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Home»Fan Fiction»Sukor ff-Nafraton me chupa pyaar (part 9)
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Sukor ff-Nafraton me chupa pyaar (part 9)

LinaaBy LinaaSeptember 5, 20172 Comments6 Mins Read
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hi guys here is the next part of my ff

Imli goes to chakor

Imli:hey di I m having a good news for u

Chakor:really what is it

Imli:I talked to vivaan about u nd your dance partner .u know even vivaan’s bro want to change his dance partner just like you

Chakor:really oh imli i m so happy .just want me him right now

Imli:what!right now!I already said to vivaan that u will meet him in lunch

Chakor:what! In lunch it means till lunch I have stay with that donkey only?

Imli:keep patience di

Chakor goes to hall she sees suraj and starts making faces.suraj see chakor coming to him

Suraj olv:vivaan said that she will meet me in lunch.finally I m getting rid of this chipkali.but before leaving this chipkali let me fight with her later I will not get a chance to fight with her

Suraj sees time in his watch

Suraj:hey u .u r late don’t u know u should come on tym.u wasted my precious time

Chakor:yes I don’t know that I should come on time nd what did say I WASTED YOUR TIME now u r also wasting time by fighting with me.see everyone is practicing now we should also start our practice

Both suraj and chakor start practicing.after sometime chakor goes to drink some water.on her way she slips and fall down suraj starts laughing on her.after a while suraj gives chakor his hand.chakor didn’t takes his help nd stands by her own

Chakor:I don’t need any ones help

Suraj:listen I m not having any interest to give u my hand .see everyone is looking here that’s y I gave u my hand otherwise they all will think I m a coward

chakor:what’s the need to think u r coward.if u haven’t give your hand to me then everyone will get to know what is your true identity.i mean they all will get know that how big coward u r

Suraj:just shutup I m not a coward nd I think u r the one and only one here who is coward

Chakor olv :oh chakor what r u doing just ignore this donkey if u will fight like this with this donkey then what your new dance partner will think about u if he knows how I used to fight with this donkey…….control yourself don’t ruin your image

Suraj clicks his fingers nd asks

Suraj:oh hello madam where r u loss.what happen r u tired of fighting with me

Chakor:no I was just thinking that I should be silent when u r fighting with me because the best response to fool is silence

Suraj:what!what did say

Chakor:nothing

Suraj olv:this chipkali is not having guts to fight with me that’s y she is saying like this

Suraj sees tym nd says now only few minutes are left for lunch bell I just want to meet her right now don’t know how she is how she looks like
If she becomes my dance partner I will be so happy nd finally in the dance competition I don’t have to lift this fatty chipkali

BELL RANKS

chakor goes to imli .she takes out mirror from his bag she looks herself in a mirror.imli notices what she is doing

Imli:di u r coming to meet vivaan’s bro right??

Chakor:yes

Imli:u r looking yourself in a mirror as if he is coming to propose u

Chakor:chal pagal ladki kidhar kiki if I m going to meet some new person then I should look good na

IN CANTEEN

Suraj:bhai I m so nervous

Vivaan:are bhai y r u taking to much of tension just to talk with a girl ?

Suraj:don’t know.vivaan u sit here I will go to canteen nd bring some juices for us

Vivaan:ok bhai go and come fast

Chakor and imli arrives there.imli and chakor goes to vivaan.chakor sees vivaan sitting alone

Chakor(in imlis’s ear):hey imlu where is his brother

Vivaan:just now bhai go to canteen.he will come in a while

Both chakor and imli starts waiting for suraj.finally suraj comes there.both suraj and chakor see eachother

Suraj and chakor:tummmmmmmm

Chakor:hey what r u doing here u just go and sit at some any other place

Suraj:y should I go I came first here so I will sit here

imli:di……

Chakor:imli I think this donkey is troubling your friend also.but u don’t I need to say sit b’cuz I can see it clearly see I will not let this donkey to sit at your friend’s brother’s place

Chakor to suraj:see I am saying u for the last time to move from here otherwise it will not be good for u

Suraj:really then what u will do me haan common reply me fast

Chakor sees a glass of water on table.she takes a glass in her hand and throws it on suraj’s face

Chakor clicks her fingers and says

Chakor:see loser I can do all this

Imli:hey di what r u doing stop it

Chakor:can’t u see I m teaching this donkey a lesson

Suraj becomes so angry and he throws a juice on chakor’s face which he goes to buy from canteen

Vivaan:surajjj what r u doing

Suraj:u don’t come in between vivaan see today I will not leave this chipkali

Chakor:really what u will do to me loser.

Imli:di stop it di

Chakor:see my little sister is requesting me to stop this fight otherwise u don’t have any idea what I was going to do with u

Suraj:yah I know u very well u don’t have guts to fight with that’s y u r saying like this in dance class also u did the same.u know sometimes I feel like I m the most unlucky person on this earth as u r my dance partner

Vivaan nd imli:what DANCE PARTNER

vivaan:imlii it means my bro nd your sister r dance partners od each other

Both suraj and chakor get shocked by hearing vivaan’s words

To be continued

Friends I m going to saudi arabia for somedays so when I will be back from there I will post my next part of ff

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    2 Comments

    1. sukorlover on September 5, 2017 11:22 pm

      Awesome update. Sukor are so childish, loved their fight. Waiting for sukor’s reaction on hearing vivan’s words. Enjoy your trip

    2. Nemo on September 5, 2017 11:46 pm

      Amazing! loved sukor fight, their shock at knowing each other’s identity was huge. Eagerly waiting for the next part.
      Have a safe trip.

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