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Sukor journey to love episode 8

Guys i wrote this but it got deleted ik it wont be the same but il try hard to remember what i wrote

Recap family think sukor r having a baby
Chakor;suraj im really worried and u think its a joke
Suraj;well lets stop them and they weren’t ever gonna listen to me
Sukor head downstairs
Tejswani;chakor u need complete rest and suraj???how can u let chakor come down in this state
Suraj;please end the agony tell them
Chakor;tejswani maa im not pregnant i have an allergy to pineapple it was a stomach bug
Kamal;what!!
Tejswani kamal bhagya veer bhavan and kasutri get sad
Chakor;this is why i didnt wanna break anyone’s heart
Suraj;then do u still wanna make it true
Chakor;shut up suraj?
Bhagya;well it dosent matter we will still celebrate that both familes r together for the first time after ur marrige and u 2 go get ready ur flight leaves tonight ur both going bankok
Sukor;what??
Tejswani;me and kamal jee already packed ur bags
The whole family push sukor in thier car and wave goodbye
Sukor hesitate and drive of
Kamal;hopefully this time i get news that my hier will be here soon

Tejswani;kamal jee have some shame
Kamal;shame one day we will become grandparents to sukor kid its jus a matter of time!
Tejwani;hopefully the weather dosent ruin anything!!
Suraj;oh no its starting to rain heavy thiers only 30minutes left to board the flight and we have been stuck in traffic for 3 hours??? now all the roads r blocked looks like we have to spend the night in a hotel
Chakor;we should find a hotel to stay the night if we go bk home bhagya di tejswani maa kamal papa will feel bad
Suraj;u just wanna please them all the time and fine
After driving around for an hour sukor find a hotel and walk in
Receptionist;hello sir welcome u made the right choice coming dont worry no1 will know ur business what type of mistress r u looking for
Suraj;what no im here cuz i want a room have u seen the weather
Recpionist;oh sir dont use weather as excuse
Suraj;r u gonna give us thr room or not
Recpionist;sir please no need to be formal here is the key
Sukor look around and notice that they r in a hotel where people hook up
Recpionist;enjoy sir
Suraj;im here with my wife and if it wasnt for the weather I would never even enter a place like this
Recpionist olv this is the first man that came here with his wife
Chakor;im really cold?
Suraj;there’s nothing here apart from a bed
Sukor walk up the stairs
Sukor olv this place is so cheap
Some men look at chakor nd whistle oh give us some company
Suraj gets angry ? but chakor holds his hand

Chakor;suraj please dont say anything for my sake we dont have time to quarrel with these types of people
Suraj holds chakor hand tight and walks up in anger
Sukor reach thier room and open the door
Sukor olv the rooms of this hotel r even cheaper
The hotel room only had a small bed with no tables chairs or heating
Sukor olv this place is disgusting?
Suraj sees chakor shivering and gives her his jacket
Mahiya plays
Chakor olv suraj cares for me so much that now he will feel cold someone knocks on the door
Suraj il open it
Mistress;hello sir im here to keep u entertained u seem lonely she grabs on to suraj
Suraj;get of me!!
Mistress;im here to give u the best night of ur life that’s why u left ur wife for a night of wild passion and now im herei cant let u go ur so hot
Suraj;ur cheap and disgusting please leave me
Chakor olv its been an awful lot of time since suraj left i shall check
Chakor sees the mistress hugging suraj
Mistress;hello who ever u r inside leave this one is mine
Chakor pushes suraj behind her
Chakor;how dare u touch my husband with ur filthy hands
Mistress;husband?
Chakor pushes the mistress out the room
Chakor;if i ever see u again i will kill u
Chakor slams the door
Suraj;thank god u came!!! That cheap woman was hanging on to me
Chakor pushes suraj

Chakor;how dare you flirt with her knowing im with u how can u even do this to me and that to with that cheap woman veer was right about u
Suraj;what do u mean veer was right and have u seen the place that we r in its a place for prostitution
Chakor;i dont care she had all her filthy hands all over you how can she touch my husband
Suraj olv she is so defensive of me? I thinkchakor got a little jealous only one way to find out
Chakor;and u were standing there too…
Suraj comes closer to chakor nd holds her
Chakor;and ur so bad ur just as bad as her if i didnt come i wonder what would happen
Suraj puts his finger on chakor lips
Suraj;as long as ur with me will you let anything bad happen to me
Chakor notices that suraj is really close to her and tries to move but suraj grips her tighter
Suraj;ididnt know that u would get so defensive over me…
Chakor;it wasnt like that i was just..
Suraj;its ok to get defensive☺️I am ur husband ?
Suraj lets go nd looks around the room
Suraj;theres no blanket to!!
Chakor;what but im really cold here
Suraj;me to back home they must be thinking that we r sitting in the sun enjoying myself but we r stuck in a cheap motel in lucknow withno heating and its freezing
Chakor shivers and sits on the bed
Suraj shivers and sits on the bed
Suraj olv i was being a hero and gave my jacket away but now im freezing
Suraj;look at this tight cheap bed where will we sleep
Chakor lays down and feels bad for suraj
Chakor;erm we both can sleep on this bed its the only thing in the room
Suraj;no its ok il go ask if they have another room
Chakor grabs suraj hand and pulls him down
Chakor;im scared ☹️Dont leave me i wonder what types of people may break in
Suraj hears a squeeky noise and so does chakor

Sukor see a mouse suraj jumps on the bed
Sukor;mummy
Chakor;make it go away ur the man ur suppose to be brave right??
Sukor hug tightly mahiya plays
Suraj olvno way am i getting up
Chakor olv no way am i leaving this bed
Sukor look up mahiya plays sukor were so close to one another sukor could feel each other’s breath both thier bodies were attached to one another
Suraj stares at chakor
Suraj olv i can practically stare at these eyes all day nd night
Suraj loses his patience nd strokes chakor hair he comes forward towards chakor lips
Chakor feels nervous and closes her eyes
Suraj grabs chakor waist tighter
Chakor moves her face seconds before suraj lips touch hers suraj lips end up touching chakor neck
Chakor tries pushing suraj of but his grip gets even more tighter under the pressure of falling on the floor chakor holds suraj shoulders suraj grabs chakor face and faces it towards him suraj goes in again but the mouse ? Squeeks again
Chakor screams
Suraj finally comes out of his fantasy and realises that he is really close to chakor slowly his grip becomes weaker
Suraj olv what was I gonna do
Sukor both turn nd look at the celing
Chakor olv what was all that
Suraj olv what was all that
Suraj turns towards chakor who avoids eye contact
Chakor;what was that
Suraj;what was what?
Chakor;u know u tried to kiss me?
Suraj;so is that a problem ur my wife and i find u attractive i mean how long r u gonna aviod me i do have a right to get intimate with my wife
Chakor; suraj i understand but i
Suraj;but what
Chakor;i had dreams about the man I would want to marry i want someone to love me unconditionally and i want to also love that person suraj the only reason i wanna take things slow is becoz is i want us to fall in love
Chakor notices suraj getting cold again she takes of her duppta and uses as a blanket for both of them
Chakor hugs suraj
Chakor;suraj i dont want u to feel bad ? i just wanna tell u that I consider u as my husband and i wont do anything to hurt u i want to fall in love first
Suraj;but what if the love is already here u jus seem to not see it what if i love u mahiya plays
Chakor;what?

Recap what will happen to sukor after suraj bombshell confession

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