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Thank you friends for your love and support for my story..your comments made my day..
Reply to comments :
iqra,Shona,Ruhani : thanks for liking ff..sry for not replying to ur comments as i read your comments in ch-7 after posting pve part…Ruhani..i hope you will like this dance face off…
Tvisha, Naimi, Misha, Raglak, Maghs,Ammu, L khan : Thank you so much dear friends for liking my ff..
lovely, Fari : Thank u dear 4 loving raglak scenes..i wish you would hv liked swasan scenes as well…
Dhara, Kriya, Ananya,Pooja : Thank u so much dear for loving both swasan & raglak scenes…..
jyoti : Thank u so much dear…thanks for noticing that “baby” part and for the suggestion…i hv already written that scene in this epi and earlier i hv pointed out that swasan don’t like baby stuff for writing this scene only..the scene will be lil different from your request as They can’t tolerate GIRL calling GUY baby more..so scene will be lil Hatke…i hope you will like it…finger crossed…
Shan, Ani : thank you so much for loving both couples..i m glad you pointed out raglak some part and swasan naming eo…
Musu : yup we are friends..so no sorry no thank u..i m glad with your support for my story..i love u dear..
Renu : thank u so much dear for loving my ff and bonding between both the couples..you will find their bonding becoming more stronger…
Jwala : thank u so much dear..but i m not at all writer..
its your all’s comments which encourage me to write more and more..so credit goes to all of you friends..
Sorry if i hv skipped name of anyone..thank you silent readers also..
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Ch-8 link :
https://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-8/
Recap : swasan and raglak moments..
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Ch-9 :
Swaragsanlak decided to hv dance face off..
Lucky : ok then 1st i and Sanky will do on HIPHOP…2nd Shona and Lado you both Do on contemprory..
Sanky : perfect dude…we will do on “Karja re ya marja re” from ABCD..
Lucky : awesome song selection..(wink at him) we will hv fun.. (Sanlak exchange hi-fi)
Shona : guys i can’t do contemprory in this tight cappery..
Ragini: me too can’t do it in this skirt…
Sanky : ok than select your dance style..
Ragini : what about bollywood..
Shona : perfect honey..on “Chitia kalaiya” from ROY…
Swaragini exchange hug…sanlak take their position..Ragini plays the song..
[note : friends i hv tried to write their dancing steps..i know its not at all written well but plz try to imagine..in all songs..I HV WRITTEN DANCE STEPS IN CAPITAL LETTERS below that song lines..] [or else you can skip the song part]
Song : (movie : ABCD)
”
Kar ja re ya mar ja re tu…
Kar Ja re ya mar Ja re tu… (2)
[LUCKY START DANCING OPENING HIS HAND WIDELY ALONG WITH FOOT WORK..HE PAUSED ]
Kar ja re ya mar ja re tu…
Kar ja re ya mar ja re…(2)
[SANKY DO QUICK HAND AND FOOT MOVEMENTS..HE PAUSED]
Raat tujhe kya yaad rahegi
Haath mein tere raakh rahegi
Ho aaj savera so jaayega
Khwab tera bhi kho jaayega
[ THEN LUCKY AGAIN START DANCING..HE WAS DANCING AGGRACIVLY..HE DO HAND STAND..THEN PAUSED]
Saare waade jhoothe
Saari kasamein toote
Raah alag hai aaj meri
Tu roothe toh roothe..
[SANKY START DANCING AGAIN..HE SWING HIS HANDS REPEDLY..AND DO FLIP ON LAST LINE]
Kar ja re ya mar ja re tu
Kar ja re ya mar ja re tu
Kar ja re ya mar ja re tu
Kar ja re ya mar ja re…..
[BOTH START DANCING TOGETHER PASSIONATELY AND AGGRACIVLY.]
[They both complete the song by looking towards each other with aggressive look..]
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then they smile and hug eo…swaragini clapped for them..
Lucky : ( hug Sanky) i enjoyed it alot dude..
Sanky : me too yar…it was damm cool..
Ragini : Ohh god…guys it was so so so amazing…i loved it..
Shona : ya very true..it was mindblowing guys…u rocked it..
Then it was turn of swaragini…girls took their positions..Sanky plays the song..
Song : (movie: Roy)
”
Tu leya de mainu golden jhumke
Main kanna vich paavan chum chum ke…(3)
[ SHONA START DANCING..SHE SHOWS HER EARS, WRIST AND ANKLES WITH AMAZING BOLLYWOOD MOVES..SHE PAUSE ]
Mann jaa ve, mainu shopping karade
Mann jaa ve, romantic picture dikha de
Requestaan paiyaan ve
[RAGINI START DANCING..SHE WALK AS IF CARRYING SHOPPING BAG..THEN SHOWING PICTURE WITH HER BOTH HANDS..]
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve,
Oh baby meri chittiyaan kaliyaan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve,
Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve (ho)
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve,
Oh baby tere hisse aayiaan be (ok ok)
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve,
Oh baby meri chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve (ho)..
[THEY BOTH START DANCING ON SIGNATURE STEP OF THIS SONG..THEIR EXPRESSIONS WERE SUPERB..THEY DANCE CHANGING THEIR PLACES WITH EO AND TAKE A ROUND..]
[They complete the song crossing their arms and standing in opposite direction of eo,touching their backs…]
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sanlak clapped for them..
Rag : (hug Shona) wowwww..Shona.it was great fun..i love dancing with you..
Shona: yup Lado..this is my one of the best dance face off..i loved it..
Sanky : wow..girls you both were just outstanding…it was treat watching you..
Lucky : yup…it was awesome..and also hot performance..(wink at both of them)
Ragini blush on his complement which was notice by swasan..they both smile looking at eo..
Shona : hey guys let’s we all dance on “Shandar” song..
Sanlakrag : (shouts) awesome idea…let’s do it…
all took their position..ragini plays the song and join them..they all start dancing one by one in their styles..
Song : (movie : Shandar)
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Sar jhuka ke kar salaam hai shaam shaandaar
Aasmaan se aa giri hai shaam shaandaar
[ SHONA START DANCING..SHE GIVE TWIST TO HER SHOLDER THEN TO HER WAIST IN HIPHOP STYLE..SHE PAUSED]
Chak de andhera
Chaand jala de, bulb bana ke..
Fikr na kariyo
Karna bhi kya hai, bijli bacha ke..
[SANKY START DANCING BREAK DANCE..HE DO ROUND MOON WALK..HE PAUSED ]
Sar-e-aam pila khushi ke jaam shaandaar
Aasmaan se aa giri yeh shaam shaandaar
[ RAGINI START DANCING.. SHE TAKE FAST SPINS COVERING THE AREA IN HER CLASSICAL STYLE. SHE PAUSED]
Jazbaat ke chillar ko note bana ke
Mehandi raat pe khulke luta
Chingaariyon ko visphot bana ke
Aiyyashi ke tu rocket chhuda
[ LUCKY START DANCING IN B-BOING STYLE..HE TAKE FAST SPINS ON HIS SHOLDER..]
Kaisa darr, tu kar guzar ye kaam shaandaar
Aasmaan se aa giri yeh shaam shaandaar
Yeh shaam shaandaar
Yeh shaam shaandaar”
[THEY ALL START DANCING ON BOLLYWOOD STYLE..THEY WERE DOING SIGNATURE STEP OF THE SONG]
They all jump and shouts when song completed…swalak & ragsan hug eo..then swaragini & sanlak hug eo..then in excitement swasan & raglak were about to hug eo but stops and shake hand wid eo..
there were few people around them..they also clapped and appreciated their dance..
They all took lots of snaps and selfies..they were enjoying a lot..it was the most memorable day for each of them..
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They took their dinner…and packed all their stuff…
Sanky : guys its 8:15 now..what you want to do..?
Ragini : Should we go to home or be here for some more time..as we have still 2 hours..??
Shona : (sadly) i don’t want to go to hotel soon…
Lucky : aww.ok my kiddo..let us be here for some more time..(all agrees)
lucky get a call…he was talking on phone while walking here and there…swasanrag can see and hear him..
A group of few guys and girls entered and was passing by lucky.. A girl saw him and come near and start flirting with him…
girl : (flirting) Hello handsome..i m Mahi..
lucky : (as usual flirt back) Hii beautiful..nice name…i m laksh…(wink at her)
swasanrag were watching them..swasan were enjoying the show eating chocolates..while Ragini was burning with jealously..she was giving i-will-kill-you look to both lucky & Mahi..
Mahi : (smiles & come near him) what are you doing alone here..?
lucky : (with a smirk) was waiting for someone to accompany me..
Mahi : (touch lucky face with her finger) i thank you need a beautiful company like me..(hold his hand) So let’s go from here “BABY”…
As soon as the baby word come out from her mouth..lucky give her NOW YOU ARE GONE expression..
lucky looked at Shona..ragini though she was angry looked at Sanky…both Shona and Sanky’s face were red due to anger…Shona could not control herself..
she went near them…
Shona : (shout in full angry mode) hey you…how dare you call him Baby….you idiot…don’t you hv eyes…is he looking like baby…you mad girl…how can you address a smart, handsome, dashing guy like him as Baby…it sounds so irritating and stupid just like you….now go from her before i slap you for calling my lucky as Baby…(shout) get lost…
The girl got scared listening her..and run towards her group…all girls and guys hv watched the whole scene..a stupid guy though see Shona’s anger come there and try to act smart in front of her..how an idiots he is..!!!
guy : (flirt with attitude) hey beautiful…so you don’t like a girl calling Guy as Baby ha…me too don’t like it…its so stupid..our thinking are very similar..m i right baby..??
lucky laugh out loudly…he knew what’s going to come next…
Shona : (falt tone) (cross her arms) Ohh..i see..(shout) you are more stupid than that idiot girl…how dare you call me baby…m i looking like kid to you..you nonsense…i can’t believe after watching my anger also you come here to flirt with me…n how dare you show me your so called attitude….
guy : (bit tensed) hey you..don’t call me stupid..you are….
by that time Shona was going near that guy..now lucky know that he has to come in between or else his RIVOLVER RANI will slap him..and unnecessary scene will be created…so he come in between…
lucky : (interrupt to that guy) hey watch out b4 speaking anything about her..n for ur info..neither me nor she is alone here..so u better get lost from here..(he turned to Shona..)
lucky : lets go Shona…
Shona : wait lucky one min..
she was going to slap that guy lucky hold her..she protested as she was very angry..b4 she went near that guy..lucky forcefully pick her up in bridle style and start going back towards their place..Shona was shouting on that guy from back…that group quickly left from that place…
Meanwhile our ragsan was watching this whole scene with open mouth…they could not believe that each and every word of Shona was ditto ditto as per Sanky’s thoughts…Ragini was confirmed now that Shona is the only girl made for her Sanky…
Swalak come back there..lucky put her down..she was still angry..
lucky : (clam her down) Shona..relax…clam down…take a deep breath..they are gone now..
Ragini : (hug her) wowwww Shona….i loved it..(teasingly) u are just superb in your REVOLVER RANI mode..
lucky : ya right..both that girl and guy will not dare to flirt with anyone after taking this lesson from you…
raglak exchange hi fi and laugh..Shona also laugh on their words and clam herself down…they look at Sanky who was watching Shona as if she is an aleon..his mouth & eyes were wide open and he was lost somewhere…
lucky : (call him ) hey Sanky..(no response) (loudly) Sanky… (still no response)
lucky : (teasingly) hey dude..are u afraid of seeing Shona..?? then don’t worry..she will like this to one who deserve such treatment..so we are safe…(wink at san)
Shona look at him with anger…Sanky was still not responding..he was shocked and lost…swalak become confuse and look at Lado..ragini knew the reason..
Ragini : lucky..Shona..he is in shock..actually not only he i am also surprised…
swalak : (confuse) shocked..?? Surprised..?? but y..?
ragini : Watch this vedio you will understand the reason…
ragini plays the vedio on mobile which she has secretly recorded when Sanky was giving same lecture to a girl who had called his best Frind as “baby”…each and every word were ditto ditto like what Shona has just said…swalak become shocked watching that vedio…
ragini : (break silence) i can’t believe that…both of their mentality is same to same..
lucky : (shocked) unbelievable man….Shona, his philosophies are just like you…
Shona was also lost..now she was not responding..she was shocked that Sanky is having same thinking just like her…both swasan were staring with mix emotions like surprised..happy…unbelievable..etc..
raglak look them both staring..they exchange smile..
lucky : (whispering tone) Lado..i think they are…
ragini : made for each other…and right now lost in eo…
lucky : then let us disturb them..
ragini nodes..raglak smile naughtily..lucky went near Shona and ragini went near Sanky…
raglak : (together) (shake them and shout) Shona…!!!! Sanky…!!!!!
swasan : (come to their senses and scared) Aaaaaahhhhhhhh…!!! what the hell…what are you doing ??
raglak laugh looking them…
Sanky : (angey) what is so funny ? does we look like jokers ?
raglak was still laughing…they were not able to control themselves..
Shona : (angry) does any one has cracked joke here..?? y r u behaving like kids..GROW UP guys.
now raglak stop laughing..sanraglak look at Shona in shock..
Sanky : (teasingly) look who is talking…!!!!
Lado : (join him) the one who is behaving like kid from morning is calling us as kid..!!!!!
Lucky : (join them) Ohh god..i can’t believe my kiddo is telling me to grow up..
Shona look at them with cute angry face…sanraglak laugh looking at her…then after sometime she also join them…
lucky : (teasingly) Shona, Sanky i must tell you guys that your liking & thinking are same to same..
ragini : (join him) ya true..u both are having all things common..just like made for eo..
swasan feel embarrassed by their teasing..They hv small awkward eye-lock…they compose themselves..
Shona : so what…there are many peoples whose mentality are similar…what’s the big deal..
Sanky : ya true..and u both no need to create mountain out of small stone..
swasan were pretending as if they are not affected by this fact..whereas raglak thinks to end this topic…
They all sit and play some games like dumb sharaz..antakshari etc..and enjoying a lot…
At last Sanky went near ragini and placed his head on her shoulder..ragini caresses his hair..swalak smile seeing ragsan…
Sanky : (tired & with closed eyes) Lado..i am so tried..now its time to leave but b4 that i need to get charged by your voice..
ragini : but Sanky..how can i sing here…its…
Shona : (interrupt excitedly ) Ohh ya..Lado..you told that you are interested in music..plz sing one song for us…plzzzzzz plz..(make cute childish face) (ragini smile seeing her)
lucky : (unknowingly) ya Lado plz sing for me..(rag look at him with surprise)(come back to his sense) i mean for us..plzzzzzz
Ragini nodes..Sanky get up from her shoulder…Ragini start singing in her beautiful voice..
” O.. Yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere
Yahin marna aur jeena
Yahin Mandir aur Madeena… x2
Teri galiyan… galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galliyan
Teri galiyan…galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpavein, galliyan teri, Galliyan…
[RAGINI WAS SINGING ABOVE LINES LOOKING TOWARDS LUCKY..HE LOOKED AT HER..HE WAS LOST IN HER MELODIOUS VOICE..THEY BOTH WERE NOT AT ALL READY TO BREAK EYE-LOCK]
Tu meri neendo me sota hai
Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai
Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein
Tu na ho, phir bhi tu hota hai
[SWASAN WERE UNKNOWINGLY STARING AT EO.THEY BOTH WERE HAVING INTENSE EYE-LOCK..]
Hai sila.. tu mere dard ka
Mere dil ki duaayein hain..
Teri galiyan… galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan
Teri galiyan…galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan..”
[Swasan and raglak were lost in eo’s eyes..they all were having impact of the song..only ragini was aware about her love..swasan were confused about their feeling while lucky was not at all ready to accept what he has just felt]
they all come back to their senses when security guard come and ask them to leave as its 10 o’clock, time for closing the park…
Shona : Lado..u r blessed with beautiful voice…i hv become fan of your signing…i just love you so much dear
swaragini hug eo…Ragini was lil upset bz lucky didn’t say anything abt her song..They carry their stuff and come out in parking area…
lucky : (hug Sanky) hey Sanky..lado..thank u so much for this picnic…i hv enjoyed it a lot…
Sanky : arre..we r best friends now..
ragini : so no need to say thank lucky..
Shona : (hug rag) me too enjoyed it very much (look at Sanky) its one of the very special and memorable picnic of my life ..
raglaksan : (together) Meri bhi (mine also)…
they reached near car and put all the stuff..Sanky hv come on his bike..
Lucky : Ohh wow…Sanky awesome bike…i loved it..
Sanky : thanks dude…i love bike riding so much…
Lucky : cool..even Shona loves to hv long rides on bike..you know she always forced me to take her for long bike ride…
ragini look at lucky,he was gesturing something through his eyes..she understand his signal for sending swasan on long drive..
Rag : that’s cool..Shona you go with Sanky on bike and (to Sanky) you take her for long ride..its 10:15 now..you drop her at hotel by 12…i & lucky will reach there by car..we will c u at parking lot of hotel..
Lucky : ya that’s a great idea…lets go Lado..bubye..Shona & Sanky..
before Shona and Sanky could protest or say anything..lucky took driving and ragini took passenger seat and left from there leaving swasan shocked and angry…
Precap : swasan raglak romantic movements on their way back to hotel…swaragini & sanlak conversation..megha audition practice…
the end
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sorry friends for same Precap…actually due to Songs this part become longer one..i am soooooooo sorry if you find this part boring…i hv concentrated on four of their bonding with eo…in next part you will find some romantic movements of swasan and raglak…
honestly speaking..i m not bit satisfied with this chepter after all i m not a writer..still i tried..so i m ready for Tomatoes & Chappals..
eagerly waiting for your comments…