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Home»Fan Fiction»Sufferings (swasan ts) by mars – shot 10
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Sufferings (swasan ts) by mars – shot 10

MarsBy MarsJuly 6, 2017Updated:July 6, 2017109 Comments9 Mins Read
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Hiii guys!!! I m back with the last shot of sufferings. Finally this short but beautiful journey is coming to end.
Thank you so much for your immense support and response throughout the story.That really means alot to me.
I really apologize for being late.
Let’s begin

SUFFERINGS (swasan ten shots)
SHOT 10(last part)
Maheshwari house:
Swasan room:
Swasan came from Terrace to their room and there sujata is sitting with avni.As soon as avni saw them she jumped on bed and asked sanskar to come near her.Sanskar went close to her while swara stood confused.
Avni(to sanskar): haw sle(how she)?
Avni tried to ask him something which confused sujata and swara but sanskar understood what she wants to ask.
Sanskar (picked up): yes she liked it.
Swara:what?
Sanskar: she is asking whether u liked the surprise or not.I had told her.
Swara: ohh then i loved it.
Avni kissed her cheeks.
Then sujata left to her room and swasan made avni sleep in centre and slept on either side of her.

After 2 months:
Maheshwari house:
Night
Hall:
Sujata is sitting in the hall.Swara is running after avni with glass of milk. Swara(shouts): avni stop now.
Avni: nooooo
Swara:avni I m saying last time have your milk.
Avni: I will dlink(drink) from papa.
Swara: may be papa will come late.
Avni shook her head in no.Sujata chuckles seeing them.
Sanskar has went for business deal to Delhi from one week.His call came and he told that he is coming tonight.
Swara(irritated): avni come here.
While avni saw Sanskar coming. She ran to him and hug his legs.
Sanskar picked her in arms and Said
Sanskar: how is my avni?
Avni(kiss his cheeks): fine. I misl(miss) u.
Sanskar (kisses tightly on her cheeks):
I also missed u alot.
Then only Sanskar saw swara standing with glass of milk.
Sanskar went near her and side hugged with avni still in arms.
Sanskar: how are u?
Swara(smiles): I m ok.u got the deal.
Sanskar (kiss her forehead): yes.
Avni was as usual playing with Sanskar’s shirt buttons.Seeing them sujata said
Sujata: ahem ahem I m also here.
Swara instantly depart herself from sanskar and bushes.
Sanskar went and took sujata’s blessings.
Swara: Sanskar ask your lovely daughter to drink milk.she is troubling me from half an hour.
Sanskar: avni???
Avni: no papa i m inlcent(innocent).
Sanskar:awww I know baby.
Swara:huh!!!! Both started.
Sanskar: give milk to me swara.
Sanskar made avni sit in his lap and she also silently drink it.
Later they all have dinner.

Swasan room:
Swara is setting bed when Sanskar entered inside.Swara looked at him and smiled. He went close to her and back hugged her.
Swara:sanskarrr
Sanskar: hmmm
Swara: where is avni?
Sanskar: she slept in my lap then mom took her to her room so that we can spend some time with each other.
Swara(narrow her eyes): asha.
Sanskar traces his hand on her belly beneath saree.Swara closed her eyes and was breathing heavily.
Sanskar started kissing her neck.He turned swara and kisses her forehead.
Swara hugged him tightly. They stood hugging each other for sometimes.
Two months ago they confessed but still sanskar didn’t touched Swara not even kissed bcoz he wants to give space to her to adjust to all the changes.But now he wants to take their relation ahead.
They broke the hug and looked at each other intensely.
Sanskar picked swara in his arms and place her gently on bed and came on top. He looked in her eyes for asking permission. Swara closed her eyes inanticipation. Soon Sanskar placed his lips on her and started kissing softly. Swara also responded for the first time. They had closed the eyes. Sanskar opened the knot of her blouse.He got flashes of the past when he used to force her.He instantly broke the kiss and got up.Swara got confused. He was about to leave the bed when swara held his hand and sits on bed.she asked being worried
Swara:what happened?
Sanskar (avoid eye contact): I can’t move further swara.How much I had hurt you.
His eyes got filled with tears.Now swara understood that he is remembeing past. She pull him on her and wiped his tears.
Swara:it’s ok sanskar it is our past.plzz forget it.
Sanskar:I m trying alot swara but I can’t.. ..
Swara(place her finger on his lips): shhh keep quite. If u will keep on remembering your past then u will spoil your present and future also.
Sanskar looked deep inside her eyes. Seeing sanskar just staring her she got irritated and help his collor and kissed his lips. Sanskar got shocked but soon started responding.They kissed each other passionately. They broke when they were out of breathe. Swara opened his shirt buttons. Now Sanskar can’t control. He pressed himself more on her and started removing her saree. Soon both discard their clothes and enjoyed the Bliss of being each other’s.
This was the first time they loved each other passionately bcoz till now it was sanskar’s dominance and Swara’s helplessness. Finally clearing all the problems in life they become one.
Their bodies were sweating profusely. Sanskar took Swara in his embrace and whispered
Sanskar(kiss her head): I love you swara.
Swara: love u too sanskar.
They slept hugging each other.

After one week:
All were having breakfast.Avni is sitting in Sanskar’s lap and he is feeding her.
Swara came from kitchen with juice. But she felt dizzy. She kept the jug on table and held the chair for support as she was not able to stand.Sanskar saw her but before he ask she fell down. Sanskar made avni sit on chair and went to swara
Sanskar(jerk her): swara get up.
Sujata called the doctor.
Soon doctor came and checked Swara.
Sanskar: what happened to her?
Doctor: She is fine and there is good news. Your wife is pregnant Mr maheshwari.
Sanskar got numb listening.
Sujata jerked him.he hugged Swara in bed only even she responded with equal intensity. Doctor left from there.
Sujata: I m very happy Swara. I will become dadi again.
She left the room in excitement.
One person is standing confused and she is avni.she is not understanding why all are so happy.
Avni(pout): papa
Sanskar looked at her pout and smiled. He made her sit beside swara and said
Sanskar:u know soon avni will have one little baby to play.
Avni(happy): really???
Sanskar:yes.
Avni:it will be rell (real)?
Swara: hmm same like u.
All spend time with each other.
Later Sanskar said
Sanskar: swara I m thinking to give this good news to baba and hope so he will forgive me now.
Swara(assures him): don’t worry he will.

Evening
Gododia house:
Swasan came with avni to meet shekar
Many times they came but still shekar has not forgiven sanskar completely.
Hall:All are sitting when swara said
Swara:baba there is good news?
Shekar:what beta.
Swara(slightly blushes): we are going to be parents.
Shekar (hug Swara): I m happy for u beta.
Sanskar smiles at them when shekar said to Sanskar
Shekar: u won’t hug me.
Sanskar immediately got up and hugged him.
Sanskar: I m sorry baba plzz forgive me.
Shekar: it’s ok I forgive u but last time.
Sanskar: thank you baba. I will never repeat it.
Shekar: I m glad u moved on and changed yourself.
Swara and avni smiled looking at them.

After nine months swara give birth to a baby boy and they named him ansh similar to avni.Sanskar has already said to swara that avni will be their first child and then ansh.

After one year:
Ansh is now one year old.He loves his sister avni the most.sujata spend most of his time with kids as sanskar has opened playschool for swara and she goes there also.They are happy and satisfied in there life.
Evening:
Maheshwari house:
The hall is decorated beautifully as there is some occasion.In the centre a table is there on which birthday cake is placed.A little girl dressed in princess dress cut the cake.She is avni who is celebrating her third birthday. As soon as she blown the candles there was someone who shouted loudly and clapped hardly with his tiny hands.He is ansh who is very excited for his di’s birthday. Ansh is in swara’s arms and swasan are standing on either side of avni. Few closed relatives are present.
Sanskar helped her to cut the piece of cake then picked her in arms as she is small to feed all.Firstly swasan feed avni.Avni filled ansh mouth with chocolate. Both giggles at there own antics.Then avni feed sanskar and swara followed by sujata then shekar.
Then they danced and enjoyed alot.
They clicks family photos.
They were happy with each other.
Avni is Sanskar’s princess and ansh is swara’s Prince.
Swasan decided to tell avni about her real parents when she will turn 18 as then she will be mature and sensible.

Girls are blessing of god.Avni, who has no blood relation with maheshwari’s become Angel of the house and changed it.Sanskar once who don’t want to adopt avni,she became his lifeline.
Relations are made by affection not blood.

The end

Here comes the end of this ts.
Humble request to all readers especially silent readers plzzz leave your feedback as it’s last shot.

And those who are on wattpad, I request them to vote on my stories as i m posting there. I know u must not be having any interest in them as u had already read them on tu but plzz then also vote and support me.

My wattpad id is mars_111

Thank you
Bye
Take care.

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    109 Comments

    1. Nagamanasa on July 6, 2017 3:29 pm

      Awww..Amazing ending dear???Last few lines are too good…loved to the core..❤❤❤

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:07 am

        Thank you so much dear

    2. Darlzz002 on July 6, 2017 3:37 pm

      It was a nyc epi..
      I loved it alot…
      Plz post the next chapters of my better half and Naughty billo….
      Plzzzzz im requesting u plzzzz

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:53 am

        Thank you so much deardear and will try to post naughty billo and my better half also soon.so sorry for the delay

    3. Stg on July 6, 2017 3:45 pm

      Superrr Duperrr amazing ???

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:55 am

        Thank you so much dear

    4. Swasan on July 6, 2017 3:46 pm

      Amazing

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:56 am

        Thank you so much dear

    5. phoniex on July 6, 2017 3:50 pm

      Nice conclusion dear. yes, you are right Avni was an angel for them.

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:58 am

        Thank you so much dear

    6. pnap on July 6, 2017 3:54 pm

      amazing part
      really loved it

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 6:59 am

        Thank you so much dear

    7. Vidhi on July 6, 2017 3:58 pm

      First of all where were u yar… Yesterday I was impatiently waiting …
      Last time maf kiya aapko…
      N this was so awesome journey of their’s…
      Loved everything.. How it started n came too n end… Just loved everything ❤❤❤
      N how can u say that we will get bore reading ur ff on wattpad…
      Are hum to intezar kar rahe the.. That kab tum wattpad pe aao….N hum waha bhi pad sake…. U don’t knw I always visit wattpad so as to see how much u updated their….
      Impatiently waiting for naughty billo….
      Update yar… ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:05 am

        Firstly sorry my cousins came so was not able to write this will be the last. I will try to post my one story everyday.
        Thank you much for your beautiful comment.naughty billo will post today.

    8. Ashwini on July 6, 2017 4:00 pm

      Lovely end but we all know that SwaSan stories ka koi end nhi hota ??????
      This SwaSan journey really good yrr awesome ???

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:09 am

        Thank you so much dear and yup swasan stories have no end.

    9. AbrahamEzra on July 6, 2017 4:06 pm

      It was mind blowing. Finally my acni got a brother and shekhar forgave sanskar. it was a happy ending. I will miss this story soooooooooooo muuuuuuccccccchhhhhhhh. If possible then write an epilogue with swasan and avsh

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:11 am

        Thank you so much dear and will try to give epilogue.

    10. sandra on July 6, 2017 4:13 pm

      loved it …missed u nd ur stories yesterday

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:15 am

        Thank you so much dear sorry for vanishing day before yesterday.

    11. shravani on July 6, 2017 4:14 pm

      awesome… going to miss it badly

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:18 am

        Thank you so much dear

    12. anu on July 6, 2017 4:15 pm

      loved it

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:23 am

        Thank you so much dear

    13. AnuAnn on July 6, 2017 4:44 pm

      Loved it dear… And really going to miss it

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:25 am

        Thank you so much dear

    14. Kumu on July 6, 2017 4:47 pm

      Awesome..loved it..perfect ending..tc..

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:30 am

        Thank you so much dear

    15. Sus on July 6, 2017 5:20 pm

      nyc ending dear
      well no doubt avni filled the space in Sanskar life by which he became so harsh.

      its not only woman, i think men also suffer alot but just they can’t show that.

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:32 am

        Thank you so much dear and u said right even man suffers but they don’t express.

    16. anu on July 6, 2017 5:30 pm

      awesome loved it alot

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:34 am

        Thank you so much dear

    17. SNY on July 6, 2017 6:01 pm

      awesome ???

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:36 am

        Thank you so much dear

    18. Kanha on July 6, 2017 6:06 pm

      Siso yaar I have no words. Tune mera mooh band kar diya. It was really very awesome siso. Want to read more stories of yours. Keep writing siso. Love you sooo much. TC?☺️?

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:38 am

        Thank you so much sisooo love you too.

    19. Tamil on July 6, 2017 6:13 pm

      Wow….Amazing dear ????? loved it….

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:40 am

        Thank you so much dear

    20. Harnoor_Khera on July 6, 2017 6:29 pm

      Amazing story…Girls are blessing from god which are given to lucky people…ur writing skills are too good mars….loved it !!!

      BTW wats ur real name mars???

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:42 am

        Thank you so much dear and my real name is ripen

    21. Kavita on July 6, 2017 6:33 pm

      awesome…

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:44 am

        Thank you so much dear

    22. sumayyah on July 6, 2017 6:53 pm

      Aaaw I’m blushing hihihihi
      Amazing epi marsuuu loved it
      The beautiful journey came to an end giving us an unforgettable message .
      Thank u so much dear for writing it on swasan
      Love you

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:45 am

        thank you so much summuu and love u tooo

    23. scooby on July 6, 2017 7:24 pm

      Awesome ??

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:48 am

        Thank you so much dear

    24. SHAN on July 6, 2017 8:07 pm

      Amazing i loved it a lot…. This story was very heart touching and it gave a very good social message

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:49 am

        Thank you so much shan di

    25. Romaisa on July 6, 2017 8:41 pm

      Wow loved it

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:52 am

        Thank you so much dear

    26. Rosey on July 6, 2017 8:43 pm

      I’m sad as it is ended but I loved it yaar…just superbbb too good

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:53 am

        Thank you so much dear

    27. Jessicauio on July 6, 2017 8:45 pm

      Lovely

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 7:55 am

        Thank you so much dear

    28. Soujanya on July 6, 2017 8:57 pm

      Awesome…

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 8:21 am

        Thank you so much dear

    29. Simin on July 6, 2017 8:58 pm

      Amazing story dear
      Different from all others
      Sanskar understood importance of his wife n kid n eventually turned into a good father n and amazing husband
      Stay happy………

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 8:23 am

        Thank you so much dear

    30. veena on July 6, 2017 9:20 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 8:25 am

        Thank you so much dear

    31. sneha on July 6, 2017 9:50 pm

      Awesome… It was one of ur excellent story dear. And u give superb ending with a good message.

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 8:27 am

        Thank you so much dear

    32. Adishu on July 6, 2017 11:45 pm

      wow mars I loved it… I m speechless… u rightly said girls r gift of god…. keep writing like this…
      n u know what I really want ur hands I don’t understand how you write this much stories at a time… :p

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 8:31 am

        Thank you so much dear and u can take my hands hihihi

    33. Unknown on July 6, 2017 11:48 pm

      It’s awesome…….loved it

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 8:33 am

        Thank you so much dear

    34. swaragini on July 7, 2017 12:44 am

      best part thank u dii

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 8:48 am

        thank you so much dear

    35. Anu Rathore on July 7, 2017 1:15 am

      Its awesome nd superb…..

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 8:50 am

        Thank you so much dear

    36. Rashi on July 7, 2017 1:29 am

      So amazing

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 8:51 am

        Thank you so much dear

    37. Simi on July 7, 2017 2:05 am

      Amazing update dear..
      Last note is true.. Girls r blessings ☺️☺️

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 8:55 am

        Thank you so much dear

    38. NDSG on July 7, 2017 2:10 am

      Beautiful…. Finally shekhar forgave SANSKAR… The moment when it was 3rd birthday of anvi was so beautiful… I was imagining SwaSan with two child… ???? it made me cry… CVS I hate them they never gave us balgopal and balgopali

      But u fulfilled my wish. A fully satisfied end. SWASAN r happy together.

      And one more thing.

      Relations are made by affection not blood

      Epic line… Cherry??? on the cake ????

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 8:56 am

        Thank you so much dear

    39. Saima on July 7, 2017 3:07 am

      Well just take an awesome now coz don’t havemuch time to type a long appreciation msg as I m really sleepy

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 8:58 am

        Thank you so much dear

    40. ankita Gaude on July 7, 2017 6:27 am

      awsome

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 8:59 am

        Thank you so much dear

    41. Anjali on July 7, 2017 9:48 am

      Superb loved it nd i will miss it

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 9:59 am

        Thank you so much dear

    42. Prashasti7 on July 7, 2017 10:14 am

      Awwwww this ws cute….
      Y u end so soon ???? I’ll miss this na bt its ok plz come with new one
      N u r posting this in wattpad na thnkuu for posting it there I’ll vote there
      Love u ????

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 2:09 pm

        Thank you so much dear. Love u tooo

    43. Febi on July 7, 2017 11:02 am

      Awesome and excellent dear

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 2:10 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    44. Milestone on July 7, 2017 12:12 pm

      Cute…. awesome… dear….

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 2:12 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    45. Neptune on July 7, 2017 12:14 pm

      aaaawwwweeeeeeeeeessssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee marsuuuuuu….
      this story is really close to my heart i loved it…..
      if possible please please please give epilogue with swasan cute moments along with kids…..

      do come with a new swasan story dear…
      would love to read….
      love u…
      take care….

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 2:17 pm

        Thank you so much nepuuu I will try to give epilogue soon and will start new one also soon.

    46. shweta on July 7, 2017 1:48 pm

      wwwwwwowwwwwwwwwwwwww??????? jzt awsm…..I’m really gonna miss this wonderful ff….

      • Mars on July 7, 2017 4:31 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    47. Rockleon on July 7, 2017 10:51 pm

      First of all very sorry forr late commenting …
      The chapter wasss sooo amazing!
      U totally rocked it
      I seriously love tge way u write !!!
      I salute u for writing soo many awesome stories at a time matlab how u write it yaar !!!
      U r truly talented !!!
      GOD BLESS YOU and keep writing for ur fans
      Love u Loads!!!!
      Take care!

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 8:45 am

        Thank you sooo much dear. It really means alot to me.love uuu

      • Rockleon on July 8, 2017 2:21 pm

        Love u too loads!!!

    48. gayathri.visu on July 8, 2017 1:50 am

      Awwww!!! Soooooo cute n perfect ending… Loved it, especially ur msg in last para. I will miss this story Marssuuuu…..

      • Mars on July 8, 2017 8:45 am

        Thank you so much dear

    49. Shreeyu on July 8, 2017 9:08 am

      Awesome Di♥

      • Mars on July 10, 2017 5:17 am

        Thank you dear

    50. Shibil on July 8, 2017 9:52 am

      Awww….soooo cute…..lovely ending ……last para message is too gud ….

      • Mars on July 10, 2017 5:19 am

        Thank you dear

    51. Niharika on July 8, 2017 2:57 pm

      I really loved this ff Mars . It was superb

      • Mars on July 10, 2017 5:20 am

        Thank you dear

    52. Shifa96 on July 8, 2017 6:49 pm

      It’s awesome dear

      • Mars on July 10, 2017 5:21 am

        Thank you dear

    53. vyshu10 on July 9, 2017 8:01 pm

      awww…cute

      • Mars on July 10, 2017 5:23 am

        Thank you dear

    54. raina on July 10, 2017 10:49 am

      wowww!!!
      i loved this short story a lot mars..
      a beautiful story..

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 4:45 am

        Thank you dear

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