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Home»Fan Fiction»swabhimaan ff (chapter 09) long lasting love
Fan Fiction Swabhimaan

swabhimaan ff (chapter 09) long lasting love

ThreemaimaiBy ThreemaimaiApril 1, 201728 Comments5 Mins Read
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chapter 09

i was watching mom and dad leaving from a distance. i was on the balcony,
” bye mom” kunal bhai also with me. we both waved our hands to say them good bye.
i was 4 at that time.
my mom looked at us and gave a flying kiss. then they leave with dadu.
” one week without mom hash….” kunal bhai went inside.
I cried while sitting their. i felt lonely so i went to see masi ma.
she is someone related to my mother and yesterday she came here to look after us.
i saw she in the garden.
but i couldn’t found her. there was a lady talking with a guy
” I finally got what i wanted… nk will loose his faith towards nirmala and all of these will be mine..”
i got sceared so i ran to kunal bhai but they cought me. I tried to escape but i couldn’t.
she drag me to a dark room. scold me hit me with belt i was there for two days ,
no one came to save me.
i was about faint door was open someone took me to the hospital, that’s masi ma
she told me i was diagnosed with a skin allergy. I touched her hand i saw she also had same patches just like me.
then she said
” karan don’t touch anyone you are making others also ill”
karan sounded crying
i saw my mom was crying but i was sceard to tell the truth.
voice ” what truth karan ? truth about the lady?”
no one will believe me. everyone rejected me dad even didn’t looked at me. only mom and dadu was worried about me.
all i could say to her , she shouldn’t have left me that day then none of this will never happen.
voice ” karan you can trust me. i will believe every single word what you saying, tell me who was she?”
her face is not clear she stand in dark she..is…aaaaaaaaaaaaa…. aaaaa…

” doctor what’s happening why karan screaming” naina looked worried. she cant hold this anymore. karan was in pain
” karan” ,
” naina stop he has to relise his pain ” rahul stop her.
amital is working karan was still in the unconscious world. he was screaming with the pain of truth.
voice ” karan calm down and tell me who was she? ”
” she is …. masi ma……” karan started cry like a baby. naina couldn’t hold anymore she ran to karan and hold him tightly.
doctor inject him medicine which will make him come back to right conscious.

few minutes later karan open his eyes.
he still can’t believe the fact about masi ma. karan got violent and start to scream and cry. naina hold him tightly and gave a hug.
but she still couldn’t control him.
so doctor gave another injection to fall him sleep.a
few seconds karan felt sleepy and rest on nainas lap. doctors left the house and gave some instructions to rahul since naina also not in right mind to listen.
naina patted karans head tears fells on to karans face.

karan opened his eyes, he was all alone there was no one in the room. tears falls from his eyes. he still can’t figure out what’s happening.
it was evening karan slowly came out of the house.
someone came behind from him
” picka booo”
it was naina ” karan wear this, i want you to come with me”
naina offers him thick jacket with a hood. karan was surprised ti see naina with a denim. she looks like a British girl.
dark blue denim with red and black checl shirt gives her a stunning look. she also wears thick jacket .
” come with me karan hurry up”
naina ran to hill. lifeless karan slowly followed her.
both finally reached to the top of the mountain. karan watchedthe sun sets naina was behind him.
” karan you did well i am so proud of you”
karan was about to turn but before that naina gave a back hug to him.
first karan got sceard but his thick jacket made him relaxed.
” karan do you trust me?” naina hugged him tightly rest her head on his back.
but karan didn’t reply
“please karan all I need your trust.
put your trust on me karan i wan’t let you down I promise”
karan looked at nainas bear hands he wanted to tuch it and say that he trust her more than his life.
under the dusk sky they had a silent conversation.

to be continued.

sooooooo… what do you think? I really hope this chapter didn’t brake your hopes. thank you so much guys for your support. sry for silly spellings and grammatical mistakes πŸ™‚

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    28 Comments

    1. Sneha sat on April 1, 2017 12:26 am

      Threemaimai u r a awesome writer……this epi brought my heart in mouth…..i was deeply touched pls update next epi as soon as possible cant wait!!!!?

      • Threemaimai on April 1, 2017 12:46 am

        aww…. thats so sweet of you… i am soo happy that you enjoyed it. thank you so much πŸ™‚

    2. Vanisha on April 1, 2017 12:34 am

      Nice

      • Threemaimai on April 1, 2017 12:47 am

        thank you πŸ™‚

    3. Juveria on April 1, 2017 12:42 am

      I lovely nairan scene please post as soon as possible. Eager to read the next chapter and u r fabulous writer and story is becoming more interesting day by day I love it

      • Threemaimai on April 1, 2017 12:49 am

        thank you so much for commenting dr…..
        i will try my best to upload soon πŸ™‚

    4. shabnam on April 1, 2017 12:42 am

      Awesome

      • Threemaimai on April 1, 2017 6:59 am

        thank you…. πŸ™‚

    5. Aarzu on April 1, 2017 12:48 am

      Amazing……. I loved it to the core please update ASAP….. U r really an amazing writer

      • Threemaimai on April 1, 2017 9:43 am

        thank you πŸ™‚

    6. Titli on April 1, 2017 1:38 am

      Am a silent reader.. butbreading this epi couldnt control myself.. jst amazing writing.. just ur writing made me greedy.. so can u pls write a little longer epis..
      But first thank you so much for ur ff.. its very heart warming to see u all writers writing story for unknown ppl like us.. its an honour for ppl like us.. love u guys..
      And now let me give u some compliments of ur beautiful expressing of the story.. while reading, i get lost in the story completely.. and when it comes to an end, i m like “gosh its over… why???” I knw its weird but the thing is ur writing made me wierd..seriously u r a fabulous writer.. words r less to express my views on u.. just all d best.. and a big thank you!!!

      • Titli on April 1, 2017 1:38 am

        Its reading.. not breading..

      • Threemaimai on April 1, 2017 9:47 am

        hey thank you so much for your sweet comment. once i was also also a silent reader. but swabhimaan ff which written by thami sis inspired me to write my own ff. i am glad and so happy my ff also influence you.
        actually I tried to write long post but felt i was running out of ideas πŸ™‚ . i will try to make it longer

      • Titli on April 1, 2017 10:57 am

        Its okk.. actually i got a bit greedy.. ur idea is so nice.. love it.. and really u inspired me..

    7. Prettypreeti on April 1, 2017 8:06 am

      Threemaa i m like wowww..i now want this to happen in real story of swabhimann..j reallllly really liked it yaar..tune toh dil jeet liya..awesome tha
      My heart was saying ab kya hoga..
      And that syory that was just breath taking
      Loved it
      Post soon

      • Threemaimai on April 1, 2017 9:49 am

        awww your soo sweet thank you sooo much. ya me tooo wanted this happen in real story. letas wish naina will some how make a parth πŸ™‚

    8. Yashu on April 1, 2017 9:27 am

      Wow it was awesome dear…sry cuz i couldn’t comment on last few episodes…exams going on ? btw got tym read ur ff….it was fab…i loved it…waiting 4 nxt…

      • Threemaimai on April 1, 2017 9:51 am

        oooo thank you so much. hope you did well in exam and wish my ff made your mind relaxed too πŸ™‚

    9. Shruthy on April 1, 2017 10:35 am

      I TOLD YOU! ????❀️
      Karan had to fall for Naina stuck with her for one week. ??
      OMG him longing to touch her hand is just something and so precious as per NaiRan. I am … wordless. ??
      Trust me, your story is seriously one of my favourite. I so love it, as it’s mostly about NaiRan.?
      Naina hugging him to make him feel supported, always accompanied… Even Karan wants to feel her but! And this one moment has become something more special.
      “I trust you more than my life” ?☺️? K I L L M E !
      Overall I am just in awe emotions and I am excited to know what happens further. Please post soon ??

      • Threemaimai on April 1, 2017 1:24 pm

        ooo god… shruthy.. you comment gave a big smile to my face. ya this story all about nairans because i am a big fan of them. i am too super excited to see your comments for my next post πŸ™‚

      • Shruthy on April 2, 2017 4:16 am

        Awww glad it brougjt one ???? Oh woow then mazaa aaega ☺️❀️

    10. sakshi28gupta on April 1, 2017 12:06 pm

      Woowww?…..this is such an awesome chapter…I really loved it?….u are truly an amazing writer….plz plz plz post soon..can’t wait for the next part?
      Sakshi

      • Threemaimai on April 1, 2017 1:25 pm

        hey sakshi thank you so much.. gald you enjoyed it. πŸ™‚

    11. Mona on April 1, 2017 3:37 pm

      Wawo, it’s amazing. Pls update soon

      • Threemaimai on April 1, 2017 7:00 pm

        thank you mona … πŸ™‚

    12. SHREE on April 1, 2017 8:47 pm

      SOO NICE.PLZ POST A LONG CHAP.I WANT WANT TO READ THIS STORY MORE AND MORE.

    13. SHREE on April 1, 2017 8:50 pm

      SOO NICE.PLZ POST LONG CHAPS.I WANT TO READ THIS STORY MORE AND MORE.

    14. SHREE on April 1, 2017 8:52 pm

      SOO NICE.”I TRUST YOU MORE THAN MY LIFE”-THIS WAS THE BEST MOMENT.PLZ POST LONG CHAPS.I WANT TO READ THIS STORY MORE AND MORE.

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