Close Menu
  • Submit Your Article
  • Featured
  • Activity
  • Members
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
  • Home
  • Contact Us
  • Submit Article
  • Activity
  • Register
  • Login
  • Members
  • Logout, {username}
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
  • Home
  • Featured
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
Home»Fan Fiction»Swaragini-Jag ghoomeya thare jaisa na koyi – Shot 2 Part-1
Fan Fiction Swaragini

Swaragini-Jag ghoomeya thare jaisa na koyi – Shot 2 Part-1

Aditi.AyanshBy Aditi.AyanshJune 11, 201779 Comments6 Mins Read
Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Share
Facebook Twitter LinkedIn Pinterest Email

First of all a BIG SORRY for being late….and a BIG THANK U for accepting my story..76 comments in the very first episode oh god..amazing u guys are…..So still if any one missed first shot then here s the link..

shot 1
And again a big thank u for loving my ff..and let me knw how was today’s episode through ur precious comments .
Recap: Intro of Laksh and Ragini.
Nxt day mrning.
Ragini: bye Mishtu..
Mishti: bye Laado..
Ragini goes
Laksh goes to Ragini’s house

Mishti: Lucky bf..
Laksh: Mishtu..
Mishti: Good mrning Lucky.
Laksh: ur kadoos Laado went to office?
Mishti: Lucky..she is not kadoos ok.
Laksh : Yh she really is…
Mishti smiles..
Laksh: she don’t really help u in kitchen ri8.
Mishti: yh but she works hard in office after coming back i don’t want to trouble her also she has asked me a 1000 times to keep a servent but i don’t like to ..
Laksh: how sweet of u Mishtu. ..but she is khaddos
Mishti: who khaddos?
Laksh: ur Laado is khaddos.

Mishti: she is not khaddos she is sweet.
Laksh: I knw she is ur daughter but tht doesn’t mean u can lie like this Mishtu.
Mishti: Acha Lucky bf..you don’t believe me ri8..come
Laksh: ok
Mishti takes Laksh to her room.
Mishti: sit here.
Laksh sits..

Mishti takes some photo albums and give it to Laksh.
Mishti: open and see na.
Laksh opens the albums and sees it.
It has Ragini’s pictures(most) She is smiling and laughing in every photo of hers.
Mishti: wat nw Lucky bf?
Laksh: i cant believe this..ur kaddos Laado smiles?
AP comes in

AP: Namste..
Mishti: Namste..
AP: Sharmishta ji today i am going to visit one of friend and i’ll be back after 1 week..Sharmishta ji..u knw this boy na..can u pls take cr of her.
Mishti: u don’t wry AP j ii am there na i’ll tk cr of..and wat i am telling is let him stay here till u come back.
Laksh: C’mon maa she is my Mishtu gf..itna toh woh kar hi dengi mere liye.
AP Ses Ragini’s photo.

AP: Is tht Ragini?
Sharmishta: haan
AP: Muskurate hue pari lag rahi hain.
They sees all the photos..and after sometime AP leaves..
Laksh: Mishtu i still cant believe
Mishti: Even i couldn’t believe when she stopped being what she used to be.
Lalsh: like?
Mishti: 2 yrs before everything was perfect..and suddenly she became something else.
Laksh listens..

Mishti: Laado was only 15 yrs old when her parents dies…and after that she was staying with me she was a very happy child…and used to bring smile in everyone’s face..thats what she used to be . But i am scared slowly she is becoming like me..and i don’t want that to happen.
Laksh: what is it Mishtu?
Mishti: I was in love with Shekhar…we were abt to get married but at time Janii’s accident happened..and Janki and her husband dies in that accident but my Laado survived. My Laado had only me and no one else i was her only family..But Shekhar didnt want her to be a part of our family..and we separated from him..i was living just for Ragini..but she changed me ..i started livng for myself also..she never let me feel i am alone..she was always with me but now she is not like that ..she is working like there is no body else in the office..she is getting involved in it and now she is living for me..just like she has no other option..she is not at all living for herself..and i cant see tht..

Mishti’s eyes turn moist
Laksh wipes her tears
Laksh: Hey my Mishtu doesn’t look that good whle crying..so no more crying.
Mishti looks at him.
Laksh lies on her lap
Laksh: don’t wry Mishtu your Laado will smile again she will live for herself too
Mishti cares his hair.
Mishti: promise?
Laksh: pakka wala promise
After some time
They have lunch.

Again Laksh is lying on Mishti’s lap
And they both r talking.
Raini comes inside and sees Laksh lying on Mishti’s lap.
Ragini fumes seeing this
Mishti sees Ragini.
Mishti: Laado..this early?
Laksh gets up

Laksh: Laado u here?..did u forget anything?..u should have called Mishtu we would have came there and gave it to u
Ragini angrily goes to her room
Mishti and Laksh: Naraaz ho gayi..
They look at each other and smiles.
Laksh: Mishtu i’ll see her don’t just b worried ok..
Laksh goes to Ragini’s room
Ragini: Lucky Mishtu..GF BF..uhhhh…..
Laksh: Laado..
Ragini turns and finds Laksh there.
Ragini(angrily) : i am not ur Laado

Laksh: ok then my Mishtu’s Laado
Ragini: just go out of my room
Laksh: no
Ragini tries to close the door.
But Laksh gets inside her room
Laksh: ur room is pretty good..

Ragini; get out of my room.
Laksh: baap re baap itna gussa…its not good for health..water?
Ragini turns the other side.
Laksh goes near her table and drinks water from the bottle kept there.
Ragini sees this.
Ragini: tht is my bottle
Laksh: is it??…i don’t care
Ragini: that was my water

Laksh: oh really …
Ragini: just go out
Laksh: someone is very jealous
Ragini: no i am not
Laksh: did i say its u?

Laksh goes …
Ragini curse herself for saying like tht
At ni8
Mishti: Laado come lets have dinner.
Ragini comes down.
And sees Laksh sitting at her place.
Ragini: hey u get up that’s my seat.
Laksh looks
Laksh: sry ur name tag isn’t here..
Ragini: Mishtu

Mishti: Laado its ok u sit here.
Ragini: why r uhere..go to ur house.
Laksh; this is my house also na
Mishti: woh Laado AP ji is out of town so Lucky will stay with us.
Ragini stands up
Ragini: ab bas yehi baaki reh gaya tha
Ragini goes to her room.
Mishti and Laksh have dinner laughing and talking..Ragini fumes hearing this.
Everyone is sleeping and Ragini is starving.

Ragini: Mishtu must have kept food for me..
She slowly comes out of her room and goes to kitchen she sees food and starts eating it..she does not turn on the light she is abt to hit the salt bottle.
Laksh: careful.
Ragini gets scared and she turns on the light
Ragini: u..
Laksh: food is tasty ri8..
Ragini glares at him.
Laksh: wat Mishtu was not at all worried for not even i..and i came here to have water and i swa u coming like a thief i just wanted to see what r u trying to steal
Ragini: this is my house what will i steal from my own house.
Laksh: cant say My Mishtu’s Laado.
Laksh goes whistling…
Ragini: god…..i hate this stupid…..

Precap: RagLak becomes friends

i’ll update nxt part on Tuesday…so see u all with nxt part 2 on Tuesday…so till then keep loving keep smiling…
Love
Adi 🙂

Share. Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Previous ArticleChandrakanta 11th June 2017 Written Episode Update
Next Article ‘Struggling for maa swabhiman’- Nairan FF Chapter 13
Aditi.Ayansh

    Some stories are better left Incomplete

    79 Comments

    1. aleeza on June 11, 2017 8:40 pm

      Amazing

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 8:35 am

        Thank u so much aleeza di 🙂

    2. Soumya on June 11, 2017 9:06 pm

      Simply superb di….post nxt soon

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 8:35 am

        Thank u so much Soumya dr 🙂

    3. Arjuna on June 11, 2017 9:27 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 8:36 am

        Thank u so much Arjuna di 🙂

    4. ROJARANI on June 11, 2017 9:30 pm

      Nice yaar

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 8:37 am

        Thank u so much ROJARANI di 🙂

    5. Sherin on June 11, 2017 9:38 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 8:37 am

        Thank u so much Sherin di 🙂

    6. raguzz01 on June 11, 2017 10:43 pm

      nice…

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 8:38 am

        Thank u so much raguzz di 🙂

    7. lovely7 on June 11, 2017 10:57 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 8:38 am

        Thank u so much Lovely yaar 🙂

    8. AimRagLak on June 12, 2017 12:41 am

      Really awesome.Friends so soon?I would love to read more of their fights?Update soon please?

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 8:42 am

        Dont wry di there will be nok jok in the coming shots also.. nxt update will b on Tuesday 🙂

    9. CrazygirlS.P on June 12, 2017 12:54 am

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 8:42 am

        Thank u so much sam 🙂

    10. Fairy on June 12, 2017 3:05 am

      Adi baccha…???? Amazngggg plotter sweetheart??? loved it so so sooo muchh ….it’s soooo interestnggg? loved it..N wow PRECAP-???? superbb..waitng eagerly for it…keep rockng n stay blessed ..loadzzz of love. Umaaah take care of urself?????

      • Fairy on June 12, 2017 3:05 am

        *plot

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 8:44 am

        ❤️️

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 8:44 am

        Fairy di !!!…..Thank u thank u soooooooooo much love u lots and lots umaaaaah stay blessed di..tk cr ??

    11. Sunny on June 12, 2017 4:24 am

      Hey. I’m sunny. I used to be a silent reader but now I cant help but speak. I love RagLak. I loved ur ff. I love everything dat has nok jhok. For me, every love story dat has nok jhok is d best. Loved it. Cant wait for d friendship. Lakshya was funny. Keep going. Cant wait for Tuesday.

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 8:45 am

        Thank u soo much for commenting Sunny di..i am glad tht u liked my story …thank u di this really means a lot ..love u take cr 🙂

    12. jaan on June 12, 2017 8:58 am

      Awesome. ????

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 11:02 am

        Thank u so much Jaan di 🙂

    13. Megha on June 12, 2017 9:08 am

      Amazing continue soon

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 11:04 am

        Thank u so much Megha di 🙂

    14. IQRA222 on June 12, 2017 10:29 am

      oh god adi di you rock
      this was such a wonderful episode i loved it too much
      thier nokh jhoks are too lovely
      and lucky is seriosly my fav in your ff he is soo lovely and nice
      waiting for the next part
      take care
      keep smiling and writing
      lots of love <3 <3
      bye bye

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 11:06 am

        Thats so sweet of u IQRA dr..love u sweety ..thank u soo much tk cr dr…keep smiling keep reading and keep commenting? love u dr bye 🙂

      • IQRA222 on June 12, 2017 11:30 am

        adi di pls do call me iqu as all my friends do!!<3 <3

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 5:51 pm

        yh dr…iqu ?

    15. Vk on June 12, 2017 11:27 am

      Nice

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 12, 2017 11:37 am

        Thank u Vk di 🙂

    16. Makku on June 12, 2017 11:43 am

      Superb dear. Though Ragini was grown up ,she still behaves like a kid. Raglak were awesome. Update next part soon.

      Bye dear. Take care.

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 6:16 pm

        Thank u so much Makku di ..thanx a lot..will update nxt part today 🙂

    17. avika on June 12, 2017 11:58 am

      superr

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:18 pm

        Thank u so much avika di 🙂

    18. Ammy on June 12, 2017 12:00 pm

      superb

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:20 pm

        Thank u so much Ammy dr 🙂

    19. Aamy on June 12, 2017 1:59 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:21 pm

        Thank u so much Aamy di 🙂

    20. Lakshmi lachu on June 12, 2017 3:08 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:22 pm

        Thank u so much Lakshmi di..even my pet name is Lachu 🙂

    21. Anju on June 12, 2017 3:10 pm

      Awesome update

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:23 pm

        Thank u so much Anju di 🙂

    22. Ammu on June 12, 2017 6:19 pm

      Outstanding episode dear ??? loved Raglak scenes ?? Laksh is soooooo cute??????. Eagerly waiting for precap and please post next part ASAP ??????

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:25 pm

        Thank u sooo much Ammu di..thanx a lot for this comment it really means a lot to me..i’ve updated nxt part di tk cr 🙂

    23. Vennila on June 12, 2017 6:40 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:25 pm

        Thank u so much Vennila di 🙂

    24. Pearly on June 12, 2017 8:02 pm

      Interesting episode

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:25 pm

        Thank u so much Pearly di 🙂

    25. Jiyani on June 12, 2017 8:21 pm

      Wonderful episode

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:26 pm

        Thank u so much Jiyani di 🙂

    26. Malu on June 12, 2017 8:46 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:26 pm

        Thank u so much Malu di i’ve updated next part 🙂

    27. sethidisha002 on June 12, 2017 8:46 pm

      Nice

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:27 pm

        Thank u so much Sethidisha di 🙂

    28. Monisha on June 12, 2017 9:39 pm

      Awesome dr

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:27 pm

        Thank u so much Monisha di 🙂

    29. asra on June 13, 2017 11:36 am

      awesome adi dear….raglak scenes superb fun….precap so interesting..eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear….

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:28 pm

        Asra di!!! i missed u di..and thank u so much di for this lovely comment i’ve posted nxt part tk cr love u di 🙂

    30. Vini on June 13, 2017 2:32 pm

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:29 pm

        Thank u so much Vini di 🙂

    31. Ashly on June 13, 2017 3:00 pm

      Awesome superb amazing

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:30 pm

        Thank u so much Ashly di 🙂

    32. Monu on June 13, 2017 3:02 pm

      Awesome episode

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:30 pm

        Thank u so much Monu di 🙂

    33. Elizebathlovely on June 13, 2017 3:05 pm

      Awesome and poor ragu. Can’t wait to see raglak friendship

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:30 pm

        Thank u so much Elizebathlovely di 🙂

    34. Laashya on June 13, 2017 4:01 pm

      sorry for not commenting first shot because just now I registered in TU. Thanks for raglak

      • Laashya on June 13, 2017 4:02 pm

        Amazing shot

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:31 pm

        Thanx a lot 🙂

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 13, 2017 7:31 pm

        Oh thts ok di..thank u so much for commenting di 🙂

    35. Rehna on June 13, 2017 10:21 pm

      Awesome Adi dear, sorry for commenting late

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 14, 2017 7:44 am

        Thank u so much Rehna di where were u di?….and i thought u r going to call me Lachu 🙂

    36. hemalattha on June 15, 2017 3:43 am

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 15, 2017 7:48 am

        Thank u so much Hemalattha di 🙂

    37. jazzy on June 21, 2017 2:24 pm

      amazingggg yaar it was soo funny seeing ragini jealous

    Sponsor
    Latest Posts

    Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance

    November 29, 2025

    Manpasand Ki Shaadi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Arohi Receives Love While Kanika Grows Jealous

    November 29, 2025

    Advocate Anjali Awasthi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Anjali Accused of Theft While Padma Goes Missing

    November 29, 2025

    Shiv Shakti (Colors) 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mahadev Stops Ravan and Declares His Second Test Failed

    November 29, 2025

    Advocate Anjali Awasthi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Kavya Misuses Mehek’s Jewelry

    November 29, 2025
    Sponsor
    Latest Comments
    • NRI on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Anon on Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance
    • Anonymous on Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Intrigues and Secrets in Virani Family Wedding Plans
    © 2025 TellyUpdates - All Rights Reserved. Privacy Policy | Terms

    Type above and press Enter to search. Press Esc to cancel.