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Home»Fan Fiction»Sufferings (SwaSan SS) Season 2 Shot 1 by Marsuu
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Sufferings (SwaSan SS) Season 2 Shot 1 by Marsuu

MarsBy MarsSeptember 11, 2017124 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello guys!!! This is Mars with sufferings season 2. I know it is unexpected but I really want to share this story with you all. If you had not read season 1 then also u can read this bcoz it is a completely new story and has no similarity with season 1. Actually this story I was going to write for os competition which was held but then it was very lengthy and I dropped the idea so i m giving it as ss hope so u will like it.
Let’s begin

SUFFERINGS(SwaSan SS)Season 2
SHOT 1:

CHARACTERS:
Sanskar Maheshwari: 25 years old very simple person. He loves his wife swara and his daughter Ashi a lot but sometimes his love get overpowered with the respect he has for his mother sujata. He is very obedient son and If he has to choose between his mother and wife then he will prefer his mother. He follows whatever her mother says.

Swara Sanskar Maheshwari: 23 years loves her daughter Ashi to the core. She is her everything. Swara never let ashi feel low when whole family discriminate with her just for being a girl. She loves Sanskar also and never felt bad that he gives more importance to her mother. Ideal wife dil and perfect mother .

Ashi Maheshwari: 3 years old. Very cute bubbly like her mother. She is always found with swara. Loves her mamma like anything. Swara fulfil her every wish. She likes her cousin brother rahul also but never understand that why her dadi gives all her love to rahul not her.

Adarsh Maheshwari: 28 years old sanskar’s elder brother and dominating husband. He even beat his wife Pari as his mother encourage her. He is not alike sanskar in this case. He encourages Sanskar also to dominate swara but Sanskar respect swara so he never follow him. Puppet of his mother.

Parineeta Maheshwari: 25 years old simple and sweet lady.She is scared of adarsh. She consider swara as her little sister and also love ashi and her son rahul equally. She always share her feelings with swara.

Rahul Maheshwari: 3 years old just one month elder to ashi. He is pampered by everyone as he is son of the family bcoz of which he is stubborn and spoiled.He is his dadi’s favourite.Son of adarsh and pari.

Sujata Maheshwari: Head of the house. All are scared from her. She don’t like swara as she has given birth to daughter and even hate ashi. She likes pari just bcoz she has son. Dominate everyone. If anyone need money in house then they have to ask her.

Maheshwari’s are landlords in village. They are most rich in the village and all farmers work under them. Whole circulation of money is done by sujata and sanskar and adarsh get little money every month.

Rajasthan(village)
Maheshwari Haveli:
Moving inside we can see a lady in late fifties is making one boy ready for school as its his first day.
The boy is Rahul and the Lady is sujata.
Sujata: study well okay then u have to be successful in life.
She said cheering him but he just nodded his head as he didn’t understood anything. Ashi is sitting on sofa little far beside swara holding her arm who was cutting vegetables. She was continuously looking how sujata is making rahul ready and he is excited to go to school.
Ashi look at swara and said slowly
Ashi: mamma I also want to go to school with bhaiya.
Swara look at the little soul and was about to answer but before only sujata said harshly
Sujata:u will not go to School,swara take your daughter to kitchen that is her right place.
Ashi got scared and hugged Swara.
Swara smiles at her trying to make her feel better.
Later, swara went to kitchen and ashi ran to her room(swasan room).

After completing her works swara went to her room to see ashi.
Swasanshi room:
Swara enter inside and saw ashi sitting on bed with her head buried in her knees. Swara went near her and hugged her
Swara: what happened to my ashi??
Ashi look at her with teary eyes and said
Ashi: I also want books(whispers)
Swara(wipe her tears): why to cry when your mamma is here.
Ashi blink her eyes at her looking cute.
Swara got up and went to cupboard and unlock it and take out few books.
Ashi stood on bed to see what is there. Swara came back and place books on bed.
Ashi look at them and then at swara.
Swara: these are for my ashi.
Ashi(pick one books): this is mine.
Swara nodded and ashi jumped on swara in excitement.
Actually sujata said that ashi will not go to school but swara will not let her daughter illiterate. So she bought nursery standard books for her.
Swara: okay now we will write ashi’s names on books.
Swara started writing names on her books. Ashi is so excited and clap her hands.
Swara: ashi don’t tell anyone that i teach you and bring books.
Ashi(innocently): why??
Swara: bcoz this is mamma and ashi’s secret okay promise.
Ashi: yes pinky promise.
Swara kiss her cheeks and then took one note book and teach ashi to make “A” alphabet.
Swara: A for???
Ashi thinks keeping pencil on her cheek.
Swara smiles seeing her antics.
Ashi: A for Ashi
Swara: awww very good ashi is very intelligent.
Ashi giggles and they had fun while studying.

Evening:
Hall
Rahul is sitting in sujata’s lap and ashi on sofa playing with her doll.Then only sanskar and adarsh came from work.
Swara and pari are in kitchen preparing for dinner.
Rahul: dadi today I learned to make A
Sujata: ohh good.
Rahul: ashi u don’t know what it is?
Ashi(instantly): no I know mamma…
Then she remembered swara’s words
” This is mamma and ashi’s secret”
She ran and jumped in sanskar’s lap.
Sanskar smiles and hug her.
Sujata: this girl started disturbing my son when he just came don’t u know he must be tired.
Ashi hide her face in Sanskar’s chest.
Sanskar: its okay ma I m fine.
He said and kisses ashi’s head.
Swara came with water and give to sanskar and adarsh.
Sanskar smiles at him.No doubt how much tired he is but just seeing his smiling wife and daughter he felt relaxed.
To be continued….

So this is first shot I know its short but this I had given to make you aware little about the story.
So how’s it???? The main story will focus on swasanshi(swasan and ashi)
It will show mother’s struggle for her daughter.
This story is little real lifestory and yes if you are interested plzzz let know. Even one word comment is enough to let me know if you want to read it but don’t be silent plzz
One thing more this is not any new topic about girls and if you find this similar to any other story then let me know bcoz I don’t want to copy.
Waiting for your feedback plz don’t disappoint me.
Thank you
Bye
Take care

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    124 Comments

    1. Sus on September 11, 2017 8:13 am

      its nyc dear

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 9:16 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    2. Febi on September 11, 2017 8:16 am

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 9:17 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    3. shilpi99 on September 11, 2017 8:21 am

      Its awesome I have read first season waiting for this season post soon

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 9:18 am

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    4. Nagamanasa on September 11, 2017 8:24 am

      Marsuuu I am back again and u welcomed me with ur story…I loved the concept…post soon…will meet u in wattpad…

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 9:22 am

        Ohhho welcome back dear soo happy to see you back and thank you so much dear will continue soon tc okay will meet on wattpad.

    5. Janani on September 11, 2017 8:41 am

      It is nice continue the story

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 9:23 am

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    6. Bush1122 on September 11, 2017 9:13 am

      It seems to be interesting..
      Plz continue soon

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 9:25 am

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    7. L Khan on September 11, 2017 9:17 am

      Loved post…..post next part soon

      Plzz also post he is dangerous

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 9:27 am

        Thank you so much dear will post soon and he is dangerous also will try to give soon tc

    8. ankita Gaude on September 11, 2017 9:25 am

      awsome

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 10:14 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    9. independent on September 11, 2017 9:36 am

      Superb

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 10:15 am

        Thank you so much di tc

    10. Kashu on September 11, 2017 9:40 am

      Amazing dear.. I really like the concept.. Its totally different.. Waiting for the next part.. Post soon.. Bye and take care…

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 10:17 am

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    11. Rachna on September 11, 2017 9:42 am

      Awsm Dr

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 10:18 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    12. Tweety_SwaSan on September 11, 2017 9:43 am

      Hey Mars dear.. As usual very nice dear.. Poor Aashi..? I hate Sujatha here.. Waiting to know what is Sanskaar’s role in this mother-daughter struggle.. Continue soon and thank you.. ??

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 10:19 am

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    13. Stg on September 11, 2017 10:15 am

      Awesome ???

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 11:50 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    14. Ss on September 11, 2017 10:31 am

      Very good plot continue dear

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 11:53 am

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    15. Vidhi on September 11, 2017 10:38 am

      Superb yar… ❤❤

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 12:02 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    16. Sonia on September 11, 2017 10:39 am

      I think i m going to cry after reading this ff. Its ok … anything for swasan.

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 12:04 pm

        Yeah may be there are possibilities of crying let’s see thank you so much dear tc

    17. Rosey on September 11, 2017 10:41 am

      It’s awesom Marsi…
      Yar I liked it..,pot ashi but I love the way she is behaving innocent and mature as well…and Swara so sweet and Sanskaar don’t know what to say…just wanna read next sooner and yes post shattered a i I’m soon to

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 12:05 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post shattered soul also soon tc

    18. amna2016 on September 11, 2017 10:44 am

      As always amazing but I feel sad for that little soul, Swara and Parineeta?

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 12:06 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    19. Pari on September 11, 2017 11:05 am

      Nice

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 12:07 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    20. Chaitu on September 11, 2017 11:08 am

      Nice dear mothers struggle for her child and the little soul is confused about partiality love to read further

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 12:09 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    21. Kaur Daljeet on September 11, 2017 11:34 am

      Different story….. Like it….waiting for next

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 12:11 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    22. rini on September 11, 2017 11:39 am

      interesting..

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 12:14 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    23. riya malhotra on September 11, 2017 11:47 am

      Superb

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 12:15 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    24. Anu Rathore on September 11, 2017 11:47 am

      Its awesome…

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 12:16 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    25. anika on September 11, 2017 11:58 am

      Nice

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 12:18 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    26. Halima on September 11, 2017 12:01 pm

      Marsu its awesome but what about other ff dear pls post it yaar kitna makkhan lagana padega bol de.n sorry I couldn’t update on ur other story as I am busy I hope I don’t mind

      • Halima on September 11, 2017 2:20 pm

        Sorry its comment not update

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 4:51 pm

        It’s okay I got it

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 2:23 pm

        Kal se pane updates regularly dugi pakkka thank you so much dear tc

    27. Shreny on September 11, 2017 12:05 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 2:24 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    28. Anjali on September 11, 2017 12:34 pm

      Superb waiting for next part

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 2:25 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    29. Kumu on September 11, 2017 1:03 pm

      Awesome..loved the concept..tc??

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 2:27 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    30. NDSG on September 11, 2017 2:36 pm

      It’s NICEEEEEEE, simple. It happens in real life also… Boys have given more preference. U know Mars my dadi ma also don’t like me when I was born but then, I was soo cute na. Don’t know but she melt for me. She stated liking me. Even my brother use to tease me then dadi used to scold him. ????????? I missed her a lot. But dadi was never against my study. ??????? U know when Dad scolded he i used to hide behind dadi…?

      Sorry for bakwass. But suddenly yaad a gai. About chappy I loved it. Even though sujju ???? is not good but one day she will understand the importance of ashi. I appreciate Swara. ?????

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 4:54 pm

        No its not bakwass I liked your story of being cute…. Yuppp sujuuu will realized what is importance of ashi in her life. Thank you so much dear tc

    31. vi on September 11, 2017 3:10 pm

      good starting

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 4:55 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    32. Bella on September 11, 2017 3:39 pm

      Pls continue soon

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 5:13 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    33. AbrahamEzra on September 11, 2017 3:51 pm

      Super concept dear. And plss do continue

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 5:14 pm

        Thank you so much dear will continue soon tc

    34. Divz on September 11, 2017 4:05 pm

      again with a beautiful story…. hayeee love it so much marsu

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 5:21 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear tc

    35. anu on September 11, 2017 4:34 pm

      marsuu loved 1st season now waiting for season2 as u statrted.. awesome update next part soon loving it

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 5:22 pm

        Aww thank you so much dear tc

    36. Rp on September 11, 2017 5:02 pm

      Nice dearr

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 5:38 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    37. Abhilasha on September 11, 2017 5:12 pm

      Wowww yr so glad that along with love story its a social issue and its ur speciality that you show different social issues in very easy way… Loved it yr and can’t wait to read further!!

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 5:41 pm

        Awwww that’s so sweet of you thank you so much dear will continue soon tc

    38. Guna on September 11, 2017 6:48 pm

      Awesome concept love to read further

      • Mars on September 11, 2017 7:12 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    39. yamee on September 11, 2017 7:13 pm

      Interesting…..waiting for next part post soon.

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 8:37 am

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    40. Tamil on September 11, 2017 7:34 pm

      Amazing concept dear….Continue…..feeling bad for swara ashi pari

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 8:41 am

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    41. Swarna01 on September 11, 2017 8:24 pm

      Thanx 4 s2. Sry. M ur reader bt due to log in prblm me cmnt nhn deti hun. Sry.

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 8:44 am

        Hey don’t be sorry it’s okay thank you so much dear tc

    42. AnuAnn on September 11, 2017 8:46 pm

      marssu… interesting

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 8:45 am

        Thank you so much anuu dear tc

    43. vyshu10 on September 11, 2017 9:08 pm

      superb

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 8:46 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    44. vishakha07 on September 11, 2017 9:12 pm

      its really interesting. please post soon

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 8:49 am

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

      • KAIRA on September 12, 2017 1:44 pm

        WHEN

    45. sneha on September 11, 2017 10:07 pm

      Awesome dear. Continue soon

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 8:50 am

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    46. Milestone on September 11, 2017 11:03 pm

      Nice….

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 8:52 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    47. Adishu on September 11, 2017 11:31 pm

      aww marsuu I loved it yaar… u have choosed a very nice topic…. next soon…

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 8:53 am

        Awww thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    48. veena on September 12, 2017 7:00 am

      nice but pls don’t make sanskar bad

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 9:35 am

        Thank you so much dear and sanskar will not be bad here wait for the story tc

    49. Soujanya on September 12, 2017 10:46 am

      Awesome….

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 11:39 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    50. KAIRA on September 12, 2017 1:43 pm

      PLZ SOON POST THE SHOT 2

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 2:40 pm

        Will post in one or two days. Thanks dear tc

    51. Arunika on September 12, 2017 6:13 pm

      Loved it Marsuu…..upload the next part asap…..I’m waiting!

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 6:24 pm

        Thank you so much dear will continue soon tc

    52. Prashasti7 on September 12, 2017 6:32 pm

      wow marshuu awsm continue soon

      • Mars on September 12, 2017 7:40 pm

        Thank you so much dear will continue soon tc?

    53. Tani on September 13, 2017 11:18 am

      Fabulous

      • Mars on September 13, 2017 11:40 am

        Thank you so much dear tc??

    54. KAIRA on September 13, 2017 10:49 pm

      HAVE U POST SHOT 2
      THEN PLZ SEND ME THE WEBSITE
      I CAN’T FIND IT

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 4:09 am

        It’s not posted still sorry will give in one or two days??

      • KAIRA on September 14, 2017 12:02 pm

        YYYY????

      • Mars on September 14, 2017 1:37 pm

        I n covering other stories also so it’s little take out time for this will give soon

    55. KAIRA on September 14, 2017 10:05 pm

      THEN PLZ SEND ME THE WEBSITE ADDRESS

      • KAIRA on September 14, 2017 11:30 pm

        TELL ME
        IS IT POST
        I AM NOT GETTING IT
        THAT’S WHY

    56. KAIRA on September 15, 2017 12:01 am

      4 DAYS HAVE GONE
      BUT U DIDN’T POST
      ANYTHING
      YYY???

    57. Mars on September 15, 2017 9:09 am

      Heyyy kaira dear when i will post it will be on page only u will get sorry for delay but plzz try to understand???? thanks

    58. KAIRA on September 15, 2017 7:30 pm

      HAVE U POST IT
      TELL ME
      PLZZ

    59. KAIRA on September 15, 2017 11:00 pm

      mars
      if u don’t post the shot 2 by 12.00 am
      I AM GOING TO SHOOT U
      N U CAN’T ESCAPE
      ASAP
      POST IT

    60. KAIRA on September 16, 2017 12:57 am

      AT LEAST
      TELL WHEN U R GOING TO POST SHOT 2
      I AM FEELING SAD
      PLEASE MARS
      IT IS A REQUEST
      LET ME KNOW

    61. KAIRA on September 16, 2017 10:54 pm

      mars have u forgot that
      u have to write story
      on sufferings swasan ss season 2 shot 2
      plz asap post it

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 5:43 pm

        Sorry for the delay dear and next part is posted u can check on page.

    62. gayathri.visu on September 17, 2017 9:07 am

      Wow…..real life story! Superb starting Marsuu..

      • Mars on September 18, 2017 5:44 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc?????

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