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Home»Fan Fiction»Swaragini – The Love (Episode 5)
Fan Fiction Swaragini

Swaragini – The Love (Episode 5)

ManuKishanBy ManuKishanAugust 16, 201728 Comments7 Mins Read
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swara: wow sanskar you proved you have brain
sanskar saw her with it is a joke expression
swara: i mean you get good ideas
sanskar gave her a smile

actually her cycle is kept on car and tied with ropes
swara: by the way why you carry ropes with you?
sanskar: not for me but for laksh he goes for noght parties some some times so then this is usefull for him
swara: oh!!
sanskar: i am sorry swara i was about to say no in front of every one but
swara: its ok and its their happiness i want to give them
sanskar: so we are friends
swara smiles
swara: yes friends
sanskar: i am your first friend in our house
swara: no lucky is my first friend
sanskar: what??
swara says everything to him

@ raglak
ragini looking him
laksh: don’t look like that i may loose control
ragini:on what?
laksh: bike bike!
ragini smiled and kept her hands on his shoulders and he was flying in sky
they all reach coffee shop and spend some quality time

@ Maheshwari mansion
laksh was in his room laying on his bed and think of ragini, he closes his eyes and finds ragini smiling face he opens his eyes and sits
laksh: why this ragini is disturbing me? god i am feeling like talking to her
he sees time it is 10 am in morning yes he didn’t went to college saying dp that he is have project work which is to be done in home
laksh: shall i call her but will he be their in home but whats her number?
laksh goes down and sees ap and sujatha in kitchen and goes inside and sits on the a stool kept there and saw his mom
laksh: maa
ap: haa laksh
ap was cooking something and sujatha cutting vegetables and parineeta arranging things in shelfs
laksh: maa give me your phone naa my phone is struck and i want to call my friend
ap: its in sofa go and take
laksh ran out of kitchen and looked for phone and finally got it
he searched in contacts for gadodia number and got it he noted in his mind and went to his room

@ laksh room
laksh took his phone and dailed a the number it was ringing and laksh heart beat was raising
voice: hello
laksh found it is not ragini’s voice
laksh: can i know who is in line
voice: sharmista gadodia
laksh: sorry its a wrong number
he ended call and again dailed after 5 minutes
laksh: hello
voice: hello who is speaking? whom do you want? and from where are you calling?
laksh(to himself): if some one is talking this much then sure it is swara because she is only that much talkative girl in their house

laksh thoughts are broke
swara: who is THIS……??????
laksh: we are calling from AAA Bank do you need any loans madam
swara: no we don’t want
he ends the call and sleeps on his bed and thinks when will this ragini pick the call
he finally once again calls on the number
voice: hello
laksh smiles listening to the voice and it was sweet melodious voice of his girl
laksh: ragini
ragini found it that it is his gay on the line and a small smile creeped on her face
ragini(whisper): laksh…
laksh: haa its me
ragini( slowly as possible): why you called?
laksh: why do you have any problem or your in work?
ragini: no but just asking
laksh: to now your answer?
ragini: for what
laksh: that only that i asked while we were playing game

ragini remembers his asking” will you be with me for ever and ever”
she blushes hearing it and her face turns into red
laksh: don’t blush that much
ragini shocks
ragini: how you know?
laksh: i don’t know you only said know by saying how you know
ragini smiled
ragini: so what
laksh: say me answer to my question
ragini: i will be
laksh: haa you will be
ragini: forever
laksh: forever
ragini: and
laksh: and
swara: ragini who is on line your talking from 5 minutes
ragini trembles and laksh is listening from other end
ragini: wo di wo ….
swara: kya wo(what?)
ragini: my..my
swara: haa your
laksh: love naa
but no one hear him because ragini kept reciver of telephone at her back covering from swara

ragini: di i am playing like when i used to play when i am small
swara: seriously
ragini: haa
swara nods her head in disbelief and goes from there
ragini sighs free and take her phone near her ear
laksh: say naa
ragini smiles and continues
ragini: and
laksh: and
ragini: ever
laksh: ever
dadi cames
dadi: oh my god what is happening in this house

ragini keeps reciver again at her back and looks at dadi
dadi: that swara always playing with children in street and this ragini
dadi looks at ragini and ragini was already staring dadi with fear
dadi : what are you doing ragini
ragini: dadi maa wo wo i am cleaning the telephone dadi maa
dadi : atleast your in home came and sit near me and sing a song
ragini looks dadi maa and again phone
laksh: all are disturbing my love
ragini:bye (in phone)
laksh: no no you sing and come back even i will listen
ragini keeps phone a side and goes near dadi maa and closes her eyes she finds laksh in front of her
O Re Bansi Bajaiya
Nandlala Kanhaiya

(laksh smiles listening the song and sleeps on bed keeping his phone near his ears)
O Re Bansi Bajaiya
Nandlala Kanhaiya
O Re Bansi Bajaiya
Nandlala Kanhaiya
Mohe Mohe Aise Nahi Chhedo Sanware
Suno Sun Mose Nahi Khelo Daaw Re
Jaake Yashoda Se Kehdungi Re
O Kaanha Soja Zara O Kaanha Soja Zara
Luk Chhupke Yun Tak Na Mohe
Kaanha Soja Zara O Kaanha Soja Zara
(laksh images ragini beside him and making him sleep by patting his head)
Naino Se Na Chhuna Mohe
Kaanha Soja Zara O Kaanha Soja Zara
Kaanha Soja Zara O Kaanha Soja Zara

Gopi O Ke Pichhe Phirtu Nisdin Palchhin
Thak Gaye Paaon Mere
Saans Zara Meri Ruk Jaa Kaanha Tham Jaa
Maan Bhi Jaa Kehna Tu Mera
Saanware Baanware
Kal Bhi Hongi Ye Rang Reliya
Kal Phir Aana O Re Chhaliya
Dooba Ye Din Chal So Jaa
Kaanha Soja Zara O Kaanha Soja Zara
Kaanha Soja Zara O Kaanha Soja Zara
Kaanha…Radha Ke Piya Kanha Soja Zara..

laksh falls a sleep and hear dadi maa leaves as dadaji is calling she goes near phone
ragini: hello
no response
ragini: hello
she hears lakshs snoring voice she smiles at cuts the call
swara cames inside the house and closes door someone knock the door
she goes and opens door and finds none and again she closes the door and going to room and again she hears knock
she opens door and finds a box and written ” to chatter box of the house”
swara: i am the one and only chatter box of house so its me only
she smiles and take it to her room and opens it and finds a latest trending mobile
she smiles looking it and she gets a call and it is sanskar
screen freezes with swara smiling face , ragini looking at telephone , laksh sleeping and sanskar holding phone

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    28 Comments

    1. Febi on August 16, 2017 12:32 am

      Awesome dear

    2. Sammirza on August 16, 2017 1:23 am

      Nice episode but i just can’t understand will u send links of previous episodes…

    3. Tani on August 16, 2017 3:18 am

      Nice

    4. Soujanya on August 16, 2017 8:53 am

      Awesome…

    5. Simi on August 16, 2017 1:54 pm

      Awesome

    6. asra on August 16, 2017 2:25 pm

      awesome dear….loved it alot…eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear…

    7. Milestone on August 16, 2017 3:11 pm

      Nice…..

    8. Arjuna on August 16, 2017 4:18 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    9. Pearly on August 16, 2017 4:23 pm

      superb part

    10. Elizebathlovely on August 16, 2017 4:42 pm

      Awesome

    11. Sherin on August 16, 2017 4:57 pm

      Awesome dear

    12. Vini on August 16, 2017 5:11 pm

      Good one, keep going

    13. Monisha on August 16, 2017 5:39 pm

      Excellent part

    14. Laashya on August 16, 2017 5:44 pm

      Wonderful episode and cute raglak

    15. hemalattha on August 16, 2017 7:47 pm

      Awesome

    16. Malu on August 16, 2017 8:09 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    17. Aamy on August 16, 2017 8:25 pm

      Awesome

    18. Monu on August 16, 2017 8:33 pm

      Interesting dear

    19. Soumya on August 16, 2017 8:45 pm

      Simply superb di…..post next soon

    20. Vennila on August 16, 2017 9:20 pm

      Awesome episode

    21. Ammu on August 16, 2017 9:42 pm

      It’s outstanding episode dear and I just fell in love with this ff. Day by day it’s going to be very interesting. Raglak scenes are beautiful dear. Kahna zoja zara is one of my favorite song. Eagerly waiting for more Raglak scenes. Love you dear and take care

    22. Raglak_fan on August 16, 2017 10:16 pm

      Fabulous dear

    23. Anju on August 16, 2017 10:22 pm

      Awesome update

    24. Jiyani on August 16, 2017 10:31 pm

      Fantastic dear…Loved it

    25. Ashly on August 17, 2017 3:15 pm

      Awesome superb amazing

    26. Thahseem on August 17, 2017 3:43 pm

      Awesome

    27. Pinki on August 17, 2017 5:53 pm

      Awesome sis

    28. pnap on August 19, 2017 7:10 pm

      read all the parts in a go
      it’s really amazing dear
      loved it to the core

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