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Home»Fan Fiction»You Are Stupid And I Am Idiot (SwaSan ts) by Marsuu Shot 1
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You Are Stupid And I Am Idiot (SwaSan ts) by Marsuu Shot 1

MarsBy MarsSeptember 4, 201776 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello guys!! This is Mars with ts. It will have 2 or 3 shots. I will give update regularly so it will end soon. These are stories which are asked by readers so I will give these simultaneously with ffs.
So this story is after six months leap. Don’t think me out of mind as I m going to make such a serious tract don’t know what. Actually there are so many serious stories on this tract so tried something different. Here it will be shown that both swasan were responsible for their Separation. Hope so u will enjoy it.
Let’s begin:

You Are Stupid And I Am Idiot
(SwaSan ts)
Shot 1:
The story begins after swara dance on dewani mastani. She is hurt that she is humiliated and her husband and in laws didn’t said anything. She is trying to overcome all these feelings. Laksh is still not found. Swara is living in badi.

Night (8:00pm)
Pluto Hotel:
Room No: 405
A man is sitting on the couch and there is wine glass in his hand and bottle is lying in front of him. He is completely drunked.He take out his mobile. He is Sanskar Maheshwari.
Sanskar: time to call wifey.
He dial swara’s number and place phone near ear.
Swara is going to her room after dinner when her phone rings. She signed as it’s sanskar.She received the call.
Swara: yes Sanskar
Sanskar: hello sweetheart.

Swara: u r again drinking??
Sanskar: yes baby okay I want to meet you.
Swara: what???
Sanskar: yuppp come to Pluto hotel room no. 405 I m waiting.
Swara: I m not coming at this time.
Sanskar: u have to come otherwise I will come in badi and pick you in my arms and bring you here. I would love to do that.
Swara thought that he is drunken and can do that also.
Swara: okay fine I m coming.

Sanskar: that’s like my good girl.
He cut the call and again got busy in drinking.

Badi:
Ragini saw swara talking on phone so she asked
Ragini: swara whose call it was?
Swara: hmm nothing I have to go out it’s important.
Ragini: everything okay?
Swara: hmm plz handle ma baba if they ask.
Ragini(confused): okay
Swara took her purse and went out.

Swara is standing on road. Wind is blowing and it’s cloudy as if soon it will rain. She is looking for taxi.
Swara: don’t know what this idiot have to do with me at night.
She said irritatedly as there was no taxi.
Later she got cab and went to hotel.

Pluto Hotel:
Swara came inside after paying the cab driver. She went to reception and asked
Swara: excuse me I want to meet the person in room no. 405.
Receptionist: wait mam
She checked and saw that Sanskar has already told to let her in.
Recp: mam u are swara maheshwari?
Swara(confused): yes how u know?
Recp: sanskar sir has already told us about your arrival u can go and meet.
Swara: okay thanks.
Swara went to lift and then 4th floor.

Room No: 405:
Swara found that door is already open so she slightly push and it open and she came inside. Sanskar saw swara and gives his devilish smile.
Sanskar: Lock the door(ordered)
Swara saw him then lock the door and went near couch. Before she could speak, sanskar point towards the chair infront of him and said
Sanskar: take seat madam
Swara roll her eyes and sit on chair.
Sanskar offer her drink.Swara raised her eyebrow. Sanskar understand and said
Sanskar: ohhh don’t worry this is soft drink I know my wife is super sanskari that she didn’t drink alcohol so special for you.
Swara took the glass and took the sip.
Sanskar: so you know why I called you here???
Swara shook her head in No with confused puppy face.
Sanskar(shook his head): tch tch don’t look at me like that I feel something something(pout).
Swara smiles seeing his expression. He is looking so cute with his messy hairs wandering on his forehead.
Sanskar: I called to talk to you personally.

Swara: ohhh
He got up from couch and went near swara. He stood next to her chair and said
Sanskar: get up.
Swara give him confused look but still stood in front of him.
Sanskar: we will talk but…..
Swara: but???
Sanskar lean and whisper huskily in her ear
Sanskar: let’s go to bed(winks)

Swara: sure.
Sanskar bend to pick her but stumble as he is drunken.
Swara: leave it I will go myself.
Sanskar: no I will take you.
Swara: you can’t stand yourself then how u will pick me.
Sanskar pout and look at her from head to toe.
Sanskar held her waist and went to bed. He made her lie on bed and lie beside her.
Sanskar: u r not afraid of me??

Swara: why would I be??
Sanskar half lean on her.
Sanskar: what if I do something???
Swara: so
Sanskar: yeah we had done already many times so never mind(casually)
Swara blushes.
Sanskar: u know why I called you in hotel??
Swara: no
Sanskar: so that only we can talk alone. I don’t want any outsider to tell us what we should do. We had created problems so we should solve without strangers.
Swara: right.
Sanskar’s face was very near to swara so he moved back and said
Sanskar: u don’t like alcohol smell wait.

He take out mouth fresher from pocket and used it.Again he lie on swara.
Sanskar: tonight I m not going far from you so alternative hihi.
Swara smiles.
Sanskar: okay coming to point. We are separated bcoz of me or you??? Noooo Its bcoz of us.
Swara’s eyes got filled with tears.
Sanskar place his finger on her lips

Sanskar: shhhhhh don’t cry today plzz.
Swara wipe her tears.
Sanskar: U hurted me and I hurted you.
U left me alone I insulted you then u choose your sister and I also did same and let you get humiliated infront of everyone. We both are wrong.
Swara was not knowing what to say. He is right whatever he is saying.
Sanskar: and the biggest reason of our separation is our EGO. Mr and Mrs Sanskar Maheshwari has big ego problem.
Swara chuckes.
Sanskar: u left me so u r stupid and I let you go so I m idiot.
Swara smiles. Their face are almost touching each other. They are able to feel each other’s heavy and hot breathe.
Sanskar join his forehead with her and their lips are inches apart.
Sanskar: I miss you

He whisper as his tears fell on swara’s face. Swara was not able to bear more. She hugged him tightly and whisper
Swara: I miss you too
Sanskar smiles and kiss her head.

Sanskar pull her more to him and she hug him tightly and lie on his chest. There was comfortable silence between them. In the room light was dim but it’s raining outside and they can hear thunderstorm.
Little later, Sanskar said
Sanskar: shona u r sleeping??
Swara: no
Sanskar: I want….
Swara: what??
Sanskar(whisper): I want to love you.
Swara saw him. His eyes are heavy due to hangover but still it shows his craving for her. Even she want him.
Swara didn’t said anything just place her lips on his. Sanskar kiss her back and both were lost in each other forgetting everything.
Are they separated???

Are there any misunderstanding between them???
That they hate each other???? Which they always claim when ever they met earlier. They both know that this is the most stupid joke which they crack every time.
Sanskar remember how nikil was close to Swara. He kiss her harshly while swara mourns his name.
Sanskar: you are mine say to your friend that be away from what is mine.
Swara: i love you Sanskar.
Sanskar: I love you soo much Mrs Sanskar.

After long passionate love making both slept hugging each other.

To be continued….

Precap: Sanskar forget what all he said in drunken state????

So first shot is over most probably next will be last so plzzz leave your views. Let me know whether u all want next part i will give tomorrow itself if u r interested.
Thank you
Bye
Take care

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    76 Comments

    1. anu on September 4, 2017 10:37 am

      NICE

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 11:05 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    2. Stg on September 4, 2017 11:51 am

      Awesome ????pls post next part soon..

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 2:47 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post soon tc

    3. Tamil on September 4, 2017 12:06 pm

      Awesome dear….u r right….Swasan both are equally responsible for their separation

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 2:49 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    4. Sanjila on September 4, 2017 12:08 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 1:39 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    5. sus on September 4, 2017 12:26 pm

      nyc dear

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 1:40 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    6. veena on September 4, 2017 12:38 pm

      nice

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 12:48 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    7. Rosey on September 4, 2017 1:03 pm

      Great I loved it but yaar post shatatered s9up I can’t wait longer

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 2:50 pm

        Thank you so much dear and shattered soul tomorrow tc

    8. Jj on September 4, 2017 1:24 pm

      Soon update please

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 2:51 pm

        Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon tc

    9. Divz on September 4, 2017 1:28 pm

      sar phod dungi uska if he forgets….. idiot….. awesome…. post soon…… ur any story… hihi…

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 2:53 pm

        Hahaha poor sanskar let’s see what happen. Thank you so much dear tc

    10. Rachna on September 4, 2017 1:43 pm

      Awsm

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 2:55 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    11. NDSG on September 4, 2017 1:51 pm

      ????????? crazy SwaSan?????
      I was imagining what if it would be showed in the show. That’s so cute.

      I love the thing that they didn’t showed their ego. Which destroyed everything.

      But but what I read in the end. My Sanskaar forgot everything???????

      Ese kaise bad manners Sanskaar ?? I’m angry… Jaldi se sab yaad karoooo

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 2:57 pm

        Thank you so much depuuu dear let’s see what will happen when Sanskar will come to senses.tc

    12. Kashu on September 4, 2017 2:03 pm

      Its amazing yaar.. Loved it.. And the title is so funny.. Post next part soon…

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 3:00 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon tc

    13. sneha on September 4, 2017 2:08 pm

      Nice waiting for next part

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 3:02 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    14. ankita Gaude on September 4, 2017 2:33 pm

      awsome next part soon

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 3:15 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon tc

    15. Ashwini on September 4, 2017 2:55 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 3:16 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    16. Chaitu on September 4, 2017 3:18 pm

      Nice dear Nash serial mein haise much dikatha par koi baath nahi tum writers heina aur ham imagine karenge so our wish is almost fulfills nice chappy dear give other ffs also…

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 4:17 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post my other stories also soon tc.

    17. Kanha on September 4, 2017 3:30 pm

      Awesome concept siso. Pata nahi Sanky ka kya hoga kal. Swara apne pati ko joote se maaregi????? All the best Sanku. Zara sambhal ke rahiyo apni beewi se???? Post soon dear??? Loveeeeeeee youuuuuu lotzzz???

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 4:19 pm

        Hahaha sahi hai siso sanskar hi handle karega swara ko Thank you so much dear love you tooo tc

    18. Liza on September 4, 2017 4:03 pm

      Nice. ..post next part soon. ..pls post shattered soul too..waiting for it

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 4:20 pm

        Thank you so much dear shattered soul tomorrow will give tc

    19. Arpita on September 4, 2017 4:09 pm

      Hiii Marsu..
      I m a big fan of ur ffs.
      Ur all ffs are really awesome. Nd this ff is toh superb. Update next part soon.
      Thank u.

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 4:22 pm

        Aww that’s so sweet of you dear glad u like my stories.Thank you so much dear. I will post next part soon tc.

    20. Rockleon on September 4, 2017 4:29 pm

      U r damn awesome!!

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 4:51 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    21. Halima on September 4, 2017 4:45 pm

      Superb marsu u r stories r amazing pls Post next part soon

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 4:53 pm

        Thank you so much dear I will post next part soon tc

    22. Ira on September 4, 2017 5:42 pm

      Too good

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 5:50 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    23. AnuAnn on September 4, 2017 5:53 pm

      Its too good yaar

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 8:11 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc.

    24. sammykapoor on September 4, 2017 6:24 pm

      amazing marsu…

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 8:13 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc.

    25. mumpi on September 4, 2017 7:31 pm

      nice one

      • Mars on September 4, 2017 8:14 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc.

    26. Soujanya on September 4, 2017 7:35 pm

      Awesome…

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 4:38 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    27. lata on September 4, 2017 7:56 pm

      oh god its good but plz write something on raglak..bcoz Ragini is fair as compare to swara.n she have maintained figure to..then y the hell u like swara..u can write on ragsan too

      • Ravi on September 4, 2017 8:32 pm

        WTH
        Ragini have maintain figure noo she’s really patali
        but swara she’s complete pack of hotness with her figure
        n u know my machine become erect n response very quickly when I see her in sarees
        I hope I also get life partner who resembles to helly..I really enjoy when she dance

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 4:47 am

        Well lata dear thanks for your suggestions but I m not ragini’s fan. To be honest neither I like ragini nor her figure. For me swara/helly is the most beautiful girl bcoz she is fair cute and bubbly. I just love her to the core and can’t even think of comparing with ragini bcoz for me swara/helly is THE BEST.
        And about couple swasan is best i love then alot and is very loyal towards them.
        Rag————————san I just hate them I can never think of writing on this brother sister. I don’t imagine anything to write on non existing pair.
        I hope you understand.
        Thanks
        Mars

      • Neptune on September 5, 2017 5:40 pm

        Yup ragini is too Patali Na think what would happen if she becomes fat the how would she look.. probably you would stop liking her then right because you just like someone based on the figure…..

        And our SWARA is THE BEST and we don’t need any clarification for it so just be happy with your ragini and let us be happy with our SWARA

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 6:15 pm

        Hahaha sahi kaha nepuuu

    28. Milestone on September 4, 2017 8:20 pm

      Nice….

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 4:49 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    29. seebu_s on September 4, 2017 8:20 pm

      nice dear☺ignore some comments..as some ppl no need to get attention!so no need to even reply

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 4:52 am

        Thank you so much dear and yeah right don’t know why they come and give their opinion here and I just cleared that what swasan and swara is for me hope so they understand otherwise also I don’t care for them tc.

    30. Priya on September 4, 2017 8:22 pm

      Awesome dear I loved it plz update soon dear

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 4:53 am

        Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon tc

    31. Adishu on September 4, 2017 10:07 pm

      I can expect this from only you Mars :p :p ………….. but this wasssssss amazingggg lovingggggg fantasticcccc…. but the precap is scary like hellllllllll………….how can he forget everything :(……………………

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 4:54 am

        Thank you so much dear don’t worry about precap tc

    32. Kumu on September 4, 2017 10:21 pm

      Awesome..

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 4:56 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    33. Prashasti7 on September 5, 2017 1:59 am

      nyc dear bt precap z more interesting

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 8:09 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    34. mica on September 5, 2017 2:46 pm

      Marshuuuu.. when i read your patar2.. i’m smiling ear to ear on second… omg!!! can’t stop laughing..

      • Mars on September 5, 2017 4:39 pm

        Hihihihi*** thanks for reading and bearing micaaaa dear.

    35. rini on September 5, 2017 10:07 pm

      awesome like always…

      • Mars on September 6, 2017 4:50 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    36. Febi on September 8, 2017 1:52 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 7:07 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    37. Tani on September 13, 2017 1:10 am

      Nice

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