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Home»Fan Fiction»SPECIAL MOMENT OF LIFE.. RAGLAK..OS
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SPECIAL MOMENT OF LIFE.. RAGLAK..OS

HaripriyaBy HaripriyaSeptember 11, 201726 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi friends… Pray for our hero…
NAMISH TANEJA
Dedicated to our hero….we all like u a lot……

It starts with….
A boy tied to a pole…in a dark hut..which is in the center of forest near the lake….
@11:50pm..
B:why this happen to me alone…all my plan as flopped.. Tomorrow is going to be the worst day..
Suddenly… He hears a sound..of a girl
G:hey u just stop..even i am her..and many are here…
B:why just to blackmail police..they caught us..

G:ohhh god….do u like ur life that much..
B:yes..i have lots of goal…i want to love ..became a dancer.. Go out..enjoy… And see my special person…
G:thats it…u must have went a date right
B:yeh..many..and u

G:nooo…i am not that type…i don’t love anyone..my marriage is fixed..
B:then u have lived half life
G:no…we both didn’t even kiss
but iam going to die..and she start too cry…

But suddenly …her eyes..opened wied…and her hands was shevering..
Then after few minutes she struggled to breadth.. When someone opened the door.. She came to reality..that the boys whom she was talking… Has kissed her..
G:yeh u…don’t u..but stopped when she saw him..
B:ohh hello..i just fulfilled ur wish…
The lights were on…
It was revealed to be our raglak.
Both were staring …shared a beautiful eyelock..

They were disturbed by..a man..
M:everyone escape soon…
And untied the laksh rope…then he went..laksh untied raginis rope..and both started to run..out…both holding their hands…
After an hrs of running both stopped ..
R:i am so tired..

L:even me..but we have to…
R:plzz for some time..
L:kk..and saw shevering due to coolness..
Then he gave his jacket to her..both shared a eyelock..
Both sat near a tree…and slept…

Next day Morning
Laksk sleep was disturb by suns rays..he opened his eyes and saw..ragini..who was sleeping on his shoulder… Her hair was dancing in air…he went near her adjusted her hair…ragini opened her eyes and saw him close..
R:oye..what are u doing..
To cover up…
L:just seeing whether my jacket is safe…

R:uuuuu…..remove and gave his jacket…
Both started walking…
L:kk…sorry baba..
R:no i won’t talk to u…

L:srry please…
R:kk i forgive u but..u. Should lift me and walk for 1hr..
L:what…no…
R:then i won’t forgive u…
L’kk..i will..and lift her in a bridle way..and start walking..
L:how much is ur weight..
R:what… If u can’t leave me..by making cute pout…
L:kk…srry..

After some time….
R:kk leave me i forgive u…
L:really…
R:yeh..paka..
Then both walk..discussing.. Their likes…dislikes..
@2pm
And reached.. Highway.. And saw a dhaba..

R:i am so hungry…
L:even me..we both didn’t eat from morning..
Both went and ordered…then got phone and informed to their respective home..
Laksh return the phone… And ragini took water and washed her face….and saw laksh was staring her..
R:what..by raising her one eyebrow
L:nothing.. By..looking other side..
R:hmm…

Then both started having food…they were enjoying parota…
Then a man come…
M:something else sir..
L:nothing..

M:sir ask ur wife…
Both raglak saw eachother…and laghded….
Raglak..kk bhai ice cream…
M:let god bless u both to be like this forever…and went..
Both shared a beautiful eyelock….
M:sir..ice cream…

Then both started having ice cream..
Suddenly he started laughing…
R:what happen…
L:vo ….in ur lips…pointing.. Ice cream..
Ragini tried to clean…
L:that side..

R:here…and again tried..
L:their…then he himself cleaned with his hands… Went he touched both felt current passing through them….and shared a eyelock
…..which was disturbed by..both family…
Both family came and took..them…immediately.. Not even allowed them to say bye…
While living both shared a painful eyelock…
Both car moved in opposite directions…

@6
A party was held….all were enjoying…
Laksh pov…
Laksh….me one of the leading serial artist.. My birthday.. Both i don’t feel…any entu…but why…and closed his eyes….got raginis face…
What is this…am i missing her..but how …i don’t even her name…..and again closed his eye..but again got her face…and a smile formed in her face….
Yes i love her …..and started jumping…
Then his mom came…

M:laksh come soonnn….its very important..
L:yes maa
She took..him to hall and announced his marriage..relation… With a great business man..cum..his friend swara s father…
Laksh was broke… All were happy…

He went went out …and took his car and went out…started driving… And remember all his cute movements..

He went to sea shore and started crying..that Time a balloon…. Came near him…he took it and read….follow this balloons…
He started walking…. Then after certain distance… Balloons was not their…suddenly heared a voice..
G:this is for u my love….come forward
And light started oning..

When he stood in center…lamplight started flying up in the sky…and heard a sound and turned…
LOVE U LAKSH…
Was written in sky..and heard a love music… And a girl came wearing mask..in red maxy….
G:i love u laksh….i don’t know will u accept me or not..but i love u…u are my first and last crush….i don’t know why..how.. When..but started loving u….i will die for…u…i can do anything for u….and u r first…
Boy whom i dream about..
Talked…

Had cursh…
And kissed…loved..loving… Love…
Love u laksh….
My love reached peak…when i got ur alliance..

Even if u don’t accept… I am happy… Will live with ur memory… But not accept any one in my life…
WILL U MARRY ME LAKSH…

Laksh was stunned… And shocked…. But something strick him….”and kissed”…and thought.. The only person i kissed is her…but…he was seeing her in a questing way…
L:u…
By removing her mask……
R:i am ragini…ur fiancee….
Laksh was in cold nine…he was just staring her…
R:u don’t like me…her happiness dropped.. And turned to move…but laksh hold her wrist..
L:do u think u can leave me this easily.. After doing this mush..
Ragini was confused….
Laksh pulled and her and hugged her…

L:LOVE U TOO…RAGINI…
Both were hugging each other…
After some time they broke the hug…
L:but how did you arrange this….i myself don’t know i will come here..
R:i am ur biggest fan laksh…
L:ohhh..then everything was planned by..u…
R:yes…

L:so our kiss was planned..with a wrink..
R:no mn..was my unexpected incident…

L:then u don’t like it..
R:noo…its all my sweet moments.. Which i love to share with our kids….then stopped realizing what she said…
Laksh smiled at her…

She hug him…even he hugged her back..
R:i was the first to wish u…by kissing u…and last….u wish u….
HAPPY BIRTHDAY LAKSH…
Clock stock 12…he smilled at her and tight his grip…
L:this was my best birthday…. LOVE U RAGINI…

…SCREEN FREEZE….. ON RAGLAK HUGGING…

Plzzz comment guys…..

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    26 Comments

    1. Monisha on September 11, 2017 8:34 am

      Superbbbbbbbbbbbb

    2. shivu213 on September 11, 2017 10:08 am

      Suberb amazing lovely ??
      Happy birthday my love??

    3. Akankshanna on September 11, 2017 11:29 am

      super duper cutw

    4. Sherin on September 11, 2017 11:31 am

      Awesome dear

    5. Asw on September 11, 2017 11:58 am

      Nice

    6. teitokUn1718 on September 11, 2017 12:05 pm

      Superb dear…

    7. Arjuna on September 11, 2017 12:20 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    8. Elizebathlovely on September 11, 2017 12:53 pm

      Awesome

    9. aleeza on September 11, 2017 1:34 pm

      Awesome

    10. Vennila on September 11, 2017 3:02 pm

      Happy b’day Namish

    11. Thahseem on September 11, 2017 5:20 pm

      Very nice

    12. Soumya on September 11, 2017 6:02 pm

      Simply awesome di….post your ff soon

    13. Raglak_fan on September 11, 2017 8:18 pm

      Fabulous dear

    14. Malu on September 11, 2017 8:24 pm

      Amazing shot

    15. Follybraverl on September 11, 2017 8:38 pm

      Awesome

    16. Vini on September 11, 2017 9:16 pm

      Good one, keep writing

    17. IQRA222 on September 11, 2017 9:25 pm

      oh god!! hari di its so sweet!! totally loved this os it was a cute one!!

    18. Anju on September 11, 2017 9:54 pm

      Awesome update

    19. Pearly on September 12, 2017 9:55 am

      Superb

    20. Laashya on September 12, 2017 11:59 am

      Wonderful os di and happy wala birthday NAMIIIIIIIIIIIIII

    21. Ashly on September 12, 2017 12:26 pm

      Fantastic mind blowing amazing

    22. Monu on September 12, 2017 3:14 pm

      Interesting dear

    23. Jiyani on September 12, 2017 4:18 pm

      Amazing dear…..Loved it

    24. Aamy on September 12, 2017 4:26 pm

      Awesome

    25. Ammu on September 12, 2017 7:13 pm

      It’s simply cute os dear and loved it a lot. Raglak scenes are beautiful dear. Please write more more Raglak stories and also post next part of your Raglak story ASAP. Happy belated birthday wishes to my dear Laksh aka Namish Taneja. Love you dear and take care

    26. Monisha on September 12, 2017 8:48 pm

      Excellent dear

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