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Home»Fan Fiction»Swaragini a new journey part 7
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Swaragini a new journey part 7

kitkatBy kitkatNovember 25, 201730 Comments12 Mins Read
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Hey friend’s kitkat here with next part of my ff n sorry this time too i m late……..

But friends last time the no of comments I got on this ff were too less which disappointed me to the core…..

No one even bothered about the entries I mentioned…..

If u won’t comment I will stop posting this ff n I m serious this time….

N #lotu n #anu even u can’t make me understand this time…..

This chapter is dedicated to my birth babes Aneesha n Manju….

HAPPY BIRTHDAY my elder n baby sisters…..

I love u girls….

And I wrote this ff specially on request of #anaz….

So here we go…..

For those who missed it…

PART-6 Here

PART-7

The new entry is,

Padma Mann Singh :- Played by Kishori Shahane-Vij (Mother of Ratan from PPK). A traditional Rajasthani Marwadi woman with morden thoughts…. Married to a royal family from Jaipur,Rajasthan…. Sister of DP n RP…. Elder to DP and younger to RP….. Called as Bua maa/ Bua ji by All youngsters…..

The scene opens with the opening of OT door after 4 hours n doctor came out….

All the Maheshwari’s worriedly rushed to them….

R( suppressing her sob):- Doctor how is my daughter??? She is fine na???

Laksh felt bad for her condition n kept a hand around her shoulder giving her a side hug…..

Dr :- the operation was successful Mrs. Maheshwari and even Mishka is out of danger but we cant give any more details till she gain conscious…..

Hearing this the sob which Ragini was suppressing broke and she bursted in a cry…. n buried her face in Laksh’s chest while he hugged her back tightly….

All fell bad for her…..

Dr :- Mr. Maheshwari please can you come with me??? I have something to talk with you….

L( breaking the hug):- Yes sure doctor…. I will follow you… you please proceed….

The doctor nodded n went to his cabin…..

L( cupped ragini’s face n wiped her tears):- don’t worry nothing is gonna be wrong I promise. You sit here n i will b back. Hmm??

Ragini just nodded in yes while composing herself…

L:- Swara, shomi maa plz be with her plz…

Swara n sharmishtha nodded n mishti assured him though her eyes that she will take care and Laksh left to talk with the doctor….

Swara made Ragini sit on a bench and mishti sat beside Ragini n gave her water to drink brought by Sanskar….

Ragini kept her head on Mishti’s chest feeling weak n closed her eyes…. while Mishti engulf her in a soft hug n started brushing Ragini’shairs with her fingers ….

Sa:- I will bring something for you to eat Ragini. You didn’t ate anything from many hours..

Ragini opened her eyes hearing this but still sitting in same position…

R:- Please no Sanskar… I m not feeling to eating anything…

AP:- But beta for the baby you need to eat…. and Sanskar don’t buy anything from here…. its not good for baby n Ragini… I n Sujata will bring something for her from home… Kyun sujata???

Su:- Ha jiji you are correct. Swara-Sanskar be with her n Sharmishtha ji is also here. We will return soon…

Shomi n swasan nodded n AP suji left….

DP, RP n Shekhar were looking after police proceedings and Uttara , Shomi n Swara were with Ragini…

Sanskar had gone to meet doctor with Laksh….

Just then Laksh and Sanskar returned….

Ragini stoodup n Rushed to him….

R( to Laksh):- Is Mishka ok???

L:- yes she is fine but is a bit weak so we need to take special care of her….

Ragini nodded and then turned to doctor….

R:- Doctor can I meet her just once??( joining her hands) plz….

Dr:- No need to plead Mrs. Laksh… You can meet her… but please don’t disturb her… let her rest and only two of you can meet her at a time….

Ragini nodded in yes with a smile n wiped her tears….

Laksh too smiled to her n they both entered the special ward where Mishka was shifted.

Raglak’s heart flinched to see their princess in such state with oxygen mask and numerous wires around her n she was there lying a lifeless doll….

Ragini sat on a stool beside Mishka while Laksh was on opposite side…

Ragini kissed Mishka’s forehead and then her hand and then slowly brush her hairs with her fingers….

Laksh too held mishka’s another hand firmly but softly n with delicate touch….

Raglak shared a painful eyelock….

All the Maheshwari’s present there were watching them from the glass window of the ward….

Sometime later Laksh dozed off in sitting position with his head near mishka on bed n he had her hand in his still while Ragini felt uncomfortable to sit on hard stool so without disturbing Laksh she went to sit on couch n dozed off within fraction of seconds as sleep overtook her…..

Raglak’s sleep was disturbed by ap N Suji as they brought food for them n Raglak were forced to eat from their mother’s hands….

AP made Laksh eat the food while shomi made Ragini have hers…..

Suddenly Ragini’s attention was caught by some moments in Mishka’s finger’s….

It brought a smile on her face….

R:- Laksh I saw moment in Mishu’s fingers….

Laksh hurriedly called the doctor n all were asked to go out of ward….

After sometime doctor came out with a smile….

Dr:- nothing to worry Mr n Mrs Maheshwari…. Your daughter is absolutely alright now…. she just needs a lot of rest n then soon she will b normal…..

Laksh side hugged Ragini n just then a nurse came running from mishka’s ward….

N :- Sir the patient is gaining conscious…..

Hearing this Raglak rushed in along with the doctor…

Mishka slowly opened her eyes n blinked them two three times to clear her blur vision n then slowly whispered in a weak tone…..

M:- Mom-Dad…

Ragini sat beside her by holding her hand n kissed her forehead while caring it n Laksh kneeled beside her n kissed her knuckles by holding her palm….

All were relived after this….

After 10 days Mishka was discharged and whole day before n after the discharge all were around her to pamper her n even Ragini was not ready to leave her side even for a second……….

Laksh sometimes use to get irritate by the fact that the two most important girls in his life him were ignoring him…..

Ragini for 10 days after Mishka’s discharge use to sleep with her in Mishka’s new which was made ready before her discharge n Mishka was in love with it….

But this didn’t went well with Laksh as he thought that Mishka might hurt Ragini or baby in the slip by moments of her hands and leg….

But he felt good once Ragini came back to their room….

One night after 15 days of mishka’s discharge….

@Raglak room….

Laksh was sitting on his side of bed and going through some files…..

Ragini was laying on her side…..

R:- Laksh….

L:-hmm…

Engrossed in his file….

R( a bit loud):-Laksh…

L:- Speak ragini I m listening…..

R:- Leave it n be in your files….. I m only mad trying to talk with you…..( she said in an annoyed n mocking tone while facing towards sealing….)

Laksh chuckled n smiled at her antiques while dragging her in a soft hug….

L:- Not for you then for whom will be my time utilized sweetheart????

R:- for my Soutan…( she replied with a pout while playing with the rope of his jacket cap….)

Laksh gave her a questioning look…. While ragini pointed at his file and Laksh smiled with a short laugh n hugged her tightly n peaked her pout which later turned into a kiss….

Ragini too reciprocated n a while later they broke the kiss due to lack of oxygen…..

Ragini buried her face in his chest while blushing with a permanent smile….

Laksh smiled at his cute wifes antiques n unknowingly tightened his grip on her waist….

Ragini felt pain n hissed making Laksh realise his grip n his grip on her got loosed quickly……

L:- Sorry Ragini are you ok Bachha???

R:- Yes Laksh I m fine n our champ is not so weak ok???

L:- How do you know its your champ?? It might be my second princess too….

R:- No I already have one daughter n she needs a brother for tying Rakhi so I want a son now???

L( a bit surprised):- just because Mishka needs a brother to tie Rakhi u want a son??

R:- yup…

L:- Oh god….

Ragini smiled at his annoyance…..

L:- Ok thats too fine…. Saying so he again hugged Ragini…

R:- Laksh I have my appointment for sonography tomorrow… so u will come na with me???

L:- Actually Ragini I wanted to come but have a very important meeting so plz can you go with Swara…

Ragini felt a bit hurt n angry but pretended to be ok….

R:- Its ok Laksh I will go with swara… Meeting is more important than our baby… but I will really miss you as its our baby’s first sonography….

L( Parting n cupped her face):- Ragini I too wanna come sweetheart but you know right that this meeting is really Important n I m incharge of this deal n presentation is too made by me… Plz I m really sorry….

Ragini removed his hands from her face….

R:- Its ok Laksh but now I m too tired n need to sleep… Good night…

N she instantly closed her eyes and laid on the bed without waiting for his reply…..

Laksh easily understood that his queen is angry on him n laid on his side without a word anymore…

Next morning…

@Raglak room….

Ragini had already made mishka ready n send her to school…. n now she was getting ready for going to hospital…. She was still sad that Laksh won’t be with her for their baby’s first sonography….

She kept all belongings of Laksh on bed and as soon as she saw a smiling Laksh coming out from washroom n approaching towards her she made a serious face n left the room….

L( sighed n muttered to himself):- Laksh beta tu toh gaya aaj….

@Dining table…..

All gents were having breakfast and ladies were serving them while Ragini was sitting on a corner chair while applying butter n jam on bread as AP n SUJI didn’t wanted her to stress herself….

Just Laksh was missing n then he too came down after a while….

L:- Good Morning all…

All greeted him…

S:- Good Morning Lucky…

He greeted him with a smile….

L:- Bhai today I will be late for office n won’t be able to attend the meeting…. So, can you plz give the presentation on behalf of me???

All were shocked hearing this from him n that too in such a casual tone specially Ragini as all knew how much he had worked for this deal with all his affords….

S:- But lucky its your hardwork… So how can I take the credit??

L:- I know Sanskar but it’s Ragini’s first sonography today. So, its important for me to be with her…..

All smiled at his love n concern for her n the babies and Swara side hugged a shocked Ragini…..

DP:- Ok Laksh if this is the reason then Sanskar will give the presentation. Is it ok Sanskar???

S:- Offcourse badepapa… Ragini needs Laksh now so surely I will manage…..

AP n Suji went to Ragini n kissed her forehead while cupping her face….

Raglak shared an eyelock with worlds love visible in Laksh’s eyes…..

Ragini mouthed a thanks to him through lipsing n Laksh nodded in no as if denyingher from potraying it as his faver on her…..

Just then a servent came running….

Ser(to dp):- Sir a woman have came outside and is saying herself as Padma Maan Singh your younger sister….

All were shocked and surprise, but later a smile appeared on everyone’s face, while Swaragini were still confused….

DP:- Go n bring her in with respect. She is my younger sister….

DP n Rp stood up n rushed to door followed by very excited Sanlak while ladies brought arti thal to welcome her….

@MM door….

Buaji or Sanlak’s Buamaa was standing there with a broad smile on her face….

AP took her arti n then she took blessings from DP n hugged DP, RP n Sanlak….. AP n Suji too hugged her Suji took blessings from her….

Swaragini came forward to take her blessings but she stopped Ragini from bending….

B:- No beta its not good for you to bend in such state…..

Bua maa cared Swaragini’s face n kissed forehead of both of them…..

B:- Durga bhai, both of ur DIL’s are very Sanskari n beautiful as bhabhi described and(looking everywhere) where is my gudiya uttara n our new princess??? What is her name…???

R( intrupted):- Mishka….

B:- Ha Mishka… I m very excited to meet her….

AP:- Uttara went to collage n Mishka to school…. they will return home in afternoon….

Bua smiled but then her expressions changed to serious suddenly…

B:- And where is ur so called eldest bahu Pari….??? Have heard a lot of stories of her bravery aof molesting our family…

All went silent hearing Pari’s name…. n then DP was about to answerbut just then a familier voice startled them all…

“You remembered me n here I m Buaji”….

Sceen freezed on shocked faces of all….

Precap:- A small surprise…. Bua maa’s cute bonding with Ragmik n Pari to create Problems for Ragini….

So friends,

Here i m back again…

How was this chapter??

N what you think about Bua maa’s character??

I know u had guess the old entry till now but do tell me ur guess via comments….

So more no of likes votes n comments, more quicker next updates…..

Waiting….

#kitkat

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    30 Comments

    1. AMMU on November 25, 2017 5:26 pm

      its very nice. please post the next part as soon as possible

    2. Asha on November 25, 2017 5:53 pm

      Nyc di… Dont stp ur work waiting for d comments…. Plz do continue…

    3. Raglak_fan on November 25, 2017 6:28 pm

      Fantastic dear

    4. Bela on November 25, 2017 8:01 pm

      Bua seems okay…..for now. I don’t know, what of you give a twist???
      Laksh is so caring, Ragini toh only cares about Mishka???.
      Don’t worry about comments, TU is seeing a call in them, thanks to the new like/dislike option and all. Keep writing❤❤❤

    5. Sherin on November 25, 2017 9:03 pm

      Awesome dear

    6. Aamy on November 25, 2017 9:20 pm

      Awesome

    7. Malu on November 25, 2017 9:37 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    8. Fairy on November 26, 2017 2:05 am

      Aww!!!Raglak moments were???? so so so amzngg!!! Kitty pretty??? u rocked it grl???? sooo soooperbb!!! Keep roxkng n stay blessed!!umaah????

    9. Vennila on November 26, 2017 9:13 am

      Awesome

    10. shri on November 26, 2017 9:15 am

      awesome di are gonna bring ragini ki twin diya.oops am I right?I am waiting if its dira

    11. teitokUn1718
      teitokUn1718 on November 26, 2017 1:31 pm

      Fabulous…
      Old entry is Adarsh & Pari…

    12. Arjuna on November 26, 2017 3:58 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    13. Rehna on November 26, 2017 6:02 pm

      Superb dear

    14. Elizebathlovely on November 26, 2017 7:11 pm

      Awesome

    15. Raglak_fan on November 26, 2017 8:33 pm

      Fabulous dear

    16. Pearly on November 26, 2017 9:29 pm

      Superb part

    17. Anju on November 27, 2017 12:02 pm

      Awesome episode

    18. dharani
      dharani on November 27, 2017 12:04 pm

      Sorry sorry a big sorry kitty… Don’t know how I missed this part… It is awesome and very happy that mishika is fine… And Raglak love as usual adorable. And again that pari is back oh god now dont know what all she will do… Hope everything will be fine… Love you baby…. Post next one soon

    19. Thahseem on November 27, 2017 7:45 pm

      Amazing

    20. Laashya
      Laashya on November 27, 2017 9:41 pm

      Wonderful episode di

    21. Pinki on November 28, 2017 3:51 pm

      Mind blowing

    22. Soumya on November 28, 2017 4:22 pm

      Superb di…post next soon

    23. Vini on November 28, 2017 5:03 pm

      Loved it, keep going

    24. Zoya on November 28, 2017 8:40 pm

      Different story

    25. Ashly on November 29, 2017 3:32 pm

      Superb fantastic awesome

    26. Monu on November 29, 2017 8:43 pm

      Interesting dear

    27. Ammu on November 29, 2017 9:53 pm

      I’m really sorry for very late comment and I really missed your stories. As usual interesting episode dear. Raglak scenes are really beautiful. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP. Love u dear And take care

    28. Tani on November 30, 2017 7:59 am

      Awesome

    29. Jiyani
      Jiyani on November 30, 2017 9:08 am

      Awesome dear…do continue

    30. Monisha on November 30, 2017 3:38 pm

      Excellent dear

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