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Home»Fan Fiction»STAY A LITTLE LONGER WITH ME (EPI 24)
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STAY A LITTLE LONGER WITH ME (EPI 24)

Lovey_kzBy Lovey_kzJune 16, 201714 Comments5 Mins Read
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hi guys how are you all i think no is liking the plot bcuz i am a bakwaas writer na so i am going to end it after few epiaodes so tb tk ka liya bear this bakwaas writer

In flight
both twinj are sitting beside eo twi is resting her head on kunj shoulder and kunj is protectively wrapping his arm around her both are silent but there heart are talking but twi broke the silence
t: sadu
k: hmm…
t: plz tum ghar ja kr angry mat hona we will solve this matter by talking
k: no twi now this matter can’t solve by talking
t: plz kunj i don’t wanted fight in home
k: no twi i can’t forgive her what she did??
t: kunj tumha meri kasam plz
k: twi….
t: kunj..
k: ok i’ll try
t: thats like my sadu and she kiss his cheek
kunj become suprise and say

k: yr twi one more plz and here
pointing towards his lips first twi did not agree but after sometime she got agree and come close kunj close his eyes and she peck his lips kunj open his eyes and say
k: kia yr itna dull sa kiss
t: kunj just shutup we are in plane
k: ok but after reaching home i want my kiss
t: ok and soon their flight land in amritsar twinj come out of airport twi is very happy she inhale the air of her motherland kunj is also happy after seeing her siyyapa queen happy both goes to sarna mansion kunj rang the bell bebe open the door kunj come inside and greet her kunj say
k: bebe i have a suprise for you
be: kia ha surprise??
k: so ap ka surprise ha..
be: kia ha??
k: ajao
twi come inside bebe become happy and hug her twi also reprocated bebe say
be: puttar tu asa bina kisi ko bataya kion chali gayi thi
t:……
k: bebe she is tried we will talk about this later
be: ok tum dono fresh ho jao main khana bana deti hon or i will tell manohar too
twinj: ok bebe

both goes to rooms twi to guest room and kunj to his room both goes ro washroom and kunj come out to his room and goes to twi room twi is wearing light blue kurti and denims with skyblue dupatta she tied her hair in a french braid she is trying to tie her dori of kurti kunj enter in her room but twi did not realise his presence hhe get memrized he come close to her twi saw him through mirror and start brearhing heavily kunj come more closer he held her dori of kurti and tie it unknowningly his hand touch her back current pass through her body both are lost kunj kiss her back twi turn both leaned for kiss but suddenly they hear a knock at door both come to sense
be: twi puttar aja khana lg gaya or kunj sa bhi kah da
t: g bebe but kunj is not here
be: i know kunj is only with you so come fast
t: ok bebe and kunj look at her surprised that how bebe know about them

both come down they saw manohar twi come him and touch his feet
m: puttar kasi ha tu??
t: main thk hon ap kasa ho uncle??
m: uncle nahi papa bol
t: ok uncle oh… sorry papa ji
after some chit chat all goes to dining table twi and kunj are sitting opp to eo and bebe and manohar sitting opp to eo
they start eating everyone is talking suddenly kunj touch his feet at twi feet twi start coughing kunj give her water
k: kia yr twi araam sa kha and wink at her
he again do that but this time twi kick him and kunj shout
t: what happend kunj??
k: nothing just food is so hot and wink at her twi make haww.. face they complete thier dinner and sit in hall chit chating
be: twi this much year what you do in paris
t: bebe i have a fashion desing company
m: twi beta..

t: yeah papa ji
m: leela ji kahan ha
t: wo uncle mom is no more she said in tears
m: i am sorry beta
t: no its ok why are you saying sorry
be: btw twi puttar you did not tell why you left?
t: wo bebe wo
k: bebe i will tell you and kunj tell everything to bebe and manohar both are angry on usha but ignore thinking that now usha is not with them so they she will not do anything
be:now leave all this i have a surprise for both of you
twinj: what is surprise?
be: after 2 days tum dono ki engagement ha and mahi bhi arahi ha
twinj: whay tq so mu.. and they stop after realising what are they doing
bebe laugh and say
be: there is no need of tq and both twinj smile and hug bebe

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Lovey_kz

    14 years old my day is 27 april crazy for sid lovee u bunny he is (More than just a face) Insta Acc. @sidhantisbae

    14 Comments

    1. Ayesha on June 16, 2017 10:14 am

      hilarious
      marvellous
      fabulous mind
      blowing amazing
      outstanding
      superb incredible
      splendid
      too romantic episode
      just loved it. . . . .

      don’t u dare to say that u r a bakwas writer
      samjhiiii

      see mere jaise bakwas worstest writer exist karta hain
      waha tumhe koi haq nahi apne ko bakwas bolne ki
      u r awesome

      do u get that
      u better get that

      and plz plz plz plz plz
      post asap

      love u a lot my jaaaan

      byeee

    2. Zoya9 on June 16, 2017 10:54 am

      Marvellous episode
      Loved it to the core
      Love u
      Keep smiling
      Post soon

    3. Cheena2001Cp on June 16, 2017 11:07 am

      Kisne khaha you are worst haa???. ..apne man se hii?….Well amazing episode ??
      Post next soon ?

    4. anshikajainn on June 16, 2017 12:29 pm

      Oyeeew you are best u know tum Apne AAP Ko bakwaas writer bolungi toh mein kaun hu u know mujhe sirf 8-9comments milte h and aapko toh merse zyada milte h
      Isiliye don’t ever say that u are a bakwaas writer

    5. maha on June 16, 2017 12:39 pm

      awsm..epi

    6. Presha on June 16, 2017 1:37 pm

      Awesome..
      Loved it

    7. Ramya on June 16, 2017 2:35 pm

      Nisa it’s just amazing awesome Super
      So lovely
      How can u say u r a bakwaas writer
      If u will end no I won’t t talk with u
      Dare u end it
      Don’t end it
      I just love it
      N u know mai der se comment karti hu
      Bit iss baar tho jaldi kia hai na
      So please end mat Karo

    8. Purnima.agrawal30 on June 16, 2017 2:48 pm

      Amazing awesome

    9. Aamna_2690 on June 16, 2017 3:20 pm

      Hey Lovey!
      Episode was Amazing?
      and who said U r a Bakwaas writer?U write so well Yaar?
      Sorry dear i comment quite rarely cause of being busy?Hope u won’t mind it?
      And U asked My Age and City.. So I am 16 yrs and I am From Karachi☺
      If U won’t mind ur small sa intro plz?
      Post soon and U r a Good Writer?

      • Lovey_kz on June 16, 2017 8:54 pm

        Hi my real name is nisa my age is 15 my birthday is 27 april and i am from punjab muzaffarghar

      • Aamna_2690 on June 16, 2017 9:02 pm

        Muzaffargarh?
        Well I am going on Trip and in that trip with Cousin’s we are also gonna visit muzaffargarh?

    10. Sohi on June 16, 2017 4:03 pm

      Nice and cute episode

    11. twinjfan.tamanna on June 17, 2017 2:06 pm

      Good epi yaar! Loved it!
      post soon

      With Love,
      Urs Tamanna

    12. baby on June 17, 2017 2:17 pm

      ohhhhhh my god amazing loved it speechless……..♥
      nisa again u started who said u write bad not at all yrrr……….
      infact I loved it………♥
      it was toooooooo cute………♥
      lovely marvelleous……♥
      wowowoaaaa…….romantic n hot…..♥
      hahah twinj bhi naa naughty heads……..♥
      loving it…….♥
      lods of love……….♥♥♥♥♥

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