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Home»Fan Fiction»Stay away…. I m nt ur husband!!… (teaser 1) “DHAMAKA”
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Stay away…. I m nt ur husband!!… (teaser 1) “DHAMAKA”

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Teaser 1

~~~SCENE 1~~~
All were clapping…
She was in his arms.. his hands encircling her waist giving shiver to her spine….
A deep eyelock took place. .. hundreds of people are around but for them they are only there… presence of the audience has become nil… There eyes are not leaving each other. .. they are capturing each others face like for forever and ever…. watching each other with so much love…. that love can give shelter to whole world…. world has stopped at the spot… only there breaths can heard….
His hands went to her cheeks he caresses it romantically….
There eyes were still locked. …
They unknowingly started to read each other….
N thn there lips met… It was a soft and tender kiss at first then it became passionate one…. they were kissing as there was no end… feeling each others lips n there tongue intertwined…… It lasted like for eternity..
It was the heavenly feeling they have ever experienced…..

~~~~SCENE 2~~~~

Swara was holding sanskar’s hand…

Swara : plz sanskar don’t do this…. what’s wrong I have done…. why u have behaving like this….

Sanskar : just I want to…. Please leave… now I can’t bear you in my room…

Swara : I never forced you to love me back buy atleast don’t separate me from you….

Sanskar : it’s not you at fault it’s me….

Swara : plz sanskar….

Sanskar : I am nt bound to give you answers just get out….

He holds her hand n throws her out of the room without looking at her…. He immediately shuts the door n falls on the ground crying miserably…

Sanskar : sorry swara…. I know u will never forgive me…. bt it was necessary for you…. For us…. For ur betterment… sorry swara…..

~~~~~SCENE 3~~~~
Swasan are standing infront of Dp….
Both faces have lost there charm… dull n pale….

Dp : ( authorised voice ) take this (gives a envelope to both)

Sanskar : ( confusingly ) what’s this…

Dp : see your self….

Sanskar opens the envelope and shocked….

Sanskar : bt baba…no please…

Dp : u have to….

Swara was giving a confused look to both…. Sanskar handed her the document…

Sanskar : bt why? ?..

Dp : I am nt bound to answer you….

Sanskar : bt baba…

Swara : papa plz even I can’t…

Dp : swara plz mere bacche for me…

Swara sighed… : ok… as you wish…

Dp : don’t worry u have one week time for this…. thn u will have to follow the letter….

So how was the teaser… boring or exciting. ….

Why sanskar behaved with swara like that…. He was even hurt then why he is hurting her….
What’s in that envelope…. n DPs cold behaviour for sanskar
What’s the matter….
U will not know in it one ep…. bt will know gradually…..
Guys I am hopelessly unromantic u know that. … just tried to make the kiss good…. I know it’s a bad one…. bt I can not write more….. lol… I can’t help it…

I have given u this teaser….. bcoz I am writing a OS for the frst time…. n I need time for it. … It will be a really big one. … Most probably I will post it on Sunday….. title – UNSPOKEN LOVE : LOVE DOESN’T NEED CONFESSIONS…. hope u will like it….

BT don’t know I can even change the name…. “We never said I love you…. We only loved”

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55 Comments

  1. Meher on May 21, 2016 11:57 am

    Sujata ki bachhi episode kaha hai… ??

    I want episode vo b long long longggggg….. ???

    HUH teaser ni chahiye ????????

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 12:15 pm

      Sorry meher abhi esse kam chala le….
      Abhi OS pe kam chal raha h…
      Aur meri bacchi kaha se aagayi…????
      Arre I am only 16 dude….

  2. Emz fasa on May 21, 2016 12:14 pm

    Sujata kya kiya tumne 🙁 tum unlogonke liye ek room nahi desakti thi sab kuch khullam khulla chod diya atleast give them privacy yaar 😛
    and teaser was superb 🙂

    • Madhu on May 21, 2016 1:45 pm

      yes u are right.

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 2:15 pm

      Sorry madhu to u too

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 2:14 pm

      Sorry emz fasa. …. yaar achanak se sanskar sanskari se asanskari ho gaya… what can I do… ?
      Tumhe pata chal jayega aayesa q hua….

  3. Eva on May 21, 2016 12:16 pm

    Ha..Sujata plz episode likh doh..teaser nehi…cause yeh teaser hamari excitement hii badaraha hai…eagerly waiting for the next episode..

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 2:18 pm

      Ok Eva. .. so many ppl want ep..
      So there is double treat from my side tomorrow. ….
      A ep; a OS n if possible thn nxt chapter of SS too
      Yaar excitement k liye hi teaser likha tha….

  4. aanya on May 21, 2016 12:38 pm

    Interesting

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 2:18 pm

      Thnx aanya ?

  5. Purvi on May 21, 2016 12:47 pm

    U r too bad yaar…. Episode kahan hai????? Anyway the teaser was awesome…….

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 2:20 pm

      Sorry yâar purvi….
      But don’t worry jald mil jayega ep…. n my frst OS too

  6. Sree on May 21, 2016 12:52 pm

    Di why did u do like this????? Already i was restless and now i am on top of restlessness. How could u give a teaser when we want a really big ep. Not fair di but still i will wait but try to post sooon.BTW the teaser was great.waiting to know the reasons behind their behaviours. I will also wait for ur os.love u di 🙂

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 2:21 pm

      Sorry yâar sree…
      Keep patience… I know after saying it I will get jute chapal from you… bt plz patience
      Glad you liked this teaser….

  7. Fatima on May 21, 2016 12:59 pm

    Exciting for next part yaar?…………. I think bcuz of their closeness Sanky kicked out her from his room………so that he can stay away from swara……..:..and in envelope……….divorce papers???……….. But shadi to hui nhi h????………… Pat nhi yaar but I M so excited for next part ??………. Please update soon sujiiii…?………….

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 2:23 pm

      Let’s see fatima ur guess is write or wrong….
      Woo toh aage k episode hi batayenge….
      Divorce papers…. lol..???…
      Shubh shubh soch yâar. …

    • Fatima on May 21, 2016 3:20 pm

      Hehehe bas thodi masti aa rhi thi???…………Isly Bol diya but waiting for next epi plzzzzzzz ab Jydh wait mat Kara yaar ??……..Aur Tum 12 mein ho Kya yaar ??……

  8. Reethi on May 21, 2016 1:19 pm

    Sujatha please yar update the episode .nayi tho meon tumse katti???.I’m dying with suspense???? n U added fuel to that.plz yar don’t do this.I’ll get heartache at my small age only due to ur suspense n heartbreaking twist n turns.plz tell when will I update.plzz ur my sweet sis na plz update asap????

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 2:26 pm

      Lol… katti… sorry yaar reethi…. jald karungi upload… working on my OS now…
      ReetHi sorryfor the heart attack… hope u are fine now. ..
      Yaar zinda reh meri agli upload k liye…
      Will upload nxt ASAP

  9. vyshu on May 21, 2016 1:49 pm

    teaser is dhamaakedar! Bt plz post d epiode?

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 2:27 pm

      DhamakeDar I know…. tab hi toh naam diya h DHAMAKA….
      Will post soon vyshu

  10. divya on May 21, 2016 1:53 pm

    yaar you almost gave me heart attack I thought sujata is giving regular uploads but when I read scene I and teaser 1 I was almost abusing you sry yaar but was expecting an episode

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 2:28 pm

      Lol.. divya yâar sorry… 12th so can’t be regular….
      Lol… abusing. .. koe nhi chalta h…
      Will upload nxt ASAP

    • divya on May 22, 2016 7:35 pm

      Sorry for abusing but was really expecting an episode lol… I can understand the pressure in 12th though I am in 8th holidays going on I am enjoying so sorry as I have nothing to do so just open the website and wait for the updates and when I saw it off I was like jumping and dancing but to my disappointment it was a teaser well it is OK .. acha an aur bore nhi laryngitis upload soon love u????????

  11. soujanya on May 21, 2016 1:58 pm

    awesme…and excited but give the epi fast……

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 2:29 pm

      Thnc soujanya ?
      Will upload nxt ASAP

  12. IREENA on May 21, 2016 2:03 pm

    oh God it was more Horrible than his dream. can’t wait for next part update soon

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 2:29 pm

      He he he… horrible. .. abhi toh bht kuch aana baki h…
      Will upload nxt ASAP

  13. pooja on May 21, 2016 2:28 pm

    ab suju tum upload kar hi do
    i want d nxt part …… 😉 😉 😉

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 3:20 pm

      Pooja jald ep milega…
      BT kiss scene ko aane mai tym h…

  14. kaynat khan on May 21, 2016 2:32 pm

    i dont want any teaser i want ur episode yr

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 3:22 pm

      Kaynat yâar patience rakh thoda plz…
      Abhi OS pe kaam chal raha h
      Jald ff b upload karungi

  15. navi on May 21, 2016 2:38 pm

    I ws not able to comment in strday epi… bt it ws awesome supetb cool… and teaser really u killed me… eager to knw wts in envelope… sanski behaviour is changed beciz he is afraid to lose swara…

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 3:26 pm

      ThnX navi…..
      Glad you liked the ep…
      Yaar be alive for my next ep…. don’t die so soon… n I killed u ?? mujhe abhi jail nhi jana meri umar hi kya h

  16. vaishnavi on May 21, 2016 2:38 pm

    Hi…sujatha….aftet many days noo….yaar abb ye teaser dekh kar meri excitement aur bhi bhad gayi….i think sanky sent her out of room coz he od dat kiss as he was not able control himself…. Nd abt envelope i don’t know

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 3:27 pm

      Hey vaishu… was missing ur comments yâar. .. I thought u left reading my ff… bt atlast u r back….
      Let’s c kya hota h… that can b only be told in coming ep

    • vaishnavi on May 21, 2016 7:23 pm

      Arey how can u think dat i stop reading ur ff…..actually my holidays started now only till den i was having some entrance xams bcoz of which i was not up to date in tu…but now all xams over,nd i am free…..

  17. sam on May 21, 2016 4:03 pm

    Superb and the teaser was awesome. eagerly waiting for the episode sujatha

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 5:13 pm

      Thnx Sam
      Will upload nxt ASAP

  18. Neha on May 21, 2016 4:31 pm

    God first kiss then rude behaviour of sanskar for swara and then dp secret…. Sujata plzz post the next part… Curiosity level badha rahi ho tum….

    N one more thing I really love the bond which you and Natasha share it just makes me feel that two soul sisters are talking sorry to say but I’ve always read u boths comments and I admire it a lot and Natasha u are really a fun loving girl a jolly type ?

    • Natasha on May 21, 2016 11:31 pm

      Thanxxxxx Natasha.. ??? nd no need to say sorry for reading yaar.. u can dfntly read.. we all are frndsss no?? then?? u also can join in our convo dear.. nd yeah me nd sujata share a very good bond..u said true soul sisters.. nd we are Swasan fan.. so no sorry dear.. ??

    • Natasha on May 21, 2016 11:34 pm

      So sorry dear.. I wrote my name instead f ur name..lol..such a self obsessed person.. lol.. Nywys..Thanxxxx Neha. sorry dear..sorrryyy..

    • Neha on May 22, 2016 8:46 pm

      No problem OK from now I’ll also join…. Miss chapar chapar ?

  19. SUJATA on May 21, 2016 5:11 pm

    I know neha… bt curosity is the key to successful writing so have patience dude…
    Secrets will be revealed slowly slowly…
    N thnx dr for appreciating my n nats bond…
    We have literally become soul sisters in very few days… bt now she is upset as some one told that she talks too much n now she is not gonna comment in ff… plz tell her yâar that we love her talks… may be she will understand ur words ..
    Thnx reading neha

    • Neha on May 21, 2016 11:36 pm

      Yeah I read but Natasha if you’re reading this I never mentioned in your comments but I have always laughed reading u dear u are a wonderful person don’t stop ur bak bak it feels so good reading you why to punish those who enjoy ur chapar for some…. Be joyful re this silence doesn’t suit you nats baby

    • Natasha on May 22, 2016 3:35 pm

      Thanxxxx Neha darling.. I will think about that.. nd am glad that u like my chapar chapar.. actually I love masti.. so tell all these bla bla bla things..

  20. kumu. on May 21, 2016 5:48 pm

    amazng..waiting 4 d epi..:)

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 6:26 pm

      Thnx kumu

  21. stoneheart on May 21, 2016 5:48 pm

    hawww… mei kiti khush thi 1 scene padh k ..par apne popsy kar di… koi nai …epi jldi bhejna

    • SUJATA on May 21, 2016 6:27 pm

      Eee… sorry stoneheart….
      Bt khushiya jald aayegi
      Wait n have patienc….

  22. Emz fasa on May 21, 2016 10:03 pm

    Hey i think that is holiday trip tickets in the envelop and sanky mant to stay away from swara and swara dont want to stay away from dp and panchi 😛

  23. Aami on May 21, 2016 10:18 pm

    mujhe episode chahiye episode chahiye….. ????

    but bz teaser cant to wyt anymonre…. plzzzz update sooon ??

  24. tani on May 21, 2016 10:21 pm

    Sanskar is behaving like dis bcoz he is not her husband. after regaining she should not hate herself dats y shanskar is doing dis. dis is my assumption…. but I don’t know about dp,I don’t have any idea… honeymoon tickets or divorce… esa kuch to nhi hone wala h na….
    very interesting teaser..
    will read ur OS…but pls update stay away episode soon. . n I want very bigggggggggg episode. extra long

  25. Shagun on May 21, 2016 10:27 pm

    Its really a dhamaka
    Awsworth

  26. Shreya on May 26, 2016 9:22 pm

    Sujuuuu where r u??? Pls post asap

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