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Home»Fan Fiction»swabhimaan ff (chapter 2) long lasting love
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swabhimaan ff (chapter 2) long lasting love

ThreemaimaiBy ThreemaimaiMarch 26, 201720 Comments4 Mins Read
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hey guys in my 1st ep i forgot to put any note. this is my 1st ff so hope you guys enjoy it plz do comment. i am really sorry if there are any spellings and grammatical mistakes.

chapter 02

Karan was sitting on his bed and listening to the music which made by himself. suddenly door was open. naina came in to the room like a strom and tears falls like a waterfall from her eyes. karan was confused.
” naina what happen? why are you crying?”
“finally you got what you want karan… I’m leaving this house”
karan got shocked. he couldn’t find any words to say. but he was sure he was not happy about what naina said which he should be happy since he wanted that way.
naina was packing her things. just in time meghana and kunal entered to the room
” chiku listen to me. you can’t behave like this… chiku…” meghana try to stop naina from her packing.

” ha naina you can’t leave now. it’s near to mid night” kunal also tried to convince naina to stop. karan was still in a shock.
” today no one can stop me di. i am leaving even dadu.. this is my life matter and i will solve it in my own way..” naina took her bag and leave the room.
meghana fold her hand Infront of karan,
” karan please do something.. or she will leave for real. please karan please…..”
finally karan came into his right sense and ran after naina. naina already got in to the taxi which was already park on their door step.
dadu came to karan ” karan choti bohu is really angry and we couldn’t stop her. please go after her”,

karan didn’t utter a single word he ran after naina and got in to the taxi.
” naina listen to me. you can’t go boondi at this hour. its really late and roads are not safe”
” uncle let’s go. ” naina didn’t bother about what karan was saying.
” ok you want to go then just go bye.”
karan tried to get off from the car but suddenly naina hold his shirt and looked at him with tear ful eyes. then she slowly utter “please”
karan felt that he need to protect her and he is the only one that she can lean on now. for the first time feeling of taking the responsibility sink in to his heart.
” uncle let’s go wherever she wanted to go”
taxi leave the chauhan house. dadu and meghana had a smile on their faces which no one noticed.
naina didn’t talk not even crying and karan smell something fishy about this behavior so he asked

” where are we going? ”
” sir New Delhi then Narendra Nagar ” driver answer quickly because naina signed him.
” what? NEW DELHI… but why?”
he turned to naina but naina already in sleep mode. now karan is about to go crazy he tried to wake naina but it didn’t work. so he gave up .
karan manage to stay awake untill they stop for breakfast. now they are far from their home. naina still sleeping. karan staring at her. he noticed that her hair is disturbing for her sleep and it bothers to him as well. so he covered his hand from his handkerchief and tried to put them behind her ears.

he was getting more closer to her now he can feel her breath as well and he can hear his own heart pounding very fast. suddenly naina opened her eyes and saw karan is so close to her. both got shy. karan stepped back and got down from the taxi.
” karan are you angry with me?” naina put her head out of the taxi.
” as long as you answer my questions i want angry with you”
naina also got down from the taxi.
“what do you want to know?”
“where are we going?” , ” new Delhi”

“i know that, for what?” , ” anandha ayurvedic center to get you treated”
karan was confused. he forgot his next question.
“WHAT??????” thats all karan could say.

to be continued.

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    20 Comments

    1. Vanisha on March 27, 2017 12:03 am

      Nice

    2. Threemaimai on March 27, 2017 12:10 am

      thank you……….. ๐Ÿ™‚

    3. Juveria on March 27, 2017 12:11 am

      Awesome episode post as soon as possible. Eager to read the next chapter and u wrote nice

      • Threemaimai on March 27, 2017 12:41 am

        wow you are really sweet. glad you enjoyed the story. I will try my best to upload nxt one quickly.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    4. Tamihna0808 on March 27, 2017 12:41 am

      Too good, can’t wait for the next part! ?

      • Threemaimai on March 27, 2017 6:08 am

        omg seriously you guys like it? wow thank you so much for the comment ๐Ÿ™‚

    5. Shabnam on March 27, 2017 1:23 am

      Awesome naina atitude keep writing

      • Threemaimai on March 27, 2017 6:10 am

        thank you so much for your encouragement. ๐Ÿ™‚

    6. Prettypreeti on March 27, 2017 8:32 am

      Again a spectacular episode..just loved it too the core..
      Happy to see our nairan..
      Just awesome
      Loved it
      Keep it up
      Post soon

      • Threemaimai on March 27, 2017 3:04 pm

        once again thank you so much for your appreciation… i will try my best to upload nxt ep soon ๐Ÿ™‚

    7. Dharshaini on March 27, 2017 10:17 am

      Amazing update… totally love naina avatar of taking a stand for her and karan… eagerly waiting for next update… please post next update soon…

      • Threemaimai on March 27, 2017 3:06 pm

        i really wanted to see naina as a strong character and i am so happy that you guys also loved it

    8. hetzmkn on March 27, 2017 10:57 am

      hahaha… dadaji and meghna surely played along in this story…. nice one.. looking forward for the next chapter…

      • Threemaimai on March 27, 2017 3:07 pm

        you will see…. :)…

    9. Aarzu on March 27, 2017 12:05 pm

      Nice…. Keep writing….. All the best

      • Threemaimai on March 27, 2017 3:08 pm

        thank youuuu….. ๐Ÿ™‚

    10. Nila on March 27, 2017 1:41 pm

      superb epi l like nairan scenes it’s really good keep going and make little bit long plz consider this

      • Threemaimai on March 27, 2017 3:09 pm

        you have to wait a bit longer …… hehehe i will consider about it

    11. Yashu on March 27, 2017 2:42 pm

      Lovely dear….waiting 4 nxt…

      • Threemaimai on March 27, 2017 3:10 pm

        i am super duper happy…. thank you so much for commenting

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