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(Swaragini) hamari adhuri kahani episode 17

hi…
long part for being late….. love you all.. thanks for your support and wishes guys……

All parts

in GM….
ragini is in tension…. practising her dance steps but she was not able to do it correctly due to nervousness..
riya – ragini if you are this nervous now what you will do tmrw.. come on concentrate..
swayam -ragu di if you are not comfortable we will change steps..
ragini – no again I can’t learn new steps this is ok..
riya – k then lets start again…
swara come into the room….
riya – swara where you went…
swara – to solve this problem…
ragini – how Swara, the truth is I can’t do anything and because of me you will lose your challenge.
swara – don’t worry ragu I had a plan…

riya – what??
Swara – carefully listen to me tmrw when
…. interrupted by
Karthik – what you are planning tmrw say to me also…
all are shocked by seeing Karthik…
Karthik – why are you looking at me Like you saw ghost..
swara (thinks) – no way if bai knows about it he will eat me raw… Swara think something…
Swara – its girls stuff bai…
Karthik – really then what swayam doing hear, is he converted into a girl
swayam – bai I hate you, you always pull my legs… and leaves from their
ragini – bai why you always tease swayam see now he became angry now who will help me
Karthik – help you for what

swara – wo..wo leave it, first go and talk to him otherwise he will create drama and bade papa will kill us for making swayam upset…
Karthik – k then I will go to swayam, but shona are you doing anything…
swara – bai you should be in cid always questioning, don’t you trust me…
Karthik – fine baba, in our family one cid is enough no need of me to join..
ragini – par bai who is that cid in our family…
Karthik – who else other than shona…
swara (shouts) – bai…

while ragini giggles…
Karthik – k sorry continue your girl talks..
and he leaves…
during this whole conversation riya is just staring Karthik… but none observed…
swara see riya lost somewhere…. and beats her on head to make her back to senses..
swara – riya where are you lost…
riya – Nothing just thinking something leave it… you are saying something..
swara (thinks) – I know something is going on in riyas mind I will find out once this problem is solved..
swara says riya and ragini about her plan….

Karthik goes to swayam room with a gift and see him angry…
Karthik – someone is angry…
swayam doesn’t respond…
Karthik – Oh not taking to me…
swayam doesn’t respond…
Karthik (pouts) – hmm k then I thought we will play new video game that I brought for you but I think you don’t want I will return it…
swayam become happy but shows fake angry…
swayam – first you will tease me then you bring gifts,go I don’t want
Karthik – really your face is showing how much Happy you are..
swayam – ha k k… I am Happy that doesn’t mean I am not angry at you…
Karthik -k sorry, I will not repeat it…
swayam – no first promise you will not bully me in front of girls…
Karthik (laughs) – k promise… but they are our sisters only not girls that you want to flirt…
swayam – no she is not my sister…

Karthik – what shona and ragu are not your Sisters…
swayam – not about them, I am taking about riya she can’t be my sister… don’t say me you never notice how much cute she looks…
Karthik – idiot first see your age… she is older to you
swayam – who told she is younger to me I just said she is cute girl…
Karthik (little annoyed) – enough come lets play…
swayam – k

next day
swayam wishes them all the best…
riya, swara and ragini leave for clg along with Karthik…
they reach clg… kunj and others are already waiting for them…. they wish each other…
kunj notices ragini in some tension…
kunj – ragini is everything fine..
ragini – ha…
swara – ha everything is super fine… come ragu, riya lets go to clss otherwise we will be late.. meet you all later…
and leaves from their with ragini and riya…

Karthik is thinking…
soumya – where are you lost now…
Karthik – I think shona and ragu are hiding something, otherwise shona is worried for being late to clss impossible…
dhruv – come on Karthik don’t take everything seriously come lets go…
and even they leave to their classes…

in corridor… kavya is waiting for Swaragini…
when they come…
kavya – so you came ready to loose…
swara – lets see who will lose and who will win..
kavya – over confidence
Swara – no confidence
kavya – attitude lets see… now follow me…
swara – where
kavya – just follow me..

they all reach auditorium…. where their are many students… Swaragini and riya stands shock by seeing the crowd over their… and even Laksh, Sanskar, yuvi and kavitha are present their..
ragini becomes nervous by seeing the crowd…
kavya – what already feeling nervous…
riya – this is not fare you should have said it before that they should perform infront of these many students..
yuvi – that’s your problem…
riya – you.. interrupted by
swara – its k riya… just give us five minutes.. and takes ragini and riya to back stage…

at back stage…
ragini is sweating badly…. swara and riya also look worried…
riya – I think we should have told about it to Karthik… now what we will do
Swara – I am also not understanding… I just played guitar infront of kids, my family and few frnds but now these many people….
riya – swara this is your fault and even ragini is in trouble know… you know she is afraid of crowds
ragini is shivering… swara keeps her hand on her shoulder…
swara – sorry ragu, but we should do it… don’t worry you just do it according to our plan just close your eyes and hum to the song… I will sing it… k
ragini – I can’t do it swara…
riya – don’t worry ragini we are with you…
ragini – but….

kavitha comes their and drag them to the stage holding their hands….
riya tried to stop her but all in vain …
lucky announces -these gododia Sisters challenged dare devils… so lets see who will win…
lucky to Swaragini – and one more thing while one is doing their act other should stand along with us…
Swaragini are shocked by their rule…
swara – but we will perform together…
lucky – no I never said that you can do it together….
riya – this is cheating…
yuvi – why you always talk for them can’t they speak….
riya – just shut up… I am taking on behalf of my friends…
yuvi – how dare you talk to me Like that…
lucky – yuvi relax…. (to riya) and you miss
don’t worry when it will be you then we will definitely act according to your conditions… but stay out of this…
swara – riya let it be.. it is useless to talk to them… you know devils will be always devils Nothing will change…
sanky – and their is no need for us to change for a stupid girl like you…. how ever we are we are perfect…

mean while all starts shouting…
one of them from the crowd… yaar lucky we came hear to see some acts but you are wasting our time yaar…
lucky – don’t worry guys just wait for few more minutes …
yuvi – so are you ready or accept your defeat…
swara – k we are ready….
ragini – but swara..
Swara – don’t worry ragu you remember the Dance steps you learnt yesterday na….
ragini nods …
swara – just do it… we can’t let them win OK…
ragini – but I can’t…
swara – k first I will perform till them you relax….

swara takes guitar kept on the stage and goes towards mike….
kavya – swara are you planning to make us def by playing guitar….
all laughs…
kavitha -should appreciate your guts to play guitar that to in front of dare devils… the most famous music band of our city…
riya – don’t judge anyone Without knowing their talent..
yuvi – know you will teach us about music..
riya – I not said anything like that… why you always jump into every conversation…
yuvi (angry) – you…
lucky – leave her yuvi lets see her afterwards… lets listen to swara first…
sanky – guys I think we are wasting our time…
lucky – bro chill… so miss swara you are doing or accepting your defeat….
sanky – I think she can’t do it and about to say something….

swara starts to sing “Teri galiyaa” by playing guitar…. all are dumb stuck… students are enjoying her themselves while dare devils are standing their in shock…. riya and ragini are Happy as well as nervous as next ragini should perform on stage…. all other students in clg and even their professors are loving the song (all can hear because the auditorium mike set is audible to whole clg as yuvi done it)….
sahil comes to auditorium and mesmorised seeing swara singing…
even Karthik and his frnds hear to it….
soumya – who is singing its good na…

sharadda – but I think this vocie is of someone we know….
Karthik recognises swara’s vocie….
Karthik – this is shona… why she is singing that to audible for whole clg…
dhruv – I think we should go and check…
Karthik – ha… I think this is what they are hiding…
kunj – don’t panic Karthik… she is just singing…come lets go…

as soon as swara finshes her song… their is pindrop silence…. lucky starts clapping… with him all others starts clapping… but not dare devils…
yuvi – lucky we are loosing and you are supporting them…
kavya – exactly what are you doing…
lucky – guys relax she is good… Nothing wrong in appreciating the talent although they are our frnds or not Hey na bai…
sanky – yes lucky you are right….

swara gets down… ragini and riya hug her….
riya – now what you will say…. you are questioning swara talent na…
yuvi – don’t get happy still ragini had not yet performed..
riya – you people are just jealous…
yuvi(shouts) – you are crossing your limits…
swara(angry) – don’t shout on my frnd
kavya – k just stop your non sense and tell your sister to go on stage… now its her turn….

ragini is nervous and tensed her hands and legs are shivering…
Swara – ragu please don’t panic… be confident I will go and play song you just dance what you remember…. don’t look to people think their are no one…
riya – ha ragini… just do it see swara also done well so go now we are here only…

ragini slowly goes on stage…. but her nervousness is increasing step by step… she finally reaches middle of stage… all students are eagerly waiting what she is going to do…. swara plays the song… but ragini is not responding to song or doing dance she is just looking at the crowd staring her… tears are rolling down her eyes…. all are shouting and making her feel still low… Swara and riya are feeling sad… swara is cursing her self for making her sister face this humiliation because of her stubbornness…. one boy from the crowd shouts what are you expecting from a behenji rather than crying drama… few of them say really very bad words about ragini… even dare devils are feeling bad of her…sanskar is burning in angry….. swara can’t hold her guilt and shouts stop it guys I accept the defeat just stop all this leave her alone …. one of them from crowd says you are saying as if we are catching her or forcing her…. sankar lost his temper catch hold of that guys caller….
sanskar – how dare you speak about ragini like that.. never ever speak like that and this is warning….

lucky and yuvi make sankar leave him…
ragini who is crying very badly can’t take more humiliation runs back stage…….

one guy – come on Sanskar if you and your gang says anything its fare if any of us say something you will get angry and ready to fight with us…
another guy – any how all this drama is to insult them only na… then why are you supporting that illegitimate girl..
sanky (shouts) – enough…

Karthik and his gang comes their who hears it… Karthik looses his control and started beating those guys… kunj and dhruv trying to stop them but friends of that boys started attacking Karthik…their starts a fight between those guys and Karthik, kunj and dhruv…
Swara, riya, soumya and sharadda are watching them in tension…
one boy tried to hit Karthik from back… swara shouts bai…. but that boy is stopped by lucky… instead he hit lucky… sanky lost his temper and even yuvi is now out of control… even kavya and kavitha are with them because how can a random boy hit their friend … sanky, lucky and yuvi started fighting with those boys… for the first time dare devils and hot dazzlers are not against each other but together fighting for each other….

ragini is crying… maa why I am like this why can’t I fight back for my self… I am the most unlucky girl maa…. all will face only problems because of me….. suddenly she gets some flashes of few people taunting her and humiliating her… she catches her head and shouts just stop it… and faints….

precap – what happens next??

sorry if you feel disappointed with this part frnds…. I know you want to see ragini stronger but this angel is necessary for the story…by facing all these only she can face real her…

sorry for typos…

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