!
I will post the story tommrow but I have to post something today:-
Firstly I think as the name suggests it’s abt both Swara and Ragini.. But since the beginning it’s only showing ragini as bad and Swara is like normal thing..
Ragini and Swara both were cute bubbly girls and shared a gud bond but just as laksh entry happened everything changed..
Firstly Ragini is not to to be blamed I mean not all the time..
Swara ‘s mistake:- I think everyone would blame Sanskar and laksh for Ragini ‘s change but I think there was little bit of swara ‘s mistake too as she knew very well tht Ragini loves laksh and they r going to marry.. But still she was sticking to laksh… Not sticking exactly but what was the need to be too friendly with him..
But her intentions wasn’t wrong!!
Sanskar ‘s mistake:- Sanskar was the one who made Ragini manipulated or the things were going right and raging had already sacrificed her love..
Laksh ‘s mistake:- I think he was the one! As seriously he was hurting Ragini and Swara both.. I mean y was he using Ragini… And if he loved swara why didn’t he trusted her.. I agree it was ragsan ‘s plan but still..
Coming to Ragini now she is not a 5 yr old tht she would come in talks on someone so Sanskar is completely not to be blamed!! Secondly the way she proved swara character less was way out of something!!
Both the girls suffered equally.!! Ragini lost her love swara was probed character less..
And but at least swara was happy with Sanskar but laksh was still behind swara.. So Ragini was suffering..
It was not tht swara suffered less she also suffered a lot.. After passing thousands of hurdles she got her love..
# no fights just to write my story clearing some points out.. I will post the 1st part tommrow and raglak fans u could also read if u want.. It will be raglak and swasan love story..
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its different……. keep it up di and post next part soon …. ?
I can’t fully support for whatever u said.. if ragini was in swara’s place it is acceptable that she is sticking to her sisters love , becoz she is a traditional girl Nd don’t have much contact with public.. while coming to swara she was modern yet traditional , friendly with both men Nd woman, like we have boys as friends .. she too have modern thinking so it is not wrong to being friendly with sisters love/a boy, she had no wrong intentions in her mind.. yaa I admit ragini was manipulated by sanskar but still she was only main reason for her sorrows ..but coming to swara whatever pain she went through is mostly becoz of ragini….
Anyway dear looking forward for your story…
nice continue
Sorry but even I disagree with some if the points you said…..
hmm i respect to ur point of view dear! but dont worry from the next shot there would be few changes.. if u want u could read….
And always saying swara was right is not right in my opinion..
I never say that swara is or was always right… she’s a human and she’s bound to make mistakes just like everyone of us but to say that she had sanskaar beside her so she suffered less would not be right.. even if sanskaar was beside her she just considered him as she friend and she got sanskaar very late as her life partner after kavita went away…
and actually i shouldnt have said both suffered equally.. Swara suffered more i kmow tht but ragini s was not tht less…
Even ragini has suffered I don’t say no to it.. but there were many ways to get Laksh rather then proving her sister characterless and that’s where I don’t like her
Her very first and biggest mistake was to say that she don’t love Lakshya and was not serious about Lakshya which was her decision at that point no one forced her she was alone and no one was manipulating her at that point. swara shouldn’t have given in to Ragini’s suggestion regarding her feelings for Lakshya which was Swara’s fault.
Swara shouldn’t have given in to Ragini’s suggestion that she should give Lakshya a chance but misunderstanding friendship to love on someone’s instance can’t be called a crime. Ragini should have let Lakshya go when he said that he is ready to leave for London. That proves that ragini from the start was not ready to sacrifice her love. Though her plan was not as despicable as Sanskar’s. She was thinking that she will turn hersel modern as Swara and somehow will win Lakshya’s affection back. That was the reason she manipulated Swara in the name of teaching her traditional values. She turned herself modern to get his attention.
Yeah….here raglak fan….hope this FF give importance to raglak…also…..
Go ahead