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Home»Fan Fiction»THE STORY OF US – Chapter 16 by Sana
Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz

THE STORY OF US – Chapter 16 by Sana

thedreamsoulBy thedreamsoulJune 18, 201732 Comments9 Mins Read
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ANIKA’S POV

I opened my eyes only to find everything dark and it looks like we are in middle of Forest or something ? We have been driving for two hours and no matter how hard I pester him to tell me where he is taking me , he won’t say ! At the end I guess I got bored that I fell asleep and not to mention when I woke up to find I was in a forest , where is this man ?

“Hey girl , you are a great sleeper not once you even stirred in your sleep” Shivaye said as he opened the door at my side and stood there . I see that he wasn’t not wearing his suit anymore but a simple white T-shirt and a jean jacket over it with dark jeans , his hair not styled but a little messed up but he looks Handsome , Hot and young ?

The whole day who was with me wasn’t Shivaye Singh Oberio but Shivaye . Shivaye was so different from SSO , he was carefree , understanding , caring , kind and fun .
Maybe there is something that is holding him back being
Shivaye . I have this feeling there is more about this man who is infront of him waving a hand in front of my face .

” Earth to Anika , are you done checking me out ?” he winked at me and I really have to admit I will never get tired of staring at him and there is this feeling that i haven’t experienced before . ” I was checking the place” I started looking here and there avoiding eye contact when he laughed ” Fine , are you planning to sit there whole time” he said gesturing me to step out of the car but I shook my head ” no way Shivaye , this is a forest and there would wild animals who will eat us and I should really have thought before coming with you” I said firmly and he replied ” I would have let you sit there but how can I let you knowing there is spider inside it” there was his smirk back again .

“what?” I jumped out from the car and got behind Shivaye . He seriously says that every time that he wants everything to be clean and tidy , judges when I eat my fav aloo puri that it is unhygen when his own car have spiders , that is the thing I am so scared of so much .

Shivaye chuckled ” Can you tell me what’s your definition of Spider , please Anika Because you are acting as if some hulk it is !” and the only thing I want right now is the blue eyed monster knowing it ” No , to see this is my car and I was kidding there is no Spidey ” he completed totally laughing . As much as I wish to see him laugh I want to punch him , god this is so emabrassing and I wish the ground will swallow me soon .

I thought he was going to pick on this forever until he said ” Come now , we have to go” he said and I smiled ” I’m not coming when the person who I am going with is YOU” I thought we are going to argue but he pulled me by my wrist and led the way , I stomped and trailed behind him muttering under my breath how stupid I was to follow this controlling jerk .

I was about to shout at him but stopped on my feet when I took the view infront of me . It was the most beautiful and breath taking one I ever seen . It was all green and we were on top of the city that I could see everything so tiny . It looked life if it was night I could touch the sky and take the stars from it . The wind slapped my face making hair move around but it feels so good , away from everything and with him .

”Do you like it?” Shivaye asked me and I replied ” Are you kidding me , I loved it ! infact how on Earth did you find this place ?” I ended up asking him another question and then he smiled , he looks so good when he smile he should do that often . He sat on one of large rock making space for me and I followed him and sat beside him , our knees were brushing each other and there was butterflies in my stomach .

” When I was young my grandfather use to bring me here at least once in a week . He found this place and the only one who know about it is me and dada . He use to make me sit in his lap and tell me stories which are not fairytales but real ones . dadaji was a great man and everyone had a huge respect for Him ” he was proud of grandfather and that smiles says it all . ” We were great partners in everything , you know . We use to eat together and on holidays he use to take me to office and tell me about his business and life . I use to share everything with him and seeing him I decided I just wanted to be like him a business man . When I told him , he was too happy and taught me some basics . When I was ten he grow pale and weak , he was sick and dying ” He took a deep breath and I gave a squeeze to his hand for which he gave me smile before turning to look at the world under us ” dadaji was so disappointed with his sons , they were always arguing and there was no Love in between them and they only thing they see is money . He asked me to take care of the Oberio business and protect the family and keep them happy ” he sighed and continued ” I promised him and from then onwards I was busy doing that and trying to balance everything ” he completed by taking a deep breath and looked at me and chuckled ” I m boring you , isn’t ?” he asked and I shook my head ” No , it was great to know about your dadaji and I’m sure he is proud of you ”

Shivaye was really a great son , grandson and brother .
He had a responsibility from a young age to look out for his family that he forget to enjoy his own life . He just thought the world was in his shoulders and if he takes his eyes for a minute then it will shatter , he was really young at heart but he was just being strong for his family . Everyone thought that Shivaye Singh Oberio is cold hearted man who doesn’t have emotions for anything other than his family but it’s just things made him to be like that , even I thought like that and I’m glad that he is showing this side of his to me . something only I know and I feel special ?

We sat there for a long time talking about random things and have you ever thought that Shivaye is non stop talker ! Well then he is , he just doesn’t stop . He was telling me about his childhood with his grandfather , wherever they went together , what they did , the stories that his grandfather told him and many more things .
when he tells he grins and smiles wide thinking about the memories with a twinkle in his eyes . After what seemed liked eternity we went back to the car and it really didn’t feel like I want to leave the place which is a place where I have my memories with Shivaye .

I made him promise that he will take me here and he gladly agreed and also he said he trusted me not to tell the place to anyone like really I was sleeping the whole time and I really don’t which part it is really . It was evening now and I didn’t want to call it a day right now and I was more than happy when Shivaye announced .

” We are going to our next desitination and before that I want you to meet someone”

___________________________________

who is that someone ? Where is their next place ? Where is Tia ? Is she together with Rohit now ? How will Shivaye react when he knows about it ? Will Anika’s father survive ?

There is many more questions that I have to answer and most important one is Are they in Love ?

Hello my pretty people , Thank you so much everyone for your valuable comments everyone and it makes me so happy . I m so sorry for replying late and also posting late too it’s because I was busy with school Whole time .
thank you for your support everyone and without you people it’s won’t be possible .
How is the story so far ? Do you thinking I m bragging it or what do you think about today’s chapter and to be honest I love such places so much .
I love you all , take care and have a great day !

Sana ?

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    "I can't change the direction of wind , but I can adjust my sails to always reach my destination " Hello everyone , I am Sana and happy to be here ?

    32 Comments

    1. Niriha on June 18, 2017 7:27 pm

      Awesome…..lovely update Waiting 4 next

      • thedreamsoul on June 20, 2017 9:00 pm

        Thank you so much dear , I will try to update asap . Keep reading ??

    2. CrazygirlS.P on June 18, 2017 7:36 pm

      Superb sista, di tead Crazy ladkiyoon ki ghazab kahaani

      • thedreamsoul on June 20, 2017 9:05 pm

        Thank you sissy , love you so much ???

    3. Shivika on June 18, 2017 8:26 pm

      Awesome….
      Shivaay sharing his secrets with Anika…They r adorable…
      Waiting fr d nxt…. πŸ™‚

      • thedreamsoul on June 21, 2017 9:17 pm

        Thank you so much dear , yeah they are cute and adorable together . Next one I will try to update asap . Love you ??

    4. nikita_jai29 on June 18, 2017 8:34 pm

      It is awesome dear…

      • thedreamsoul on June 21, 2017 9:17 pm

        Thank you so much dear , glad that you liked it ??

    5. Aashi on June 18, 2017 9:11 pm

      nice
      update soon

      • thedreamsoul on June 21, 2017 9:18 pm

        Thank you , will post soon πŸ™‚

    6. Dhar on June 18, 2017 9:43 pm

      Amazing episode dear ?? loved it to the coreee plzz post the next update ASAP ??

      • thedreamsoul on June 21, 2017 9:58 pm

        Hey Dhar , thank you so much dear , your comment really made me happy and I will try to update asap . Love you lots ??

    7. Anoushka on June 18, 2017 10:20 pm

      Wow very nice the way shivay shared his secrets with Anika fab dear

      • thedreamsoul on June 21, 2017 11:06 pm

        Thank you so much dear , glad to know you liked it . Keep reading ??

    8. Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 12:32 pm

      Heyoo Sana !
      Sorry dearie for the late comment..
      The update is beyond awesome gal???
      Shivaay in casuals, ohooo must be looking awesome?
      Super Duper Amazing update !!
      Shivaay took her to the most superb place, wow yaar, a very thoughtful thingy to do?
      And shared his secrets with her, indeed it was so cute !!
      Really excited for the next destination.
      Post the chapter when you can.
      Love yaa❀

      • thedreamsoul on June 22, 2017 6:51 am

        Hey my Cutie pie ! We both are late so let’s cut the ‘late part’s . Thank you so much , glad to know you liked it .
        Shivaye will look handsome in anything and everything !
        I love such places and I am really happy to know you do too .
        The next one will be up here soon .
        Love you too Jerry , hugs ! ???

    9. Madhuani on June 19, 2017 1:09 pm

      Awesome…
      Me too loves such places calm n beautiful but sometimes?? as I’m talkative n not so quiet.

      • thedreamsoul on June 23, 2017 10:02 am

        Thank you so much dear , okay chatterbox I love such people ! love you πŸ™‚

    10. gayathri.visu on June 19, 2017 2:42 pm

      Wow!! Dear, its amazing…. Even I m also love such places! Lovely n nice Shivika scene Sana. Eagerly waiting for next part dear…

      Don’t take stress dear. Whenever u free, u can post ur ff! Take care dear… Keep smiling!

      • thedreamsoul on June 23, 2017 10:04 am

        hey Gayu , thank you so much dear , happy to know you liked it . you always make me happy and I will update as soon as possible . ty for understanding and love you and you too be happy and keep smiling πŸ™‚

    11. pooja26 on June 19, 2017 3:00 pm

      hiiii jaan !!!!!!!!
      loved d update really !!!!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
      amazing chappy…….
      make dem fall in love soon………
      post asap……..
      tc……

      • thedreamsoul on June 23, 2017 10:06 am

        hey darling ! thank you so much and happy to know you loved it . I will try to post soon . love you and take care of yourself too πŸ™‚

    12. Mrunal on June 19, 2017 4:20 pm

      awesome…
      the way u explained the place…???
      and shivaay in casual… ???

      • thedreamsoul on June 23, 2017 10:07 am

        Thank you so much dear , happy to know you liked the description and keep reading πŸ™‚

    13. alekhika20 on June 19, 2017 8:31 pm

      Amazing update

      • thedreamsoul on June 23, 2017 10:08 am

        thank you Alekhika dear πŸ™‚

    14. Ankita27 on June 19, 2017 11:44 pm

      Amazing update..

      • thedreamsoul on June 23, 2017 10:09 am

        thank you so much dear , keep reading πŸ™‚

    15. Neha-17 on June 20, 2017 3:18 am

      You updated on Father’s Day….a story of Shivaay’s beloved grandfather because of him, he is so successful today- Great
      Even, I like places with scenic beauty and Kerala is full of them!
      Awesome scenic description.
      Haha, Anika s scared of Spiders ?, Shivaay played a nice trick
      Bringing a special personal from your life to a special place is a sign of love, even Anika respects him, is a sign of love ❀️
      Fabulous update!
      I found it cute..idk why.
      Love ya!

      • thedreamsoul on June 23, 2017 10:14 am

        Thank you so much di , your comment always makes me happy and bring smile to my face .
        yeah that is one of main reason I love is that about Kerala , great to know you liked the description park because I was lacking in it .
        they are in love but they are stubborn to admit it , we will get through that soon .
        love you so much di , take care .
        hugs and kisses πŸ™‚

    16. Lauren on June 20, 2017 10:28 am

      Amazinggggg..mind blowing….post next soooooooon

      • thedreamsoul on June 23, 2017 10:15 am

        thank you so much dear , will update soon πŸ™‚

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