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Strangers (Part 64)

administratorBy administratorApril 13, 201628 Comments5 Mins Read
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Part64

“Divi! open the door!!!”
It was Rohit!, but how did he come?.I looked at the clock ,it was 1:30a.m that means I slept all the way from evening till now. Rohit shouted again, ”divi! please open the door!!!”
I didn’t want anyone to wakeup.So I went near the door still not unlocking I said in a low voice, ”Rohit! Please leave from here now,I don’t want you to create any scene here please just go!”
He replied ”divi, please just once open the door ,I promise I won’t create a scene ,I need to talk to you ,please!”
I still loved him I agree but I knew this was the end of it,I knew I needed to be storng and let go of him and everything we had ,with tears in my eyes gathering all the courage I said ,” I can’t open the door Rohit, I’m sorry”
Rohit banged the door and said ,”open the door Divi,or I’ll keep banging the door till you open it”
I din’t know what to do ,I stood ther e still and said, ”wait, I’ll open the door”
I opened the door I just kept looking at the ground ,I din’t wanna see rohit’s fae,I din’t want to look him in the eyes cos I was scared I will fall weak, I just dint wanna look at him!

H e entered my room, so I closed the door again and kiran ,sonu and arohi all woke up.
Before any! Could say anything Rohit fell on his knees and started weeping like a small kid, everyone was shocked at weeping but I dint know what to say.
It just felt like I wish this was all just a bad dream If we’d be back at Rohit’s terrace in that rain dancing when I open my eyes but this wasn’t any dream,I needed to be strong so I stood still and dint speak a word.
Rohit said,”divi,I know whatever I did was so so wrong,I agree ,I was as a*sh*le all the time,I tried to control you, got over possessive doubted you all the time,dint give you ur space ,I realize it all now,I was insecure all the time only cos I loved you and dint want to lose you at any cost, but if all that only makes you go away, from me I realized that is not love ,I shouldn’t have behaved like that I’m really really sorry divi please forgive me one last time,I can’t live without you,please I love you Divi”

He was weeping thw whole time he talked, seeing him weep lik that I started crying remembering every single moment of us together the first time we met,the first time we started talkingmour first hug,our first kiss,our first fight everything just flashed in my head but not a single word came out.
Kiran then interrupted Rohit ,”Rohit,this is not the right time or place for any of this , if uncle and aunty wake up it will be such a big mess,so just go now”

Rohit was like ,”Kiran , please let me talk to divi, I’m not here to create any scene,I’m here to rectify my mistake and apologise for all the wrong I’ve done to divi”.
I said”let him talk kiran”
Rohit kept pleading me but only tears came outta me and nothing else.
Then suddenly Rohit hugged me tight and said”I love you divi,I really do,don’t u believe me?,I’m you’re Rohit ,you know I love you Don’t you?” If he hugged me even tighter at that moment I couldn’t control myself anymore ,I burst out into tears and was about to hug him back and just then my phone rang –it was Vish.

Looking at his name on my phone I remembered everything he said to me.I needed to let go of this relationship ,needed to be strong,I pushed rohit away and said,”without creating a scene here just leave or I’l forget you ever meant anything to me ,please just go”
Rohit was about to say something again when I interrupted ,”u’ve already said all that you wanted I’ve heard all that so now leave”.
Rohit went away and the moment he went outta my sight I just fell on the ground and started crying like mad.
Arohi came to me and said,”divi ,I’m so proud of u! u’re strong I know that,just let it all go and end this chapter in your life,its all for ur good,it’s better that it happened now than later”

I silently nodded my head in silence and the 3 of them stayed awake till Ifell asleep.
I woke upwhen I heard a loud voice,it was kiran’s ,I opened my eyes and looked at him,his face looked so horrified and his tone seemed very different from the usual and all I could hear him talking was :Is he ok! Which hospital??,I’l be right there !I’l be there’!!!

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28 Comments

  1. maandey on April 13, 2016 8:30 pm

    O no…..plzz

    • bhgi on April 13, 2016 9:30 pm

      y no??

  2. Ani on April 13, 2016 8:38 pm

    I think that something will happen with Rohit!!
    Please bhgi di update the next episode fast as soon as possible . I can’t just wait for too long time .
    You know that everyday I used to refresh the page to see that if you have updated the next episode or not and when you update it I can’t resist myself to comment and just typed what came into my head .
    I hope anything which I have written will not hurt you….. then I am sorry
    And yeah what are you doing?? Means student or finished graduation. ..
    And from where do u belong.
    I also wanna know what is your real name? ?
    Sorry if I am asking more but if you don’t have any problem then please reply to me I wil be waiting. …
    Thanks for the update dear.

    • bhgi on April 13, 2016 9:31 pm

      vl update soon thnks a lot Ani yes i completed my gradution my name is bhagi i m frm hyderabad

  3. Prema on April 13, 2016 9:09 pm

    Nice. Somewhere I feel vish is better for divi ani… Lol. And last line.. Is it about Rohit??

    • bhgi on April 13, 2016 9:30 pm

      even i donno wait fr d unexpected twist

  4. suraj on April 13, 2016 9:52 pm

    seems he met wid an accident

    • bhgi on April 14, 2016 9:16 am

      donno

  5. suraj on April 13, 2016 9:53 pm

    i wish ro changes n gt back wid divi

  6. Roma on April 13, 2016 9:54 pm

    Awesome episode, omg bhgi…its really veey heart wrenching n emotional episode….i always wanted rohit to accept his mistakes n change his wrong thinking for girls vs boys, his taunts, his rude attitude, his insecurity…….all were changing due to divi’s pure love n care but at very last step it messed up…n now ro got the biggest shock of his life….divi too got her all hopes died because of ro’s harsh behavior but my thinking…n please don’t mind it….it’s what I think…. how can she accept her defeat? She loved him so much, unconditionally, gave him all the freedom n space for his own life, never told him to change just wanted him to be truthful to her n trust her too…..looks like ro got his biggest lesson of life….n divi should give him one last chance to show his true love for her…..I don’t want divi to loose this love…this is her first love…which she got after so many hurdles….now ro has to do the same what divi did….trust her, give her space, open his heart to understand the difference between male-female friendship vs love…..I want divi to win n get what she really wants from her life partner, from her true lover, from rohit…..

    Sorry honeyyy for looooooong comment but I can’t control myself saying this from long time…me too wasn’t sure about ro’s character from beginning but once divi be lived him n accepted him as her boy friend n promised herself to change rohit so he can be better person, better human n true love of her life…then I do want divi to complete this promise…..n win…..keep it up honeyyy…..I don’t want to interfere in your story line…I just said what I think……plzzzz don’t mind it n I apologize if I hurt you…..I love this story very very muchhhhhh n it has very special place in my heart. …..the way you narrating everything so clearly it’s amazingly awesoooooome. ….even the time of your absence didn’t make any difference. …I think u never left…connecting all the threads very precisely. ….it’s really superbbbb. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

    • bhgi on April 14, 2016 9:16 am

      Ty a ton doll its means alot to me will update soon thnks fr long comment tc doll love u looadzz

  7. suraj on April 13, 2016 9:54 pm

    want ro to change n gt back wid divi

  8. Nishi on April 14, 2016 7:50 am

    Awww…can’t wait. So heart touching. Update next part soon. Plz

  9. bhgi on April 14, 2016 9:39 am

    thnjs nishi vl update soon asap

  10. Aashna on April 14, 2016 6:55 pm

    Luv uh soo much divi??
    Nd nw im gonnna die out of suspence?
    I want rohit nd divi tofethr?

    • bhgi on April 14, 2016 7:21 pm

      i dont u to die dat much easily more on d way njy have fun lol?
      n btw u love divi r me??

  11. Aparna on April 14, 2016 10:52 pm

    Bhgi i didn’t know u had posted Sry. I was missing ur story a lot. Update soon.

    • bhgi on April 15, 2016 7:44 am

      its ok:(

  12. Pearl on April 17, 2016 12:27 pm

    Bhgi plj update nxt prt soon.so desperate…..

    • bhgi on April 17, 2016 3:33 pm

      vl update lil busy

  13. Aashna on April 18, 2016 10:12 pm

    Bhgi dear plzz update the nxt episode soon…
    Ur fans r eagerly waiting??
    Lots of love??

  14. bhgi on April 19, 2016 9:10 am

    vl update soon i wrote half part aftr finishing evrythng i vl post im lil busy vl update soon sry fr nt updating

    • Aashna on April 19, 2016 10:22 am

      Waiting?

    • bhgi on April 19, 2016 8:01 pm

      sry aashna dolll i update nw i donno when they r going to post ut sry fr the inconvience

    • Aashna on April 19, 2016 10:48 pm

      Its ok svthrt?

  15. Fatarajo on April 19, 2016 9:27 am

    Hey bhgi I just read ur strangers ff now and is fabulous wow really it’s really good and also different keep it up 🙂

    • bhgi on April 19, 2016 12:45 pm

      ty fatarajo it means a lot to me read all parts wen u get tym 😉

    • Aashna on April 19, 2016 1:31 pm

      Bhgi wen u r updaying the nxt part may i plzz knw…??
      Eagerly waiting☺

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