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L KHAN, RAFEE, AMMU, LOVELY,DAFSI : thank u so much dear for loving this part..
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Ch-16 link :
https://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-16/
Recap : Shona saved ragini from kavita’s plan..Shona’s injury..Judges told her that she has to leave the show…
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CH-17 :
Marzi sir : (with upset tone) so i m sorry to say swara as can not perform this week you hv to leave th show…..
All were shocked…kavita,Tanu,Nikhil were feeling like dancing..Kartik was liking swara so he was bit sad with this..Raj & Kabir both hv become very good friends of our leads were very upset with this news…judges were feeling extremely bad bz they knew Shona could be the winner of the show…
Sanraglak were hell shocked..they were very upset…ragini was crying…sanlak were having teary eyes..non of them were able to console Shona…they looked at her..they become worried seeing her..
Shona was looking very calm..she was not at all sad or upset..she look at their buddies..and start consoling them…
Shona : (smile) Arre…lucky, Di, Sanky plz don’t cry…i m ok…don’t worry about me…
This make all the people present there shocked…as including Sanraglak all of them has thought she will break down after this news but instead she is looking calm…
Kavita : (act as if tensed) swara…hv u heard them correct..they told that you hv to leave the show…
Raj : (worried) Swara…dear y r u behaving normal…are u ok…?
Now, as sanlakrag know Shona very well they understand that Shona has thought some solutions…so trio compose themselves & decide to support her..
Shona : Remo sir, Geeta ma, Marzi sir..thank u so much for your care & concerned for me…i want to talk with you…alone…
Remo sir : sure dear…lucky take your Shona to her room..we will talk there..
(he asked lucky bz no one knew about swasan & raglak relation in the show)
Lucky picked up her and took her to swaragini’s room…now only judges & our buddies were present in the room…
Geeta ma : (put her hand on her head) tell me swara, what you want to talk with us..?
Shona look all of them and told them something…all were shocked…
Remo sir : (worried) but doctor has clearly told that this small injury can lead to big one if you will not obey his instructions…
Lucky : (hold her hand) i will not allow you to take any risk with your health…
Ragini : (sat besides her) ya..lucky is right..you are not going do this…that’s final…
Marzi sir : I don’t think you should do this swara..after all its all about your health…
Shona : (cry) (pleaded) plz sir..ma..plz let me allow to do this…it will be wholly my decision..i will be responsible for consecounses..i m ready to give this in written…
Remo sir : ok..if you want to do this then we will not discourage you..but you hv to take care of yourself…i m proud of u dear..
Marzi sir : i must say swara..you are very brave girl..we are happy to hv you in the show…take care…
Geeta ma : just let us know about your final decision by 2night…god bless you beta…
Three judges left from there…Ragini went & closed the door…lucky was very angry…
Lucky : (anger) no way Shona…i m not going to let you play with your health…
Shona : lucky..i know you all care for me so much but plz trust me i can do that…
Ragini : Shona its risky…if at all it went wrong then u may got big injury..plz try to understand…
Shona : (cry) you know na…this is my dream..how can i let my dream go without even trying…
She looked at sanky with pleading eyes..Sanky was silent since she has told what she want to do…he was in deep thinking…
He was in confusion..one side its all about his princess health & other side its about her dream..finally he decide something…
Sanky : (went near her) (cupped her face) ok princess…i m with you…you will do what you want to do…
lucky : (tensed) but sanky…
Sanky : (determined) Plz give me permission to fulfil her wish..i promise i will take care of your kiddo…plz..
Ragini : (put her hand on lucky’s shoulder) Lucky..now when sanky is with her..let her just try..plz…i m sure he will take care of her..
Lucky looked at Shona’s teary face & went near her..he hug her tight & cry her heart out…ragsan went near them & hug them…four of them were crying…they Brock the hug…
Ragini : now when you both are together..i m sure you will be winner only…
Lucky : (in firm tone) Shona-Sanky..i m allowing you..but you hv to be careful…ok..?
Swasan : (make puppy face) Ok Sir
Ragini laugh..Lucky make angry face…then soon all broust out laughing…they do some masti…after all they are strength of eo…they can fight with any situation…
Four of them engaged in their dance practice…swasan were having very less time to choreograph their new act which was going to be more difficult due to Shona’s injury…
There Nikhil & Tanu were thinking that they are going to win as swasan can not perform better than them…they thought they are going to do normal dance only..swasan has kept their choreography secret..only raglak knew about that..
kavita was also thinking that she has done more practice then Ragini..so she will win for sure…3 days passed in this way…
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Performance Day :
Jai : welcome to the India’s best dance reality show ” Zara nach k Dikha ” pavered by Flipkart…these week judges has given “dance face of challenge ” to the contestants…so lets start…huge round of applause for laksh & Raj with lyrical hiphop…
1st Raj do his performance…now its lucky’s turn…
Song : (movie : Heroin)
“Saaiyaan mere saaiyaan
Saaiyan mere saaiyan (mere saiyaa re)
Mere saaiyan re, saaiyaan re
Saancha bole naa jhootha mahiya re
Mere saaiyaan re, saaiyan re
Jhoothi maaya ka jhootha hai jiya re ho o
[HE START DANCING…HE WAS CATCHING EVERY BEATS..HE GIVE VIBRATION TO HIS FACE THEN HIS HAND THEN HIS BELLY AND AT LAST HIS LEGS]
Ab kis disha jaaun, kit main basera paaun
Tu jo thaame sambhal jaaun o ho
Saiyan mere saaiyan…
Mere saaiyaan re, saaiyaan re
Mere saaiyan re, saaiyaan re
Saancha bole na jhootha mahiya re
[HE DO BACK SPLIT…THEN HE JUMP OPENING HIS HAND WILY…HE TOOK SPINS WITH TWISTS..HE END THE SONG WITH AWESOME LYRICAL STEP..]
”
Jai : very well done both of you..outstanding performance..result will be declared after all performances..so take your seats ..now its 2nd face off..Kartik & Kabir…
Both Kartik & Kabir give their performances…
now its turn for Ragini & kavita…
kavita complete her performance first…she made some mistake like she went off beat for few times etc..Ragini took her position..
Song : (movie : Ajja nach le )
“Mera Jhumka Utha Ke Laya Re Yaar Ve
Jo Gira Tha Bareli Ke Bazar Mein
Meein To Thumka Lagake Sharma Gai
Boli Ghoongar Bandha Denge
[SHE START DANCING BY GIVING ONLY FACIAL EXPRESSION..SHE DO STEPS WITH HER EYE-BROWS, THEN EYES..THEN SHE STAND UP & START DOING FOOT WORKS]
Mein Aa Gai
Mujhko Nacha Ke Nach Le
Aaaja Nach Le Nach Le Mere Yaar Tu Nach Le
Jhanak Jhanak Jhankar
O Nach Le Nach Le Mere Yaar Tu Nach Le
Abb To Luta Hai Bazar.
[SHE DO CONTINUOUS FOOTWORK OF CLASSICAL DANCE WITH AWESOME HAND MOVEMENTS]
Sab Ko Bhula Ke Nachle
Aaaja Nach Le Nach Le Mere Yaar Tu Nach Le
Jhanak Jhanak Jhankar
O Nach Le Nach Le Mere Yaar Tu Nach Le
Abb To Luta Hai Bazar. ”
[SHE TAKES SPINS ON HER KNEES..THEN SHE TOOK FAST SPINS COVERING WHOLE STAGE..GIVE PERFECT CLASSICAL PAUSE AT LAST ]
Jai : now time for last face off…Swasan & Takhil…
1st Nikhil & Tanu complete their performance..now its swasan turn.
{Friends plz try to imagine the performance..i guess i hv not written it properly according to what i hv imagined…}
sanky took his position..Shona was not seeing anywhere but at top one big round ring with red curtain was hanging…curtain was till floor of stage…
(song : Om Shanti Om )
Tum ko paya hai to jaise khoya hu
Kehna chahu bhi to tumse kya kahu
Kisi zubaan bhi wo lafz hi nahi
Ke jinne tum ho kya tumhe bata saku
Mai agar kahu tumsa hasi
Kayenat mai nahi hai kahi
Tarif ye bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tum ko paya hai to jaise khoya hu.
[ HE START DANCING AROUND THE CURTAINS..THEN HE TOOK CURTAIN END IN HIS HAND & OPEN WHILE DOING THE STEPS.]
[THERE SHONA WAS HANGING WITH HARNESS ON HER BACK…SHE WAS WEARING A LONG WHITE DRESS COVERING HER INJURED FOOT..SHE WAS DOING STEPS WITH HIS HANDS & ONE LEG]
uwi hai
Zulf ki ghani ghani ghataye
Shaan se dhalki huwi hai
Lehrata anchal hai Jaise badal
Baaho mai bhari hai jaise chandini
Roop ki chandini
[SANKY BRING HER DOWN..AS SHONA WAS ON HARNESS..SHE WAS HANGING BIT ON AIR..BOTH SWASAN DO AWESOME COUPLE DANCE MOVES WITH HEART TOUCHING LIFTS]
Mai agar kahu humsafar meri
Apsara ho tum ya koi pari
Tarif ye bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi..
[HE THROW HER UP MAKING HER TURN FASTER ON HARNESS…SHE WAS TURNING VERY FAST ON AIR WHILE SANKY TOOK SPINS ON GROUND WITH PERFECT RYTHM AT THE END]
All give huge round applause for swasan dance…judges give standing ovation to them…Marzi sir was standing on table…all were clapping for them…Raglak could not hold them on their seats…they ran to stage & hug both swasan…they were having happy tears..then they went back to their place..
Jai : now audience, i think u must be wording y all are becoming so emotionl..so let me give you your answer..plz play the vedio..
In vedio :
” Contestants talked about how Shona got injured..then what Dr said about her..judges decision & at last about swara’s determination to give performance and sanky’s support to her..”
Jai : ya..the medical belt you are watching is not fake…miss swara is actually carring the injury…inspite of that they both hv given such n outstanding performance..now plz a huge round of applause for swasan….
(i m not writing about judges comments & all)
Jai : “so winner of face off are…
1) laksh Mehta 2) Kabir Mehra
3) Ragini Mathur 4) Swasan
so now its clear that 2 contestants from kavita, Nikhil, Tanu, Kartik & Raj will be eliminated today…and they are…
i m sorry Kavita & Kartik..u both are eliminated & you hv to leave the show…”
kavita was crying..Kartik was upset..Takhil was tensed & sad..Raj & Kabir were happy…Swasanraglak were extremely happy not only bz they win but also bz kavita got eliminated…
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At night : swaragini room..
Shona was lying on the bed & trio were sitting besides her..all were having fun after almost few days..Shona was also recovering from her injury…
Lucky : (emotional) thank god..everything is fine..i was so scared for you kiddo..
Ragini : ya it proves you both are made for eo…
Sanky : (naughty) aa aa…let me correct you my Lado…not only made for but also……
Shona : (join her) MAD for eo….(share hifi)
Lucky : (cool dude mode) ya just like us (he side hug Lado)
Swasan : awwwww…how sweet….
Sanky see a Cocroch passing near by their bed…he become tensed…he hurriedly take his both feet on bed…
Shona : (confused) What happened sanky…? y u r sitting like this…
Sanky : (monologue) no no sanky you can’t tell them that you are scared of Cocroch…they will defiantly laugh on you…
lucky : sanky….??? what happened ?
Sanky saw that there were not only one but 3 Cocroches…he become more tensed…he went behind Shona & sit on pillow…
Swaraglak : (confused) What…??
Sanky : (laugh nervously) no…nothing guys…
Suddenly Shona also saw Cocroches…
Shona : (scheme) Cocroch……!!!!!
Raglak : ( jumped on bed) (scared) noooooo…where….??
They looked at the corner where 3 Cocroches were there…Now all were sitting sticking with eo on bed where we kept the pillows…only Shona’s right leg was lil away…they all were scared…
Ragini : (scared) lucky…go and killed them…i m too scared of it..
Shona : (tended) Di…he will not go..bz he too scared just like us…
Ragini : Ohh god..now who will save us from them…
Shona : (assuring) Don’t worry Di..sanky is there na..he will save us…go sanky..
Lucky : (tensed) ya bro..plz save us…
Sanky : (worried) guys…i need to tell you a very imp thing about me…
Ragini : (interrupt) arre…not now sanky…tell us after sometime…
lucky: ya first go and killed them..(push him)
Sanky : ahhhhhhhh (blurted out) woh…i m also sacred of them…
Swaraglak : what…??
Ragini : (taunt) what kind of guys u r…? how can u afraid ?
Shona : Ohh god you too…
Sanky : (nervously) hey don’t speck like that.its not like that only you girls hv right to afraid of Cocroch…
lucky : (join him) ya in India..girl & guy hv same rights so…we can also get afraid of it na…
Swaragini gave them wearied look and sanlak smile nervously…
Shona : (cry) what will happened now…? I even can’t run also…
Ragini : what will happened now..?
Lucky : (he was scared but console them) don’t worry Lado..we will do something…
Sanky : Ya lets call fire brigade…
lucky : (happy) wow…that’s great idea..lets call them..someone give me phone mine is there on table…
Ragini : (tensed) mine too…
Swasan : mine also…
lucky :(worried) Ohh god now who will save us…
Swaragini : (cry) plz do something…plz…
Sanlak : plz don’t cry…we will do something…
Shona : (smile) that’s like my brave boys..
Ragini : thank u guys..now plz killed them fast…
Sanlak : (look at eo) we can do it..
Sanlak take their night sleepers in their hands..they were very scared but start going in Cocroch’s direction as if they are going to kill their biggest enemy…swarag were cheering them…
Shona : (cheer) Go my prince…you can do it…yeh…very good lucky..you both can do it…
Ragini : (clapped) common lucky..ya ya you almost there…only you both can save us from them…yeh..
Finally sanlak reached near them & count…
Sanky : (whispered) one…two….&…three…
Sanlak attacked on Cocroches & killed them…they start jumping & hugging eo as if they hv won the big battle..
Sanlak : (happy) we did it…bro we did it…
Swaragini : (clapping) we are proud of you guys…love so much..
Sanlak : (give them fling kisse & bow down infornt of them) you are most welcome dears…
Shona : (smile) but sill one thing is left…
Sanlak : (confused) what’s that..?
Ragini : we need to get their dead bodies out of our rooms…
Sanky : Ohh Okk…lucky will do it..
Lucky : hey y me…you will do it…
they start fighting like kids…Ragini stand up & take a big cloth she put that cloth on dead Cocroches & drag them out of their room…she throw that cloth in dustbin…
she gave a winning look…
Swasanlak clapped for her…
lucky : wow…that’s like my jahsi ki rani…
sanky : ya amazing…good job…
Shona : woho…very well done Di…
Ragini : (bow down) thank u thank u thank u…
they all share group hug…Sanlakrag wash their hands…they were happy after all they hv done a very big work…they were chit-chating..
Ragini : (cute face) i hv not eaten ice-cream from many days…i m missing it…
Lucky : (breath hard) Ohh angel don’t make this face or else i will…
Shona : (interrupt naughtily) EAT YOU like ice-cream…m i right lucky..?
Lucky : (not in senses) ya correct Shona…
Swasan laugh out loudly…Ragini blush nd lucky feel embarrassed..after some time Sanlak went to their room…all of them sleep very peacefully after stressful hard core week…they doze of thinking about eo…
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Friends..written in so much hurry…no proof reading…how was it..? did you like this part..? i hope i have not made you bored…truly speaking friends..i m writing & uploading ch in my this hard schedule for you all..so please i request you to write at least few words whether it is positive or negative..but plz do comment…i m waiting for your response…