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Home»Fan Fiction»SS by Prit For First Time. (Devakshi) Part 1
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SS by Prit For First Time. (Devakshi) Part 1

chanpreet0815By chanpreet0815January 5, 201743 Comments4 Mins Read
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I am writing Short Story For first time. I just hope that u all will like it. I am not too good in writing stories. But after Reading ur Fan Fictions. I also thought of writing SS for you. I will finish it in 2 or 3 parts.

Part 1

(Elina was reading love story book. And Sona enters)
Elina:- Sona
Sona :-Haaa bolo.
Elina:- Sona Sona
Sona:- Tell further. Kabse sona sona kar rahi ho. Aage toh bolo kuch.
Elina:- What do u think about LOVE???
Sona:- what u want to know?? Tell me clearly.
Elina:- I m asking u, what do u think about love. According to you what is Love??
Sona:- I don't know. And what questions are u asking me??
Elina:- Arre Tell na plzz.
Sona:- U know Elina True Love is unconditional. Love is neither Lust, fear, jealousy, possessiveness, nor it is expecting something from someone.
"Love is giving and it has nothing to do with what you receive"

In unconditional love, the person you love can live his or her life as he or she wants to, and you will still be there for and with them – no matter what.
when you love a person for their innermost essence – their soul. You see the person and not the personality.
Elina:-  OMG ?? kya baat h sona.
I hope ki tumhe bhi aisa hi koi life partner mile.
Sona:- chalo ab he sab band kro mujhe hospital jaana h.
Bye.

( Sona while going hospital. Meets a young business man)
Sona was already late and she ran hurriedly.
Sona dev se takra jaati h. She was going to fall but dev hold her in his arms. They both share romantic eye lock.
Sona:- ouch.
I am so sorry.
Dev:- Its okk.  But while walking u should see front.
Sona:- yaa I know. Sorry once again.
Sona goes to her cabin.
(Dev in his mind)
Badi ajib ladki h.
Dev goes in that hospital where sona is doctor. Not a nutritionist but a doctor.
Dev was not feeling well. He was suffering from serious health  problem. (Suspense )

Dev' s treatment is done by Dr. Sinha who is not present as he was out of country for some seminar.
In his absence sona was handling all the patients.
Dev enters Dr. Sinha's cabin.
Par Dr sinha ki jagah pr sona thi. And he again meets sona.
Dev:- You. What are you doing here and where  is Dr sinha????
Sona:- Due to some seminar they went to America. And i m handling there patients.
Dev:- okkk.
Sona:- U can tell me if u have any problem.
Dev:- Mera treatment Dr sinha kar rahe the. Last week hi mai unke paas aaya tha. Unhone mere kuch test kiye the. Toh mai wahi tests ki report lene aaya tha. Wahi puch na tha ki sab normal h yaa nhi.
Sona:- Reports ke baare me toh mujhe kuch nhi pata. Mai Dr. Sinha se baat krti hu aur aapke reports ke baare me puchti hu. Aap ek kaam kijiye kal aa jaaiye.
Dev:- okk doctor. Firr mai kal aa jaata hu.
Sona:- By the way my name is doctor Sonakshi. Dr sonakshi Bose.
Aur aapka naam taaki mai Dr. Sinha se aapke reports ke baare me puch saku
Dev:- Unse kahiye Dev Dixit milne aae the.
Sona:- okk. U can leave now
Dev:- Thank u doctor. 

(Dev leaves.)
Sona:- bada hi ajib ladka h. Smile bhi nhi karta. He should at least smile.

Plzz do comment my SS. As I had written it for first time. I will post next part soon.

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    Love U Devakshi

    43 Comments

    1. simplesweety1 on January 5, 2017 8:49 pm

      Awsm! Update Soon!

      • chanpreet0815 on January 5, 2017 9:09 pm

        Thank u so much Sweety.
        meri di ka naam bhi sweety h.

      • simplesweety1 on January 6, 2017 9:37 pm

        No No! Mera Naam Unfortunately Sweety Nahi, Tanvi Hai! 🙂

      • chanpreet0815 on January 7, 2017 7:31 am

        Okk. Tanvi

    2. rj12 on January 5, 2017 8:49 pm

      Wow it was amazing pot the next one soon ??

      • chanpreet0815 on January 5, 2017 9:11 pm

        Rj12 Thank u so much

    3. Riddhi on January 5, 2017 8:51 pm

      Seems interesting

      • chanpreet0815 on January 5, 2017 9:14 pm

        Riddhi thank u so much.

    4. Asmita... on January 5, 2017 8:55 pm

      Story is looking good… But make it longer dear…

      • chanpreet0815 on January 5, 2017 9:18 pm

        Thanks Asmita. I will try to make it long pr mai itna bhi type nhi kr paa rahi thi

    5. Princess on January 5, 2017 8:57 pm

      Awesome

      • chanpreet0815 on January 5, 2017 9:19 pm

        Thank u so much Princess

    6. Alka on January 5, 2017 9:05 pm

      Hamesha jab sona dev se takrati haii toh aapna famous dialogue bolti hai …par is baar sorry bola ???????????? …Aacha laga ??? pehla episode toh bahut Aacha haii ???
      Post soon ?

      • chanpreet0815 on January 5, 2017 9:24 pm

        Thank u so much Alka.?? Yes mai bhi wahi dialogue type kr rahi thi. Pr firr socha. Vo Same hi ho jaaega. Mujhe kuch different story banaani thi. ????

    7. priya12 on January 5, 2017 9:16 pm

      Superbb dr……..fantabulous,……..post soon dr…

      • chanpreet0815 on January 6, 2017 7:17 am

        Thank u so much priya.??

    8. Heshine on January 5, 2017 9:52 pm

      Hey dear…!! Will call u as Preet….u never met and is it…!!?…okk I should thus was really fabulous….???????? really amazing post…and a different plot too…!!plz do update soon and a longer post dear plz….!!!waiting fa ur next epi…
      By the way I’m Heshine….
      Love…love…????

      • Heshine on January 5, 2017 9:52 pm

        U never mind it nah…!??* sorry fa the typos..!!??

      • chanpreet0815 on January 6, 2017 7:19 am

        Thank u so much. Heshine. ??All call me preet only. And u can also call me preet????

    9. Manya on January 5, 2017 10:21 pm

      Hey?
      It was awesome❤️?❣??❤️?❣?
      Post soon
      And do read my ff Ae dil hai mushkil too?
      Love love❤️

      • chanpreet0815 on January 6, 2017 7:22 am

        Thank u so much. Yes Ayushi. I had read ur FF its awesome. And funny. I had commented on ur FF.?????

    10. Farhat on January 5, 2017 10:32 pm

      Waiting with lot of eagerness.. Post soon.. And ya, it was.. Suspense.. Just joking.. It was fabulous.. Very nice.. Loved..

      • chanpreet0815 on January 6, 2017 7:24 am

        Thank u so much Farhat

    11. Richa on January 5, 2017 10:52 pm

      Awesome.. please post next episode soon

      • chanpreet0815 on January 6, 2017 7:26 am

        Thank u so much Richa.????

    12. Aarti32 on January 5, 2017 11:24 pm

      Awesome episode..but main to Dev ki disease ka soch k hi dar gyi

      • chanpreet0815 on January 6, 2017 7:29 am

        Thank you so much Aarti. Disease toh mene suspense hi rakha h. Shaayad next part me khud jaate vo suspense. You have to wait for some time????

      • Aarti32 on January 6, 2017 10:31 am

        Is ff ki Bigg boss tum ho..humein to wait krna hi padega..?

    13. Maleeha on January 5, 2017 11:36 pm

      Interesting and different….. Amazing try prit….? keep it up…..
      Love,
      ❤❤❤

      • chanpreet0815 on January 6, 2017 7:32 am

        Thank you so much. Maleeha. I Am trying to make it different.

        And guys I will post next part soon.

    14. shruti710 on January 6, 2017 10:23 am

      Wonderful yaar
      Post soon

      • chanpreet0815 on January 6, 2017 2:35 pm

        Thank u so much Shruti.????

    15. subhashini on January 6, 2017 12:46 pm

      Really superb dr i liked it very much…waiting for next one…good job prit?????

      • chanpreet0815 on January 6, 2017 2:32 pm

        Thank u so much subhashini.????

    16. Anjali333 on January 6, 2017 1:34 pm

      Wonderful story…..update next part soon

      • chanpreet0815 on January 6, 2017 2:34 pm

        Thank u so much Anjali.????

    17. chanpreet0815 on January 6, 2017 2:29 pm

      Thank u so much shruti.????

    18. priya9876 on January 6, 2017 5:25 pm

      Nice one??

    19. chanpreet0815 on January 6, 2017 6:13 pm

      Thank u so much. Priya??????
      I was waiting for it comment only.?

    20. Niki645 on January 6, 2017 6:52 pm

      Wow!!!!!! It’s really interesting!
      I loved it!!
      Post soon????

      • chanpreet0815 on January 7, 2017 7:33 am

        Thank u so much Nikki????

    21. Bhoomi on January 6, 2017 9:59 pm

      Wow.. Prit u r writing SS.. Nice chappy … Post soon Darling?

      • chanpreet0815 on January 7, 2017 7:35 am

        Thank u so much my dear Bhoomi. ??????

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