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Home»Fan Fiction»SUBTLE WORDS UNTIL THE DUSK : TEN SHOTS AT KRIYA [SHOT -1]
Fan Fiction Jaana Na Dil Se Door Pratigya 2

SUBTLE WORDS UNTIL THE DUSK : TEN SHOTS AT KRIYA [SHOT -1]

RevuBy RevuFebruary 12, 20226 Comments6 Mins Read
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AT MUMBAI, CITY UNION BANK

Manager : So Miss Pratigya Saxena ,welcome to our branch. You will be the Cashier here. I hope you will do your best here.

Pratigya : I will try my level best sir.

Pooja Gor

Manager : Turn left towards the cabin and you will find the cash counter there.

Pratigya ; Okay Sir. Thanks a lot.

Pratigya enters inside the counter. A girl comes infront of her .

 

Hi Miss Pratigya ,  I am Vividha Bhatiya. I am handling the loan section here.

Pratigya ; Hi nice to meet you.

Vividha ; So basically what all things you have to do here might be explained by our Manager sir.

Pratigya : Yeah , I met him just now

Ruchika : As bank says Customer is the King – please take care as you are handling Cash section. A slight mistake can affect your post.

Pratigya : Yeah I know. Actually at the earlier branch I was a clerk. And it’s the first time I am handling this section. So little nervous for it.

Vividha ; Don’t worry , You will slowly adapt the job’s nature. Any ways without wasting time let’s get to our work. It’s already 10.30 am

Pratigya : Yeah, Have a good day.

They both get into work . Bank’s jobs are much hectic and pressurised and Pratigya felt her head was paining after the office hours were over.

Vividha : Hey Pratigya what happened ?

Pratigya : Nothing, Just a head ache. I must have a tablet and I guess it will be alright.

Vividha : No , don’t always depend on tablets. It will give reduction ,but later you will face side effects also. Shall I massage your head ?

Pratigya : Really !! You knows that also ?

Vividha : Yeah, My Mom used to do it for me.

Jana Na Dil Se Door

While massaging her head Ruchika asks about Pratigya’s family.

Pratigya : Actually I am staying here with my Chaachaji, Chaachi and their son Mohit. I am a Gujju girl , I mean Gujarat. My parents are staying there and I am their one and only daughter.

Ruchika : Oh Wow!! That means you are Paapa’s little princess

Pratigya : Aisa toh kuch bhi nahi. He won’t express it , but I know Paapa loves me much.

AT RADIO STATION 

Krishna : Sorry yaar.

Atharv : Krishna marwayenge kyaa ? It’s 6 pm and your programme should be on  air

Krishna : Yeah I know. Don’t worry RJ Krish is all set now.

Mean while Pratigya and Vividha packs their bags and walks away from bank. They both are at the train journey now. Vividha switch on the FM

Pratigya : You use to hear all those things said by RJ’s ?

Vividha ; Not all stupidities. But I am a fan of RJ Krish . His programme is airing now.

Pratigya : Krish!! Yeh kaisa naam hein ?

Jana/Jaana Na Dil Se Door

Vividha : Naam mein kya hein ?Hey just listen it , you will feel tension free today.

Pratigya ; Okay, let’s make a try

Mann Ki Awaaz Pratigya 2

They listens the programme .

Hi friends, It’s me your RJ Krish. Welcome to  “SUBTLE WORDS UNTIL THE DUSK ‘”. As you know this is for an hour , I mean from 6 to 7 pm. So after the sunset you won’t be able to hear me. But these time is actually a rush for every one. For some people it’s the time for returning their destinations after their jobs, for students it’s return to their homes, for uncles who do an evening  walk it’s a time pass to hear this one. Any ways my duty is to cheer up you all. So today before going to topic let me start with  a song. This one is a poem written by me. Now you think that I am a shayar type ?Not at all, it’s just an attempt. I will just sing 2 or 3 lines only. After listening these what you feels please send as a letter to our radio station. I am again mentionting I need a hand written letter, it can be anything regarding what you feel , what’s your view after listening this. So let me sing, my friend Atharva will be playing guitar with me. He is one of our technichians.

Yenagali munde saagu nee,
bayasiddella sigadu baaLali (2)
NannaaNe nanna maatu suLLalla hoooo (2)

———-
whatever happens, you need to go on with this strife
whatever you wish for, seldom you get in life (2)
Swear on me, my words are not mere lies…hoooooooo (2)
———-

Chalisuva kaalavu, kalisuva paaTava
mareyabEDa nee, tumbiko manadali(2)

Time that moves on and on, and teaches lessons beyond
you don’t forget those, fill it in your mind (2)

Ahaa….Ahaa….Ahaa…..

That’s for today. So friends do think what could be next lines and send it to us.

Today’s programme ends with this only. Stay happy and positive guys.

Pratigya ; Hey, why he cut it in middle ?

Vividha : That’s his speciality Pratigya. We can’t imagine what is he going to do in each day of programme. But every evenings of mine are happier than earlier after I became a regular follower of this programme. His words are magical.

Pratigya : Of course, He actually said the truth in few lines which he sang today. It motivated me a lot.

AN : THIS IS BASED ON ‘MUSSANJE MATHU ‘ KANNADA MOVIE  . THIS SONG WAS ACTUALLY PENNED BY A BLIND MAN WHO USE TO SING THIS AT TRAINS WHILE PEOPLE WERE TRAVELLING . AND IT’S BEEN TAKEN AS A SONG IN THE MOVIE AND THE WHOLE SONG WAS PICTURISED IN TRAIN ONLY. IN THE FILM HERO IS AN RJ AND HEROINE WHO FEELS HERSELF LOSING HOPES AFTER FACING SOME TRAGIC INCIDENTS GETS A MOTIVATION FROM HEARING RJ’S WORDS AND THIS SONG. THEN HOW THEY MEET ? WHAT DESTINY PLANNED FOR THEM ? THESE WAS SHOWN IN MOVIE AND I AM ALSO DOING IT BUT IN MY OWN IMAGINATION, ONLY THE THEME IS ADAPTED. 

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    6 Comments

    1. Revu on February 12, 2022 7:10 pm

      Sorry it’s Vividha only. By mistake I wrote Ruchika 🤐

    2. Jasminerahul on February 13, 2022 3:44 am

      I am super surprised that you wrote a story on kriya.i thought you don’t like kriya as kriya were not a pair in your ff.i am very happy that you wrote on kriya.i really love them.when pratigya2 started I saw 2 ffs.but after years I am reading a pure kriya ff.thanks to you.surprised to see vitharv also.vividha is right.pratigya shouldn’t depend on pills.vividha doing head massage for her was sweet.krishna as the RJ was cool.he singing a song n stopping the programme asking the people to guess the next lines was surprising. Will pratigya be able to create the next few lines for that song?hopefully kriya will meet soon. Perfect pics.

      • Revu on February 13, 2022 10:32 am

        I liked Pratigya season 1 while it was telecating on star plus during my college days. Was thinking about writing on which pair and finally this movie come to my mind and started it. Will be updating on Monday. Thanks a lot.

    3. Jasminerahul on February 13, 2022 3:49 am

      If you like arjun maya plz try to write 2 shots or 3 shots on the hindi movie Raja hindustani.

      • Revu on February 13, 2022 12:54 pm

        I liked Maya, but I haven’t seen behadh I hardly watched 3 episodes only. So not know about Arjun and Maya. I like Jennifer’s acting skills. I have seen her in another show. It was on 2009 -but I forgot the name of that show.

    4. Jasminerahul on February 14, 2022 10:16 am

      Do you like sagar vidya pair from banoo mein tere Dulhan?

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