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Swaragini ff (swasan-raglak) “D3-Dil Dosti Dance” Ch-20

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Ch-19 link :

https://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-19/

Recap : Shona’s plan to unit sanky with her father…their emotional & sweet moments at sanky’s home..

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Note : Swasanraglak used to talk with their parents almost daily on vedio calls..so kids & parents are sharing very good bondings..even shomi & sujata…Dp, rp & Shekhar hv become very good friends…they hv talked with AP also..

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Ch-20 :

Swasanraglak were very happy after visiting sanky’s home…sanky bz he got his father’s love that to bz of his princess..Ragini bz she got father in Rp..Shona bz her plan work & sanky got reunited with his father..lucky was very happy for sanky, he was proud of his kiddo, but he was extremely happy for his Angel..

They all got engaged in their dance practices…

days passed..

One day b4 performance :

As it was going to be parents special…so shomi, shekhar & Dp came Mumbai to watch their performance live..they hvn’t told about their arrival to their kids…they reach Nach house…

Show team workers showed them swaragini & sanlak room…they firstly went inside to swaragini’s room..at that time swasanlak were in rehearsal hall only ragini was present there…she looked at them…

She was shocked & happy..she has talked with them many times but was meeting them  1st time..tears start flowing from her eyes as well as parents eyes also…she ran to Shomi & hug her..she also hugged her back…& crasses her hair…

Ragini : (crying) Mamma…i m so happy to meet you…i m so happy..

Shomi : (teary voice) Lado…beta stop crying…we are also happy to meet you dear…god bless u beta..

Dp : Lado…i m also here..don’t you wanna meet your Papa..

Ragini nodes & came to him..she took blessings from him..he blessed her & hug her…

DP : (emotional) Lado..you don’t know how much i hv waited to meet you like this..(put his hand on her head) to put my hand on your head..i was waiting so badly to meet my daughter…

Ragini : (cried her heart out) papa..i was also wanted to meet u…i hv carved for fathers love till now…when i was in school..i was feeling very bad whenever i saw anyone with their fathers..i hv always complaint god for not giving me father’s love..(still crying) whenever any of my friends talk about how their dad pampered them…support them..give them surprises & gifts…i feel like i hv missed most precious thing in my life…after all its true that daughters will always be closed to their fathers more than anyone…

Shomi, Dp & Shekhar were also crying after hearing her..Dp cupped her face…

Dp : (teary voice) hey Lado..stop crying dear…now i m there for you na..you don’t need to complaint god anymore…my idiot son lucky has done a wonderful work by choosing  you as his life partner…you are my daughter & i m your dad…

Ragini smile with teary eyes…she again hugged him..

Shekhar : (emotional)  Lado beta..that’s not fair..i m standing in queue to meet you from long back but u r only hugging ur DP papa..don’t you wanna meet me…(make face)

Ragini smiles with tears..she went near him & took his blessings..he blessed her & hugged her..

Shekhar : Lado..now on we will fulfil your all wishes that you hv missed till now..we will pampered you…we will support you..we will give you gifts & surprises…Your are my daughter just like Shona..so no more crying…

Ragini was feeling extremely happy & overwhelmed after hearing him..she went near Shomi.

Ragini : (teary voice) mamma..its true na that girls always try to find their dad’s qualities in their life partner…but i hv not got chance to do so…(wipe her tears & smiles) but actually i m not angry on god bz i got lucky in my life…now bz of him i m going to hv all kind of happiness in my life…i m so so happy…i m very lucky that i will receive love from 3-3 fathers…

Shomi : (smile) ya Lado you will get all the thing which you deserve…(kiss her forehead)

Shekhar : btw Lado..you r the only girl who had changed our lucky’s mentality…he used to hate this love stuff & now see he is madly in love with you…all credit goes to u dear..

Ragini : (blush) no papa..its nothing like that..i m glad to hv him in my life…

Dp : Shomi at last your nalayak has done good think by realising his love for Lado on time..(to Lado) he is actually very lucky to hv u in his life..(ragini smile)

Shomi : (angry) Dp bhai..don’t call my son nalayak…or else…

Shekhar : (intrrupt) ok ok clam down lucky mata…btw Lado where is other 3…

Ragini : (laugh listening him) daddy they are in rehearsal hall..lets go there…

All come out & went inside the rehearsal hall..Shomi hide behind the door…sanlakswa were engaged in their dance practice…

Shekhar : (softly) Shona…?..lucky….?..sanky..?

They all looked at them..they become extremely happy with their surprise visit…lado stop the music..

Shekhar move towards them spreading his arms open…Shona thought it is for her so she also went near him…but he passed by her & hugged sanky….Shona looked at him with shock & anger…all laugh seeing them…sanky hug him & take blessings..

Shekhar : (smile) god bless u beta…i m very happy that u r going to be my SIL…the way u supported Shona last week was incredible…

Sanky : (smile) thank u daddy…nd i m glad that i got her in my life…(emotional) she has made my life beautiful..(tease her) & adventurous…

Shekhar : (join him) ya…beta u should start taking blessing from all gods & elders..as u r going to spend your life with a very dangerous dramebazz..

Sanky : (make scared face) ya daddy..i hv already experienced it many time…

Both Shekhar & sanky share hug & hi fi laughing…they were unaware about Shona’s angry staring…

Lucky : (fake anger) Shekhar uncle..sanky..stop it u both…don’t u dare to speak a word against my kiddo…(went near her & hug her)

Dp : lucky is right…i will not leave you if you will speak a words against my Shona..understand…

Sanky went near them..swasan hug Dp & took his blessings…he blessed them…

DP : god bless u dear..i m happy my Shona got u as her better half..

Lucky looked his dad with teary eyes & hugged him tight…

DP : (proud) u r doing very good lucky..i m so proud of u my son..(lucky again hug him)

Shona avoid Shekhar…Shekhar make her stand infront of him & hold his ears..

Shona : (melt) (hug & cry) Daddy…i hv missed u all so much…

Lucky : (emotional) we hv missed u all so much..hey but where is mom…?

Shekhar : (act) wo actually lucky..she couldn’t come…

Tears start flowing from lucky’s eyes..as he was going to dedicate is performance to shomi…he knelt down on the floor crying…Shomi saw him breaking down..she couldn’t hold herself & ran near him…she placed her hand on his head & crasses…he looked up & found shomi standing with teary eyes…

He stand up & hugged her…all become emotional looking both of them…

Shomi : (kissed his forehead) how can ur mom stay without meeting you my son…!! I hv missed u so much my lucky boy…

Lucky : (emotional) i hv missed u mom more than anything…thanks for coming…(he kissed her checks)

Swasan come near her hug her & take blessings from her…she blessed both of them..shomi & Shona cry…

Shomi : sanky..i was waiting to meet u dear..we are very happy with your both relation…god bless u…

Sanky : (smile) thank u so much mamma…(lil flirt) & i must say u r looking very beautiful..(all smile)

Shekhar : (smile) ohho..so jamai raja has started flirting with sasu ma…ha….

Sanky : (nervous) no no daddy..i was just giving complement to mom…nothing else…

Ragini : (tease) hey..u r coping lucky’s dialogs sanky…that’s not fair…

Dp/ Shekhar: (confused) lucky’s dialog..??

Ragini : ya papa..daddy..u know lucky use to say like this…

Shona : when he flirt with sujata mom…(swaragini share hifi)

Lucky : (taunt) so u both are becoming papa’s chamchi again ha…(attitude) btw RP dad has given me permission to flirt with mom..so i don’t care about anyone..(warn) but sanky u can’t flirt with Shomi mom..ok..?

Sanky : aree whh…(taunt) u can flirt with my mom but u r stoping me to do the same with my Shomi ma…that’s not at all fair.. (make cute complaining face)  Shekhar papa…?

Shekhar : lucky u can’t stop my sanky to do anything…sanky beta don’t worry we will do it with Shomi together ok….(they shar hifi)

Swaragini : (surprised) Papa…??!!!

Shekhar : what…!!! I will be always at my sanky’s side…

Shomi : (laugh) aree stop it u all…u all are behaving like kids…and thank u sanky beta for complement..i really wanted to meet u..(kiss his forehead)

Shona : (pout) mamma.. that means you come here to meet sanky only…

Shomi : (smile) ya that was one of the reason..but i m specially here to meet my lucky boy..(she side hug lucky)

Shona sadly looked at Shekhar…

Shekhar : and me for sanky (he side hug sanky)

Shona almost teary eyes looked at Dp…

Dp : and me for Lado…(he side hug Lado)

She lookes at them hugging…all were teasing her & they thought that she will start crying like kid…but to their surprise Shona got tears in her eyes but it was not of their teasing but…

Shona : (emotional) Thank u so much mamma for coming 4 my  lucky..he was actually missing u so much..

Shona : (went to Shekhar) thank u so much daddy…that u come for my sanky…he was really wanted to meet u…

Shona : (went to Dp) thank u soooooooo much Dp uncle…my Lado Di was actually in need of your love & support…

Shomi, Shekhar & Dp looked at her emotionally…Sanlakrag can’t hold themselves & went near her..they share emotional group hug…

RP : Don’t worry my Shona dear..i m here for you only…(he smile)

All looked at there & found RP, sujata & ap standing there…they all meet eo & greet eo..all were very happy…they sat there talking for sometime…

{ friends i hope i will not bore u with following dialogs..plz bare it}

Shekhar : (to ragsan) sanky Lado..u both are sharing a beautiful friendship…both do love & care about eo so much…a sweet bonding…

Shomi : (to sanlak) lucky sanky..you both are buddies..but also like bros who pull eo legs..do masti with eo, fight with eo & stand for eo…

Ap : (to swaragini) Lado Shona…u both are sharing bonding more then real sisters…u will not think even for once to save other from problems..just like Shona did by saving Lado…

RP : (to swalak) lucky Shona..the bonding you are sharing is out of the world..sometime u treat eo as child..sometime as parents..sometime teachers..ur friendship is very pure & sweet…

Sujata : (to swasan) sanky Shona..ur thinking & liking r similar..moreover the way sanky handle his Shona when she got injury & Shona dare to face RP’s anger for her sanky..u hv proved that u r made for eo…

DP : (to raglak) Lado lucky…you both r not sharing similar liking but your thinking is same..the flirt lucky who was not believing in love is deeply in love with you Lado..on other side he changed  you in confident girl…u both r also made for eo..

Shekhar : just be like this always..
RP : sharing this strong bonding..
Shomi : supporting eo…
Ap : becoming eo’s stranth..
Dp : trusting eo in any situation..
Sujata : & most imp Loving eo unconditionally…

Swasanraglak 🙁 hold eo’s hand) Thank u so much..we will always be like this only..

All were very emotional & happy…they share a very good time together..Swasanraglak were very happy to meet their parents..after sometime all parents left after blessing their kids..

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Performance day :

{friends i m not going in detail about judges comments & all just giving u slit jalak of their dances}

Lucky  : (movie : Tare Zamin Par)

“Main Kabhi Batlata Nahin
Par Andhere Se Darta Hoon Main Maa
Yun To Main,Dikhlata Nahin
Teri Parwaah Karta Hoon Main Maa
Tujhe Sab Hain Pata, Hain Na Maa
Tujhe Sab Hain Pata,,Meri Maa….”

[HE START DANCING..HE WAS DOING AERIAL ACT…IN RING WHICH WAS CONTINUEOUSLY SPINNING…HE WAS DOING MANY STUNTS ON THAT RING BY HANGING ON IT WITH HIS LEGS ,HANDS & AT LAST WITH HIS HEAD..HE WAS HVING TEARS WHEN SONG ENDS..]

Sanky : (movie : Qayamat Se Qayamat Tak)

“Papa Kehte Hain Bada Naam Karega,
Beta Hamara Aisa Kaam Karega,
Magar Yeh To Koi Na Jaane
Ki Meri Manzil Hai Kahan
Papa Kehte Hain Bada Naam Karega…………………. ”

[HE START DANCING…HE WAS DOING FREEYSTYLE..HE DO KNEE WALK…HE USED A HANKY AS HIS PROP & DO SOME HEART TOUCHING MOVES WITH IT.HIS SMILE WHILE DANCING TOOK HEARTS ALL GIRLS..HE END SONG JUMPING FROM STAIRS]

Ragini : (movie : Boss)

“Pitah se hai naam tera
Pitah pehchaan teri
Jiye jis sahaare pe tu
Pitah se woh saans mili
Hai pitah, rab tera
Ho Ishwar Allah, Jitne bhi Rab hain
Noor tera tujh mein hi sab hai… ”

[SHE WAS DOING CONTEMPORARY..SHE DO SOME SPINS..SHE USED A RIBBIN IN HER DANCE..SHE WAS MAKING AWESOME LAYERS USING THE RIBBIN..SHE ENDS THE SONG BY SPLIT PAUSING HER HAND UP..SHE WAS CRYING WHILE PERFORMING]

Shona : (movie : Phata poster nikla hero)

” Janam janam
Ho tu hi mere pass Maa…
Janam janam
Ho tu hi zameen aasman
Ye hai khabar , Dil mein kahin
Rab rehta hai darbadar
Mere dil mein rehti,
Bholi bhali meri Maa……….”

[SHE WAS TIED WITH POPPET TRADE..SHE START DANCING TWISTING & TURNING HER HEADS, LEGS & HEAD WITH THAT TRADE JUST LIKE POPPET…SHE WAS LOOKING LIKE CUTE DALL…THEN SHE FREE HERSELF FROM IT & DO SOME FREEYSTYLE MOVES & TAKE HER END PAUSE DOING KARTWHEEL]

All parents & contestants were emotional after watching their kids dance live…judges praised them all…Swasanraglak got standing ovation from judges…

judges gave special gift to Shona as she dance well inspite of her bit injured leg..Performer of the week was ragini & lucky together while sanky god best move of the week for his last back jump from stairs..the one who got eliminated this week was Tanu…

Parents left from there after blessing their kids..all were very happy at the end of the day…

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At night…sanlak.room…

Lucky : (whispered) sanky..r u sleeping ?

Sanky : No yar..(puppy face) i m missing my princess…i hv not spend some good time with her from last 2-3 days..

Lucky : (happy) wow..that’s great..i also wanna spend time with my angel…

Sanky : (become happy) awesome..(stand up) then i m going to swaragini’s room & will send Lado here…

Lucky : (show thumb) done…nd enjoy with your princess dude..(wink at her)

Sanky : (wink back) and u too man…(tease him) btw u both r far more ahead then us in this things…

Lucky : (blush) kya yar tu bhi…(control) (tease him) r u feeling jealous..? That u r not getting from your princess what i m getting front my angel..? (rise his brow)

{friends they are just talking about lip kiss only nothing else}

Sanky : no way man…(smile) i just want her in my arms..and…i m happy with what i m getting..i can’t make her uncomfortable..

Lucky : (smile) woh sorry yar..i was just kidding…and i m happy my kiddo got such understanding prince…

Sanky : its ok yar…n if u were at my place u must hv done this only..so i m not doing anything mahan..nd in anyways we should not cross our limits before marriage…

Lucky : ya that’s true..we shall just enjoy our pre marriage romance only…(smirk)

Sanky : (smirk back) yup…ok now i m going & will send Lado…bye..gn

Lucky : gn sanky…nd send her fast.

Sanky laugh seeing him impatient…his condition was not less than lucky..so he quickly went towards swaragini room…………..

Precap : raglak & swasan romance….D3 team come to meet contestant

The end…

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So friends i hope i hv not bored you all with this part..i just tried to show their bonding with their buddies parents…

I m sorry if i hv wasted your time with this ch but i think it was required…so tell me did you like the epi..? Their bonding with Parents ? Their dance idea & songs ?…plz plz do comments friends..i m waiting for your response…

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