SUBTLE WORDS UNTIL THE DUSK : TEN SHOTS AT KRIYA [SHOT -3]

AT TRAIN

Pratigya : Vividha , so today you won’t listen your favourite programme ?

Vividha : Arrey yaar !! Good that you reminded me , let’s on FM. By the by why you are so much interested today in listening FM ? Any particular reason ?

Pratigya : Nothing , but yeah little a bit I am curious to know whether my lyrics has been selected or not . Even if it’s not selected also I would like to hear the whole song.

Vivihda : Woh toh hein. I was just little a bit tensed because my dad and brothers are looking a bridegroom for me.

Pratigya : Wow that’s great.

Vividha : Kya great ? Woh aaj shaam tak aanewaala hein. I mean around 7 pm.

Pratigya : That time you will reach in your home. Then you have to get ready with a tray of coffee and need to serve him and his family members.

Vividha : Don’t irritate me yaar. Mein naa coffee mein kuch milane kee soch rahi hun .

Pratigya : Please don’t do that. Bechara !!

Vividha : Bahut feel ho raha hein , Listen Pratigya. You won’t go to your chaacha’s home today.

Pratigya : What ? And why ?

Vividha : I mean please stay with me today. You know naa in my family I am the one and only girl. Mere theen bhai hein-jinki abhi tak shaadi nahi huyi. And my Mom- who passed away when I was just 7 years old. So you know naa being a girl what all things I need to handle in a male family ?

Pratigya : Okay, I will stay with you tonight. Mein naa chaachi ko phone karke batati hoon.

Vividha : Tabh tak mein apne Krish ki programme tune karti hoon.

As usual Vividha turns on the FM

Hello friends, It’s me your RJ Krish . Good evening every one. So last day I asked all about penning the incomplete lyrics and I must say the response was awesome. I got so many handwritten letters , but some send in face book which is rejected as I told the lyrics must be a handwritten copy only. And why I said it because when we takes pen in our hand and starts holding it’s tip – it gives a kind of question to our eyes- what exactly you have to write with me ? And while writing something special we focuses much -regarding handwriting , the ink which we are using -some likes to use black ink only and for some it’s blue. See in school days and college days while writing exams how kuch we were focused regarding writing ? What happened then that we all switched towards the mobiles, laptops, tablets that we skipped the habit of writing diary itself ? This was just an attempt to show yourself how magically you can pour words with your own pen. Your writings reflects your heart. Any ways without further delays let me introduce you all to the full lyrics of the song -Yenagalli ….Wait..how could it be ? Like I sing the whole song and lyricisit hears it ? That could be an awesome surprise to the unknown person who is away from my eyes , but I can see that person’s beautiful words with my eyes. So let me sing it….

Vivdha : Ihope it’s your lyrics only

Pratigya : You think so ?

Vividha smiles and nods her head

Programme goes on

Krish : So I am singing this one in middle of you. I mean in a train. This time I thought to make a change and that’s why we are travelling in public. My friend and the technichian cum guitarist Atharv is also with me. We are travelling in Mumbai train which is going to Chembur- Time is 6.05 pm.

Vividha and Pratigya are surprised.

Pratigya : That means he is in this train

Vividha : Yeah Pratigya .

Now the full song goes on

Yenagali munde saagu nee,
bayasiddella sigadu baaLali (2)
nannaaNe nanna maatu suLLalla hoooo (2)

———-
whatever happens, you need to go on with this strife
whatever you wish for, seldom you get in life (2)
Swear on me, my words are not mere lies…hoooooooo (2)
———-

ahaha ahaha ahaha
1.
[chalisuva kaalavu, kalisuva paaTava
mareyabEDa nee, tumbiko manadali] (2)

time that moves on and on, and teaches lessons beyond
you don’t forget those, fill it in your mind (2)

Indigo naLego, mundina baaLali
gelluvanta spoorthi daari deepa
ninage aa anubhava] (2)
ninage aa anubhava
————–

for today or tomorrow, later on in your life
let the winning spirit be the guiding light
for your experience (2)
—————

As the lines reached the filling part Pratigya gote excited.

Vividha : Pratigya, those lines ?

Pratigya : Yes it’s written by me.

Song goes on

yenagali, munde saagu nee,
bayasiddella sigadu baalali..

yenagali munde saagu nee

bayasiddella sigadu baalali
bayasiddella sigadu baalali..hooo
nannane nanna matu sullalla..hooo
nannane nanna matu sullalla

Don;t ever think that time is over

I swear my words are not my lie

karunege bele ide, punyake phalavide

dayava toru vaa manninaa gunavide

we feels mercy has no value now a days goodness exists no more ‘

but you keep showing mercy towards others as that’s your earth’s quality

saavina suliali, silukida jeevake
jeeva needuva hrudayave,daivavu
harisida kaigalu nammanu belesutha
vidhiya barahavaagi,maunadalle
nammanu kayutha

Amidst the paths of death also you need to live for others

you need to live with heart as it’s given by god.

the hands which bought up us for them we need to live

we always faces fate, but in silence

some one is waiting for us 

prathiphala bayasade, toridaa karuneyu

modalu manuja nemba, sartha katheya,
nemmadee tharuvudu preeti , nemmadee gelluvadhu preeti

Without expecting reward show mercy towards humanity

the more we give love , the more we get love 

Nanna aane nanna maathu sullala

I swear I am not lying

While the song was going on Pratigya and Vividha were searching Krishna and Atharva by running through all compartments and finally the train reached it’s destiny they finds two men . One was holding mike and other was holding guitar with some other boys who were recording the programme. They were surrounded by the crowd. Some were appreciating Krish. Pratigya and Vivihda wasn’t able to see their faces clearly due to the crowd. But they were watching from a corner. As soon as the rush became bit less , they walked towards them.

Atharv : Vividha, Pratigya Madamji

Vividha ; Atharv tum Krish ke saath, Matlab you are that guitarist

Atharv ; Yeah, I am working as technichian at Radio station. I learned guitar at school vaccation. And some times I used to play it.

Vividha : Oh My God!! Pehale kyun nahi bataya, tum guitar baja rahe ho ? Woh bhi mere favourite RJ ke song mein ? You are so lucky. You are sitting much near to Krish and you are able to hear him . Wow. And KrishJi this lovely song in your beautiful voice is penned by my colleague Pratigya Saxena. Please give me your autograph.

Krishna : My full name is Krishna thakur. But as RJ all calls me as Krish

He gives autograph to Vividha

Vividha : Thanks. Let me say Pratigya was desperately waiting whether you will select her lyrics .

Pratigya dekho toh sahi , Krish ko abhi tak tum talaash kar rahi thi naa , Woh tumhare saamne hein. Come forward. Come…..

As Pratigya came forward Krishna looked her . Hey hey …plays

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ocjatb47jPI

Atharv and Vividha smiles seeing them

Atharv : See my friend Krishna – I mean RJ Krish was teasing why my love train hasn’t reached station till now ? But here luck is on his way , their first meeting is at the right station. Hey naa Vividha ?

Vividha : Idiot!! Kuch bhi bolta hein. She admires him because of his presentation skills. Okay.

Atharv : Pata nahi. But I think their eyes speaks a lot.

Vividha : Oh!! Why you are so filmy ?

Atharv ; Experience of 12 years, Vividha. My eyes knows everything.

Vividha ; Oh Really!! Then look at my eyes and say what you knows now ?

Atharv : Let me see.

They look each other’s eyes

Atharv : You are very much tensed as your dad is keen in getting you married .

Vividha ; Arrey tumhein kaise pata ?

Atharv : Matlab!! I said it in random, yeh sach hein kyaa ?

Vividha : Pata nahi Atharv, bas kuch hee pal mein woh stranger mere ghar mein aane waala hein.

Atharv ; Toh this is our last meeting ? I mean now you are Paaro and I am Devdas, Nahi!!!

Hamesha tumko chaha , chaha, chaha ….

Vividha : Tum kyun gaate ho aise songs ?

Atharv : Vividha, I will be standing at a corner and watching your marriage. Will you give me that right ? Till now I am not able to win your heart , at least please do this favor to me.

Vividha : Atharv, chup….Tum kyun ganga jamuna baha rahe ho ? Pratigya ….Pratigya !!

Pratigya : Haan Vividha

Vividha : Ghar nahi jaana kyaa

Pratigya again looks Krishna

Krishna : Mmh…Vividha , I think we all can have some masala chaat and coffee at the Dhaaba. What you say ?

Vividha : Mere paas itna time nahi hein. Mujhe jaana hein, Krish. I am so sorry. Pratigya tum aa rahi ho yaa nahi ?

Pratigya : Woh…..Vividha …

 

Atharv : Arrey, mein aata hoon naa. Vividha just imagine if you go to your home with me then what will be the result ?

Vividha :Wow!! I didn’t think about it. Good idea. Atharv

Pratigya ; Mein aati hoon Vividha

Vividha : Tum kuch khaake aaram se aa jawon.Tab tak baat sambhal jaayenge..Bye..Come Atharv

Atharv : Bye Krishna,

Krishna : Arrey tum ruko naa yaar

Atharv ; Mujhe uregnt hain. Kuch samajh yaar, meri paaro

Krishna : Okay, I got it. Carry on guys.

AT THE DHAABA 

Pratigya : Thanks for selecting my lyrics.

Krishna ; Actually thanks toh mujhe kehna chahiye. I mean the whole lyrics made the song much beautiful.

Pratigya : You have composed it well. Your voice is so catchy Krish- I mean Krishna. It’s so good to hear your programme which always presents different and I must say it brings smile to many faces.

Krishna looks at her smiling face

Krishna : Pratigya your subtle smile is imprinted on my heart. Now I am more enthusiastic to present new concepts at my show.

Pratigya : Wow, it’s a big compliment and moreover I thinks whether I deserves these much praise ?

Krishna ; See today by your lyrics you motivated so many people and many people have smiled also. So you definitely deserve praise.

Pratigya : Thanks it happened because of you. I felt much interest because you suggested a hand written copy and I was excited to do that. And don’t say that people are not having habit of writing diary now a days.

Krishna ; Oh!! So you still does that ? Good ! !! Diary is like our companion. We can say anything to it and it won’t refuse.

Pratigya : Yeah. Some harsh memories keep it’s traces and it’s so hard to get away from them. We can’t share it as it can ruin the happiness of our beloved ones. That time diary really helps us. Whatever trash is been carried by heart we can just throw it there, Hey naa ? Diary won’t mind ?

Pratigya’s eyes went teary

 

Krishna : Sorry I think I talked too much. That’s why you…..I am sorry….wohh

Krishna gives his handkerchief to her.

Krishna : Please I can’t see you crying like these. I didn’t expect that at our first meeting my words will bring tears to you. I am sorry.

Pratigya wipes her tears and looks Krishna

Pratigya : I need to leave now. My chaachi will be waiting for me

Krishna : Mmh….I am going in taxi. Aap chahe toh mein aapko drop kar dungi

Pratigya ; It’s okay. I will go myself. Bye

Pratigya walks away. Krishna looks her from behind and he feels sad

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