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Swaragini Fan Fiction.. Part 14

HeerBy 125 Comments3 Mins Read

hey guys heer here. actually its not an chapter just a survey to know are u liking the theme or not. 🙂
if u have missed previous episodes here is the link:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-1/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-2/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-3/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-4/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-5/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-6/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-7/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-8/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-9/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-10/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-11/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-12/
http://www.tellyupdates.in/swaragini-fan-fiction-part-13/

So here is new chapter. you can say author’s note. just to know views of you all 🙂
Hey guys don’t wanna bore you. But just wanted to know your views about the current track. Well i already have the story in my mind but if i act as a reader, i have several thought about the current track. What can they be :

1) Sanskar die and Swara emerges as a strong lady who gets lakshya punished mean while a new entry for swara and for ragini she waits for Lakshya to come out of jail and seeing her sister in pain Swara decides to lessen lakshya punishment by taking FIR back.

2) This all turns out to be a drama to make Swara end her nuisance and accept Sanskar’s love. And Swasan get united continuing story further.

3) Sanskar die after taking promise from Swara not to harm lakshya as he is his brother. Lakshya is changed seeing this and Swara leaves him to repent. Meanwhile Swara finds she is pregnant with Sanskar’s child ( in case they consummated their love that day Swara got drunk ) . Raglak paired and story continued ahead with Swara and her child along with Raglak.

4) Sanskar dies and gives vow to Swara to forgive lakshya. Ragini thinks lakshya is doing the same things she did to get him. Lakshya gets moved by Sanskar’s vow of not getting him punished. Lakshya improves with help of Ragini. Ragini dies in an accident and then after sone twists and turn Swalak pair.

5) Sanskar rushed to hospital and lakshya handed over to police. Sanskar is saved after much prayers of Swara and after being all right he makes lakshya out of jail. Lakshya realizes his mistake , apologises and eventually raglak pairing.

So guys please comment , please please please, especially for this note as i want to see creativity of all of you. If any other ideas tell me. I will surely mention the best ideas in my next note especially with the names of u all who have given the ideas. And again i am tellling u , i already have the story and i will go according to that story only. Its just a competition type for you. So hurry up to see your name on next chapter as soon as i post it.

Love u all. Pleae comment and give your feedback. I will love to hear from you all.
♡ HEER ♡

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125 Comments

    • Heer on

      dear kadu,,just wait for next chapter..and yeah swasan rocks dear,,but swalak is not also bad 😉

    • Heer on

      yeah dear angel as a reader i would have also recommended 5 one..thanku for showing interest 🙂

    • Heer on

      dear vinita..swasan is forever,,but true love have hurdels right 🙂
      thanku for showing interest 🙂

  4. Anu on

    Heer Jo krna h kro but agar sanskar ko Mara na toh I will seriously kill you….socha bhi kaise humare swasan ko separate krne ka plzzz yeh mat krna

    Aur rhi story ki toh use iss trah aage bdao ki sanskar is rushed to hospital but go in coma or memory loss after which swara found she is pregnant nd then leap of 2 yrs after that swasan united nd their sweet moment with their baby

    • Heer on

      hahaha anu i really laughed out loud..itti hasi aai na..well now jab mujhe dhamki mil hi gai h th mai dhyan rakhugi dear.. well i have to say ki tumhara idea bhut achha h..great sense of creativity 🙂

    • Heer on

      yeah rekha vaghela..anu version is great..but as i said i already had a story and i will sgtick to it 🙂

    • Heer on

      as a reader yes it is but as a writer its my right to create twists and turn..right dear aastha..thanku for your support dear 🙂

    • Heer on

      dear @$h.. ahem ahem..send the doctor at once..haha..thanku dear for showing interest,,just one chapter more and you will get to know whether sanskar lives :D.. or dies ;(

    • Heer on

      yeah right dear roja..most want swasan..but true love is a path full of thorns right..well just wait for new chapter dear..thnku for supporting it by giving your comment..stay tuned 🙂

    • Heer on

      dear lucky,,thanks for showing interest :)..i liked the option you choose as a reader :)..stay tuned dear 🙂

  12. Kittuu on

    4th point was nice as it is totaly differ frm every ff..1st swasan thn raglak nd finally swalak..bcz i luv both pairs thats swasan nd swalak nd they both luk gud together..so pls make it as u mention in 4th point so that it cover both pairs SWASAN nd SWALAK…..pls pls pls pls 4th point is d best……

    • Heer on

      hey dear kittu..seems like a swalak lover..well i also appreciate swalak..i have one mlore story in which swaragini are separated by birth ,it is named as swaragini..a new start (sisters love).. it is definietly swalak..so read that too aND for this ff being swalak..lets see what happens in next chapter..when doctors are able to save sanskar or not 😉

    • Heer on

      dear swasantha..nice choice..really swasan fan 🙂
      and really happy you called my ff lovely..a big smile on my face now 🙂

  14. abi on

    pls dnt make sanskar die…..pls pls pls pls pls pls pls…..either 2 r 5th pls if u make sanskar die surely I won’t read dis….swasan pls…I like ur ff a lot….so pls dnt make sanskar die

    • Heer on

      ohh my god abi ..heart core fan of varun..haha..lets pray that doctors save him..
      thanku dear for commenting here..it really makes me happy,
      and really glad to know you liked it 🙂 and yeah one more reuest please don’t stop reading this ff..you readers maen very much to me..
      very soon i am going to write a novel named as MY BOYFRIEND’S BEST FRIEND.. let me know if u liked the title 🙂 ands also tell me if u think i can write a good novel 🙂

    • Heer on

      dear chinni,,yes you choice is good,,as a reader i would have also chosen that..just stay tuned dear and keep supporting 🙂

    • Heer on

      dear nethra.. swasan rocks yes..but let us sxee can they get their love easily .. 🙂
      thanku for commenting dear , stay tuned 🙂

    • Heer on

      dear shanaya..i will try my best to convince lakshya to improve and accept ragini and i will pray to god to save sanskar 🙂
      thanku for commenting dear and showing interest.
      keep supporting dear 🙂

      )

    • Heer on

      one choice .. determined decision.. i liked it dear kaly..just wait for next episode and stay tuned dear :)..
      tahnku for commenting 🙂

    • Heer on

      dear pooja story is alfready in my mind..but yes nice choice daer.. stay tuned..and keep supporting 🙂
      i am happy seeing your interest 🙂

    • Heer on

      hey silly..long time yr,,glad to see your comment,,and nice option swasan fan 🙂
      keep supporting and stay tuned 🙂

    • Heer on

      thanku mansi for commenting here and showing your interest 🙂
      nice choice .
      keep supporting dear and stay tuned 🙂

    • Heer on

      so u want a happy ending 🙂
      dear nands i appreciate your choice and you will surely come to know in next chapter soon.
      thankyou for commenting.
      keep supporting and stay tuned 🙂

    • Heer on

      dear chinni..i thing some typing mistake..but thanku u took time and commented here :)stay tuned:)

    • Heer on

      dear arati.. ahemm.. fan of swasan..ok i will talk to doctotrs to try their best and save your sanskar..hahah..thanku dear for commenting.
      keep supporting dear 🙂

    • Heer on

      dear regan..pleasev send doctors imeediately.. 🙂
      thanku dear for commenting..
      keep supporting and stay tuned..
      nice choice dear 😉

    • Heer on

      thanku pinky reddy for showing interest and commenting 🙂
      stay tuned dear and keep supporting 🙂

    • Heer on

      dear angel a different one..seem you are a swalak fan 🙂
      different but nice choice.
      well daer thanku for commenting and stay tuned 🙂
      keep supporting 🙂

  34. Sanskar on

    If sanskar died no one will read your ff.
    Take it as a threat.

    JUST JOKING YAAR
    but we want swasan

    • Heer on

      omg SANSKAR..such a threat 🙂
      please don’t stop reading it..i willl try my best in writing good ff 🙂
      well loved your comment 🙂
      thnku for supporting and stay tuned daer 🙂

    • Heer on

      dear dolly..different choice but its good..
      seem u r a swalak fan 🙂
      well this story is swalak or not u will get to know soon..but my other story
      swaragini..a new start (sisters love ) is swalak. please do read it,
      keep supporting dear 🙂 and stay tuned 🙂

    • Heer on

      nice choice dear shabrin..
      i will try my best to make the ff good
      stay tuned dear and keep supporting 🙂

    • Heer on

      dear bhagi,, first of all thanku for commenting and stay tuned dear..i will surely try my best in giving good ff 🙂
      stay tune dand keep supporting 🙂

    • Heer on

      nice choice,
      thanku dear tania for commenting and showing interest.
      keep supporting and stay tuned 🙂

    • Heer on

      thanku dear heena 🙂
      i will try my best in writing good ff..just need your support..keep supporting
      stay tuned and nice choice dear 🙂

    • Heer on

      thanku dear aashi for showing interest,,keep supporting..well let me see if i can give a spoiler now 🙂

    • Heer on

      hey dear heena..great creativity,,,i liked your idea 🙂
      thanku dear..please keep supporting and stay tuned dear 🙂

  44. meghs on

    2 n 5th option was good
    as swasan will unite
    pls dont make sanskar die
    i too want raglak bt for that lucky has to realise his mistake

    • Heer on

      dear meghas..nice choice..and yeah good thinking..laksh will have to realise his mistake..
      well stay tuned ..keep supporing 🙂
      thanku for showing interest 🙂

  45. Sanskar on

    i was just joking Heer.
    But please i don’t wanna die

    you will not believe it but my surname is maheshwari and my real name is sanskar only.

    Actually my friends use to tease when they heard about sanskar in swaragini.

    • Heer on

      haha sanskar..are u telling tHE Truth..its shocking..hhaha..i too don’t want u too die..surely i will consult with best doctors right 🙂
      and make your friends read this ff too ,,they will tease you more,
      and by the way…sanskar maheshwari..have u got your real life swara haha 🙂

    • Heer on

      nice choice dear thanku for showing interest 🙂
      next update will be tomorrow 🙂
      keep supporting dear and stay tuned 🙂

  47. padma on

    i think idea no 5 will be helpful to continue ur story in a great way… and i think tat many people will lyk tat track oly… so please make it as one… i ll be the most happiest person if u take this….

    • Heer on

      thanku dear padma..its a nice choice yes..but i already have a story in my mind and i hope u will like it.
      thanku for commenting and showing interest 🙂
      keep supporting and stay tuned 🙂

    • Heer on

      dear mishti i have sent the spoiler..next part will be given tomorrow,,please have a look for the spoiler 🙂

  55. sindhuja on

    mmmm…. my suggestion is 1- swara becomes a strong lady and 3 – repentance and union of raglak while swara goes away from them, after knowing she is pregnant and with heena’s suggestion lookalike.
    honestly, i am okay with sanskar’s death as well as not okay with it. all love stories will not have happy endings, right? Anyways, you must have thought about something. Go with it…

  58. Tooba on

    I agree with anu. Just make it as sanskar’s drama to make swara nuisance and that he will pretend to be angry with swara and she will try to win him back in the meantime she will faint in his arms and both will get to know that she is pregnant and then swasan will unite 🙂

  59. ahana on

    its an intresting…use it as a twist but dont end sanskar character plz….
    yaa it will be good if lakshya character becomes phscio…both physcio will become raglak…
    hahaha….

    do one thing make lakshya mad in swara rejection n in that tym ragini will support him like she supported sanskar….and in dat tym make lakshya torture ragini and her bearing all this quitely all maheshwari family will forgive her and will start loving her and even when lakshya will turn normal he will see ragini concern for him and will feel guilty and will start loving her….

    do anything u want…but dont end swasan story plz….