Hello everyone.hope you all are doing good. I am very new here. I have read my ff and loved them. I am writing thisff plz read it.
After kavya s track everything was going well . Raglak married and everyone was happy.
After 2 months.
A woman is coming out of her room. She is swara. She is wearing a red cream saree.
Ap: swara take care you are pregnant dear.
Swara:yes mom . Just two minutes.
Swara comes downstairs . Ap makes her sit down.
Ap: i said na no one work means no work.
Swara makes a cute face.
Swara: ok.
Ap: btw.. where is your husband.
Swara: mom he has left for office in morning only.
Ap- ok. Call him.
Swara: ok mom.
She calls in office.
Swara: hello.
Man: hello maam.maam sir is busy in meeting.
Swara: ok you pls tell him to call me.
Man: sure .
Swara disconnects.
Swara: ma he is busy.
Ap: ok. When is your appointment with doctor.
Swara: tomorrow ma.
Ap: ok.
Swara: ma doctor will do sonography.
Ap: o is it so then i will also come with you to see my grandchild.
Swara: of course ma.
Phone rings.
Swara: i am sure its his call
Ap: you wait i will pick it up.
Swara nods.
Ap was about to pick when dp calls her.
Ap: swara u only recieve .
Swara nods
She picks the call.
Swara: hello laksh.
Laksh: hello swara. You called me.
Swara: haan ma told.
Laksh: ok . How are u . Take care of yourself as well as my baby.
Swara smiles.
Swara: when will u come home.
Laksh: i am struck in som important meeting as it gets over i will come till u take care.bye.
Swara: bye.
Ap: what was he saying.
Swara: ma he is little busy
Ap: after what happened two months before. Laksh has devoted all time to work and family.
Swara: yes ma . He was the one who gave me support.
Ap: may god bless u both
Swara smiles.
Precap: past revealation.
What happened two months ago? Why has swara married to laksh. Where is sanskar? Where is ragini? What made swasan and raglak to get seperated? Was it fate’s plan or someones?
All these answers you will soon come to know .if you liked it and want me to continue please tell me. I have read many ff and then started writing. Your comments will decide future of this ff.
So plz comment
14 Comments
I’m scared yr…??? what’s gonna happen next..continue plz…n post asap..
Wow yr i m shocked after reading laksh call swara i think it will be swasan but now also i m having hope of swasan plz make it swasan doono know why i m feeling like swara is pregnant with sanskar chilld nd plz dont think of making ragsan as they both share brother sister bond in serial so plz
Yup!! Even I feel the same..!
Its fabulous yaar….the twist u showed …brilliant…keep writing….. .u r one of the budding writers here……plz do continue…….you t fantastic as well as ur story is just awesome…btw…i think i know what is gonna happen now…but very good.
nice intresting waiting for next update.. means swara pregnet with sanskar child and laksh marry her.. dont make ragsan.. unite raglak and swasan someting or someone did to them so they are not there.. intresting update next part
Superb
Waiting fr nxt..hope swalak hav sum feelings fr eachother
Yrrr plZZZZZZ MAKE SWALAK PLZZZZZZZ YRRRR WE CANOT SEE THEM TOGETHER IN SERIAL SO ATLEAST MADE THEM TOGETHER IN THIS FF ONLY PLZZZZ…..
REST IS UR CHOICE
The Story really started very well but please keep the couple like they are now, I mean Swalak and Ragsan
I agree with anu and kritika
Plz make it swasan and raglak
Anyways the twist was awesome
Please keep it swalak only
Plzz don’t separate Swasan I hope Swara is pregnant with sanskar a child
Awesome yaar….waiting for next part
Nyc…go on