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Home»Fan Fiction»Swaragini Chapter 1 (The Unknown Twist) – by namratha
Fan Fiction Swaragini

Swaragini Chapter 1 (The Unknown Twist) – by namratha

nammuBy nammuMay 1, 201788 Comments8 Mins Read
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hi and hello to everyone who’s reading this!! i know swaragini was over long back but still i want to write the ff of that particular serial eventhough i really didnt like the storyline of the original series of swaragini ……and hey !! the ppl who know me .i hope u have already read my previous ff,”we will be united”(the dreamed ff of swaragini”)”..pls comment and support me …

ok lets start now!!

the scene starts from swara showing off the true colours of ragini before the whole family and everyone hates ragini except swara ,sharmista and sanskar who had a liitle sympathy on her becoz he was also a reason for ragini’s evil missions..now laksh is hates ragini to the core!!.. ragini’s dadi has slapped ragini for two times as her laddoo no no now she is no more her laddoo !!…

ragini is already half dead but with a pitty and difficult state she joined her hands and said

ragini(sobbing really hard); iam sorry !!! iam sorry she went near swara and bowed her hands and she was continuesly apologizing to her

anapurna; enough ragini!! do think that we will all believe ur crocodile tears again and again..are we fools to trust u again!! pls get out of this house!

ragini went out of the house and swara and sanskar tried their best to stop her but laksh stopped swara and sanskar from stopping ragini ..and sharmista was stopped by shekar

swara,sanskar and sharmista wer not able to do anything as the situation was that terrible !!

at the road

ragini was walking like a lifeless person with her eyes still sobbing and it was late in the night around 11;30 pm no one even cared of her going out the house in late night alone

at the maheshwari mansion

everyone went to their respected rooms ..swara was very anxious about ragini’s condition .so she sent sanskar out to search ragini ..swara also wanted to come with him but sanskar told that

sanskar; swara if u also come out with me and at the same time if someone come to our room ….we will be caught swara ..so u be here and tackle the situation if someone comes to our room !!

then he goes to search ragini

at the road

a car suddenly came to the side of ragini and there were four goons inside the car …they were having ragini’s pic in their hand

goon; i think she shud be the girl in the photo..

they open the car door slowly and from the car a hand is shown ..the hand slowly grabs ragini’s waist and her luggage and they closed her mouth using a piece of cloth …she tries to shout but before that they take a drug injection and they inject it in her hand in a harsh way …now she is in a dizzy state ..she was conscious but she was not steady ..she really tried her level best to take out her phone to escape..but they were not letting her to do anything ..and they injected another dose of drug in her neck ..she was in an alcoholic state..

the goons were going in a high speed …and on the other hand sanskar was searching ragini ..every where..but there was no clue about her ..all of a sudden sanskar saw a car with full speed ..and somehow he saw ragini ‘s hand ..lying in the window of the car which was going in a full speed ..he conformed it was ragini who’s inside the car ..becoz the bangles she had in her hands were known to him which she was wearing when she went out of the house…he tried to follow the car but it was too late ..and he didnt see the car’s number plate

sanskar(in confused tone); i think ragini must got into trouble !! ..oh no! i have to inform to the police about this ..before that i call shekar uncle..becoz sharmista aunty told that shekar uncle has no problem with ragini in their house becoz she is their daughter .i will call them !!

galodia’s house

sharmista was searching ragini everywhere in the house but she was not there at all

sharmista was shouting and was calling everyone

dadi; y r u shouting in the late night …what will the ppl in our colony will think??..

shekar;;what happened sharmista??

sharmista ; ragini is missing !!

shekar(in a angry and a bit emotional tone); where she is gonna go?? ..even though she is here in this house ..i will never consider her as my daughter!! understood!! ..she will be on her way ..who knows maybe she would be buying some poison to kill us..becoz her truth has come out know!!

dadi; he is right sharmista..the girl who went to the very end to kill her sister will also be like that to us also!!

sharmista; she is our daughter!! how can u say like that shekar??

shekar; SHE IS NOT…MY……..(SUDDENLY SHEKAR’S PHONE RINGS)

shekar; hello ?

sanskar; uncle..its me sanskar..

shekar; tell me beta …any problem ..y r u calling in this late night ?? any emergency?

sanskar; uncle ..did ragini came there..??

shekar; pls beta ..dont talk about her!!

sanskar; uncle..this is serious ..pls throw ur anger away and pls say whether ragini came there or not

shekar; no beta

sanskar(in a shocked state); uncle ..ragini is in trouble now..i think someone has kidnapped ..i tried to chase the car but it went with full speed and before i could catch the car ..the car suddenly disappeared

shekar; r u sure??..maybe it can be a own drama by ragini to create sympathy !!

sharmista; enough shekar..the problem is serious !!…

sharmista takes the phone from shekar

sharmista; sankar beta..u tell me what happened clearly

sans explains everything

sanskar; aunty ..iam gonna give a compliant to police station now..can u come now??

sharmista; yes beta..but do ur family know about this??

sans; no

sharmista.; then we will first inform them and we will go to the police station

sans; but aunty ..they will all refuse to this!!

sharmista; u dont worry about it ..we will tackle it !

sans informs to swara and the whole family about ragini ..and they rush to the police station but laksh stops them with a paper

laksh; swara and bhai ..y r u wasting ur precious time by falling into ragini’s new drama..!!

laksh; swara pls forgive me for what i have done

swara; its ok laksh ..i forgave u long back

laksh ; if u really forgave me ..then sign this divorce paper with sanskar ….this divorce paper was already made ready by u two ..am i correct ..then y r u both delaying ..sign it

everyone was shocked .

laksh ; bend down with his knees and said ” swara will u marry me”

swara; laksh…r u mad ?? ..how can u ask this to me ..after u have dumped me !! huh??

sanskar; laks have u gone out of senses ..we r going to the police station to file a compliant as ragini is missing ..and u r not even bothered a bit about her condition ..and still ragini is ur wife laks..but i feel very sorry for ragini..as how she loved a person who does’nt even care if she died or not ??

swara; laksh ..what u want now..me &sans shud divorce now ..fine!!..give me the papers

before they cud sign the papers suddenly the police came to the mansion

then sans said he only called them now as laksh was not letting him and swara to go the police station and he said he called the police to check whether ragini is been kidnapped by anyone in this house..as everyone is against ragini

durgaprasad; have u gone out of ur senses sanskar?? how will we kidnap ragini ??

sanskar; bade papa..this the enquiry of the police ..not mine…there are possibilities like that too..thats y i called them

then the divorce papers flew away and laksh got it and he kept it in the cupboard ..everyone was tensed ..the police was enquiring each and everyone ..but still there was no clue about ragini ‘s kidnap

the police assured them that they will find ragini as soon as possible

the scene shifts to the car where ragini has been kidnapped

the car reach a old building ..

the goons were holding ragini’s hands and they were draging her upstairs..she was stumbling with her mind as she is been injected by drugs ….she didnt know what to do

the scene ends with ragini’s dizzy state..and the harsh dragging of the goons

hope u guys will support me to continue this ff ..and dont worry guys ..this story is not like the story which happens in cinema..this is going to be different..so stay tuned to the upcoming episode!!

and pls do comment ..especially to all my silent readers!!(pls comment) ur comment is like a boost to my brain to write interesting ff’s

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    88 Comments

    1. CrazygirlS.P on May 1, 2017 5:15 pm

      Amazing

      • Namratha on May 1, 2017 5:22 pm

        Thank u So much crazy girls S.P!!…this means a lot to me!!

    2. Daleen on May 1, 2017 5:25 pm

      Awesome
      Please post soon

      • Namratha on May 1, 2017 5:34 pm

        Thank u so much Daleen !!.and don’t worry ..I will post it soon with many more twists and turns!!

    3. Daleen on May 1, 2017 5:25 pm

      Awesome
      Please post soon

    4. shrilatha on May 1, 2017 5:48 pm

      Awesome and plz don’t make ragini negative

      • nammu on May 1, 2017 9:02 pm

        thank u shriatha..and ragini will not be negative in this ff…so chill dear..

    5. anu on May 1, 2017 5:57 pm

      nyc is it both swasan and raglak ff or only raglak ? clear it

      • nammu on May 1, 2017 9:04 pm

        anu thank u for ur comment ..and this ff is going to be ragsan and swalak but there are twists and turns too!!..u will know that from the upcoming chapters

      • shrilatha on May 1, 2017 9:20 pm

        Seriously nammu a big wall thank u for ragsan and a big hug too

      • CrazygirlS.P on May 2, 2017 1:42 pm

        Awesome, thanks for RagSan and SwaLak❤

    6. Siva on May 1, 2017 6:09 pm

      Don’t let anything happen to Ragini and make her as positive.

      • nammu on May 1, 2017 9:06 pm

        thanks siva..and support me to write my upcoming chapters too!!

    7. love_swaragini on May 1, 2017 6:15 pm

      i just want to say one thing pls dont make fun of marriage…dont make divorce to both couples…if it is continuation of serial..then sanskar loves swara..and ragini is in deeply madly in love with laksh..i want laksh to love ragini back n change her..pls dont swap and disrespect value of marriage..and pls dont make ragini negative…i love swaragini so much…dont make swa___lak or rag__san..as it is continuation of serial..and it will be soo bad..as husbands and wives are exchanging their partners…i hope raglak n swasan r pair☺pls show swaragini bond also?

      • nammu on May 1, 2017 9:17 pm

        thanks love-swaragini for commenting and giving me suggestions dear and i will show swaragini’s bond in this story!!…but i too know yaar that marriages are not for fun but swasan married each other becoz of the situation which they were facing to reveal the true colours of ragini and at first they didnt have feelings for each other then after raglak’s reunion they were totally into each other …but my story is a little different dear becoz i dont want to show what exactly happened in the original series of swaragini ..thats y dear iam writting it a little distinct ..and iam extremely sorry to disappoint u dear ..but dont worry ..i will write another ff about swasan and raglak.. honey ..hope u understand

      • Kakali on May 1, 2017 9:55 pm

        Hmmm Nammuuuu I do understand your pov, but FROM THAT ITSEF WE GOT OUR HEAVENLY COUPLE SWASAN na? SwaSan were together to bring the truth out of Ragini & then they fall in love with eo.! I know you will be changing the story line according to ur will but They are married here! Ragini did lot’s of karnama to get Laksh,her love and now you want to show Rag_______San in this track.!
        Hmm that mean Ragini’s love for Laksh was not even worthy.! Her love was a total waste for Laksh as you will put her with Swara’s Sanskar right?
        I can’t ever understand this logic! Inspite of showing RagLak’s immense love for each other, why people are more interested in Swara’s Sanskar!
        Urghhh it makes me mad.!
        Bro-Sis as couple.! It’s ghor Kalyug.!
        Hope u understand my pov Namu.!

      • sanam on May 1, 2017 10:05 pm

        Is this ragsan ff???

      • Aarushi_99 on May 2, 2017 3:17 am

        Ok, I read this comment and I totally understand your POV but I HAVE to point this out or else mujhe chain nahi milega..

        So you just said, that SwaSan were into each other AFTER RagLak’s reunion not before that..? But honey, sorry to burst your bubble, Sanskar was deeply and madly in love with Swara even before they revealed Ragini’s true face infront of others and Swara had also fallen in love with Sanskar during that Malkin’s drama, which I think was before RagLak’s reunion right?!
        They maybe married each other due to the situation but later they DID fall madly and deeply in love with each other (and became a heavenly couple)!

        And now, even if you changed the storyline and in this FF of yours SwaSan aren’t in love with each other but THEY STILL ARE MARRIED! Please do NOT insult a pure relation like marriage in such way.. Do you really think it would be acceptable to live in a house with your ex-husband and treat him like Jeth or Devar..? In my opinion, it’s a STRONG NO! The awkwardness would be to much, specially between RagLak because from what I remember, they already became one before SwaSan revealed Ragini’s truth right?

        According to me, writing this FF is not only insulting us SwaSan fans but also those RagLak fans who only love RagLak’s pairing, and I’m sure even they are not happy with this storyline either because according to this ff, the things she did to marry Laksh are just pointless because after doing all this, she’ll marry her Jeth eventually..

        And you might not like it, but for every single SwaSanian over here, Ragini and Sanskar share a BROTHER and SISTER bond and that IS the truth..

        Some people might say that “Swara doesn’t have any copyright on Sanskar” and things like that, but the truth is, Sanskar is ONLY for Swara and Swara is ONLY for Sanskar..

        We SwaSanians understood your POV, and we hope that you understand ours as well..

        PS: Sorry if I sounded rude or something, it’s just that reading your comment made me a bit angry..

      • CrazyGirlz on May 2, 2017 2:53 pm

        I don’t want to say anything here, but don’t you dare to insult SwaSan! SwaSan were together before RagLak union, you can write your story the way you want , but not a word against SwaSan ???

    8. Priya on May 1, 2017 6:19 pm

      Nice

      • nammu on May 1, 2017 9:21 pm

        thank u priya..that is so sweet of u !! pls read my upcoming chapters too and pls do comment and believe it or not ur comments mean a lot like a boost to me!!!

    9. Ashnoor on May 1, 2017 6:25 pm

      Amazing dear

      • nammu on May 1, 2017 9:24 pm

        thank u ashnoor for ur valuable comment and iam very happy that u commented on my ff..thank u once again to everyone who commented this ff ..these comments r like treasure to me !!

    10. A.xx on May 1, 2017 6:37 pm

      amazing and I wonder whose the hand was xx

      • nammu on May 1, 2017 9:28 pm

        thank u A.xx and from ur profile itself ..i find that u r a fan of tejaswini prakash ..and so am i !! iam her fan too ..thanks for ur comment ..pls read my ff’s and comment too ..hope u will like that too

    11. raguz01 on May 1, 2017 7:24 pm

      Nice… Waiting for next part…

      • nammu on May 1, 2017 9:30 pm

        thank u raguz01 for ur lovely comments

    12. Seema on May 1, 2017 7:24 pm

      Swasan pls

      • nammu on May 1, 2017 9:33 pm

        thank u for ur suggestion dear but it is going to be ragsan and swalak..iam extremely sorry to disappoint u but dont worry ..this ff will be interesting and i hope u will like it becoz i believe that the storyline is more important than the couples!! …hope u undrstand dear..

    13. Kakali on May 1, 2017 7:57 pm

      Waaa interesting Namuuuuuuu.! Yoo, I’m just finding something interesting here! I would love to follow this story if this contains REAL couples SwaSan & RagLak.! Continue soon dear.! Thnk u.. ;-*

      • nammu on May 1, 2017 9:38 pm

        thank u kakali ..and iam happy that u found my ff interesting and i hope u will find my upcoming chapters also interesting..and iam extremely sorry dear becoz it is ragsan and swalak .but dont worry. .i will write another ff about swasan and raglak but before that this ff will also be interesting becoz of its storyline(i hope so)..so i wud be happy if u read this ff dear..i hope u understand me dear..

      • Kakali on May 1, 2017 9:47 pm

        Namuuuuu all the very best dear for your upcoming episode.! Hope u got loads of love from all.! But I won’t be able to follow this story as it us Rag____________San & Swa___________Lak.! Imagining Bro-Sis as couple is against my moral dear! That’s why..! Bdw here SwaSan is married right? If you are making it as another couple story,then U will separate SwaSan n break their marriage.! Hope you won’t make a joke of Marriage!
        I wonder, Laksh didn’t love Ragini with the same passion she did to him then why don’t writers write Laksh loving Ragini back more thn she did rather than snatching Swara’s Sanskar.! Because you know SwaSan is hubby wife and snatching a hubby from wife and giving to another woman who loves her hubby like anything doesn’t look good na!
        Hope you understand my point.!
        Thnk u dear.! Best wishes.!

    14. a on May 1, 2017 8:19 pm

      nice..is it swasan?

      • nammu on May 1, 2017 9:29 pm

        thank u dear and it is ragsan and swalak

    15. nammu on May 1, 2017 9:01 pm

      thank u to everyone but ..iam sorry …iam a die heart fan of ragsan,raglak and swalak..but that doest’nt mean i dont like swasan ..i too like swasan but this ff is going to be swalak and ragsan mosltly .but dont worry i will make swasan ff’s too..but later with raglak ‘s ff’s !! ..hope u guys can understand me ..

      • Kakali on May 1, 2017 10:17 pm

        You love those pairs..! That’s cool.! We have nothing to do with that !
        BUT the track you have chosen, From where we got our heavenly couple.!
        From that point only I,n like me million people become SWASAN FANS. That mean what? THAT TRACK IS OUR HEAVENLY SWASAN’S DREAM TRACK.! DON’T EVER DARE TO TOUCH IT OR MAKE FUN OF THAT.!

        SwaSan become one from that time! we got them fron that track and now you want to swap everything making it as RAG____________SAN.! No again Nammu, not again.
        Let me come straight to the point, ONCE MAVO tried to do the same, tried to change our dream track n the ultimate result was “http://www.tellyupdates.com/lust-love-episode-55/”You can check out the comments here.!
        You are a fan that’s good, write whatever u want on them. NP.
        But dear, a request don’t dare to ruin our/my/All SwaSanians dream track, ever memorable track.! Those beautiful memories mean a lot to us.!
        Hope you understand.! Otherwise SwaSan fans are not going to sit back if u try to touch our fav track making it yuckyyy.!
        I’m very sure, ultimate reaction will be knocking ur comment box soon.!
        You can think I’m being rude to u.. But whenever anything comes to my SwaSan! I’m straight forward.!
        Do write more but TRY TO RESPECT OTHER’S EMOTIONS TOO..!
        And check the link.
        Thnk u..

    16. Swasan on May 1, 2017 9:02 pm

      Interesting… nice

      • nammu on May 1, 2017 9:19 pm

        thank u swasan..pls do support me for my upcoming epis …ur comments mean a lot to me

    17. Aarushi_99 on May 1, 2017 9:32 pm

      I was really excited to read this as it was a continuation of the serial but reading the comments I’m feeling really very dissapointed!
      I have no problem if you aren’t SwaSan and RagLak fan but the problem is if you wanted to write a FF on Rag_______San and Swa_________Lak then you should have chosen another track because here SwaSan and RagLak are already married and Sanskar is in love with Swara whereas Ragini is deeply in love with Laksh, if here they divorce each other and marry their Jeth and Devar it’s like making fun of a pure relation like marriage, and the BIGGEST REASON that I’m dissapointed with this is that this track is the BEST part of SR for every single SwaSanian because it was from here SwaSan love story started. If you wanted to make a continuation of a track from SR with your favourite pairs than you should have chosen from when Sanskar entered the serial. I suggest you to drop this idea and start a new FF from when Sanskar entered the serial, it would avoid a lot of fight that I think is about to happen soon… Just my opinion, I don’t want to hurt you.. 🙂

      • Aarushi_99 on May 1, 2017 9:54 pm

        It became a big comment but trust me I still have alot to say but I’m controlling myself? Look dear, I’m telling you once again ki please, if you wanna avoid any fight then don’t continue this.. this thing has already happened before, someone started to write ff on Rag_____________San on this same track and many things happened in the comment section.. If you wanna write on a SR track then choose one before SwaSan got married or make one yourself.. Thing is, we SwaSanians don’t have a problem with your fandom, which I don’t even know how it became a fandom because they were never even a pair in the serial, but, we will not sit quite if anyone takes our dream track… Just saying.. No offence 🙂

      • Aarushi_99 on May 1, 2017 9:54 pm

        Btw, sorry for such long comments..??

      • nammu on May 2, 2017 1:25 pm

        aarushi-99…dont worry dear..now in my 2nd chapter of this ff this is going to be swasan and raglak..so chill darling ..i totally accept ur opinion dear..and hope u like my 2nd chap of this ff

      • Aarushi_99 on May 2, 2017 5:16 pm

        I’m really happy that you understood our POV!
        Dear you don’t have to write on SwaSan because I know you don’t like them and I’m sure you’re not gonna be comfortable with that..
        So I just suggest you to start a new story with your favourite pair…
        But in the end it’s your decision..??
        Btw, thank you for understanding our POV and not having the bro-sis as a couple?

    18. seebu_s on May 1, 2017 9:54 pm

      hmm…got to know it is whose pair..thank u for making fun of marriages…bcs of this only we fought with mavo..and she understood and didnt continue…again same mistake by another writer.. we request u too write something fresh on ur pairings…it is our swasanian’s dream track..n sanskar loved swara deeply…we r keeping silent…so u r making our couple story…our swasan dream track fun means we will not sit quiet…dont make fun of marriage….i request u again n again write something fresh on your couples… but not on this….this is our SWASAN DREAM TRACK….and ragini fans…pls dont think i’m bashing…it is hurting our swasanian’s to extent…and i hope u guys also know meaning of marriage…it is not fun…sorry if i hurt…but it hurted me soo much after coming to know it is on our dream track

      • nammu on May 2, 2017 1:34 pm

        seebu ..sorry that i have hurted u to the extent and iam sorry to all swasanian’s too…but dont worry my 2nd chap of this ff is going to swasan and raglak..yaar..and i hope u will like that!!..pls do read that and i hope by reading that u will forgive me for my mistake..

    19. mk on May 1, 2017 10:01 pm

      awesome dr thanks for ragsan because am crazy fan for them.

    20. Ammy on May 1, 2017 10:09 pm

      superb.waiting for next part

    21. asra on May 1, 2017 10:10 pm

      awesome dear….it’s so interesting dear….loved it alot….lots of question arising in my mind…hope nxt update give me the answer…..eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear….

    22. aditi on May 1, 2017 10:12 pm

      superb love u dear thank u so much for ragsan. u know now a day there are very less ragsan am really disappointed. ur plot is interesting post soon

    23. kat on May 1, 2017 10:50 pm

      sorry to say…it is disgusting…how can u swap pairs after their marriage..once think it practically…how disgusting it will be…if u want to write on some couple ..start it fresh…but not by making fun of marriage…and dont think swasanian’s r against bcs of it will be swa____lak or rag____san….we criticize even swasan stories if they r bad…so dont come up with this type of stories…if u like some couple…atleast respect that n give them some gud story…only bcs u love these couples..u cant make fun of word name “MARRIAGE”…dont think me as a basher…if u think it also i dont care bcs now a days sharimg pov n criticising authors work is making our readers as bashers…also dont make fun of our dream swasan track…

      • nammu on May 2, 2017 1:39 pm

        sorry kat for my mistake..and i totally understand ur opinions..and chill darling now my 2nd chapter of this ff is going to swasan and raglak..becoz i didnt show anything between the couples in this 1st chapter..so i hope..the 2nd chapter of this ff will be a chance for me to rectify my mistake..and pls do read that and pls forgive me honey..and according to me my readers are more important to me than anything!!…..so here’s for u swasan and raglak!! yepeee!!

    24. Richa19 on May 1, 2017 10:52 pm

      Interesting!!!!!!

      N thank u for giving RAGSAN!!! ? ?

    25. Mittu on May 1, 2017 11:12 pm

      Nammu !!! That was really nice !! Looking forward to reading this ff as well as ur other ffs !! Post soon ! Keep smiling !!

    26. Kalai on May 1, 2017 11:44 pm

      Hey,it’s really interesting..especially I wants to know hw it will bcom ragsan..actually I m raglak fan bt ur script sounds interesting… And ha as a writer u hv full rights to select ur script nd couple…I m waiting fr nxt update.. Plz update soon..

    27. Smiley on May 2, 2017 1:23 am

      Nammu the story is interesting.early waiting for next episode.do according to ur wish not for sake of others.always keep smiling???.

    28. mica on May 2, 2017 6:05 am

      Hi Nammu…. i don’t care what your favorite pairs, i don’t care what favorite couple, i don’t care if you want write about favorite.. BUT DON’T do it BASED CURRENT TRACK.. as everything so WRONG.. it will be so WRONG….
      because BASED CURRENT TRACK, DEEP INSIDE LAKSH’S HEART, HE CARES MORE TO RAGINI THAN SWARA
      BASED CURRENT TRACK, THERE IS NO FEELING FROM SANSKAR FOR RAGINI EVEN JUST FOR A PIECE OF NAIL.
      BASED ON CURRENT TRACK, SANSKAR’S HEART CONNECTED TO SWARA IN MANY WAY SINCE BEGINNING.
      So, you can write on Swa—————————lak or rag————————san, but don’t BASED CURRENT TRACK, DON’T make a FUN MARRIAGE…

      I DON’T KNOW HOW BIASED YOU PEOPLE ….. ALL Rag Fans HATE when Laksh played Ragini’s dignity, but here YOU HAPPY PLAYING MARRIAGE.
      All Rag Fans said Rag’s love to Laksh is true, But can You COMPARE it with Kavita or Sahil love ? because they DONE THE SAME.

      Seem if it’s about RAGINI, YOU CROSSED LIMIT IN EVERY WAY, stealing others character’s partner to be RAGINI’s BEDMATES is OK, no matter that you portrait Ragini’s character kinda greedy on men except laksh, JUST BECAUSE YOU can’t ACCEPT LAKSH for RAGINI, you insulting Rag’s love feeling.
      ugghhh, even yesterday Ishveer fans angry and called rag fans shameless on Mavo’s story

      • nammu on May 2, 2017 1:29 pm

        thanks for saying ur opinion darling..and dont worry my 2nd chap of this ff is going to swasan and raglak ..so chill babe!!..hope you’ll like that ..and it is going to published at 2pm or 3pm i think!!… so stay tuned and support me dear…and i totally respect your opinion and according to me my readers are every important to me

    29. neha on May 2, 2017 7:04 am

      i’m shocked…like seriously…no body cares about how story is…and ppl will say story is important for us not couple but here people are supporting for wrong story for couple?so from now onwards gyaani baba’s of other couple,dont say for us story matters not couple?..it is clear that for u also only couple matters…coming to author..i as reader…will not support this concept bcs i have some values,ethics and basics of life…exchanging wife and husband to each other,who are deeply in love with their actual soulmates…apply in practocal life…will we do the same…if ever it is forced marriage also,will we exchange our wife or husband…?nd in serial laksh abused swara as characterless and what not…for everyone self respect matters…how can swalak can be together…laksh abused/bashed what not…and coming to ragini….she is not less…she accused sanskar for molestation…which is not small…still u want to write ur story not having minimum ethics or values…i’m criticizer…not basher…just answer my every question…

      • nammu on May 2, 2017 1:21 pm

        thanks dear for ur comment..and i totally respect what u said..u were right neha honey..iam extremely sorry for this mistake..i shud have selected a different story for these pairs..but now it not a prob now..becoz i have successfully written my 2 chapter..and it is swasan and raglak only dear so chill darling !!…and iam glad that u openly said whats in ur heart ..and according to me also what u said was right only dear…. and u made my eyes to open..yaar!!….u were right ,,even i dont want to make fun of marriages..so i have made my story different ..so pls do read it “swaragini chapter2 swasan and raglak jodi(the unknown twist)”…i hope u will like it..and once again iam sorry for my first mistake dear..i totally accept it ..and i hope i have fixed it right in my 2nd chapter of this ff..

    30. anu on May 2, 2017 8:53 am

      hey thx for revealing pair as i asked you said its ragini_________san ff… and dont expect me to comment on ur ffs again its last one… but i want to tell u something.. if u think think im basher then mostly welcome i dont mind bcz i vl say what is true.. u said in one reply that u love swasan also and write swasan ff.. but plz dont say that ur swasan fan bcz ur not if u love them or u love ragini u wont write ff on this .. dont try to use from swasan track ur writing ff in this sanskaar loves swara EVEN swara also started to love him but didnt expressed.. and ragini did all this for laksh bcz she is madly in love with him and married… when swasan did fake marriage then also she did all for laksh only isn’t true? rag ___san are not pair but ur writing no one saying anything bcz no swasanian read that… but if u wont to write ff on them write from starting dont show even your ragini love is not true… get that she did all this for laksh.. don’t show blunder by this showing swasan divorce and marrying ragini and laksh respectly… try to Repect “MARRIAGE” ITS not any game.. get the meaning what ur writing is not true…for this ur ff no swasanian will spare you… IF U WANT to write then start story fresh not from this track .
      i dont think even if u love ragini sorry to say this if u admire her u wont show her love like this..
      you also said u write swasan FF .. u did this much bluder trying to write ff from favourite heavenly couple swasan track and showing non existing pair how can you think swasan fd will support u when u write swasan FF … dont exopect from me bcz i wont support u at all i dont think any one support may be they support u but im not..
      IF u want to write start fresh story BUT if u write from here THEN swasan fans will spare you get that DONT dARE to ruin swasan track like this.. u are not only Insulting swasan fans also raglak fans who love them… in that ragini fans also there get that .. dont Insult a pure relationship which is called “MARRIAGE ” if u respect marriage then get that ur writing wrong ff..and ur saying this ff will be intresting read it..
      MAIN THING HOW CAN YOU FORGET THAT WHEN RAGINI TRUTH CAME BEFORE THAT SHE ONLY DID SWASAN HAVE TO MARRY FOR THAT SHE EVEN KIDNAPPED HER MOM.. Dont insult marriage and dont hurt fans (swasan/raglak) with ur this story…… marriage is not a joke try to get that…

      • anu on May 2, 2017 8:56 am

        sorry for my msg .. but dont insult Marriage.. i still have to say many but i wont say… and dont expect any comments from me and If u write swasan ff also dont expect to get comment from me…

      • nammu on May 2, 2017 1:42 pm

        anu i totally understand ur opinions..and dont worry..my 2nd chapter of this ff is ging to be swasan and raglak..and iam extremely sorry for my 1st mistake..and sorry i have hurt u by my comment before….so here’s for u swasan and raglak jodi in my 2nd chap of this ff+

    31. Kakali on May 2, 2017 9:18 am

      Namu don’t ruin our track, SWASANIANS EVER MEMORIAL TRACK dear! I don’t care RagLak fans care about their track or not but I do, we SWASAN fans do.!
      So we are saying you so nicely, so cutely, so sincerely that don’t dare to touch that track!
      Write on whoever and whatsoever couple u want, but do spare my SwaSan n that REAL TRACK.
      Ragini needs different bedmates,that’s cool. Do write on her and her men but don’t play with that track.!
      M repeating again and again! Huffff!

      Being a girl you know the marriage value well, I guess so!
      So obviously after your marriage you aren’t going to accept ur sister’s husband as your husband..(Just a thought)! Isn’t it?
      Hope you got my point.!
      Sometimes writing reflects our moral,mentality etc and definitely that is against our maral.!
      Hope you understand.!

      This is going to last long! This fight isn’t going to end soon.! SwaSanians will not support you dear! You don’t even need to write on SwaSan just concentrate on ur fav(whatsoever they are) n leave that track.! Thnk u..

      • ritu on May 2, 2017 10:08 am

        i agree with u kakali..we dont want n expect swasan ff….but dont make fun of our dream track…

    32. ritu on May 2, 2017 10:05 am

      a request from me as swasan fan…pls dont spoil our lovely dream track of swasan n dont make fun of marriage…write something fresh abt ur pairs..but not like this…

    33. nammu on May 2, 2017 10:22 am

      i respect each and everyone’s feelings …so i will change the storyline as your wish dears !!..(i meant the couples)…..and i knw some ppl have asked me to write ragsan and swalak but according to the majority of the ppl who have commented ..they said they want swasan and raglak ….and guys i was not hurt by u actually i got goosebumps becoz of the love u had in the couples swasan and raglak ..and iam flattened too!!…and i am a person who strongly respect logic so thanks for keeping me in the logic track ..and i am happy that u openly said ur comments !! so the next epi will be more interesting i hope becoz of the pairs u were all expecting are joining soon!! yepeee!! bye..with lots of love

      • Seebu_s on May 2, 2017 11:12 am

        i’m glad u got our p.o.v…thank u for understanding…n we swasanian’s are not against u…but ur story…bcs marriage is not fun according to our swasanians…we criticize if story line is bad..and glad that u took in positive way…i respect u for this…but u can write new stories on whomever u want as pair…i think most of swasan fans will not comment bcs of ur 1st mistake…may be it is not mistake according to u…but in our pov it is blunder…we dont expect also u to write ff or anything on swasan…satisfy ragini fans…showing new raglak love story…orelse start new stories on ur pairings…sorry if i hurt u…n thank u for caring our emotions…good luck…all the best…

      • Bela on May 2, 2017 1:58 pm

        Your story, your wish. I have no problems either way. But please do focus on Ragini, this story seems to be based on her and the twist does revolve around her, right?

    34. nammu on May 2, 2017 1:09 pm

      oh ..thats ok seebu-s and thank u for ur wishes…and for me my readers are more important and majority of u said that u want swasan and raglak..so i have finished writting my 2 chap..now ..so i hope,,it will be published at 2pm or 3pm..so iam sorry dear for my 1st mistake…and thank u for all ur suggestions..if u havent’nt suggested it.. my storyline cud have been worst..and yep u were right ..i’ll write new stories on the couples i wanted…afterwards..
      iam glad that u openly told about ur comments..and pls do read my 2nd chap!!

      • Seebu_s on May 2, 2017 2:05 pm

        ok dear…but pls dont make any lead negative…n hope u satisfy both pair fans☺all the best

      • nammu on May 2, 2017 2:21 pm

        dont worry seebu ..iam not going to make any lead as negative..and i will clarify that in my upcoming epi!!

    35. Bela on May 2, 2017 1:57 pm

      Hey, I like the concept, thanks a lot for this story.

      I honestly have no idea what the furore is all about, it is a fiction based on another fiction and well, you have the right to express yourself as a writer. I am right in believing that this story takes on from that day when Laksh, Swara and Sanskaar fake Laksh’s death, right? Good going.

      Do not worry, I stand with you in this. Let people say what they want, even if it is something derogatory and cheap( bedmates for Ragini, seriously?). Write and let others write. If people don’t like it, they are free to stop reading it, as I have done with numberous stories in this page.

      All the best?

    36. Rehna on May 2, 2017 2:09 pm

      Nice concept dear. Loved it

      • nammu on May 2, 2017 2:57 pm

        thank u rehna..for ur heart warming comments…and pls do read my 2nd chapter of this ff

    37. Seebu_s on May 2, 2017 2:12 pm

      and by saying this story is not nice…some ppl are saying we r bashers…yes it is your story ur wish…but ppl who will read genuniely should not feel disgusting☺it may ne good for some fans as they r specific fans…i commented here as u took story after swasan love story started and marriage also over…it is disrespectful…so i suggested…but ppl always make our swasan fans as bashers….but everyone know what truth is…!anyways sorry for suggestion n thank u for understanding swasan pov…

      • nammu on May 2, 2017 2:57 pm

        not a problem babe ..and i dont consider any swasanians as bashers and to be honest i havent considered anyone who commented here as bashers..becoz..u all have the right to give suggestion to me and u all just said ur critics…as a reader ..so there is no need to be sorry seebu….and u all just said ur point of view know..so i have no problem with it honey !!…ok enough of all these sorries dear..we are all globalised people here and we have all the rights to state our opinion …so u did what is right only ..so cheer up seebu and i will be happy if read my 2nd chapter of this ff!!

    38. nammu on May 2, 2017 2:45 pm

      thank u bela..and iam really glad that u like my concept and thank u for ur wishes dear and once again thanks for ur supportive words!..and here’s a good news for u…there is going to be raglak and swasan….so iam sure u r a fan temish ..and even iam a die heart fan for temish aka raglak..and pls do read my upcoming epi!!

    39. CrazyGirlz on May 2, 2017 3:00 pm

      I guess you understood​. If it is SwaSan I am in. ?

    40. mica on May 2, 2017 3:55 pm

      Nammu…. thank you so much for understanding, but i don’t want to disappointed you further, seemed i won’t read your next story.
      Let me clear, i’m here not for SUPPORTING you, but DEFENDING my Favorite couple, as i don’t want anyone to RUIN my SWASAN and IT’S MEMORABLE TRACK.

      You, yourself admitted that you die hard fan of Raglak, Rag—————san and Swa—-lak, so, i think maybe you don’t need to hurt yourself by writing on Swasan as i know you have NO feeling for Swasan. We are not a child to offering ice cream when we are angry.

      Better you focus to your favorite, but please if you can’t stop yourself to write a story of Ragini steal her sister husband AKA Rag——————————–San, at least DON’T WRITE THEM IN CURRENT TRACK OF SR. just it.

      Call Us SWASAN AS OBSESSED FANDOM, but the TRUTH we DEFENSE what we belonging and it’s our RIGHT, our DUTY. SWASAN FANS LOYAL about couple, We are not kinda Rag Fans who happy to see our favorite to change BEDMATES everytime they want except PURE RAGLAKIAN.
      And we are not the one, check this, other fandom have objection too when their favorite couple ruined as ragini need other man to be her partner , http://www.tellyupdates.com/true-love-episode-8-2/ .

      About Bedmates, i know it’s sound cheap, but it’s true, husband is wife bedmates, so if on a story Ragini married to a man which always changed, it’s mean she has many bedmates, right ?
      Sorry if i disappointed you for next story, but be frank i only read Swasan story, even i less to read Swaragini story, moreover we have different fav.. Thank you

      • nammu on May 2, 2017 5:19 pm

        mica ..i want to clear ur doubt clearly..first of all … its just a serial named “swaragini”..did u hear it ??….and after reading the link u gave,,..i need to clear that ..if some fans of rags are writing ff like that ..it doestnt mean that all the fans of her wud write like that…understand??.
        and i will clear u another doubt …it is just a” FANFICTION”…OK ???..and how can u be so offensive like this??….just put yourself in my state ….will u be happy ..if someone has said u like this to your story..how will u feel??…and as per my readers wish which i also liked and wished to do it with full heart ..and i make u remember this again …iam also a fan of swasan..did u hear it mica??…and iam not making ragini to be with another man (to be frank and clear to u)
        so if u cant encourage me then pls for god’s sake pls dont atleast discourage me…i hope u got it……and sorry to interfere u like this….becoz i felt that i shud clear everything to u ..thats y i commented like this

      • mica on May 2, 2017 6:23 pm

        Nammu.. since beginning i knew that there is serial named SWARAGINI which have COUPLE RAGLAK AND SWASAN ONLY, swa—————lak was only intro and rag———————– san NEVER exist, so what ?? anything wrong in my words ? just tell me ?
        you called yourself Rag fans, on that serial Rag only love Laksh.. soo FROM WHERE you get Rag———————–san as pair ha ????

        Ohhoooo…… you even planning to write Rag—————–San in this story, so why can’t i include you to them who love to SEE Rag with different man except her husband ?
        Dear, i dunno which one i should to believe, HERE YOU SAID YOU LOVE SWASAN, but on your previous comment you say this :

        ” thank u to everyone but ..iam sorry …iam a die heart fan of ragsan,raglak and swalak..but that doest’nt mean i dont like swasan ..i too like swasan ”

        Between LOVE and LIKE, there is different feeling dear, SORRY if i said that you have NO feeling to Swasan, but from your some reply comments above, you kinda offering to write Swasan ff as compensation…. i just wanna clear you that we don’t need it. WE DON’T NEED ANY COMPENSATION BY NEW SWASAN FF for RUINING SWASAN MEMORABLE RACK.
        We don’t want you write Swasan FF feeling FORCED, wish you understand my point.

        and to be clear, i DON’T discourage you, i’m try to be honest for YOUR EXPECTATION about my further SUPPORT as i’m only read Swasan story, not swaragini’s story, moreover you are rag fans, definitely this story will CONTENT Ragini more.
        That why i give kinda Apology comment.

        Well if only you love Swasan and not feeling forced to write it…. maybe someday i will glad to read it, after all, your writing kinda enjoyable to read.
        Wish everything clear on you.
        really sorry if my forthright hurt you, but i don’t want to fake anything.

    41. nammu on May 2, 2017 4:56 pm

      no dear …i didnt say that i have no feelings for swasan..i too love swasan…and actually iam having a new experience in writing a love track for swasan and raglak..and iam happy about it and pls dont hurt others feelings too..by saying rag’s fans(which even includes me) like that …becoz it really hurts mica..and i am apologizing becoz of my mistake..and also i replied u that i respect ur opinion and iam already into it but ur still saying that iam not a of swasan and y shud u drag rag’s fans here??..i am sorry too say..i am really disappointed only becoz of the current comment u have commented…but its ok becoz its your right to comment your views but that doesnt mean that u have to hurt others feelings..ok lets leave this issue ..i hope we are good now…. and iam extremely sorry if i had hurt ur feelings..becoz iam a little sensitive

      • mica on May 2, 2017 7:03 pm

        Glad that you love swasan also, as i read you only like swasan, not love it, maybe i missed it..
        Dear,,,, i dunno since when you join TU, but this STEALING HUSBAND thingy become BIGGEST issue among us…
        I INTENTIONALLY say that WORD as they NEVER ever understand about it.
        If IT’s HURTING you, so, STOP IT !!! STOP TO MAKE RAGINI to be SO characterless kinda like that !
        You (all), Ragini fans said that you love Ragini, but by YOUR (all) EGO, You created Ragini such a girl who greedy in men, Stealing other girls partner to be hers.. (PURE RAGLAKIAN not included)
        Why you can’t happy with RagLak ? Ragini love laksh to the core, but here and there, her fans busy to paired her with every men and even you, ALMOST PAIRING HER with her sister’s husband, right ? 😀
        We are just outsider who so much angry as our couple got stolen.
        We tried polite way to make them understand, but nothing happen…
        Don’t you see, even other fandom called Rag fans as shameless, right ? it’s not nonsense talk as on many FF many author pairing Rag with other men and her fans ACCEPT it.

        Oh ya, sorry, despite the fact that Rag-fans already IN as kakali said, i always love to drag it also 😀 to reply rag fans comment about us…. (if only you notice everything) 😛
        btw, good luck all the best for your story..
        ups, still if you feel hurt that Rag fans or even rag to be called as characterless, just stop to portrait Rag characterless by changing partner,…i’m sure that bad thing will stop also.

      • nammu on May 2, 2017 10:22 pm

        mica..i love the couples swasan ,swalak,raglak and ragsan.. i also read different ff’s about them and that doesnt mean i will always change their pairs in a ff and a 1000nd sorries for my first mistake and pls dont think that i will always change pairs of ragini in one ff ..and not all the fans of rags will be changing her pairs as u said ..only some do like that….and i admit that i almost tried to pair her with her sister’s husb ..and iam sry for that ..but pls dont include me that i always change pairs for ragini..no iam not now….in this ff iam not going to change any pairs..and in the future if i write any ff’s i wud write it in a new storyline with the other pairings..as it is a new story…and pls dont misunderstand me again that iam swaping the pairs for a new story in my future ff’s because i want to write different stories with different pairings…that’s my p.o.v..so pls dont say again that ragini’s fans always change the pairs everytime..it is not like that ..it differes from ppl’s opinion..i hope u took this in a positive way

    42. Kakali on May 2, 2017 5:25 pm

      Thnk u sooo much for considering out feelings Namuuuuuuuu.! Wish you the best for your upcoming episodes.!!

      Namuuuuu, Mica hasn’t dragged Ragz fan here, because they are already IN.! You was supposed to write on Rag_____________San ruining our ever memorable track.! So I guess Ragini was already included here..!!
      Whenever writers will try to pair Sanskar up with his sister Ragini,
      SwaSanians will say about Ragini & her fans as they can accept anything..!! No matter what.!
      You are sensitive so as WE, every time writers(Rag_________San,bro-sis lover) snatch Sanskar or any other man(You can also include Ranveer,Manik,Kunj,Omkara etc) hurting SwaSan fans.! Urghhhh! Nobody is having the LICENCE to hurt others! BUT THEY DO.!
      SO THE REACTION IS INDEED FIXED.!
      Blehhh, see what I’m blabbering as if it’s going to affect someone..!!

      Once again Thnk u for understanding our emotions dear..!! ;-*

      • nammu on May 2, 2017 7:07 pm

        no probe kakali..and thank u for ur wishes

    43. mica on May 3, 2017 5:33 pm

      Nammuu….. seem you misunderstood what i told you about change pair.
      It’s not about what happen in A story…. but about the all story..
      You know what ? in this Fandom world, every Characters have their own RESPECTIVE PARTNER, WHICH HAVE THEIR OWN FANDOM.
      Kunj belong to Twinkle, Ranveer belong to Ishani, Sanskar belong to Swara, Manik belong to Nandini, Abhi belong to Pragya, Arjun Mehra belong to Radhika, Raman belong to Ishita, Mann belong to Geet, Arnav belong to Kushi, Laksh SHOULD belong to Ragini..etc, etc, etc.

      It’s kinda untold rule that EVERY CHARACTER SHOULD BE PAIR WITH THEIR OWN RESPECTIVE PARTNER…. EACH EVERY FANDOM RESPECT THAT EXCEPT YOUR FRIENDS…..
      I NEVER see Any Fans who busy to steal other partner to be their favorite’s partner except Rag fans. (sorry if it’s hurting, but it’s the real truth)
      We all busy to create story ON OUR FAV with their respective couple as we ADORE THEIR LOVE STORY,.
      ISVEER FANS BUSY TO WRITE STORY ABOUT ISVEER, they never think to pairing Ishani with Mann who belong to Geet, or pairing Ranveer with twinkle no matter what..
      Arshi fans busy to write Story about Arshi, withot thinking to pairing to others..
      Twinj Fans never think to pairing one of them to other or at least steal other partner to be Kunj or Twinkle.
      BUt, at least Rag fans…… Sometime pairing Rag with Omkara (kunal) on 1 ff,
      sometime pairing Rag with Ranveer( shakti)’s ishani on other ff,
      pairing Rag with Kunj’s twinkle on Wattpad
      pairing Rag with Manik’s Nandini.
      and LOVE to STEAL HER SISTER HUSBAND, Sanskar…..
      That’s why once Isveer fans knew about it, they call Rag fans shameless as they pairing Rag with other character except her ONLY HUSBAND, Laksh.
      And now, you preparing to write Rag——————————————san as pair…
      (UNIVERSAL TRUTH THAT SANSKAR IS SWARA HUSBAND)). so, i don’t have choice except joining you to them na.. sorry…
      btw, call me offensive, but many fans will do what i done,
      you wanna prove ? try to pairing Rag with Kunj or Manik or Ranveer and post your story to TEI page or Manan page or MATSH page… you will get bash for sure.

      • mica on May 3, 2017 6:15 pm

        uugghhhh,,, sorry!! what i was blabbering na… do whatever you want…allthe best for your story

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