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Sufferings (swasan ts) by mars – shot 6

MarsBy MarsJune 12, 201770 Comments9 Mins Read
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Hlo guys! Here I m with next shot. Thank you so much for your wonderful response.
Let’s begin

SUFFERINGS (swasan ten shots)
SHOT 6
Maheshwari house:
Hall:
Swara and laksh were talking and sanskar was pretending to be busy with avni.After sometimes
Laksh: ok Swara now I should leave.
Swara: so soon (pout)
First time Sanskar saw her antics bcoz she was never open with Sanskar.
Laksh: actually I have to visit house and see everything as I directly came to meet u from airport.
Swara: okay but will meet soon again.
Laksh: sure.
Laksh hugged her friendly but Sanskar was not able to see all this so he said
Sanskar: swara I m going to office.
Then only Swara noticed him.
Swara: hmm
Swara took avni from sanskar who had already slept.
Laksh: hey sanskar if u don’t mind, can u drop me at my house.I don’t think I will get cab soon.
Swara was expecting that he will deny rudely but she got surprised listening him
Sanskar: yea sure why not.
Laksh: ok bye swara
Swara: bye.
Sanlak left.
Swara(mumble): is he really changing or just pretending.
Later she also left with avni for her work.

In car:
Sanskar is silently driving but laksh can’t sit silently so to start the conversion he said
Laksh: sanskar when your and swara marriage happened?
Sanskar: 3 years back.
Laksh: okay love or arrange?
Sanskar thought whether love existed in their relationship No definitely not.
Sanskar (normally): arrange.
Laksh: interesting….but I know u must have fallen for her after all she such a nice girl right(smiles).
Sanskar really don’t know what to reply as he himself don’t know the answer. But he slightly nodded his head.
Laksh;I think she must be changed but no she can’t change.U are very lucky that she is your wife.
Sanskar (slightly smile as laksh refer her as his): hmm
Laksh: u know in college almost all boys of our batch proposed her even I proposed her twice but she never accepted as she wants to marry the boy her baba will choose.
Like this he keep on talking about Swara how she was in college.
Sanskar was feeling jealous bcoz laksh know everything about Swara and he being her husband don’t know anything.
Soon laksh’s place came so Sanskar stopped the car
Laksh: thank you so much.
Sanskar: its ok.
Laksh left but his words were still revolving in sanskar’s mind.
Sanskar(monologue): she is not what she is showing from last three years but actual swara is the one how she is now a days.
Thinking all this he went to his office.

Evening
Maheshwari house:
Sanskar came inside the house but didn’t find swara.The door was opened as watchman was present.
He thought may be she is in guest room. So he went to his room.
After changing he came down and again swara was no where.
He went to guest room to check but found the door was closed from outside.
Sanskar (mumble): where she went ?
He looked at watch which shows 7pm.
He came in hall and started working on laptop. He was feeling restless and worried for Swara and avni. Many times thoughts came in his mind that “did she left him” but no he don’t want to accept it.He thought of calling her but was not gaining enough courage .
After half an hour:
Sanskar listened the giggling sound so he looked at door and saw Swara and avni coming.Only he knew how much relief he is feeling after seeing them but at that time only he got angry as how can she be out with avni for this much late.
Avni shouted seeing him.He looked at her and smiled.
Sanskar: why are u late?
Swara: I don’t feel necessary to tell you.
Sanskar: swara its not safe to be out for late and when avni is with you.
Swara(taunting): it’s less dangerous outside rather than staying with u.(sternly)and no need to show your fake concern towards avni.
Sanskar didn’t said anything bcoz he really don’t know what to say.
Swara left to guest room and avni looks at Sanskar but swara took her.
Later Swara made dinner and boiled milk for avni and left to her room.
Sanskar came down and went to kitchen,open the fridge and took food and after heating ate.

AFTER SIX MONTHS:
It has been six months since Swara is changed.Now sujata had adjusted with her behaviour but always get annoyed.
Sujata did all the work of her and sanskar.Swara just cared for avni and lives in guest room only.
The bond of Sanskar and avni become more strong. Even Swara get to know avni likes Sanskar and Sanskar also behave very nicely with her so she don’t say anything.
Swara and sanskar hardly talk with each other.Sanskar was not talking with sujata also.
When he used to be at home,he spend his maximum time with avni.

Morning
Sanskar’s room(actually swasan room)
Sanskar is getting ready for office by standing in front of mirror when he felt soft touch on his leg.when he looked down he saw avni who came in his room by crawling on her knees. He immediately bend and picked her up.
Sanskar: u got up early.where is mamma?
Avni smiles.
Sanskar looked towards door that Swara is there or not but to his surprise no one was there.
Sanskar: u came alone.
Avni smiled brightly.
Then only Sanskar heard swara’s shouting sound
Swara: avni avni
Avni after listening her name shouts
Swara came to Sanskar’s room. It is first time she entered in this room since six months.The flashes of past memories starts coming in her mind.Her eyes got filled with tears but she composed herself and look at avni.
She went near them and avni
Swara: come avni have your milk.
Avni turns her face towards Sanskar as she don’t want to go.
Sanskar: avni gave your milk then come to me.
But avni was not ready to go.
Swara took her but she started shouting.Sanskar can’t see her like this
Sanskar (little hesitate): swara I can feed her.
Swara(sternly): no need I will do myself.
She left the room.Sanskar felt bad but it was common for him as she is talking rudely with him.Now he realizes his swara must be felling when he used to behave rudely with her.
He signed and went downstairs.

Evening:
Sujata is sitting in hall and Swara is in kitchen. she has made avni sit on floor with toys so that she should not fell from bed.
Sanskar’s car came. Avni listens his car’s noise so she went to him by crawling. Sanskar came inside and avni shouted from the top of the stairs. swara also came from kitchen. Swasan got shocked seeing her.
But before Sanskar could run and go to her, avni step forward and her foot slipped and she rolled down.
Swasan got shocked and ran to her.
Sanskar took her in his lap and saw blood flowing profusely from her forehead. Swara came running and kept her hand on his forehead to stop bleeding. She was crying.Sanskar saw her and said
Sanskar: swara plz don’t cry now we should take her to hospital.
Swara: ha plz fast.
Sanskar took her and ran out alone with Swara .
Sujata saw all this and said
Sujata (annoyed): why Sanskar care for her alot.
She left towards her room.
Outside Sanskar layed avni in Sanskar’s lap and himself started driving.

Hospital:
Swasan rushed inside with avni.Nurses immediately took avni from Sanskar and went to operation theatre.
Sanskar saw towards swara who was sitting on chair in corridor and crying. He felt bad and went to her.Their clothes were covered with blood.
Sanskar kept his hand slightly on her shoulder and said
Sanskar:don’t worry she will be fine.
Swara(looked at him): hmm
Sanskar on chair beside her.She moves little away.Sanskar understood that she is feeling uncomfortable so he got up and stood near OT door
After mins doctor came out and said
Doctor: we urgently need blood. She had lost too much blood and it’s not good for her.
Swara got shocked.
Sanskar: ok then u take from your blood bank I will pay.
Doctor: actually we don’t have that blood group.you are her parents. So one of u can give.
Swasan looked at each other don’t know what to say.
Sanskar: which is her blood group?
Doctor: O negative.
Sanskar got overwhelmed after listening this while swara got confused.
Sanskar (happy): it’s same as mine u take my blood.
Swara smiled.
Doctor: OK come.
Sanskar went inside and give his blood.
He came back and saw Swara sitting lost in thoughts.
He went near her and she saw him
Swara: u had given the blood?
Sanskar : yes even they had started the operation.
Swara: thank god.
Then they silently stood their and silence was broken by Swara
Swara:why are u doing all this?
Sanskar(confused): means
Swara:I mean all this taking care of avni, donating her blood.
Sanskar: she is my daughter legally.
Swara: but u were not ready to accept her.
Sanskar (bit guilty): yea at that time I didn’t want but she changed me….
Swara: see if u trying to fulfil your duties then no need to do all this I m earning enough to keep her happy
Sanskar (hurt): Swara…
But then only doctor came and said
Doctor: excuse me your daughter is fine.
Swasan got happy
Swara: may I meet her?
Doctor : yes sure but she will get conscious in few hours.
Swasan went inside.
To be continued…

Precap: avni speak her first word but which one?????and swasan pov.

No proof reading so ignore mistakes.
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    70 Comments

    1. Sus on June 12, 2017 9:23 pm

      woww u have given amazing example of changing Sanskar. May being not becoming father changed sanskar like this. Sometimes it happens, if we have problem and don’t know how to tackle that we start behaving odd and changed alot.
      But i feel more than Sanskar its sujata’s mistake as its parent duty to give best parverish and sanskar to their children and then how children take its their way.
      But in this case already sanskar hasn’t get nice upbringing so definatly he become rude.

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 3:55 am

        Thank you dear and u are right mistake is of sujata bcoz she support him in wrong also.

    2. Swasan on June 12, 2017 9:31 pm

      Amazing

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 3:56 am

        Thank you dear

    3. meena reddy on June 12, 2017 9:40 pm

      awesome dear.but plz make swara forgive sanskar because he is repenting.eagerly waiting for the next part dear.

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 3:58 am

        Thank you dear and swara will forgive him soon and will post next part soon

    4. independent on June 12, 2017 9:49 pm

      Baba

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 4:00 am

        Thank you dear

    5. Mannu on June 12, 2017 9:52 pm

      Hmm nice???????

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 4:01 am

        Thank you dear

    6. sneha on June 12, 2017 9:52 pm

      Awesome one …post next one soon.
      I think avni speak pappa first .but personally i want her to speak the word mumma first.

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 4:03 am

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon.

    7. Rosey on June 12, 2017 10:08 pm

      Wow yaar just too good finally Sanskaar is changed…I like his new attitude..,
      And avni is so cute and Swara’s behaviour please change that too…

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 4:05 am

        Thank you dear and Swara will Change soon

    8. Abreea Moin on June 12, 2017 10:10 pm

      very Nice n lovely episode as usual,,,,?

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 4:06 am

        Thank you dear

    9. scooby on June 12, 2017 10:16 pm

      Awesome loved this part ?

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 4:07 am

        Thank you dear

    10. SHAN on June 12, 2017 10:20 pm

      Wow amazing!!! Loved it and sanskar is changing!!! Good…. And i am sure avni will call papa right??? Wow sooper dr post next one soon

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 4:10 am

        Thank you di and wait to know what avni will speak first and will post next part soon.
        Your dp is very nice.Helly is looking toooo cute.

      • SHAN on June 13, 2017 10:33 am

        Thank u dr!!!! Hellu will look cute in all pic….??

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 2:57 pm

        Yup!! Helly is the cutest.

    11. Febi on June 12, 2017 10:28 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 4:12 am

        Thank you dear

    12. Vidhi on June 12, 2017 10:40 pm

      It was so emotional and awesome… Loved it..
      I think her first word would be papa…
      Update soon dear ❤❤❤

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 4:14 am

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    13. kumu on June 12, 2017 10:46 pm

      awesome..tc..

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 4:15 am

        Thank you dear

    14. Stg on June 12, 2017 11:51 pm

      amazing ?

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 4:17 am

        Thank you dear

    15. Pramudi on June 13, 2017 12:09 am

      Superb dear.
      Me too think, avni will say papa as the firdt word.

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 4:19 am

        Thank you dear

    16. Abhilasha on June 13, 2017 12:22 am

      Woww….superbbb dear……I hope swasan united soon and plz chng sujata’s behavior took…….and u r doing a marvellous job……love it!!

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 4:21 am

        Thank you dear and sujata will also change hopefully.

    17. Nagamanasa on June 13, 2017 6:30 am

      Awesome dear….Sanskar is finally changing…loved it

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 2:58 pm

        Thank you dear

    18. Priya on June 13, 2017 6:36 am

      Awesome dear she will call papa I think

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 2:59 pm

        Thank you dear

    19. sne on June 13, 2017 7:03 am

      my naughty bilo ..day by day u r impressing me by ur ff…..choppy is awosome .….but,I want swara accept sanskar….I know sanskar is wrong but when he realised his mistake truely…swara have to just consider for sanskar …that’s I want…life is precious…past me sanskar kalath hai ..par abi tho he truely retreat for his mistake…and sanskar accept avni whole heartly and not for a society or duties..he has truly accept her..swara have to give a chance to sanskar..bye and take care my naughty bilo and update soon NB .I am waiting plzzzzzzzz

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 3:01 pm

        Thank you dear and I love nick name u gave me naughty billo.lovvve youuuu.
        And Swara will surely forgive sanskar soon.

    20. Soujanya on June 13, 2017 8:37 am

      Awesome… I think she will say papa first…post soon…..

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 3:03 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    21. ankita Gaude on June 13, 2017 9:48 am

      awsome next part soon plz

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 3:04 pm

        thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    22. anu on June 13, 2017 10:14 am

      awesome update next part soon may be avni calls first word papa not maa or may be vice versa,.

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 3:06 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    23. Harshita on June 13, 2017 10:43 am

      Hmm….i think avni will speak papa…..

      Wait i want to know dear that are you in college or school……if you are in college then I’ll call you mars di and if in school then i’ll call you mars…..i hope you are ok with iy

      • Harshita on June 13, 2017 10:43 am

        *it

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 3:10 pm

        Thank you dear and now I had cleared my +2 this year in school and all set to go to college soon.BTW I turned 18 on 11 jan and u can call me anything I don’t mind.

      • Harshita on June 13, 2017 5:13 pm

        I m in 12 ….only one year na…so i will call you mari….you don’t mind na…

        From which school you cleared 12

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 6:20 pm

        Sure dear u can call me mars.I did my 10th from Mount Carmel school and +2 from doaba public school.They are in Punjab.

    24. Tamil on June 13, 2017 11:29 am

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 3:11 pm

        Thank you dear

    25. Simi on June 13, 2017 12:10 pm

      Awesome dear… Sanskar is really changing ?? I think avni will call papa first

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 3:12 pm

        Thank you dear

    26. gayathri.visu on June 13, 2017 2:11 pm

      Awesome dear… Loved Sanskaar-Avni bonding!! Sanskaar is changing! I think Avni’s first word is papa?! Eagerly waiting for next part dear….

      • Mars on June 13, 2017 3:16 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    27. DA on June 13, 2017 11:51 pm

      Wonderful epi….!!
      I m sure avni speaks papa first……want swara to forgive sanskar…continue soon

      • Mars on June 14, 2017 4:19 am

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    28. sumayyah on June 14, 2017 8:27 am

      amazing Mars !!!
      (pulling my ears) sorry for being late
      feeling bad for Sanskar
      hope Swara realize soon

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 4:32 am

        Thank you dear and I really missed your comments but still don’t be sorry. Its alright.

    29. Milestone on June 14, 2017 10:54 am

      Nice……..I know you are gonna make it Baba but I want her first word to be Mumma….

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 4:33 am

        Thank you dear

    30. Seebu_s on June 14, 2017 9:27 pm

      Nice…i didnt feel bad for sanskar…he deserved that…but u r trying ur best to make his character sensible..i think avni will call sanky’s name first..but i hope she will call swasan(*mad me*)continue soon

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 4:35 am

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    31. vyshu10 on June 15, 2017 6:57 pm

      awesome….good that sanskar changed…i think avni will say dadda

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 7:57 pm

        Thank you dear

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 7:58 pm

        Let’s see what avni will call first.

    32. Shifa96 on June 16, 2017 4:07 pm

      Awesome..I think avni will say papa.

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 8:00 pm

        Thank you dear

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