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Home»Fan Fiction»STAY A LITTLE LONGER WITH ME (EPI 18)
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STAY A LITTLE LONGER WITH ME (EPI 18)

Lovey_kzBy Lovey_kzJune 10, 201713 Comments5 Mins Read
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hi guys again here with next epi it is twinj confrontation i know all are exited for epi this epi dedicated to my FATIMAA.DI bcuz of her i am here entertaining you all thank you fatimaa di i have proud to be you LIL SISTA…..
LOVE YOU SOOOO MUCH and i think your not well so get well soon di and come soon di MISS YOU SOOO MUCH

xyz hotel paris kunj room
when kunj is unpacking his thing he saw hus pic with twinkle he grab the pic and strat talking to her
k: kia yr kitni cute lagti ha tu ab mujh sa wait nahi hota lakin mujha asi feeling kion arahi ha jasa tu mera boht nazdeek ha or main tujh sa milna wala hon i hope ya feeling sach hon or main tujh sa jldi milon (he think of something and say) dekh ab boht batain hogai mujha meeting main bhi jana ha acha ya bata main kia pahno ummm… han your fav color light blue

and he wear light blue shirt with dark blue blazer and jeans and rush to twinkle office

twinkle office
twinkle is walkin to and fro and talking to herself
t: ya kia horaha ha mujha babaji asa kion feel horaha ka kunj mera pass ana wala ha plz main us ka samna nahi asakti lakin agar ya ap ki marzi ha ka main us sa milon to thk ha but main us kia kahon gi

her heart say “twinkle ya babaji ki marzi ha tujha ya krna hoga or tujha us ko saxh batana hoga”

t: ok i have to do it after that to divert her mind she start working

kunj enter in her office everyone greet him chinki come there and say
c: hello mr.k i am chinki T ki business partner come i will show you her cabin
k:oh.. nice to meet you sure lets go

they both go to twinkle cabin twi is sitting on chair but she facing her back chinki say to “twinkle that i have some work i have to go” twi say “ok” and chinki goes twinkle get up and turn but kunj does not saw her bcuz he bent down to pick his pen twi also did not see him he get up and both get shock after seeing eachother both share a painfull eyelock

kunj pov’s
she is infront of me i can’t belive on my eyes after 5 years i saw her same innocenes but pain is visible on her face and her tears it hurt main us ki twinkling eyes main tears nahi dekh sakta i just wanted to hug her and wanted to ask her why she left me 5 year ago when she love me??
pov end

twi pov’s
so that is why i am feeling restless from morning babaji he is infront of me i just wanted to hug him and wanted to him how much i miss him but i can’t bcuz agr main na asa kia to wo mera kunj ko mar dain ga nahi twi tu asa nahi kr sakti “be strong for your kunj your sadu sarna” my heart and brain say and first time boht agree in same thing
pov end

t: hi i am twinkle you can call me T and you mr.k right
k:yeah my name is kunj you can call me kunj or k
t: btw we are here to discuss our new project with your company can we start it
k: yeah sure and think why is she behaving like this that she did not me
t: mr.k can we start
k: yeah

twinkle start presentation but kunj is only staring at her twi end presentation and say so mr.k is deal is final
k:yeah final
twi start to go but kunj caught her hand she try to go but can’t
t: mr.k what are you doing leave my hand plz
k:why twi kion choron oh.. tum soch rahi ho jis tarha tum chor kr chali gai thi main bhi chala jaon
she felt that someone stab her heart she wanted to cry and tell him all the reason why she left bit compose herself
k: twi i know tum bhi mujh sa utna hi piyaar karti ho jitna main
t: main nahi krti tum sa piyaar
k: really to jo wo sab letter main likha tha wo kia tha
t: wo sab aik jhot tha wo
he left her hand and she goes hurriedly
kunj also goes to his hotel and twinkle to her apartment
both are crying

(INSTRUMENTEL MUCIC PLAY OF SONG STAY A LITTLE LONGER FROM HALF GF)

kunj is cring bcuz twinkle ignore him and twinkle is crying bcuz she is hurting her love her life

screen freeze on boths crying face

hi guys itna long epi dia ha ab tu kush ho jao guys will come soon with next epi and thank you thank you soo much for cmnt

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    13 Comments

    1. Presha on June 10, 2017 8:12 am

      amazingg…
      loved it…
      felt sad for twinj..
      post soon..
      love u

    2. Ayesha51 on June 10, 2017 10:10 am

      wonderful…..
      hilarious…..
      too emotional…..
      nice…..
      just loved it…..
      feeling bad for twinj…..
      post soonest……
      lots of love……
      take care…..
      byeee…..

    3. Ramya on June 10, 2017 11:34 am

      Awesome nisa amazing
      Hope they both will together soon
      Loved it
      Superb

    4. Sohi on June 10, 2017 11:42 am

      Fabulous yet emotional episode

    5. Fatimaa. on June 10, 2017 11:58 am

      Heyyy sweetheart…

      Ohhh goddd…that’s dedicated to mee….i m soo glad…..thank youu soo soo much for making me feel special….

      I m sorry as m not commenting from many episodes…..i m really sorry…mene saare padhe…i was not well actually….abhi bhi thik nahi hui puri tarah se bt m recovering..and i ll surely comment on all episodes….i m proud of you….you just write amazing…

      I lovedd this episode and also the twists in previous ones…..
      This was fabulous….feeling sad fr twinj….
      I hope they get together soon….

      Just lovedd itt too coreee…
      Wanna read more and more…

      Post soon plzz plzz plzz…plzz post soon..
      I ll b waiting…
      Love you baby sister❤❤❤❤

    6. anshikajainn on June 10, 2017 12:30 pm

      Heyy it was so cute

    7. maha on June 10, 2017 12:55 pm

      nice epi

    8. Harshita on June 10, 2017 2:30 pm

      Hi guys i am new to this site….. nice epi yrrr

    9. SidMin23 on June 10, 2017 8:15 pm

      Nice mad finally twinj see each other and felt bad for them and waiting for next part.

    10. Cp on June 10, 2017 8:38 pm

      Oooo??Twinj finally face to face….. mysterious​ episode???but fab ???……post next soon??

    11. Purnima.agrawal30 on June 10, 2017 11:44 pm

      Amazing

    12. baby on June 12, 2017 9:21 am

      Oooooo God nisa….????????
      Soooooo emotional amazing lovely adorable sentimental cute speechless loved it….??????
      Just crying wats d rsn behind twinkle doing soo…???
      Loss of love darling.. ..????????

    13. baby on June 12, 2017 9:22 am

      Oooooo God nisa….????????
      Soooooo emotional amazing lovely adorable sentimental cute speechless loved it….??????
      Just crying wats d rsn behind twinkle doing soo…???
      Lods of love darling.. ..????????

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