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Home»Fan Fiction»swabhimaan ff (chapter 08) long lasting love
Fan Fiction Swabhimaan

swabhimaan ff (chapter 08) long lasting love

ThreemaimaiBy ThreemaimaiMarch 31, 201718 Comments6 Mins Read
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hey guys thank you so much for your support. I’m not going to talk much enjoy the story since i enjoyed it lot while writing… πŸ™‚

chapter 08

karan feels better after having some ayurvedic treatments. three more days has left. karan was thinking what should he do.

” karan drink this it’s good for your health”

naina gave thick green drink to him. karan took a one zip and he made a weird face and gave back to naina
” ohoo karan don’t be a child even alisha drink this without complaining” and give glass back to karan.

” ha bhiya …. think it’s as your favorite milk shake”
alisha was sitting on the top of the couch. now she spend most of her time with karan and they became close friends.
“but naina… I can’t ” karan was still refusing to drink.
” if you don’t i will touch you” naina came closer to karan and he drank it like a lightning. green drink got vanished.
” Good boy” naina took the glass with a smile.
” where is the kiss? ” alisha was having fun making karan uncomfortable but this time naina turned in to a cherry.
” ha aren’t you giving me a kiss? i need my reward”
karan also found it fun to tease naina. he have seen naina giving flying kisses to kids after they drink this bitter green drink.
“ha di where are they?” alisha also changed the side.
” oooo you two look like dumb and dumbber… catch this”
naina gave a flying kiss to karan then karan catched it and sealed it in his heart act like he got faint. alisha start to laugh.
naina ran to kitchen while hiding her face.
it was the last day of alisha. she will leave once her parents come. so naina invited her for a lunch.
time has come to leave alisha slowly touch nainas hand. she had a bright smile on her face then naina also gave a dashing smile in return.
” they are look same big cheeku & mini cheeku” karan had a smile on his face.
then alisha came near to karan
” i wish i could touch you as well”
” one day you will” tears comes to karans eyes seen alisha was about to cry.
” bye my lil cheeku be a good girl”
alisha gave her finale good bye to naina and karan.
alisha ran to her mother then she slowly kissed her hand
” i want to hug my mom and give thousands of kisses”
karan recalls alishas words
” you will champion”

karan felt lonely since naina also went to the center. he walked here and there
” i will go and see what naina doing”
karan looked everywhere but couldn’t found her. finally he heard her voice but it’s not sounds happy.
” can’t we do anything about this doctor”
” i saw his reports he even went for a therapist but no use as long as he locked himself”
” locked myself what?”
karan pushed the door and entered to the room. both naina and rahul got shocked by seen karan.
” karan.. please listen to me don’t get …” naina couldn’t say no more.
” you think i am crazy… how could you naina.. sooo all this treatments are useless….”
he crased the small pot in to Pisces and left.
“naina i think you should explain it to him”
naina ran after karan without saying anything
karan was leaving the place. he walked down in hillside road. naina was running behind him.
” karan stop .. please listen to me KARAN….”
naina grabbed his umbrella. karan turns to naina. his eyes were burning. naina hold the bottom of umbrella and pulled towards her while karan tried to pull it to his side.
” Naina let it go..” ,
” no first listen to me karan….” tears were pouring through her eyes.

” I SAID LET IT GOOOO..” karan shouted at her and pull the umbrella with much strength. naina lost her balance and fell down.
” aaaahaaa”
but karan left her there and about to leave naina grab his leg.
“please karan you can’t leave now… ”
karan tried to escape from her but failed and he also fell down.
naina was still hugging his leg , she was crying.
” please karan don’t make dadus effort useless.. please please please…”
“Dadu…. ? ”
karan got confused then naina realized what she have said.
” ha karan all of this plan by dadu”
naina looked at karan. they were sitting on the wet road which covered with mist. on side of the read views entire area.
karan looked at naina ” what?”
” I found your medical report and medicines and send them to vishal bhaiya. he said your illness can be cured”
” I don’t understand this?”
” ha karan i also found your cream and other medicines are expired. so i went to dadu and explain it. so he arranged all of this for you”

” what do you mean all expired? masi ma always took care of me, even my medicines”
” can you tell me about your childhood?”
karan think for a while,
” mmm i only can remember my recent past, how masi ma always protect me from papa.”
” can’t you remember how your allergy started?”
” mmmmm no.. i think its started when i was too small. I can’t remember meny things”
” doctor said couse of your illness hidden in your mind. if you find it yourself its really easy to cure you”
they say their for a while and walked home together.
Rahul heard someone knocking his door. it was karan.
” karan what are you doing at this hour?”
” i need someone who can bring my memory back. tomorrow if it’s possible”
” but karan it’s too dangerous. how about few therapy sessions”
” no i have tried it but didn’t get much result, my family didn’t say about this and i want know the truth”
” ok if you say so i will call one of my friend.”
” thank you rahul ”
naina was in a deep sleep there was marks of dry tears on her face. karan looked at her

” you don’t need to cry any more naina. I will wipe them with my own hand in near future,
now you have become part of my life naina I don’t want to loose you. i wish what ever happen tomorrow you will be with me as always you did”

to be continued.

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    18 Comments

    1. Prettypreeti on March 31, 2017 4:45 pm

      Hey threema awesome soooooooo goood one..am i the first..really girl u tooked away my peace now i m eager to know next happening..???
      Loved it soooooo muchhh
      Bravo
      Post sooon

      • Threemaimai on March 31, 2017 7:35 pm

        hehehe i am really sorry that i took your peace away…. πŸ™‚
        thank you so much for commenting πŸ™‚

    2. Naina on March 31, 2017 4:47 pm

      Aww! That was so cute…especially the last scene…

      • Threemaimai on March 31, 2017 7:36 pm

        thank youuuuuuuuuu…….. πŸ™‚

    3. Shabnam on March 31, 2017 4:56 pm

      Awesome next post soon waiting for nairan romance

      • Threemaimai on March 31, 2017 7:37 pm

        thank you so much Shabnam πŸ™‚

    4. sakshi28gupta on March 31, 2017 5:45 pm

      Hii.. I have been reading all the parts of your story but was not able to comment due to board exams… I am absolutely loving the story…totally hooked to it.. Can’t wait for the next part. Please post soon?
      Sakshi

      • Threemaimai on March 31, 2017 7:41 pm

        hey sakshi thank you so much for commenting. hope you did well in exam too πŸ™‚

    5. Aarzu on March 31, 2017 5:45 pm

      Hmmm…. Nyc 1 yrrr… Post ASAP

      • Threemaimai on March 31, 2017 7:44 pm

        thank you…. you too post soon πŸ™‚

    6. Juveria on March 31, 2017 6:50 pm

      Wow I love it can’t wait to read next chapter, please post as soon as possible. Eager to read the next chapter and u r fabulous

      • Threemaimai on March 31, 2017 7:46 pm

        hehehe thank you . now i am working on next chapter you will find it tomorrow… πŸ™‚

    7. Mamatha_Chinni on March 31, 2017 8:19 pm

      O my god…it was really amazing…

    8. Threemaimai on March 31, 2017 8:58 pm

      thank you…. πŸ™‚

    9. SHREE on March 31, 2017 9:09 pm

      ITS SOOOO LOVELY.I JUST LOVED IT.I AM A BIG NAIRAN FAN AND NEW HERE.WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE.AND ALSO WAITING FOR NAIRAN ROMANCE

      • Threemaimai on March 31, 2017 11:12 pm

        hehehe me too big fan of nairan. glad you comment shree. thank you πŸ™‚

    10. Vanisha on March 31, 2017 11:52 pm

      Loved it !!

      • Threemaimai on April 1, 2017 12:51 am

        thank you… :*

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