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Home»Fan Fiction»A Story of Four Lovers (SNS+YHM) Part:10
Fan Fiction Saath Nibhana Saathiya Yeh Hai Mohabbatein

A Story of Four Lovers (SNS+YHM) Part:10

shakaibBy shakaibMarch 7, 201734 Comments6 Mins Read
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Thanks Riana, Sowmy, Isuri, Jasminerahul, kumud, Rani, Mansi, Nandhini, Parichary, Krkavita, jyoti and all who read and give their amazing feelings to this fan fiction. Guys, my exams are from this Thursday, will update next part after exams.okay? So, Let’s start part 10. Hope you all will like it.

Recap: Ahem’s surprise for Gopi, Ishra fighting over mobile apps, Sidni increasing Ishra fighting, Gohem proposes each other.

The Episode starts with Priya opening cupboard. She takes out a photo album. She sits on bed and opens photo album. She smiles seeing a photo. She gets teary eyes. Two newborn babies are shown in pic. Ram comes. Priya closes photo album and wipes her tears.

Ram sits next to Priya and says Priya, Will you hide your tears from me..Hmm..?? I know why are you weeping..that incident was also shocking for me. Forget that now..!! That was our past, We should live in present..!! Priya says We don’t even know how is she, They trio are alive or not.

Ve changa nahion keeta beeba
Ve changa nahion keeta beeba
Dil mera tod ke
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
Naal tere jod ke

Ram consoles her.

Tenu chadd ke kitthe jawan
Tu mera parchhanvaa
Tere mukhde vich hi main taan
Rab nu apne pawaan
Meri duaa.. haaye
Sajda tera kardi sadaa
Tu sun iqraar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri

Priya hugs Ram.

Main tainu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee

Screen shifts to Plane. Ishra are shown. Sid sees them and says Roshini, I think we should finish their fight. Roshini says Yes, We should have not increase their fight! Ishita and Raman sees at each other. Raman thinks Ishita, I’m really sorry. I know, I shouldn’t have called you Tomato, Its all my fault. I know you must be angry with me, And why not, After all, I’ve hurt you. Ishita thinks Raman, I know Your motive was not to hurt me, it was me who increased the fight. Raman thinks If possible, then try to forgive me. They down their heads.

A couple is shown. Girl says Mr. Asad Ahmad Khan, can you please tell me when will we arrive Agra, I can’t wait to meet my daughters, I wish, we could have taken them with us also! Asad’s face(Karan Singh Gorver) appears. Asad says Mrs. Zoya Farooqi, Have patience, we will reach, I know, kids must be happy with Ammi(Mother). By the way, we’ve just sit on plane. Zoya’s face(Surbhi Jyoti) appears. Zoya says Yeah! Saher and Sanam must be happy with their Grandmother.

A woman is shown sitting on Asya(ASad-zoYA) back. She thinks Zoya and Asad, Enjoy the fullest, Enjoy your last moments together, My name is Tanveer Baig, I’m famous as Billo Rani, And this Billo Rani will destroy you both. Tanveer’s tune from QUBOOL HAI PLAYS. Tanveer’s face(Amarpali Gupta) is shown. She smirks.

Screen shifts to Modi Mansion. Jhanvi is shown in her room. She thinks What to do? Tej has some urgent meeting, Oh Gosh..Everyone is busy in their lives, Let’s watch a movie. OMG! I think I should ask Tej, Has he get her number Parents’ number or not..?? Tej is shown in his car. He gets Jhanvi’s call. He picks call and says Hello! Jhanvi says Tej, Have you get her parents’ number. you know its very important. Tej says Oh…Sorry, I forget to tell you, You know Raman must be in plane and Ahem must be busy with his friend, So I think Its not necessary to disturb anyone now. We’ll talk about it when I’ll come home back, Okay? Jhanvi says Okay! Jhanvi cuts call.

Jhanvi says Let’s watch Aatma(Soul/Movie name). But with snacks and a cup of tea. She comes to kitchen. She gets snacks and tea. She takes them to room. She turns on TV. She says Oh yeah! “Aatma” will air on some channel. She changes channel through Remote. Movie is shown airing on TV. Jhanvi says Oh God! I miss first five mins scene, Let’s forget it it, and enjoy movie. Jhanvi starts taking snacks and sipping tea.

Screen shifts to Cafe. Ahem holds Gopi finally. Gopi says So Finally, My prince caught me. Ahem pulls Gopi through her back and says Arey, How can I miss to hold you, Only Once has done love, If it has gone, then who will love me again. Gopi says Okay, Suppose, I’ve got married to someone else, or my life is in danger, Or I’ve some disease, then, Hmm?Ahem puts hand over Gopi’s lips and says today, you’ve said this, don’t say it again, Because we’re made for each other, with Gopi, Ahem is incomplete and without Gopi, Ahem is incomplete. Gopi releases from Ahem and says Oh Oh, If you’ve so much desires then why you don’t propose me earlier? Ahem says don’t your remember yesterday’s incident. Flash of Gohem kiss is shown. Gopi says wait a min! It was my plan that you can understand that I love you. But In today’s era, No one takes kiss even seriously, Kiss has become common now a days too much..Gosh..!! Ahem says Okay, Accept once that kiss has become common, but love, love hasn’t become common, That people get love only who has clean heart, who knows to love. Gopi says Let’s forget, Well, tell me, have you planned any other surprise for me, hmm..?? Ahem says If I say no, then..?? Gopi says If you’ve not planned any other surprise for me then sorry, I’ve to leave. She turns. Ahem holds her hand saying it seems you love surprises more than me! Hmm? Gopi says Not at all..!!

Ahem takes Gopi to Dine. Ahem says One more surprise for you..!! Gopi says Guess, its my favourite, Right? Ahem says Absolutely right! Ahem takes a cloth. Apple pie is shown. Gopi licks her tongue on her lips.

Hmm.. rokna nahi mujhko
Zidd pe aa gayi hoon main
Iss qadar deewanapan chadha

Gopi takes a piece of Apple pie.

Dekho na yahaan aake
Mera haal kaisa hai
Toot ke abhi tak na juda

Ahem also takes a piece of Apple Pie.

Ab sambhalna nahi hai
Jo bhi hai wo sahi hai
Aao na…

Both feed it to each other.

Screen shifts to Modi Mansion. Jhanvi is shown watching movie. Room’s lights are off. Jhanvi thinks Jhanvi, Film is scaring.

Meanwhile, Someone opens door, His dark shadow appears. Jhanvi sees shadow and gets scared. She thinks, Oh God, Ghost, Jhanvi Beta, Now, Suffer for watching horror movie at night in darkness. Jhanvi stands in fear. A horror scene is shown on TV. Man, while coming to Jhanvi, watches the scene. Jhanvi also watches. Both shouts Aah! Man drags Jhanvi and they fall on bed. Jhanvi somehow manages to turn on lamp. Man is shown. He is none other than Tej. Tejanvi shouts You!

Precap: Tanveer comes to Pilot and shoots him. Tanveer’s tune plays. A man comes to him and says I’ve put plane on autopilot.

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    34 Comments

    1. Riana on March 7, 2017 9:44 am

      Was missing ur ff…Okay best of luck for ur exams??…Ishra n Gohem scene was Romantic??…Tejanvi scene was funny n cute??…Zoya,Asad n Tanveer from Qubool hai…Woww…But Tanveer is the same vamp here!!!??…Precap is shocking!!!????

      • shakaib on March 9, 2017 12:50 am

        Thanks Raina di.

    2. Isuri on March 7, 2017 10:29 am

      Where were you dear? was missing you and your ff wish you all the best for your exam nice epi dear

      • shakaib on March 9, 2017 12:53 am

        Thanks Isuri.

    3. Mansi on March 7, 2017 11:48 am

      Thanks for updating was missing it a lot???it’s okay Shakaib concentrate on ur exams…All the very best do well??…Loved Ishra understanding each other feeling on the same time?zoya,Asad and tanveer too are there here n Amrapali -ve here….Gohem spending time romantically wow??but what Priya n ram are hiding….Is there any twin of gopi????Loving tejanvi scenes a lot….She watching a horror movie n imagines it when tej enters?precap is shocking???

      • shakaib on March 9, 2017 12:54 am

        Thanks mansi. Yes, Gopi has twin. Still, I’m thinking about how to present her twin! Might, it can be Ishita. My more concentration for twin is on Ishita,let’s see.

      • Mansi on March 9, 2017 11:01 am

        Will be waiting for her twin’s entry then…..Ishita as her twin would be superb?

      • shakaib on March 11, 2017 10:40 pm

        Will see on this fact. Others actresses are also joining to wish STORY OF FOUR LOVERS.LOL. BTW. THANK YIU FIR SUGGESTION.

      • shakaib on March 11, 2017 10:48 pm

        *You For. Thanks for telling About RiKara.

      • Mansi on March 11, 2017 11:23 pm

        Ur welcome Shakaib?

    4. jyoti on March 7, 2017 12:53 pm

      lovely update i think ishita and gopi are sisters loved ishra scene pls continue soon

      • shakaib on March 9, 2017 12:56 am

        Thanks Jyoti, let’s see, whether they become twins or not.

    5. Nandhini on March 7, 2017 10:25 pm

      Nicely expressed scenes between ishra! Actually i dont like ishra couple that much but i love their pair i this ff alone!? they beautifully apologized to each other through mind-voice…precap looks like dil bole oberoi’s similar scene??

      • shakaib on March 9, 2017 12:58 am

        Thanks nandhini di. Yes, precap is sequel to dbo. Shocking that you son like Ishra that much. My pleasure, that you’re liking theirpairing tthrough my ff.

      • shakaib on March 9, 2017 1:09 am

        *not instead of son

      • shakaib on March 9, 2017 12:59 am

        Thanks nandi di. Yes, Precap is sequel to dbo.

    6. Jasminerahul on March 8, 2017 12:25 am

      Raya scene n song was very emotional.shocking that Gopi has a sis who is lost.Is that ishita?Ishra apologizing in their mind was lovely.hope they get into an open conversation.Surprised to see asya here.r Sanam Zeher kids here>y does tanveer want to kill them?so scary.hope she doesnt kill them.gohem scene n dialogues were so romantic n touchy.gopi unknowingly said about her disease without knowing that she has disease.liked u clearing out that now a days even a kiss can’t signify love.apple pie scene was romantic.nice song 4 gohem.tej jhanvi scene was so romantic.tej is so naughty yaar.on d show Tej is a horrible hus.but here he is too romantic though the actor is diff

      • shakaib on March 9, 2017 1:01 am

        Thanks jasmine di. Wow, its seems you’ve start watching ishqbaaz and di bole Oberoi. Yes, seher and Sanam are kids here.

      • Jasminerahul on March 9, 2017 1:09 am

        i watch only DBO as i luv Shrenu n now I luv Om Gauri pair

      • shakaib on March 9, 2017 7:21 am

        OMG! You watch DBO. Will you write any ff on gaurika in future.

      • Mansi on March 9, 2017 11:05 am

        Hey Shakaib it’s RiKara not gaurika

      • Jasminerahul on March 9, 2017 8:46 pm

        I might write as I am in luv with them

      • shakaib on March 11, 2017 10:46 pm

        I’m so executed for your RiKara ff. When will you start it?

      • shakaib on March 11, 2017 10:47 pm

        *excited.

      • Jasminerahul on March 11, 2017 11:12 pm

        not starting now.I have lots of ffs now.I will start only when their luv story starts on DBO.But u r an ishkara fan.right?

      • shakaib on March 12, 2017 12:29 am

        Yes, I’m Ishkara fan as well as Rikara. Now a days, I’m busy in preparation of exams, so not getting time. I love both Ishkara and Rikara. 50,50.

    7. Parichary on March 8, 2017 12:39 pm

      Very nice story and so romantic between couples.
      Funny part where Raman and Ishu thinks about the fight and stary apart.
      Good luck for your exam.

      • shakaib on March 9, 2017 1:02 am

        Thanks parichary.

    8. sowmy on March 8, 2017 9:02 pm

      nice

      • shakaib on March 9, 2017 1:03 am

        Thanks sowmy.

    9. Rani on March 8, 2017 11:14 pm

      loved gohem scene.Good luck for your exams.

      • shakaib on March 9, 2017 1:06 am

        Thanks Rani.

    10. Tia on March 11, 2017 8:21 pm

      Thank you so much for updating this fan fiction, it has become my favourite fan fiction on Saathiya forum. I love the whole episode and best of luck for your exams.

      • shakaib on March 11, 2017 10:39 pm

        Thanks Tia.

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