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Home»Fan Fiction»Swaragini-Jag Ghoomeya Thaare Jaisa Na Koyi Shot 5 Part 4
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Swaragini-Jag Ghoomeya Thaare Jaisa Na Koyi Shot 5 Part 4

Aditi.AyanshBy Aditi.AyanshJune 22, 2018Updated:June 23, 201857 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hi everyone so anyone missed me?…well i missed u all..pls guys feel free to talk to me. U can msg me at any time..love u my favourite squad..take care everyone. Stay blessed keep smiling
Also i am posting all my stories in wattpad. My wattpad id is @ABGopika
Love
Adi ๐Ÿ™‚
Link to previous shot and promo
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Raginiโ€™s POV
Ragini: no Ragini..u cant do this with Laksh..I know Laksh loves me so much..but my past it still haunts me. What if he comes back into my life again..and i am sure if he comes to know about Laksh then he will try to harm him. And i cant afford that. But the truth is..yess i think iโ€™m also falling for u laksh..but some things are not in our destiny and feels like u r not in my destiny. I dont deserve u Laksh. Uโ€™ll get someone better than me..and i am sure u will love her more than me. She will understand ur feelings and will always be there with u. And moreover u will be happy with her. I just want to see u happy Laksh. And i know u cant be happy with me. I am sorry. But i am scared Laksh if that man..no..i cant risk ur life Laksh..becoz..becoz i love u..
She cries
…………………………….
Laksh POV
Laksh: Ragini…Ragini u dont know how much i love u..And i know u also love me..i know u r scared of him. And i know he tortured u a lot ..i know u suffered a lot..i know u sacrified it all. But now it will not be like that anymore. Iโ€™ll give u so much happiness that uโ€™ll forget ur past and about him. Iโ€™ll change ur life Ragini. And for that i can do anything. I love u Ragini. I hope u accept me. Becoz i cannot live without u
…………………………….
Nxt day
@GM
Ragini wakes up and checks her phone.
She sees her and Lakshโ€™s photos in her phone.
After sometime
Ragini(in mind): I am sorry Laksh but i cant accept ur love. I dont deserve u
Ragini gets ready and comes down.
Mishty: Ragu bacha..where r u going?
Ragini: office Mishtu
Mishty: but beta
Shekhar: its ok Mishty..
They have breakfast
Ragini comes to office
She greets everyone they also greets her back
She looks at lakshโ€™s seat which is empty
Ragini goes to her cabin
Ragini cant stop herself from looking to Lakshโ€™s seat.
But he is not there.
Ragini(in mind): of course ..he will never come back here Ragini…now u should habitual to this
…………………………….
Ragini reaches home
Ragini feels everything in her life is missing..
Days pass on
…………………………….
1 weak later
Ragini is very sad as she has not seen or spoke to Laksh..she was missing him very much
Nxt day
@GM
Ragini is sitting outside
Laksh comes there.
Seeing Laksh Ragini is happy..but she doesnโ€™t show and she gets up to go.
Laksh stops her
Laksh: Ragini pls.
Ragini: Laksh leave me
Laksh: pls Ragini listen to me once..tht ni8 i didnt mean to hurt u
Ragini does not say anything
Laksh: i am sry Ragini..i know i hurted u a lot..but
Ragini: leave my hand Laksh..
Laksh: pls forgive me Ragini
Ragini: Laksh..i really dont want papa to see u here..he will get angry again and..
Laksh: and will beat me right..i am ready
Ragini: ready for what?
Laksh: let he beat me, but iโ€™ll not go until and unless u forgive me
Ragini: it even matters Laksh?
Laksh: maybe not for u but for me it matters a lot
Ragini: Laksh go pls..
Laksh: Ragini
A car comes
Laksh and Ragini looks on
A person get down from the car
Ragini shocked to see that person.
Terror strikes her again
Her body started to shiver
Ragini: Karthik…
(Yes guys thatโ€™s Karthik)
Karthik is having bandages on his hand and face..also his leg
Ragini is scared.
Seeing this Laksh goes near to her and holds her hand.
Ragini sees Laksh holding her hand and she feels so relaxed.
Laksh looks at her..and assures her that he is with him
Ragini looks at Laksh..
Karthik comes towards her
Karthik: Ragini.
Ragini looks on
Ragini(stammering): h..hi
Karthik: i am sorry Ragini for everything. I should not have hurted u . I am really sorry for ..
Before he could say anything more Shekhar and Sharmishta comes there.
Shekhar slaps Karthik
Shekhar: how dare u to come near my daughter
Shekhar looks at Ragini.
Karthik: uncle let me..pls..
Shekhar: i dont want to hear anything.
Sharmishta: haan ..u have made our daughter suffer a lot. Now what u want?
Karthik: aunty pls i just want to talk to her
Laksh: let him talk to her ..its ok we all are here only na
Shekhar: u dont dare to talk to us and stay away from my daughter both of u
Ragini: no papa..i want to hear want he want to say..pls
Shekhar looks at her
Shekhar: but why bacha.
Ragini: i want to hear papa..ok now say Karthik
Karthik: i am really sorry Ragini..whatever i did to u was ..was..horrible..i know that..pls Ragini..i am sorry for all that i have done pls..i know u cannot forgive me still..i am sorry.
Ragini: ok then dont ever come infront of me again Karthik.
Karthik: no never ever
Ragini: what happened with u..
Karthik: woh..accident..
Ragini: ok.
Ragini Shekhar and Sharmishta goes
Laksh comes to Karthik
Laksh: accident ..well that ws good.
Karthik: Laksh..i know i got what i deserved
Laksh: well yes…
Karthik: thank u Laksh..after beating me like this ..u admitted me in a hospital..thats why i am alive
Laksh: thank Ragini for that..becoz i came there to kill u only..but then i thought about Ragini..thats why u r alive..now u have heard her right..so never ever come into her life again.
Karthik nodes his head in yes
Karthik goes.
Laksh turns and sees Shekhar standing there.
Laksh: woh..
Shekhar: no need to make any story..i have heard everything..
Laksh bends his head
Shekhar: i am sorry laksh i was wrong about u..
Laksh: pls dont say like that uncle..uncle i love Ragini ..i promise u iโ€™ll keep her happy..till my last breath…pls..
Shekhar smiles
Laksh: can i consider that as yes from your side
Shekhar pats on Lakshโ€™s shoulder..
Shekhar: if its yes from Ragini..then its yes from our side too
Shekhar and Laksh comes in
Laksh goes to Ragini
Laksh: Ragini like last time i dont want to say any cheesy lines i just want to say that i love u..will u marry me ?
Ragini: NO
Laksh: what!
Shekhar: Ragu..Laksh is a
Ragini: no papa..i dont want to marry him..and pls laksh stop disturbing me like this.
Saying this Ragini goes to her room
Shekhar: Ragu beta..
Sharmishta: iโ€™ll see
She goes behind Ragini
Shekhar: Laksh beta dont worry iโ€™ll talk to her
Laksh: no uncle..dont..may be she never loved me..iโ€™ll not trouble her any more uncle..bye take care
Saying he goes.
…………………………….
@MM
Laksh comes home
AP and DP sees laksh sad
Laksh tells everything that happened.
DP: Dont worry beta..everything will be fine
Laksh: no papa..i have lost all hope.
AP: If that is so then..we can proceed with ur marriage with Bubbly
Laksh: mom pls..
DP: No she is telling right..why should u suffer.
Laksh: papa..
DP: No Laksh we are finalising it
Laksh goes to his room frustrated
…………………………….
Nxt day
@MM
Laksh comes down
AP: Laksh we have decided ur marriage.
Laksh: what mom?..what are u saying..
DP: Beta take it positively…i am sure Bubbly will again fill ur life with love
Laksh: papa pls.
AP: No Laksh..ur marriage is happening in 1 weak thats it
Laksh: mom
AP: If u try to break this marriage then uโ€™ll never see me again
Laksh: mom..why are u both doing this to me..
DP: We are doing this for your good beta..and uโ€™ll understand that soon
…………………………….
Precap: last Shot
…………………………….
Hiii everyone so now there is a BIG twist ….i hope u all enjoyed todayโ€™s episode..and if u do then pls click the like button and pls pls pls do comment..ur comments are the only thing that motivates me.
Iโ€™ll post the last part on Monday
And guys i am thinking of writing another season of this FF. As such i dont have any plot in my mind..but if u guys..that is my favourite squad wants then i am ready to give u another season. But it will not be a continuation of this season. It will be a new story of raglak. So if u r ready to bear me for one more time then pls let me know.
Till then take care keep reading.
Stay blessed
Love
Adi ๐Ÿ™‚

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    57 Comments

    1. Manisha on June 23, 2018 12:03 am

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2018 8:52 am

        Thank u so much Manisha di ๐Ÿ™‚

    2. Malu on June 23, 2018 7:39 am

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2018 8:57 am

        Thank u so much Malu di ๐Ÿ™‚ will update nxt part on monday ๐Ÿ™‚

    3. Pearly on June 23, 2018 9:10 am

      Want season 2

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2018 12:49 pm

        Thank u so much Pearly di ๐Ÿ™‚ ur wish is my command ๐Ÿ™‚

    4. Aamy on June 23, 2018 9:19 am

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2018 12:51 pm

        Thank u so much Aamy di ๐Ÿ™‚

    5. Sherin on June 23, 2018 10:08 am

      Awesome dear season 2 please

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2018 12:53 pm

        Thank u so much Sherin di ๐Ÿ™‚ ur wish is my command ๐Ÿ™‚

    6. Pearly on June 23, 2018 10:09 am

      Superb part

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2018 12:57 pm

        Thank u so much Pearly di ๐Ÿ™‚

    7. Shivanya on June 23, 2018 10:40 am

      Waiting for next episode

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2018 12:59 pm

        Thank u so much Shivanya di ๐Ÿ™‚ will update next part on monday ๐Ÿ™‚

    8. Elizabethlovely on June 23, 2018 10:59 am

      Awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2018 1:00 pm

        Thank u so much Elizabethlovely di ๐Ÿ™‚

    9. Zoya on June 23, 2018 11:35 am

      It’s awesome

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2018 1:02 pm

        Thank u so much Zoya di ๐Ÿ™‚

    10. Thahseem on June 23, 2018 12:37 pm

      Very nice and write another season too

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 23, 2018 1:03 pm

        Thank u so much Thahseem di ๐Ÿ™‚ ur wish is my command ๐Ÿ™‚

    11. Arjuna on June 23, 2018 1:30 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 12:40 pm

        Thank u so much Arjuna di ๐Ÿ™‚

    12. Laashya on June 23, 2018 2:17 pm

      Wonderful episode didu and What a question di, ofcourse we want season 2

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 12:44 pm

        Thank u so much Laashya dr ๐Ÿ™‚ ur wish is my command

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 12:46 pm

        Thank u so much Laashya dr ๐Ÿ™‚ ur wish is my command ๐Ÿ™‚

    13. Monu on June 23, 2018 3:56 pm

      Superb dear

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 12:49 pm

        Thank u so much Monu di ๐Ÿ™‚

    14. Soumya on June 23, 2018 4:37 pm

      Superb di… post next soon

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 12:51 pm

        Thank u so much Somu dr ๐Ÿ™‚ will post next part on monday dr

    15. Monisha on June 23, 2018 6:47 pm

      Excellent dear

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 12:53 pm

        Thank u so much Monisha di ๐Ÿ™‚

    16. Vini on June 23, 2018 7:29 pm

      Loved it, keep going

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 12:54 pm

        Thank u so much Vini ๐Ÿ™‚

    17. Mishty on June 23, 2018 8:04 pm

      superb, loved laksh so much

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 12:55 pm

        Thank u so much Mishty di ๐Ÿ™‚

    18. Anju on June 23, 2018 8:31 pm

      Superb update

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 12:56 pm

        Thank u so much Anju di ๐Ÿ™‚

    19. Jiyani on June 23, 2018 10:15 pm

      Amazing dear and do continue with season 2

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 1:12 pm

        Thank u so much Jiyani di ๐Ÿ™‚ ur wish is my command

    20. Vennila on June 23, 2018 10:29 pm

      Awesome episode

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 1:22 pm

        Thank u so much Vennila di ๐Ÿ™‚

    21. Sherin on June 24, 2018 12:11 pm

      Superb dear

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 1:24 pm

        Thank u so much Sherin di ๐Ÿ™‚

    22. Ammu on June 24, 2018 2:22 pm

      Adipoli episode dear ???? polichu ?? Laksh’s punishment for Karthik was super. He deserves it. Entha last partile twist ??? happy to know that Ragini also loving Laksh. Second season enthayalum venam but enikk oru request und, ath second season July 10th nu shesham start cheitha mathi ennullatha. Ente exams anna teera, I don’t want to miss your story that’s why I requesting you to post next season after July 10th. Please

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 3:42 pm

        Thank u so much Ammu chechi. I was waiting for ur comment..and about season 3..nyan athu udanne start cheyunnila..becoz ippo story plot aayitilla..so it will take some time..enthayalum it will not be before august. pinne dont request anything to me ok…just ORDER it..love u ???

      • Ammu on June 24, 2018 4:36 pm

        Ini angane cheitholam ?

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 5:27 pm

        Thats better chechi

    23. Ammu on June 24, 2018 2:23 pm

      Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care ?????

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 3:44 pm

        I’ll post next part on Monday chechi..chechiku sugam alle?

      • Ammu on June 24, 2018 4:33 pm

        Enikk sukamanu. Ninakko?

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 24, 2018 5:27 pm

        Ennikum sugam aanu ๐Ÿ™‚

    24. Pinki on June 24, 2018 9:22 pm

      Awesome one

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 25, 2018 8:01 am

        Thank u so much Pinki di ๐Ÿ™‚

    25. Raglakian on June 25, 2018 7:41 am

      Nice one

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 25, 2018 8:01 am

        Thank u so much di ๐Ÿ™‚

    26. Despacito on June 25, 2018 9:39 am

      amazing epi di ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Aditi.Ayansh on June 25, 2018 10:33 am

        Thank u so much dr ๐Ÿ™‚

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