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Home»Fan Fiction»SUBTLE WORDS UNTIL THE DUSK : TEN SHOTS AT KRIYA [SHOT -2]
Fan Fiction Jaana Na Dil Se Door Pratigya 2

SUBTLE WORDS UNTIL THE DUSK : TEN SHOTS AT KRIYA [SHOT -2]

RevuBy RevuFebruary 14, 20222 Comments4 Mins Read
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AT CITY UNION BANK, MUMBAI 

Vividha : That means you have penned the rest of lines and has send it to Radio station.

Pratigya : Yeah Vividha

Vividha : Wow Pratigya. So nice. I wish you good luck.

Atharv ; You can wish her good luck later also. First you need to accept my application for Personal loan

Vividha turns her eyes towards the counter and finds Atharv.

Vividha : Oh God! You came again here ?

Atharv : So what’s your plan ? Are you giving me personal loan ?

Vividha : No

Pratigya : Vividha, why you are not accepting his loan application ?

Vividha : Aisi baat hein, Atharv give that paper to me.

Atharv handovered paper to her.

Vividha : Now Pratigya you just read it and tell me how can I give loan .

Pratigya : Okay

Atharv : Arrey pitwaayegi kyaa uske haathon, Vividha  ? Pratigya Madamji, kuch bhi nahi.

Jana Na Dil Se Door

Pratigya : But aapki application.

Atharv : Arrey application gaya dust bin mein.

He quickly picks the paper from Vividha and he was about to throw it in dustbin.

Manager sees that .

Manager : What’s that in you hand , young man ?

Atharv : Sir it’s a loan application for personal loan. But Vividha Madamji is not accepting it.

Gn

Manager : What’s this Vividha ? You can’t do this to a customer.

Vividha : But sir, iss mein spelling mistakes hein. So I can’t accept it.

Manager : Tum kyaa school kee teacher ho ? Arrey customers jaldi application likhte hein, Unki priorities samjho. Usske mistakes tum correct karo. And accept it. It’s my order.

Vividha : Yes sir.

Atharv handovers the paper

Atharv : Thoda pyaar se rakhiyega application. Personal hein

Vividha : What ?

Atharv : I mean Personal loan, Pratigya Ji please samjhayiye aapki colleague ko…..Bye Vividha

Atharv leaves.

Vividha takes the paper in anger

Pratigya ; Arrey, So now you will throw it to dustbin ?

Mann Ki Awaaz Pratigya

Vovidha : Yaar this man is mad. I mean it’s been 12 years he is behind me . Right from 8th std to till this day.

Pratigya ; Wow, he loves you like Majnu loves Laila. Waah kyaa baat hein

 

Vividha : See I told this Majnu that this is not right. I mean I don’t feel anything at him. He is nice guy . But I didn’t feel that kind of thing in him till now. At 8th I said it’s infactuation of school times , after 12th I said I have an aim and I need to focus at my studies. I am joining in college. Then I did B.Com and M.Com.Then also he came and I said I have to find a job and finally when I got job he came again. I thought he will lose hope and run away. But he is behind me till now.

Jaana Na Dil Se Door

Pratigya : Vividha , he is so genuine. I guess you can think about him .

Vividha : Oh MadamJi, apne kaam se matlab rakh. Mujhe kuch feel hoga naa tabh sochungi

Pratigya : Okay, good luck for you too that he could come in your dreams.

Vividha : Pratigya

Pratigya : Apne kaam se matlab rakh ladki. Get into work.

AT RADIO STATION 

Atharv : Hai Krishna

Krishna : Lo aa gaye Rajkumar. Phir wahi bank gaya thaa ? Iss baar kaunsi loan ke liye apply kiya aapne ?

Yeh Jaadu Hai Jin Ka

Atharv : Meri chod, ek information mila hein

Krishna ; What ?

Atharv : That girl’ name is Pratigya Saxena , right ?

Krishna : What ? She is working there ?

Atharv : Yes boss. The girl who completed lines for your song she is working there. Newly joined here. Baaki details mila toh nahi. But mein jab bank gaya tabh Vividha aur woh Pratigya yahi baat kar rahe the. Maine counter ke aage board bhi check kiya.Uss mein uska hee full name likha hein.

Krishna smiles

A

Atharv : Tum kaho toh mein milwa sakta hun.

Krishna : Rehane do, 12 saal se tumhari love train plat form mein khadi hein. Kabh station jaayega khud pata nahi aur baat kar rahe hein ek ladki kee jisse maine dekha tak nahi.

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    2 Comments

    1. Jasminerahul on February 15, 2022 10:44 am

      First I thought why vividha is throwing atharv’s application in the dustbin.then I understood that it was love letter.manager asking her whether she is a teacher to give importance to spellings was funny.atharv’s dialogues were funny.i wonder whether vividha has no feelings for him.from 8th std he is after her.this reminded me of thenkashipattanam.Was this parallel track there in the original movie too?glad yo know that pratigya sent the rest of the lines to krishna n krishna is interested to know more about her.but sad that he is not taking interest in meeting her personally. Perfect pics.

      • Revu on February 15, 2022 11:56 am

        Vividha and Atharv is my addition only, in original one like Vividha there is a friend character who always do good to Pratigya and she has a good sense of humour who is a fan of RJ Krish also. She played a beautiful role in that movie for uniting pratigya and Krishna in that movie. She used to tell her about a boy in that movie to Pratigya the same way like he was following her from school to college. But thing is in that movie Vividha never finds him after getting job .So she missed him lot . I changed that thing here by bringing Atharv again to Vividha.Ha ha 🤣 thenkashipattanam, I didn’t thought about this movie. Thanks a lot for reading.

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