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Home»Fan Fiction»Sukor ff-Nafraton me chupa pyaar (part 6)
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Sukor ff-Nafraton me chupa pyaar (part 6)

LinaaBy LinaaAugust 12, 20175 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi guys here is the next part of my ff

AT CHAKOR’S HOME

imli:maa can I go there please don’t say no

Kasturi:yes of course beta u can go there nd take care of yourself

Imli:haan maa me apna khayaal rakuhungi or waise bhi me wahan akele thodi na jarahi hoon di bhi mere sath hogi

Chakor:imliiiiii me wahan aakar kia karungi me wahan bilkul akele padhjaungi(imli what I will do by coming there .I will be just left alone if I came)

Imli:kia karogi matlab tum hamare sath rahogi(u will be with me)

Chakor:tumhare saath rahungi bhi to kia karungi tum or vivaan to anchoring script banane me busy rahoge na(what I will do with u nd u will be busy with vivaan in preparation of anchoring script)

Imli:accha to aise baat hai vivaan mujhse kehraha tha k uska koi bhai bhi hai tumhare itna hi to tum usse millo or baat karo (oh.vivaan said the he is also having one brother so y don’t u come and meet him)

Chakor:ok waise bhi mujhe dost banana bohot pasand hai(ok.I like to make new friends)

AFTER THREE DAYS

imli and chakor both went to rajvanshi’s home.while going to the rajvanshi’s home chakor see’s a park.both imli and chakor arrive at rajvanshi’s home.

Chakor:imli u go

Imli:u go what does it mean r u not coming with me

Chakor:no I m not coming .nearby there’s a park so I want to go there.

Imli:ok as your wish

Chakor enters the park and imli enters the rajvanshi mansion.imli meets vivaan nd vivaan welcomes her.
In the park chakor sees something and get shocked.she sees suraj with one girl

Chakor:chee kitna bigda hua ladka hai.thodi bhi sharam nahi hai isme.

Chakor leaves from there.she takes so many pics there .after sometime she suddenly collapse with one boy.the boy is suraj

Suraj:tum(you)

Chakor:tum.tum yahan kia karrahe ho(you.what r u doing here)

Suraj:kia matlab me yahan kia karraha hoon.tum yahan kia karrahe ho(what do u mean by”what r u doing here”.u say me what u r doing here)

Chakor:nahi.mera matlab wo nahi tha mera matlab tha k abhi to tum kuch der pehle apni girl friend k saath the na (no.sometime before u r with your girl friend na )

Suraj:”thodi der pehle tum apni girl friend k saath the”what do u mean tum kia mere peecha karrahi ho .are ye had hai college me hamara thoda jhagda kia hogaya tum to mere se badla lene k liye mere peeche hi padh gaye ho.batao kia karne aayi thi yahan par mujhe kidnap karne aayi thi kia(SOME TIME BEFORE U R WITH YOUR GIRL FRIEND.what do mean .r u following me to take revenge. U r crossing your limits .now say me for what purpose u came here.did u came here to kidnap me)

Chakor:just shut up aisa kuch nahi hai (just shut up its nothing like that)

Suddenly chakor phone starts ringing she sees its imli she pick ups the call

Imli:di where r u come soon nd pickup me

Chakor:yah imli I m coming just wait for 10mins

Imli:ok bye

They both end the call.both angry suraj nd chakor see eachother.chakor starts moving from there but she stops when suraj says

Suraj(shouts):ooo miss chipkali.kahan jarahi ho(oo miss chipkali where r u going)

Chakor:oh Mr donkey tum se matlab

After saying this chakor moves from there

Suraj:badi ajeeb se ladki hai hamesha to mujhse ladhne jhagadne ka bahana dhoond ti hai.or aaj achanak chale gaye (so different girl she is every time she fights with me nd taday she suddenly gone)

SCENE SHIFTS TO IMLI

Imli calls chakor

Imli:di where r u?vivaan says that he will drop me so don’t come here ok

Chakor:imli tu bhi na pehle nahi batasakti thi kia(imli y don’t u say me this sometime before)

Imli:q kia hua di(y what happen di)

Chakor:aaj mujhe itna accha muqa mila tha us bewakoof ko sabaq milane ka or tere wajah se mene wo muqa gava dia kher ye sab chodo(today I got a chance to teach that bewakhoof a lesson nd because of u I miss that chance BTW leave it) I m going to home.

Imli:ok di bye see u at home

After getting down the stairs imli sees tejaswini

Vivaan:mom see ye mere college friend hai.imli(mom see this is my college friend imli)

Imli:pranam aunty

Imli bends down and takes aashirwaad from tejaswini

Tejaswini:are beta ye kia karrahi ho (are beta what r u doing)

Imli:my mother says we should always take aashirwaad from our elders

Tejaswini olv:kitne sanskaari ladki hai

Vivaan:imli chale? (Imli shall we go)

Imli:yah lets go.bye aunty.

SCENE SHIFTS TO CHAKOR’S HOME

chakor:hi mom

Kasturi:are chakoriya beta imli kahan hai ( are chakoriya beta where is imli)

Chakor:imli.she says that vivaan will drop her so she is not with me

Kasturi:accha:so when she will be back

Some knocks the door .kasturi goes and open it.she sees imli abd vivaan

Imli:hi mom isse mileye ye mera college dost hai vivaan (meet him mom.he is my college friend.vivaan)

Vivaan:hi aunty

Kastari:are beta tum bahar q khade ho andar aao na (are beta y r u standing outside come inside)

Vivaan:no thanks aunty.me yagan imli ko chodh ne aaya tha.mujhe ghar par kuch kaam hai.me phir kabhi aaunga (I came here to drop imli aunty.i am having some work at home.so next tym I will come)

Kasturi:thike beta.agli baar zaroor aana

Vivaan:accha ab me chalto hoon (ok.now I will go)

kasturi:haan thike beta sambhal kar jana

To be continued……

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    5 Comments

    1. sukorlover on August 12, 2017 11:53 pm

      Awesome update. Loved sukor’s nok jhok

    2. Nemo on August 13, 2017 12:10 am

      Interesting update. Sukor’s nok jhok was cute. Looking forward to the next update.

    3. Sunny on August 13, 2017 6:22 pm

      Sukor nok jhok: Miss Chipkali and Mr Donkey ???. Sachme, kitna accha muqa Chakor ne miss kardiya Imli k wajar se. I’m sure, next time she actually won’t spare him. Keep going Doll. Its amazing!
      Ur Beloved Sanu

    4. bushra.. on August 17, 2017 11:31 am

      Vry funny Nok jhok,???
      wwaiting 4 u r nxt update,
      U r a vry gud writer,keep it up!!!…?.

    5. Aanya on August 17, 2017 1:06 pm

      I lv their nok jok sorry for late comment
      ????????

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