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“Surrender, My LOVE ..!!” DEVAKSHI 3 shots (shot 2)

Hey guys…I m back … So here is the next part of my os .. Thankyou so much guys for your valuable comments .. It means a lot to me .. I m very glad that u guys r liking it …
Loads of Love to u all …
So let’s start with the next part … !!!!
Scene 1
Dev opened the door and Ria came in …
Ria: Bhaiyyaa see my dress … How is it?
D: Nice …
Ria: Only nice … Its not looking good na .. (making puppy face)
D: No my princess its nothing like that … Its looking stunning … You’ll look very pretty in this ..
R: Suchhiii??
D: Muchhiii ..
R: Bhaii .. u r the best …
Ria went outside excitedly … Dev closes the door .. and came inside ..

Next Scene
A girl is shown entering the house .. She is wearing a black skirt with white top and is wearing black heels .. The camera comes infront … She is none other than Twinkle’s bestie Shruti …
S: Sona.. Sona .. where r u .. see i m here …
Asha,listening to her voice come in the hall ..
A: Array Shruti tu aagayi ..
S: Mein kesay naa aati afterall its my bestie’s wedding…
A: Achaa chal jaa Sona se mil aa werna aasman sir pe uthaa lay gi wo …
S: Haan me abhi jaati hun …
Saying this she heads towards Sona’s room ..
Sona’s room
She is in the thoughts of Dev when she heard a knock ..
Sonna: Who’s there ..?
No reply ..
She asked again n again but still no reply ..

In frustration she stands up and opens the door .. She was shocked to see the person standing infront of her …
Sona: Shrutiiiiiiiiiiiii…!
Shruti: Sonakshi munh band ker ly makkhi ghus jaaye gi …
They both hugged eo
She came inside the room…
Sona locked the door and came inside ..
sona:Shruti tu itni achanak …
Shruti: To wapis chali jaaon achaa nhi laga tujy mera aana …
Sona: Array yrr nhii i was just asking k tu bina bataye .. Acha chal leave all that .. fresh hojaa ..
Shruti: sona why r u looking so sad???
Sona: Nhii yrr its nothing like that .. tu fresh hojaa .. kitne sawaal kerti hai …
Sona: Hann thk hai … Me fresh hojati hun ..
She went outside the room and Sona again locked the door
Sona:(self talk) Shruti .. Tujhe Kya bataoun kiyun sad hun .. Nhii I have to be strong .. Mein kamzoor nhii pad saktiiii .. But kya karn Dev tumhara piyaar meri kamzoori hai .. Tum meri kamzoori ho .. Mein kisi ko kuch bata bhi to nhii sakti .. Maa ko bhi nhii .. coz i dont wanna see her sad ….
She starts crying ..
“Me kya karn .. Aj Dve se meri shadi hojaye gii .. phir me kya karo gii .. No sonakshi u have to be strong .. Me kamzoor nhi pad saktii … bhagwaan ji help me … plss Dev ki nafrat ko piyaar me badal do na plssss ..”
She starts crying vigorously …!!! Tears were gushing down from her eyes .. She couldn’t able to stop her tears..

Dixit Mansion
DEV’s room …
Dev was standing in his room’s balcony .. He was very depressed .. He was also having tears in his eyes ..
Dev:(self talk) Sonnakshi!!! I LOVE YOU its very hard to pretend that i hate u .. but truth is i love u from the core of my heart … Sonakshi me tujhe reason nhii bata sakta .. I can’t .. bhagwaan mujhe strength do na …
….Sonakshi I can’t tell you that i am suffering from ……………….
He couldn’t able to complete his sentence bcoz his tears were not allowing to do so …
The screen splits into two … On the left side it is shown Sona crying .. & on the right Dev crying ..
Both were unaware of eo others feelings …
(Hamari Adhuri Kahani plays in BG)

To Be Continued ……….

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I m sorry for short … but last one will be longest … May be i will post 3rd shot today itself … don’t know …!
Plss comments … kesa laga …? I know boring thaa …..! Sorry …!
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Love u ..♥♥

Purvi128

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