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Home»Fan Fiction»Swaragini – Jag Ghoomeya Thare Jaisa Na Koyi Shot 4 Part-1
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Swaragini – Jag Ghoomeya Thare Jaisa Na Koyi Shot 4 Part-1

Aditi.AyanshBy Aditi.AyanshJune 22, 201771 Comments9 Mins Read
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Hi everyone hope ll of u r fine and also annoyed with RagLak separation well i am really sorry for tht everyone well here goes Heart attack part 2…read and snjoy everyone love u all …so till then we meet again keep smiling keep laughing and always remember for every storm a rainbow awaits…if u have problems in ur life face it…lets take some risks…and Always remember if no one believes in u trusts in u loves u then don’t feel u r alone because i am ri8 here beside u dear sisters…no matter what happens i’m and i will b always there for u ..Love u all tk cr have fun
Love
Urs

Adi 🙂
Link to previous shot
Part 3

Recap: Luv is Laksh’s brother
Laksh comes to Luv’s room. He sees Ragini crying holding Luv’s photo frame
Laksh keeps his hand on her shoulder
Ragini pushes him
Laksh: Ragini
Ragini: stop taking my name ..and leave me alone..
Laksh: pls
Ragini: what else do u want Laksh…i though u were good..and all these tym i believed mu Luv..lied to me.
Laksh: Pls listen to me once

Ragini stands up and comes to him
Laksh: see i cant see u like this
Ragini: if i am like this its all because of u..and only u i hate u Laksh Maheshwari..u knew how much i loved Luv..but u
Laksh: pls i didnt..
Ragini shows her hand to stop him
Ragini: i don’t wan to hear anything from u i hate u…
Laksh comes out of Luv’s room
Mishti was standing there.

Laksh looks at her
Mishti: Why are u doing this with her? Kya galthi ki meri bachi ne ..jo use itni badi saza de ja rahi hain.
Laksh: woh main
Mishti: pls don’t come to her life again…i thought tum uski zindagi mein rang laaonge par tum ne toh uske zindagi ke joh bache rang bhi lekar gaya.
Mishti goes to Luv’s room angrily.
Laksh walks to his room.
AP comes there.

AP: Laksh..
Laksh is shown crying..and his eyes have become red.
AP: Laksh stop crying..
Laksh: then what should i do maa…i love her
AP: Laksh all this is happening because of u..
Laksh: then what should hv i said

AP: the truth Laksh. She deserves to knw the truth..not a cooked up story again.
Laksh: no maa i cant tell i don’t want her to break again and even if i tell her she will not believe she will think tht i am faking it to get her back in my life
AP: So u don’t want her back in ur life Laksh?
Laksh looks at AP with painfully
Laksh: no maa i don’t deserve her
AP: And Luv deserves her?…Luv is ur younger brother Laksh and i am his mother and i knw he will be the happiest person when he sees Ragini with u
Laksh: no maa ….i don’t want to hurt her anymore..it was Luv’s last wish
AP: Laksh …
Laksh: maa ..dont u remember what he told us..ask Ragini to forgive me
AP: And u again made a lie and comforted her..have u ever realised how much she will hate Luv when she gets to knw the truth?

Laksh: no she will not knw the truth..coz i am leaving to America tomorrow

AP: Laksh
Laksh: haan maa i have decided and let her stay here…with Luv’s memories
AP: Laksh what r u doing?…..do u even knw the day wen she come to knw abt all these she will die..
Laksh: thts why i am going away from her and papa is also there its been 1 yr he is managing business there..alone
AP: Laksh but Ragini…
Laksh: maa
AP: Ur Ragini
Laksh: she was never mine she is Luv’s Ragini…and will always be..and now she have forgiven Luv thts enough for me..for us ri8 maa
AP hugs Laksh..

AP; u r doing wrong with her..
Laksh jerks…
Laksh: Mishtu…
Mishti: what were u both talking abt
AP wipes her tears.
Laksh: nothing actually i am going to America away from ur Laado’s life and don’t wry she will never have to bear me anymore.
Mishti: u r lying

Laksh: no i am not
Mishti: i knw u have lied to her thts why AP ji was angry on u nw tell me or else i’ll slap u hard.
Laksh: there is nothing else going on..and u can slap me..i always consider u as my mother
Mishti: if u ever consider me as ur mother then..
Mishti keeps Laksh’s hand on her head
Mishti: tell me the truth
Laksh looks at AP helplessly
AP: Tell her Laksh.
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
FB Starts
2 Yrs back
@MM
Laksh is wearing formal cloths..
Laksh: maa i am going to office.
AP: Laksh have breakfast and go na.
Laksh: no maa i am getting late
Luv: maa breakfast.
AP: Yh coming Luv.
AP comes with breakfast.
AP: Luv where is Laksh?

Luv: bhaiya went
AP: This boy will never obey me..never have breakfast
Luv: he also thinks abt work work and work.
Laksh comes back
AP: What happened?
Laksh: breakfast.

AP: achanak kyun?
Laksh: papa ne danda
AP: come have breakfast then..
Laksh: aaj kitne ladikiyon ki saath date hain.
Luv : c’mon bhaiya date toh har ladki ke saath jaatha hoon par dil mein sirf ek hi ladki hain
Laksh: ok i’ll tell maa now.
Luv: not now bhaiya…
…………………………………………………………………………
After some months.
@MM
Morning.
Laksh is sitting in the living room and reading newspaper.
AP and DP are cooking in the kitchen
DP: Laksh has not Luv here yet?
Laksh: papa its Sunday let him sleep for some more tym.
AP: How much more Laksh its already 10..tell him to come down.
Laksh goes upstairs and knocks Luv’s door

Laksh: Luv get up bro its 10..come on..
He knocks for 5 mins..but Luv is not opening the door.
Laksh: Luv are u ok..
Laksh hits the door harder.

Hearing the sound AP and DP comes there.
AP: What happened?
Laksh: Luv is not opening the door..and he is not responding also.
Laksh breaks the door and they see Luv lying on the bed and his wrist is bleeding and he is lying unconsciously opn the bed.
AP: Luv…
Laksh carries Luv..

DP: Ramu ..
Ramu(driver): DP Saab..
AP: Get car ready..we have to take Luv to hospital.
They all reaches hospital
DR comes out.
DP: Dr how is my son he will be alri8 na
Dr; sry Mr.Maheshwari he is very critical he does not have much tym..but miracles can happen at any tym..pray to god.
AP cries and Laksh consoles her.
Nurse: who is Laksh ..Patient wants to see him
Laksh goes inside.

Luv: Laksh bhaiya.
Laksh sits near him.
Luv: bhaiya forgive me i am sry
Laksh keeps his hand on Luv’s cheek.
Laksh: tell me why did u do this to us?
Luv: its not anything like tht Laksh bhaiya its my punishment
Lakhs: punishment?

Luv; yh punishment for loving her like this and ..doing whatever she was tellingme..
Laksh: who is she ?
Luv; bhaiya ..thts not the thing becoz her i destroyed a girl’s life.
Laksh wat.
Luv: yh …Ragini Rathore…and didnt knw anything abt her…after proposing to my girlfriend she asked me ..pointing towards to Ragini and ask me make her fall for me..and like an idiot i did all things to make Ragini love me and tht day wen she came to propose me i left her…but my girlfriend she also left me and told she was just using me for money ..and she married her long tym boyfriend..i don’t deserve to live anymore bhaiya..i loved her like tht.
Luv begins to breath heavily

Laksh: Luv don’t talk take rest..once u r alri8..we can
Luv: no bhaiya i don’t think tht will ever happen…just listen to my last wish Bhaiya
Laksh: Luv stop it u r going to be alri8 ok.
Luv: don’t lie bhaiya…i just want Ragini to forgive me
AP and DP also comes inside
Luv: pls i want Ragini to for give me..bhaiya pls..
Laksh: Luv
Luv: promise me bhaiya..
Laksh keeps his hand on Luv’s
Luv: i love u a..all
Luv dies…
FB Ends
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
Laksh is sitting on a chair cover his face with his hands.
AP and Mishti are sitting opposite to him.
AP: After tht my Laksh changed ..joh humesha formals pehankar office jaya kartha thaw oh pagalon ki tarah aapki Ragini ki doondthi rahi…and at last we found u
Mishti: i didnt knw all these…i am sry
AP: Its our fate Sharmishta ji
Mishti goes to Laksh
Mishti: I am sry beta

Laksh: beta math kahiye bf kahiye.
Mishti hugs him.
Mishti: i think we should not hide it from Laado..
Laksh: no no Mishtu she should not knw all these…then she will ..no
Mishti: but wat abt u then.
Laksh: i am going to America tomorrow..then her life will be alri8.
Mishti: but
Laksh: no..
AP: Sharmishta ji kah rahi hain na.
Laksh: no .maa..and Mishtu take care of Ragini …and don’t wry where ever i am i’ll be praying for her and also loving her
Laksh goes.
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
Laksh pases by Luv’s room and sees Ragini sleeping on the floor . Laksh carries her and places her on the bed.
Ragini holds Laksh’s hand (in sleep)
Ragini(in sleep): pls don’t leave me..pls…
Tears comes from Laksh’s eyes
Laksh realises his hand from her hold and goes.
Ragini(in sleep): Laksh..pls don’t leave me
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
Precap: Laksh’s trip to America
And guys i’ve got new names Shaitan dimag, Queen of Suspence, Queen of Surprises….thank u all ..and i am loving these names..more names are welcomed…..i love u all……tkcr my fav squad
Nxt update will be on Saturday….

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    71 Comments

    1. Arjuna on June 22, 2017 4:22 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 22, 2017 4:30 pm

        Thank u so much Arjuna di 🙂

    2. Sherin on June 22, 2017 4:26 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 22, 2017 5:34 pm

        Thank u so much Sherin di 🙂

    3. Anju on June 22, 2017 4:26 pm

      Superb update

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 22, 2017 5:36 pm

        Thank u so much Anju di 🙂

    4. Varshni on June 22, 2017 4:29 pm

      Don’t separate raglak pls

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 22, 2017 5:51 pm

        Thank u so much Varshini di 🙂

    5. lovely7 on June 22, 2017 4:50 pm

      Awesome yar

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 22, 2017 5:52 pm

        Thank u so much Lovely yaar 🙂

    6. Aamy on June 22, 2017 5:02 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 22, 2017 5:54 pm

        Thank u so much Aamy di 🙂

    7. Elizebathlovely on June 22, 2017 5:05 pm

      Poor raglak nice part

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 22, 2017 5:55 pm

        Thank u so much Elizebathlovely di 🙂

    8. avika on June 22, 2017 5:22 pm

      nice waiting for next part

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 22, 2017 5:56 pm

        Thank u so much avika di 🙂

    9. Soumya on June 22, 2017 5:53 pm

      Simply superb di….poor luv….post next soon

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 9:40 am

        Thank u so much Somu dr 🙂

    10. ROJARANI on June 22, 2017 6:05 pm

      Nice

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 9:41 am

        Thank u so much ROJARANI di 🙂

    11. Vk on June 22, 2017 6:47 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 9:58 am

        Thank u so much Vk di 🙂

    12. Malu on June 22, 2017 7:18 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 9:58 am

        Thank u so much Malu di 🙂

    13. Jayanti on June 22, 2017 7:24 pm

      the episode was so emotional choti…..unite raglak soon….and even if unconsciously but ragini atleast asked him not to leave her…..next part soon dear..and love you lots…take care dear

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 10:00 am

        Thank u so much Jayu di…yh di Both Raglak loves each other a lot but..fate..destiny..they all r playing their turns..lets see what happens love u lots di 🙂

    14. Bela on June 22, 2017 7:54 pm

      My Laksh is such a cutie and my Ragini also loves him only. Don’t seperate them please????

      And I will also give you a new name. The Girl With the Gold Stories. Did you like it?

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 10:04 am

        Thank u so much Bela di…Raglak loves each other…..i’ll see what i can do to unite them di…and “the girl with gold stories”…OMG I LOVE IT !!!!!…..thank u di for this amazing name i love u ?

    15. Ammy on June 22, 2017 8:17 pm

      awesome adi

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 10:05 am

        Thank u so much Ammy dr 🙂

    16. CrazygirlS.P on June 22, 2017 8:47 pm

      Super duper my queen and dukaan of surprises???

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 10:06 am

        Thank u so much Dr Sam…dukaan of surprises..seriously !!! thank u for another unique title for me love u yaar ?

      • CrazygirlS.P on June 23, 2017 11:06 am

        Love you more darling???

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 11:51 am

        Love u too sweetheart ❤️️

    17. Laashya on June 22, 2017 9:38 pm

      Awesome episode pls unite raglak soon

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 10:07 am

        Thank u so much Laashya chechi 🙂

    18. Ammu on June 22, 2017 10:41 pm

      As usual Outstanding episode my Suspense Queen??? loved it a lot. Feeling bad for Raglak and luv. Laksh is a true lover ??? entha paraya polichadakki adipoli episode. Vegam Raglak ne onnippicholo and love you dear ???????? eagerly waiting for next episode and take care ???

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 10:13 am

        Thank u so much Ammu chechi..chechi tension akanda nyan pettannu thene Raglak-ine onnipichekaam ok…love u lots chechi tk cr stay blessed ?

    19. shrilatha on June 22, 2017 11:01 pm

      awesome adi u know i am missing TU a lot.but not able to post them

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 10:19 am

        Shri di…..i knw di u r missing us a lot..we r also missing u…a lot…its ok..di how is ur work and studies going all gud ri8…come back soon di..love u lots di..take cr we all love u and miss u …..???

    20. Monu on June 22, 2017 11:08 pm

      Awesome episode

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 10:19 am

        Thank u so much Monu di 🙂

    21. Sreevijayan on June 23, 2017 2:13 am

      Nice update dr

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 10:20 am

        Thank u so much Sree chechi 🙂

    22. Rehna on June 23, 2017 8:03 am

      Awesome dear

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 10:20 am

        Thank u so much Rehna chechi 🙂

    23. aleeza on June 23, 2017 1:30 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 1:53 pm

        Thank u so much aleeza di 🙂

    24. Pearly on June 23, 2017 3:57 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 4:59 pm

        Thank u so much Pearly di 🙂

    25. Vennila on June 23, 2017 4:35 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2017 4:59 pm

        Thank u so much Vennila di 🙂

    26. Jiyani on June 23, 2017 5:54 pm

      Interesting episode…last part was cute

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 27, 2017 8:38 am

        Thank u so much Jiyani di 🙂

    27. Vini on June 23, 2017 7:30 pm

      Unite raglak soon

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 27, 2017 8:38 am

        Dont wry Vini di everything is going to be fine 🙂

    28. Thahseem on June 23, 2017 7:42 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 27, 2017 8:39 am

        Thank u so much Thahseem di 🙂

    29. Ashly on June 23, 2017 8:43 pm

      Amazing superb

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 27, 2017 8:40 am

        Thank u so much Ashly di 🙂

    30. Monisha on June 23, 2017 8:57 pm

      Superbbbbb

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 27, 2017 8:40 am

        Thank u so much Monisha di 🙂

    31. IQRA222 on June 23, 2017 10:49 pm

      aadi di the episode was superb
      loved it too much
      but it was emotional too
      and your new names are nice
      waiting for the next part

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 27, 2017 8:41 am

        Thank u so much Iqu dr i hope u are getting well dr..love u sweety tk cr… 🙂

      • IQRA222 on June 28, 2017 3:34 pm

        yup adi di i am pretty well now. all fit and fine

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 28, 2017 3:38 pm

        thts a grt new dr..Iqu tk cr love u 🙂

    32. nymisha281 on June 24, 2017 6:22 pm

      awesome dear….
      what a twist u gave
      loved it sooooo much …
      poor raglak
      waiting for nxt part…
      love u …..take care

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 27, 2017 8:41 am

        thank u so much Neenu dr..love u and tk cr dr 🙂

    33. jazzy on June 27, 2017 12:03 am

      amazingggg

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 27, 2017 8:42 am

        Thank u so much Jazzy di 🙂

    34. hemalattha on June 29, 2017 8:54 pm

      Aditi darling i’m so sad. Awesome.

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