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Swaragini-Nazdeekiyaan Episode 5

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Sry for the late updates guys as u all knw none of my family members knw tht i am writing a FF…And my Dectective elder brother Ayush is behind me ..spying wat i am doing always infront of the computer…He ws behind me asking wat am i doing so becoz of tht i could’nt update..sry for the delay…
Recap: RagLak flashback
Ragini reaches her house & opens the packet which Laksh gave her. It ws a blue green mix saree in it with a note.
She takes the not and read it.
‘’Hi Ragini,
I don’t knw how will u react after readibg this but Ragini i cant hide it anymore frm u. I don’t knw smtyms i feel lyk u already knw if u r pretenting tht u don’t. So here i am Ragini kneeing down infront of u..Ragini Raghuvendra Pratap Rathore will u be Mrs.Laksh Maheshwari..Ragini pls don’t jump into any decision take ur time.(whole ni8 is there to think)..wear this saree and come for the fresher’s party..
With everlasting love
Urs..laksh

Ragini looks at the saree……….
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@Fresher’s party
Laksh is wearing a black jeans and a light blue plain shirt..He is eagerly waiting for Ragini.
At last Ragini comes.
Laksh looks at her..
She is wearing a Black knee length frock.
Laksh looks her his happiness vanishes seeing her in this dress..
Ragini sees it but ignores Laksh.
Laksh understands tht Ragini is ignoring him…he goes frm the party.
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Nxt day Laksh decides to talk to Ragini and make her understand tht he loves her a lot.
@Collage
Laksh searches for Ragini but he could’nt find her..Laksh tries to call her mobile..but she is not picking..
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For the 1 week Ragini didn’t come to collage..Laksh is very sad.
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After 1 week..
Laksh comes to hostel after collage he takes his mobile..He gets a msg frm an unknown number.
He opens it and reads..
“Hi Laksh its Ragini i knw u r angry wit me..but Laksh i think we should meet and clear everything between us..And this is my new number woh i lost my phone after tht party…so if u don’t mind can u come to my house tomorrow we will talk there…..Ragini”
Laksh: I think i should go…
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Nxt day after collage he goes to Ragini’s house…
He stops his bike infront of a big Mansion..The name plate says “Rathore’s” ….He gets down from the bike and enters ..
He sees it beautifully decorated…He is searching for Ragini…Laksh is wearing the same dress he wore on fresher’s party
A man comes and pats on Laksh’s shoulder frm behind.
Laksh turns back…The man is in Black formals.
Man: i think u r searching smone..may i help u?
Laksh: yh actually i am searching for Ragini…
Man: Ragini?
Laksh: yh she told me to come..by the way where is she Sir?
Man: She will come nw..
Laksh: is there a function or smthing?
Man: yh its my daughter’s wedding.
Laksh: oh ur daughter’s wedding…what!..tht means u r Ragini’s father..today is her wedding she is getting married ..she she….hw can she..
Man: relax relax young man..its not Ragini’s wedding…its her sister’s..my elder daughter’s wedding..Radhika..Radhika Raghuvendra Pratap Rathore’s mehandi…hey …i am Ragini’s father …
Laksh: Raghuvendra Pratap Rathore…ri8?
Rathore nodes in yes and smiles.
Laksh: i am Laksh Durga Prasad Maheshwari…nd forwards his hand
Rathore and Laksh shake hands.
Rathore: it ws nice meeting u…
A lady comes there.
Lady: Raghu its tym where r these girls?
Rathore: Janu relax they will come down nw..
Lady: Raghu..but
Rathore: no but vat..they will come…hey meet him..he is Laksh Maheshwari.
Lady folds her hands in the form of Namaste. Laksh also dids the same.
Rathore: Laksh meet my wife Janki.
Laksh: Janki..sweet name aunty….
They smiles.
Rathore: Look here she comes…
1 girl is coming down in bridal attire
Rathore: Laksh beta tht is Radhika…
Laksh smiles.
Janki: at last…Raghu its happening..
Rathore: Janki..no crying..
Janki: no these r tears of happiness…
Rathore: tht means u r happy bcoz My princess is going to go frm our house.
Janki: no …
Rathore: then why tears of happiness?
Janki hits him.Rathore hugs her..they sees their daughter..
Janki: where is Ragini?
A girl comes down …she is looking very beautiful in the blue green mix saree….yh its our Ragini…
Laksh sees her lovingly..he is mesmerised to see her in tht saree..
Laksh(in mind): oh she is looking damn beautiful..hey its the same saree i gifted her ..why she wore it today..so she accepted my proposal?…
Ragini and Radhika comes down…
Rathore: Beta we will have to go nw ..catch up wit u later..enjoy urself ok
Laksh’s eyes is still glued on Ragini.
And Laksh simply nodes his head in yes ..to Rathore.
Rathore and Janki goes to their daughters.
Janki: Radhu u look beautiful..and applies kala tika behind Radhika’s ear.
Ragini: wat abt me maa..
Rathore: Both my princess r looking very pretty ok..
People: baraath aa gayi..
Rathore and Janki goes out to welcome baraath.
Ragini is standing with Radhika she sees Laksh staring at her.
Ragini: Didi ..he is Laksh.
Radhika: den go and talk with him pagali..
Ragini: par main..
Laksh: sees Ragini looking him..so he goes to them.
Ragini: oh hi Laksh i didn’t see u at all.
Radhika stamps on Ragini’s feet..
Ragini: ouch..i mean i ws searching for u Laksh…she gives a deadly look to Radhika..
Radhika: Ragini is he ur friend?
Ragini: di this is Laksh….
Radhika: oh..Laksh he is the same persong who gifted u this saree ri8..
Radhika smiles at Laksh ..he smiles back
Radhika extends her hand forward.
Radhika: Hi Laksh i am Radhika Ragini’s sister.
They shake hands..Laksh moves forward to talk to Ragini..
Radhika: u go to papa i’ll give Laksh company.
Ragini looks at Laksh and goes.
Radhika: so Laksh hw is my sister?
Laksh: she is nice.
Radhika: She is nice..thts all?..stupid its written in ur face tht u love her.
Laksh: what…but wats the use she don’t love me.
Radhika: my ladoo lyks to pareshaan people…and u r her new bakra.
Laksh: what..tht means..
Radhika: haan she purposing wore a different dress tht day to irritate u.
Laksh: what tht means she..
Radhika: haan she loves u…but Laksh u tried to tell ur feelings to her..n its her turn let she say her feelings to u …if u knw wat i mean..
Laksh: u mean bakre ko bakra banana?
Radhika; exactly..
They hi fis each other…
Precap: Ragini confesses her feelings to Laksh

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70 Comments

  1. Nuszat (T!B!H!) (~Nusz) on April 27, 2016 9:56 am

    Amazing episode!!! You have the right to do anything!! You’re always rocking bestie… Love you and also I posted episode 17!! Hope you can comment on it, love you Hun~Nusz

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 10:09 am

      Thank u bestie….yaar i missed u very much thanx 4 commenting ur ff is going fab..love u lots 🙂

  2. Sindhu rm on April 27, 2016 10:03 am

    Why to afraid dear your not dng anything wrong naa
    Ofcourse i dnt knew situation in your home
    Loved your ff

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 10:46 am

      Sindhu di my family is a supporting one..but they dont want my focus to divert into anything else ..other than studies..thts y..but writing keeps me relaxed….dont wrry i am not gonna stop it.. 🙂

  3. lovely on April 27, 2016 10:06 am

    nice

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 10:47 am

      Thanx Lovely 🙂

  4. rakhi on April 27, 2016 10:11 am

    Awsm

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 10:47 am

      Thanx Rakhi 🙂

  5. swati on April 27, 2016 10:21 am

    Superb

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 12:25 pm

      thanx Swati☺

  6. ammy on April 27, 2016 10:21 am

    Nice

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 12:26 pm

      Thanx Ammy ☺

  7. Ammu on April 27, 2016 10:56 am

    Superb episode dear

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 12:26 pm

      Thanx Ammu☺

  8. Kriya on April 27, 2016 11:41 am

    Superb…update zehnaseeb ff also….

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 12:27 pm

      Yh Kriya ☺

  9. Tuba on April 27, 2016 12:16 pm

    Finally ur back! Cant wait for the 6th part! Loved it!

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 12:27 pm

      Tuba darling we missd…?

  10. taiana on April 27, 2016 12:25 pm

    Awesome episode…

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 1:06 pm

      Thanx Taiana ?

  11. Dhara on April 27, 2016 12:49 pm

    Nice episode

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 1:07 pm

      Thanx Dhara?

  12. Amy on April 27, 2016 1:38 pm

    Very nice episode

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 2:57 pm

      Thanx Amy?

  13. Shagun on April 27, 2016 1:48 pm

    Means laksh is the father of vansh

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 2:57 pm

      Shagun lets see..if he is?

  14. Nikki on April 27, 2016 2:24 pm

    Awesome eagerly waiting to know their past

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 3:01 pm

      Thanx Nikli?

  15. Leia on April 27, 2016 2:33 pm

    FAINALY my dearest is back been missing you alot,,, you know my day incomplete without reading your ff what to do am addicted to your writing. Being loving all this cute ranging lakash moments. Thanks for updating waiting for the story to unfold. 🙂

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 3:02 pm

      Thank u Leia..even i missed u hey can we b frnds?.. pls ….?

    • Leia on April 27, 2016 8:45 pm

      What do you mean I thought we already are friends

    • Nikki on April 27, 2016 10:30 pm

      Can I also be your friend…I am sorry if I am unwantedly poking my nose

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 8:37 am

      Leia Nikki..both of u r also my best friends ok….So im in 12 wat abt u both?..??

    • Nikki on April 28, 2016 12:09 pm

      Thanks Di I have completed my 10th this year so you are elder then me and I will call you Di ok

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 2:33 pm

      So u r CBSE?

    • Nikki on April 28, 2016 5:17 pm

      No…… state board(Maharashtra)

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 5:47 pm

      So u r frm Maharashta..I am frm Kerala 🙂

  16. Prateeksha on April 27, 2016 4:26 pm

    Very nice… Liking your ff a lot…. Thanks for the update… Please continue

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 5:18 pm

      Thanx Prateeksha ?

  17. Ruhani on April 27, 2016 8:03 pm

    Hahaha u r in so much trouble babes hope ur bro stops spying on u… Aww loved this epi dr it was fab but y laksh cheated on her… N try to update whenever u r free plz…

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 10:35 pm

      Bhaiya ..bhi na dil se acha hain…but smtyms.. he is just……over
      Abt Laksh u will get to knw it soon..Thanx Ruhani?

  18. Vrutika on April 27, 2016 9:14 pm

    Nice one

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 10:45 pm

      Thanx Vrutika?

  19. Kriya on April 27, 2016 9:25 pm

    Can anyone tell me why frm the afternoon ffs r not being posted or else telly updates r not posting ffs for some days…..

    • Sarika Shah on April 27, 2016 10:48 pm

      yh Kriya site maintenance is going on thts y..they will take ffs frm 29th?

  20. Nikki on April 27, 2016 10:12 pm

    Kriya tu have some issue of server maintenance so ff are not accepted till 29th April

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 8:49 am

      ?

  21. kavya on April 28, 2016 12:08 am

    pls give me link of starting epi not able to find links

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 8:51 am

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/?=nazdeekiyaan

  22. Kriya on April 28, 2016 12:55 am

    Thnks for the info sarika n nikki…..

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 8:51 am

      Welcome dear?

  23. Nuszat (T!B!H!) (~Nusz) on April 28, 2016 3:28 am

    Hun I hope you can comment on the latest episode of my ff, love you Hun~Nusz

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 8:52 am

      Yh ofcourse bestie??

  24. kavya on April 28, 2016 9:39 am

    heyy this link is not of your epi

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 10:08 am

      Sry yaar i made amistake its http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=nazdeekiyaan

  25. kavya on April 28, 2016 9:40 am

    hey why there was no story updates of ff from yesterday

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 10:07 am

      There is site maintenance Kavya thts y 🙂

  26. kalai on April 28, 2016 10:00 am

    awsm

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 10:10 am

      Thanx Kalai 🙂

  27. pragya on April 28, 2016 3:45 pm

    nice but why new fan fiction episodes show

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 5:25 pm

      Thanx..Site maintenance is going on thts y Pragya 🙂

  28. pragya on April 28, 2016 3:45 pm

    nice but why new fan fiction episodes not shown

  29. kavya on April 28, 2016 5:23 pm

    ty dear

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 5:48 pm

      🙂

  30. sweety on April 28, 2016 5:55 pm

    awsm epi
    29 ko naye fan fiction update ho jaye ge

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 7:44 pm

      Thanx..Sweety 🙂

  31. sweety on April 28, 2016 5:56 pm

    plz tell me

    • Sarika Shah on April 28, 2016 8:24 pm

      Yh baba ho jayenga 🙂

  32. Sameer on May 2, 2016 10:21 am

    HELLO NICE ONE CONTINUE WRITING

    • Sarika Shah on May 2, 2016 12:43 pm

      Thanx Sam 🙂

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