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Swaragini-Jag ghoomeya thare jaisa na koyi Shot 5 Last Shot

Hi everyone..i hope all are happy and fine…so here am i presenting u with the last shot of this ff.and ia big sry i couldn’t reply to any of ur comments in last few shots..but i’ll reply to them today thanx for all ur love guys..firstly i want to thank Aadya who wanted me to write an ff on Raglak..a big thanx to u dr..and then all my readers..my friends..my fav squad….thanx a lot everyone..this was an incredible journey..i am gonna miss this a lot…and u are free to contact me at any time..well i want to thank Jayu didu, Adreen di, Folly di, Abhi di, Avika di, Berdilla akka, Asra di, Hemalattha di, aleeza di,Makku di, Ammy, Neenu(Nymisha), Bela di, Mesha di, Lovely7, Arjuna di, Malu di, Vk di, Monisha di, Sherin di, Soumta, Runs di, Sam, Anju di, Pearly di, Ashly di, Iqu, Ammu chichi, Aamy di, Elizabethlovely di, Rehna chichi, Vennila di, Monu di, Monisha di, Vini di, Jiyani di , A.xx, Jazzy di, ROJARANI di, raguzz di, AimRagLak di, Fairy di, Sunny, Jaan di, Lakshmi lachu di, Sethidisha di, Laashya chichi, Sree chichi(Sreevijayan), Akshitha di, Shri di(Shrilatha), Thahseem di, Varshini di, Dharani di & Akanshanna di…..thank u everyone for all ur support without u guys i am nothing u guys build me up Also my silent readers..i’ll be on could 9 if u guys could also tell me how was this shot through ur comments i love u all tk cr so keep smiling keep loving and keep reading….
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Link to previous shot
https://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-jag-ghoomeya-thare-jaisa-na-koyi-shot-4-part-2/

Hey guys i am starting a new FF Swaragini-U were my new dream..so i have updated its 2nd promo..pls do read it..
Link to the 2nd promo
https://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-u-new-dream-raglak-ragsan-promo-2/

Recap: Ragini comes to knw the truth.

Ragini remembers her and Laksh’s moments
Ragini remembers how he makes her smile…
Ragini: Ramu kaka..fast..
They reaches air port
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AP: What to do Sharmishta ji..I’ll call her once
AP goes to take her phone
AP: Sharmishta ji Laksh’s message
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Ragini goes to airport But securities stop her
Ragini; pls pls try to understand i need to go its a kind of very important thing pls pls..
Security 1: sry ma’am but we cannot let u in..
Ragini: pls pls..sir its very important why don’t u understand…
Security: we have already told u ma’am we cant let u in if u don’t co-operste then we will have to bring in our force
Ragini: pls sir my love is leaving to America..pls i need to stop him pls..if i don’t go to him then he will leave me forever..and i cant live without him pls pls..
Ragini pleads..
Someone keeps his hand on her shoulder.
Ragini turns back
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Sharmishta: what message AP ji?
AP: I don’t beleive this Sharmishta ji..yes god is with Ragini and Laksh god is with their love
Sharmishta: tell me AP ji
AP; Laksh missed his flight he will be going on the nxt flight..
Sharmishta and AP are very happy
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Ragini turns back
Voice: let her in …
Security 1: Sir u..ok sir…sry ma’am we didnt knw u were sir’s
Voice: its ok..
Ragini comes in.
Ragini: thank u so much sir
Voice: no need to thank me so where is ur love can i also meet him?
Ragini; ofcourse..
Voice: i cant see lovers separate ..whats ur name dear?
Ragini: i am Ragini…Ragini Rathore
The man is shocked
Man: Sharmishta’s
Ragini: u knw Mishtu?
Man: yes i knw her i have been searching for her all these years where is she..I am Shekhar Gadodia
Ragini looks at him shocked
Ragini: Mishtu had once mentioned abt u
Shekhar holds Ragini’s hands
Shekhar: i am sry Ragini beta i was really wrong by not accepting u…i regret my decision now..will u forgive me?
Ragini: i can now forgive u ..as i am also in the same state ..
Shekhar hugs her
Ragini: so r u married now?
Shekhar: i have not married..if i am marrying then its Sharmishta no one else
Ragini: thank u
Shekhar; where is ur idiot..what’s his name ?
Ragini: Laksh..
Ragini and Shekhar looks for him
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Sharmishta: i don’t knw why but i am feeling like everything is going to be good..
AP: pls god make everything fine
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Ragini and Shekhar searches for Laksh but there is no sign of him
Ragini cries
Ragini: its all my mistake..all my mistake..
Shekhar consoles her
Shekhar: don’t cry beta..dont loose ur hope
Ragini: there is no hope left..he might be hating me for what i did to him..but i swear i didnt knw ..anything..he is a liar a big liar
Shekhar hugs her..
And ragini is crying bitterly.
A man comes to them and he forwards Hand kerchief
Shekhar gets it
Shekhar: thank u..
Man: my pleasure
Shekhar gives it to Ragini.
Ragini lifts her head..
And she is shocked to see the man who was standing beside her
Ragini stands up..
Ragini: Laksh
Shekhar: what Laksh u r Laksh..oh god..atlast
Lkash looks at them
Laksh turns around and walks..
Ragini is shocked seeing his act
Shekhar is also shocked.
Ragini: see i told u na..he hates me..
Laksh is still walking.
Lkash (in mind): Laksh no..no dont turn back she is not Ragini..ur stupid mind is again hallucinating becoz of this u already have missed ur flight..no more confusion she will not come here.
FB Starts…
Voice: this is the last announcement for Mr.Laksh Maheshwari.
Laksh stands up and walks..but he feels someone is holding his hand..Laksh turns back and sees Ragini.
Tears comes from Laksh’s eyes.
Laksh: Ragini.
Ragini stands up
Ragini: pls dont go Laksh.
Laksh is abt to touch her face but she is not there..
Lkash realises he was just imagining her..and he misses his flight
FB Ends
Laksh: no its not her Laksh…no no turning back…
Laksh walks without turning back.
Ragini cries..
Ragini: see how he is going he hates me..
Shekhar: Ragini dont fall week GO AND GET UR LOVE…
Ragini: will he accept me?
Shekhar: tht is secondary…
Ragini: ok..
Shekhar: go Ragini..
Ragini runs to him
Ragini: Laksh ..Laksh..
Laksh: no no Laksh its not her this is all part of ur hallucination.
Ragini: Laksh u stupid idiot turn back
Laksh: no no i cant i will…i cannot
And Lkash turns back.
Ragini: what r u doing Laksh?
Laksh: see my dear Ragini i knw all this is happening inside my head but i am sry i have already missed my flight once and i dont want to miss it again..so pls pls…leave me alone..i knw i still love u deeply madly…yes i cannot forget u even if i try a million times but what can i do i a helpless pls pls pls…i am trying to stay away from u…yes i am trying…by the way orange saree suits u
Ragini goes to him and hts his shoulder
Laksh: ouch it hurts…
Ragini: how can it hurt Laksh all these things are happening in ur head ri8.
Laksh : haan but ..
Ragini: stupid..
Ragini goes and hugs him tight.
Ragini: this is also happening inside ur head…
Laksh: i wish it could happen in real.
Ragini: hugs him more tight..i love u Mr.Laksh Maheshwari.
Lkahs hugs her back.
Laksh: pls tell me its real..
Ragini bites Laksh’s ear.
Lkash: ouch…Ragini!!!
Ragini: now its real ok…
Laksh hugs her..
Laksh: i love u Ragini.
Ragini: liar..
Laksh: no i am not lying
Ragini: u always lied to me bt Luv abt ur love abt everything
Laksh: who told u?
Ragini; Ramu kaka.
Ragini hugs him
Laksh: i am sorry
Ragini: stupid Laksh….i hate u…liar
Laksh: thts becoz i love u …
Laksh her ti8…
Laksh kisses on her forehead..
Ragini: dont u dare to break ur promise..
Laksh: never ever..i’ll never leave u alone…never ever
Laksh goes on his knees..
Laksh: Miss Ragini Rathore will u be Mrs.Laksh Maheshwari?
Ragini: yes stupid..
Laksh: u r looking beautiful in this orange saree
Ragini blushes
Laksh: dont blush my dr…
They hugs..
All claps..
Laksh: Ragini who is this.
Ragini goes to Shekhar.
Ragini: this is Shekhar Gadodia.
Laksh: what Mishtu’s…
Ragini: yh..
Shekhar forwards his hand.
Shekhar: nice to meet u LAKSH.
Laksh: step aside…and dont think u’ll get my Mishtu ..i am her boyfriend..
Shekhar shockingly looks at Ragini.
Ragini; come he is a drama king..
Ragini walks out with Shekhar and Lkash follows them with his bags..
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They comes out.
Ramu: welcome back Laksh baba..
Laksh : thank u Ramu kaka.
They all get into the car
Ragini; Shekhar uncle i dont knw how is Mishtu going to react..
Shekhar: i knw beta..but i am ready to face it
Laksh: but she is my gf..
Ragini: he is mental uncle dont listen to him.
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They reach MM
Laksh comes out.
AP and Sharmishta are very happy o see him.
AP: Kyun akele aaye ho
Laksh takes Ragini out
Laksh: nahi…
AP: Thank god..finally
Ragini: we r not alone one more person is with us.
AP: who is tht?
Shekhar comes out.
Sharmishta sees him and is shocked
AP: Who is this?
Shekhar goes to Sharmishta
Shekhar: Mishti i am sorry..
Sahrmishta slaps him..
Ragini goes to them.
Ragini: Mishtu..
Sharmishta: no Laado..not this person…
Ragini: but Mishtu.
Sharmishta: i cant …no not this person.
Lkash: ok then Mishtu gf…i am not gonna marry ur Laado.
Sharmishta: but why.
Laksh: Ragini has hurted me just like how he hurted u..if u dont accept him it gives me a strong reason to reject ur Laado’s proposal also.
Shekhar: pls forgive me Mishti..i knw what i did u was wrong give me one chance and i’ll prove u tht ur desicion to accept me was a right one..
Sharmishta slaps him again.
Shekhar: slap me again ..i deserve it.
Sharmishta hugs him
Tears comes from everyones eyes…
Laksh hugs Ragini..
They take blessings from AP Sharmishta and Shekhar
Laksh: but stil Mishtu gf….
Sharmishta hugs Laksh
Sharmishta: take care of my Laado
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1 Month later
Raglak’s wedding happening …
Laksh is sitting in the mandap AP and DP are sitting beside him
Pandit: u can call the bride
Shekhar and Sharmishta comes with Ragini.
Laksh is mesmerised to see her..
Pandit: now u can apply sindoor on her hair scalp.
Laksh applies sindoor on Ragini’s hair scalp
Pandit: now tie mangalsutra around bride’s neck
Laksh ties Mangalsutra around Ragini’s neck.
Pandit; vivaah sampan hua.
Raglak take everyone’s blessings
Laksh: congrats: Mrs Maheshwari
Ragini: Congrats Mr Maheshwari
They hugs ….
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5 Years later @ MM
Ragini is wearing a orange saree..
Ragini comes into their room..
Ragini: this Laksh..is spoiling everyone..
Ragini takes the bed sheet
Laksh pulls her ..Ragini lands on top of him.
Laksh: good morning beautiful
Ragini: stop it Laksh what if someone sees us.
Laksh: we r married my dear we can do anything..
Ragini; idiot…
Laksh: khadoos.
Ragini: waise subah subah aap aur bhi zyaada handsome lag rahe ho..
Laksh: iss orange saree..my god…mere control ja raha hain
Ragini: stop it come..get up its 10
Laksh: where is maa and papa?
Ragini: kitchen romance
Lkah: then lets have Bedroom romance na
Ragini pushes him
Ragini: get up..
Laksh gets up and goes behind Ragini..
They enter a room…with one wall painted with with pink colour and other wall with blue colour…
Two kids ..1 boy and 1 girl are seen sleeping.
Ragini: dono papa par hi gaye hain.
Laksh hugs Ragini from behind.
Lkash: really..
Ragini; leave me…Laksh..
Laksh: raat kab honga?
Ragini; chee..Lkash abhi abhi toh subah hui hain..
Laksh: i love ni8s
Ragini hits him playfully
Ragini: Laksh…
Voice: mumma papa..
Ragini: lo dhono shaitaan ud gaye..
Ragini: Luv..Laxmi..come on get up and fresh up
Luv: papa…
Laksh: dadu and dadi are in kitchen go on…
Luv : ok papa..
Luv goes..
Laxmi comes to him.
Laksh picks her up.
Laksh: Shekhar nanu will be waiting for u..
Laksh keeps her down and gives her his mobile.
She goes.
Ragini: LAKSH…
Laksh: what now our Luv will disturb their dadu and dai and our Laxmi will disturb her nanu and nani…
Ragini; u r mad..u r spoiling our kids also
Laksh: dont u want to knw what Lkash papa is going to do..
Ragini: no Laksh not now..
They both fall on the bed.
Laksh is on top of Ragini.
Laksh : i love u Mrs Maheshwari
Ragini: and i love my Mr Maheshwari…
They hugs……..
The screen freezes on the photo frame kept at the side table..in which AP DP Ragini Laksh Luv Laxmi Shekhar and Sharmishta are there..

THE END

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