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Home»Fan Fiction»The story of the ishqbaaz brothers – Part 6 by Nidhi
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The story of the ishqbaaz brothers – Part 6 by Nidhi

SRINIDHIBy SRINIDHIJanuary 22, 201744 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey all!!!! Back with other episode but frankly speaking I was not happy with the response last time as I had only some comments but please all of you comment this time.

OM:
Om’s room:
( Shanaya is present in om’s room to learn how to make a statue)
Om: Hey shanaya! Accha hai ki tum jaldi aagayi!Chalo mai tumhe statue banana sikha tha hu ( Om said in a excited manner)
Shanaya: Hmm…… Ok( She replied nervously)
Om: Kya hua? U seem to be nervous.
Shanaya: Vo mai first time sikh rahi hu na!!!!!!!!
Om: Oh! Don’t worry bohot easy hai!
Shanaya: Ok
Om is giving her instructions as how to make a statue but everytime she is making it wrong and getting irritated by this but om was patiently telling her and was calm.
But shanaya loses her calm and she says in a full angry tone
Shanaya: Arey Yaar! Mujhse nahi ho payega!
Om: Calm down. Saying this he holds her hand and they both start making a statue. Om is focusing on statue but shanaya was constantly staring om. And while staring om her hair was disturbing her and she was tucking her hair behind her ear and her hair were coming continously in front of her face which made her irriating and she said Uff! Yeh Baal!
Om: Why are U getting irritated? Tumhare baal itne khobusuraat hai and u are getting irritated?
Shanaya blushes a lil. And both of them smile looking at eachother.

Hall:
Arjun is searching for anika.
Arjun: Thank God! Tum mil gayi. Mi toh tumhe dhoodh raha hu!
Anika: Par kyu?
Arjun: Actually tumhe meri help karni padegi.
Anika: Par kya help?
Arjun: Tumhe mere saath date pe chalna padega.
Anika: Kya?
Arjun: Arey! Meri Maa shant ho jao! Asli wali date nahi. Vo actually hua yun ki mere ek friend hai uski meri tarah body shody bhi nahi hai par uski girl fiend bohot sundar hai so usne bola ki teri itni acchi body hai phir bhi teri koi gf nahi hai? Tumhe Ladkiyon ko paatane ka talent hi nahi hai.
Anika: Toh kya? Tumne bhi tadi maar kar kah diya hoga ki teri gf hai! Hai Na!
Arjun: Bilkul! Saying this they hi-fi to each other.
Anika: Chal mai teri help karti hu!
Arjun: Thanks!

Resort:
Anika is wearing the same dress as in the house party when mallika was there.
And even arjun’s friend and his gf were present there.
Arjun: Anika! I was waiting for you>
Friend: Yeah anika U look pretty!
Anika: Thanks!
Shivaay is also there as he has a meeting with a client.
And he sees anika with arjun and his friends chit chatting and he talks to himself Yeh! Yaha! Kya kar rahi hai?
Shivaay is not at all listening to his client and constantly staring anika. O! God! This anika is impossible! Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha yeh yaha kya kar raha hai?

Then arjun gets up and starts singing a song for anika- Yeh chand sa roshan chehra. And while listening this song anika is feeling happy and also blushing a little as every girl does when praised. And shivaay who was watching this from faraway was fuming with anger and just then arjun drags anika to the dance floor and starts dancing with her just then shivaay thinks Enough is enough!!!! And he comes there and drags anika out of the resort and he takes her to OM.
Here ends my episode hope U have liked it please comment guys positive or negative but comment because if I get less response this time I will wrap this up as soon as possible!!! Becoz last time I hardly had 8- 9 comments.Hope U understand my point of view.\


Precap: Shivaay- Anika fight regarding arjun. Shanaya and Om attend a party and Shanaya gets drunken by mistakely in the party and behaves in a weird manner.

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SRINIDHI

    Smile today!!!!!Becoz who knows what will happen tomorrow???

    44 Comments

    1. Shivika on January 22, 2017 3:46 pm

      Superb…
      do upload d nxt 1 asap…

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 3:55 pm

        thanks

    2. Ranisha on January 22, 2017 3:50 pm

      Awesome

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 3:55 pm

        thanks a lot

    3. Nafisa on January 22, 2017 3:53 pm

      O bete ki phail gaya raita ab samete ga kon? You rocked it nidhi.

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:14 pm

        Thanks for such a sweet comment!!!!!!!

    4. Aisha on January 22, 2017 3:55 pm

      Loved it

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:15 pm

        Thanks dear!! Happy that U are liking it!!

    5. shivika on January 22, 2017 3:56 pm

      Ooohhhhh jso…..loved it….post soon

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:16 pm

        Thanks for the comment. Glad that U are liking it!

    6. Ashwathy on January 22, 2017 4:28 pm

      Its really awesome, don’t stop it, continue and make it more long. I am waiting for ur next epi so update it asap

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:15 pm

        Thank u for the comment and will update as soon as possible.

    7. Kavya347 on January 22, 2017 4:34 pm

      Hey Nidhi, i am commenting on your story for the first time. AND I MUST SAY THAT IT IS TOOOOOOOOOOO Good?????
      Om-Shanaya making statue, it was really beutiful??? especially the way Om complimented her. And Arjun-Anika’s bonding is awesome. Loved the way our bagadbilla got jealous. The whole episode was really very wonderful. And the precap is interesting yaar. Shanaya drunk???that surely is going to be fun???…..Waiting for it

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:19 pm

        Thanks for such a sweet and lovely comment!!!!!!!!! Really means a lot!!!!!! Will post the next one soon!!!

    8. Eva on January 22, 2017 4:37 pm

      It’s full of mistakes#sorrynotsorry

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:18 pm

        I am really sorry but what I want to know what kind of mistakes U found becoz I want otoimprove and make it better.

    9. Shivika123 on January 22, 2017 4:37 pm

      Awesome update ASAP

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:20 pm

        Thanks for the comment. Will post the next one soon.

    10. Princess04 on January 22, 2017 4:42 pm

      Loved it

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:21 pm

        Thanks

    11. pooja26 on January 22, 2017 4:52 pm

      amazing part……..
      loved it !!!!!!!
      post asap
      tc……

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:21 pm

        Thanks for the comment will post the next one as soon as possible.

    12. shahnoor on January 22, 2017 5:11 pm

      Awesome…

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:22 pm

        Thank You!

    13. Nida on January 22, 2017 5:13 pm

      Super duper great

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:23 pm

        Thank You Yaar!!!! Means a lot!!!!

      • Nida on January 22, 2017 5:24 pm

        I have a small request plzzzzz update next part asap

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:34 pm

        Sure!!!! I will update it soon.

    14. @ish on January 22, 2017 5:31 pm

      Plz don’ t end I really like it..

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:35 pm

        Thanks for the comment but please yaar U have to comment regularly.

    15. Shalini on January 22, 2017 5:32 pm

      Awesome yaar. But make it a bit long.

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 5:37 pm

        Thanks and yeah will try to make the next part a little longer.

    16. Akshaya on January 22, 2017 6:02 pm

      Oh bête ki. Amazing dear. Make it a bit lengthier. Waiting for the next

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 7:57 pm

        Thanks for the comment and yeah will post it soon

    17. Kaayu on January 22, 2017 6:02 pm

      O beti ki….shivaay jal rahi hai….
      Payal gaya rayatha…shivay Singh Oberoi anika or Arjun ko sat mai dek kar Jealous Singh Oberoi ban gaye….
      Hahaha….
      Waiting for next episode…post asap…
      Tried to type in hindi for first time…if there is any mistake plzz forgive…
      From silent reader…
      Kaayu…

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 7:58 pm

        Thanks for the sweet comment. Hope U will comment regularly in the upcoming episodes and yeah u did not make any mistake.

    18. Charitha on January 22, 2017 6:47 pm

      Nice

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 7:59 pm

        Thanks

    19. vincy on January 22, 2017 9:32 pm

      Nice dear… Keep going

      • SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 10:23 pm

        Thanks for the comment and check out the next episode as I have posted it.

    20. SRINIDHI on January 22, 2017 10:26 pm

      Hey! Please check out the next episode as I have posted it and hope that U all will like it!!

    21. Sairan on January 22, 2017 10:47 pm

      Loveddddddd itttt..

    22. Gayathri.visu on January 23, 2017 12:29 am

      Awwww!!!!!!!Awesome…….Jealous Singh Oberoi..not bad. Please don’t stop this ff. Its really nice. Next time make a bit longer episode…..

    23. Maryam Zahir on January 25, 2017 3:58 pm

      Hey Nidhi am one of the silent Readers but just wanted to appreciate what u do. I love u and ur writings and plz plz plz Keep writing. Your episodes are damn good, beautiful and yeah Keep it up. Love u lots lots lots lots lots los lots lots

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