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Sukor journey to love episode 5 “a small bond formed”

Recap sukor go to apost wedding ritual to the laal house…

Bhagya;i wonder if kaustri aunty did something to patch sukor…
Arjun;bhagya dont worry i think bhavan uncle surely most have done somthing…
Tejswani worries in her bed….
Tejswani olv i hope sukor form some kind of bond..
Kamal;stop worrying to much and sometimes focus on me to?

Tejswani;kamal jee shut up! We are grandparents now what will everyone think if we romance at this age we should be focusing on making sukor parents not planning our own romance?
Kamal;fine i got u these roses but now im going to bed!!!
Tejswani;wow roses i love roses im sorry kamal jee?
Kamal dosent respond but slowly laughs and falls asleep.

Bhavan;i said im sorry and kaustriya we should focus on sukor!!!
Kaustri:what r u the love guru u hardly remember my birthday ?
Bhavan;but wen i do dont i get u a gift? bhavan leans foward and gives kaustri a kiss on her forehead….
Kaustri;chakoriya ki baapu what r u doing sukor r just in the other room and dont worry i forgive u now lets go…
Bhavan and kaustri see the dining table empty and and worry…
Kauatri;we were gone for so long that they left to sleep???

Bhavan;dont worry we have all night left….
Suraj feels very nervous and anxious…
Chakor leads the way and dosent know what to say…
Chakor;this is my room and there is the bathroom and the changing coner…
Suraj;il go change my clothes…

Chakor;me to…
Sukor;iv never felt this awkward in my life who should i talk to…..only if veer was here?
Chakor opens her wardrobe and with great confidence wears her shorts and top on…
Chakor olv its great to wearmy nightclothes again its been a week since i had to wear traditional dresses?

Chakor comes out and tries looking for suraj…
Chakor;where did he go did i lose him??he is not in the changing coner chakor sees the balcony open and walks towards the balcony…
Suraj was standing in the balcony as he wanted some air to relieve his stress…
Chakor;suraj?
Suraj turns around but chakor trips suraj catches chakor….chakor and suraj stare into each other’s eyes…
Suraj helps chakor up ..

Suraj;are you alright…
Chakor;im fine and thanks for helping me…chakor quickly looks down…
Suraj stares at chakor he tries hard to look away but cant take his eyes of chakor suraj walks closer by chakor…
Chakor olv what is happening?

Kaustri;chakoriya!!! Where r u…
Sukor;oh crap…suraj realises he is really close to chakor and steps away…
Kaustri walks in with a glass of milk…
Kaustri;where did u wonder of from the dining table here have some milk i know u cant sleep without it…
Chakor;thanks mai…
Kaustri;where is suraj…

Kaustri notices a blanket by the sofa…
Kaustri;olv oh no? these guys dont even sleep on the same bed i need to do something…
Chakor;err he is by the balcony…
Kaustri grabs suraj and makes him sleep on the bed…
Kaustri;suraj beta its so late u guys should sleep early cuz tommorw u have to go back…and chakor come with me for a minute…
Suraj;but..

Kasutri;no ifs or but just go sleep…wen im bk u better be sleeping…
Kaustri grabs chakor…
Kaustri;my betiya im proud of u and r u ok r u happy in that house?
Chakor;mai dont worry everyone is so nice to me they made me feel so welcome its as if i belong there that i didnt feel like i was a stranger or new to the family…
Kaustri;betiya im so happy for u…now come on let me put u to bed come on…
Suraj was fast asleep…

Chakor hesitates but kaustri insists she sleeps on the bed…
Kaustri;goodnight see u in the morning…
Bhavan;did the plan work…

Kaustri;kinda worked hopefully chakor stays on the bed…
Chakor olv should i sleep on the sofa no why should i its my bed il just turn the other way…
In the middle of the night chakor moves towards the middle and wakes suraj up..
Suraj;go on ur side what r u doing on my side! Suraj pushes chakor back…but chakor moves back down…

Suraj olv i just wanna sleep in peace!
Chakor speaks in her sleep…
Chakor;i missed my bed so much…
Suraj;i can tell!
Chakor mumers and suraj falls asleep again…
Tejswani;today i want the whole haveli decorated its my bahus moodikya…
Bhagya;dont wòrry the arrangements will be done within time…
Kamal;yes bhagya there right but i wonder if they have become enteral lovers yet?
Bhagya tejswani?? we give up on ur thinking…

Chakor wakes up and sees suraj besides her…
Chakor olv it wasnt that bad and there was me thinking of sleeping on the sofa…
Suraj wakes up and notices that chakor slept on the bed…
Suraj olv i was scared for nothing it wasnt that bad…
Chakor comes out…
Suraj goes into the bathroom…

Chakor gets ready…but cant tie her doori…
Chakor olv…traditional clothes r always to complicated why cant they be simple?
Chakor;mai mai i need ur help!!
Kaustri;i bet chakor is struggling with her clothes il go help…
Bhavan;no!!! Kaustriya have u forgot what bhagaya told us we need sukor to form a bond let sukor figure it out themself…

Kaustri;for the first time bhavan u have said somthing intelligent?
Chakor tries hard but gives up …
Suraj comes out and sees chakor upset…

Suraj;whats wrong u seem abit upset?
Chakor;well its not ur problem! Your not the one having problems…
Suraj olv some much attitude and anger…bhavan uncle did say she gets angry over petty things…
Suraj;i only asked cuz..
Chakor; i cant tie this dress iv been trying for the past half an hour…
Suraj; ??that’s the big problem…

Chakor????
Suraj;?? gulps if u want shall i help u?
Chakor;no!!
Suraj;fine then im heading down and u can stand here all day with ur open dress?
Chakor olv he is right i called mom but she didnt even respond shall i just take the help i mean he is my…
Chakor;fine but dont tell anyone…il take ur help..

Suraj;u think im gonna tell everyone about this?
Chakor;no its not like that and will u just help me!!
Suraj;fine..

Suraj comes close to chakor and moves her hair he ties her doori for her and his hands kindle with chakor back…
Chakor shivers with his touch and closes her eyes…
Chakor hair flies on suraj face…
Mahiya plays…
Kaustri and bhavan peek through the window…

Bhavan;see kaustri my plan worked…
Kauatri;big deal my.plan worked last night to..

Chakor turns around and sukor have an eyelock…
Bhavan;well my.plan was better…

Chakor;wait i can hear some1…
Suraj;i can to…and its by the door i always here the weird nosies even in my room bk home…
Sukor open the door but bhavan grabs kauatri and they hide…
Sukor;i wonder what these noises r??theyhead downstairs…
Chakor and suraj greet bhavan and kaustri and head back to rajvnashi haveli…

Tejswani;they aint back yet
Kamal;i think they might be romancing what if the love birds ran of…
Tejswani;shut up kamal jee!!
Suraj walks in…

Suraj;hi mom hi papa im of to my room…
Kamal;wait right thier were is chakor.
Suraj;oh shes coming u know women they always take time in everything…
Tejswani;seems likd u forgot my bahu is a marathon runner so she is obviously faster then u now go back and wait by the door like a gentleman go!!!?

Suraj olv fine everything for them is now thier bahu is like thier son never existed…
Suraj waits by the door and frowns chakor comes in and greets kamal and tejswani….
Tejswani;chakor u were only gone for a day and we missed u so much…
Kamal;right it was like a piece of the haveli was missing…
Veer;maami is back maami i missed u so much!!!!
Veer hugs chakor…

Bhagya;chakor ur back i missed u so much…
Suraj olv look at all these backstabers they love chakor chakor chakor! What about me no1 even bothered noticing me and we only went for a day not a year?
Veer;maami come in iv got so much to talk about…
Suraj walks of in anger…

Laaksh calls suraj…
Laaksh;so suraj how does if feel being a married man huh anything changed yet…
Suraj;this is the worst!! No one even cares for me anymore!!! Mummy papa i was the apple of thier eye but they dont even notice me anymore for them is all about chakor…she took my place..
Laaksh;suraj? she is on the same level as ur place she is ur life partner obviously aunty and uncle will love her cuz she is a part of u nd they love u so much that’s why the love chakor alot to and seems like some1 is getting jealous..

Suraj;what no im not jealous and goodbye im going to bed…
Suraj still feels upset…
Tejswani gets chakor ready for her moodikay…
Veer;wow maami ur r looking so pretty maamu doesn’t deserve u…
Bhagya;my brother is equally as good looking infact both make a perfect couple…
Kamal;wow my bahu is the the star of the family veer is right i totally agree suraj got way more than he deserved i mean he is such a lazy boy i bet he is sleeping and its such an important ritual but he doesn’t seem to care…

Tejswani;kamal jee what r u doing we r tryinh to get sukor close not drift them apart!!! And ur here just saying all the bad stuff…
Suraj;they can stuff thief ritual did any1 even come to ask how i am or was i even invited to this ritual no so why should i come!!!?
Arjun walks in and sees that suraj is in a bad mood…
Arjun;suraj come on just come to the ritual!! U need to be there…

Suraj;no im not going…
Arjun;bhagya sent me and tejswani maa and i know u dont want them to come up otherwise ul regret not listening to me…
Suraj;jiju ur right if mom and di come they will practically kill me fine il come…
All the women come and look and chakor they give her gifts and praise her looks… suraj comes down but frowns upon everyone…
Veer;whats with the attitude…

Suraj;u just stay quiet maami ka chumcha..(aunties brat)
Veer;u stay quiet ur jealous of ur own wife becoz shes getting the attention u need a lesson by mumma im gonna tell her and today u never even got me the video game that u promised me?
Suraj;no dont tell ur mom she will kill me il do anything…
Veer;anything? fine im giving u a challange for 24 hours u have to be nice to maami and u have to compliment her and care for her…deal…
Suraj;fine deal!

Tejswani;suraj beta come and sit next to chakor…
Suraj sits besides chakor…
Suraj olv wow she is looking so pretty?
Veer;stop staring at maami u got all your life to do that…

Everyone laughs…
Chakor feels embarssed and looks away…
Suraj olv one day I’m gonna do somthing to this little pest that he will regret everything he has ever done wait wen its ur time beta…
The ritual finshes and everyone leaves…
Kamal;suraj in rajvanshi family tradition we have a final ritual that after the moodikay you have to lift bahu andtake her in the room…
Sukor;what!?

Kamal;please its the final ritual do u want to ruin our bloodline tradition…
Suraj olv fine he lifts chakor mahiya plays sukor stare deep into each other’s eyes and takes chakor to his room…
Tejswani;there’s no such ritual kamal jee why did u lie..
Kamal;im trying to make them enternal lovers for life…

Bhagya;oh papa i didnt know ur an expert love guru…
Kamal;well beta there’s still alot more to learn about your father…
Suraj places chakor on the bed and stares into her eyes…
Veer olv i have to do somthing before both of them walk away veer comes in and pushes suraj he runs out and locks the door…
Suraj falls on chakor…mahiya plays…
Suraj tries to get up but his button gets tied to chakor necklace suraj falls down with fall force chakor turns her face so that suraj lips touch her cheek…
Bhagya kamal and tejswani look on through the window…

Kamal;well done veer you have outdone ur naanimaa and ur mother no we shall go and leave the internal loves for a moment of passion our work here is done….everyone leaves…
Suraj quickly moves his lips away from chakor face he unties his button and gets up he offers his hand to help chakor up and she takes it both turn around and are embarssed about the situatuon…
Kamal;so what now we should leave them alone…

Bhagya;ur right mom dad i was thinking of sending them to a honeymoon ik il book the tickets for next week and we will suprise them…but mumma i have to go back home cuz veer starts school soon…
Kamal;no i dont want u to leave so soon…
Bhagya;its only for 3 days cuz arjun is going abroad r a month so me and veer will be bk for a whole month…
Tejswani;fine but me and kamal jee are dropping u of…
Veer kamal tejswani arjun and bhagya leave…

Kamal;oh no sukor r alone and veer locked the door we need to go back…
Bhagya;no papa leave them this is perfect there alone at home and they will figure out a way to free themself…
Tejswani; bhagya ur right…
Suraj;erm u should go in to change first because of all that heavy jewellery uv got on…
Chakor olv suraj is not that bad☺ chakor goes to change and suraj changes to…
Sukor;im hungry…
Chakor;ur hungry…
Suraj;ur hungry to…come lets go down to eat then…
Sukor try opening the door…

Chakor;we r trapped??
Suraj;no some wise man locked the door from the outside…
Chakor;tejswani maa kamal papa veer bhagya di arjun bhai….anyone can u hear us…
Suraj;i think they all went out and left us!!
Suraj sees the window and jumps out..
Chakor;what r u doing
Suraj;freeing myself now look im free?give me ur hand suraj helps chakor and both stare at each other…
Sukor walk downstairs and see no1…

Chakor;everyone did really leave what to do…
Suraj;ik il order some food what would u like…
Chakor;i want pizza..
Suraj;done suraj tries ordering but sees the all the system is dead becoz of heavy rain…
Chakor;oh no now we will stave let me see if there is anything in the kitchen…
Chakor walks in…
Chakor;there’s nothing in the fridge looks like i have to cook somthing i know il make pasta!
Chakor looks around and cant find anything…
Chakor olv suraj must know where the food is kept…
Chakor;suraj suraj!
Suraj comes in..what…

Chakor;where is ur pasta and pans kept..
Suraj; idont know this my second time coming in the kitchen…
Chakor;what? so ur telling me uv been staying here for 27 years and this is ur second time coming in the kitchen….
Suraj;well yh thefirsttime was wen papa became a hardcore lover and thought he could bake a cake for moms 30th bday so he woke me and di up to bake a cake but he ended up gettingshouted at cuz papa burnt the oven and used all the wrong ingredients so mom barred both of us from the kitchen…
Chakor bursts out laughing…

Suraj;ok il help…
Suraj;i found the pan…
Chakor;i found the pasta…

Both give each other a high five and help each other cook..
Chakor;il make thr sauce and u boil the pasta…
Suraj;how do u do that?
Chakor? u put the pasta in water and let it boil for 10 minutes…
Suraj;i can do that?
Chakor opens the draw for some salt and sees a mouse…

Chakor runs and hugs suraj really tightly…
Suraj;what happend why r u hugging me so tight i cant breath!?
Chakor;shut up!!i saw a mouse please get rid of it im really scared of them…
Suraj;?ur scared of a little mouse fine il go scare it…
Chakor;no dont move it behind u…
Suraj;what???
Sukor hug each other tightly…

Chakor;i thought ur brave and its only a little mouse!
Suraj;i only said that to look manly?
Chakor;where is ur manhood gone now!
Suraj;lets climb up the shelve mice cant climb…

Sukor move back slowly and climb up still holding each other tightly…
Sukor throw pots pans cups and plates… chakor slowly opens her eyes…
Chakor;is it dead yet??
Suraj i dont know ?
Chakor slowly leaves suraj and sees the mouse still running she quickly hids her face in suraj chest and hugs him tightly…
Chakor;its still here?

Sukor;im scared…
Tejswnai and kamal return to the haveli…
Both hear nosies coming from the kitchen…
Suraj throws another pan at the mouse…

Kamal; what was that looks like sukor r still in thier room cuz there door is still locked im still sure they must have reached the girlfriend and boyfriend stagw by now?
Tejswani;kamal jee this is no time for this i think robbers have come in tejswani picks a broomstick and heads to the kitchen…
Kamal and tejswani are shocked seeing all the household dishes broken…..

Precap;tejswani and kamal make sukor go on a dinner date

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