Hii soo all ready for my next maha episode??? Hope this maha episode will also been loved by you..
Scene shifts to airport ?
Thy reach airport and park thr cars ??.. Once u c Tanya tell me … I’ll go and propose her after that only u guys should come… Says Raj in a stern voice… Okay ? thn lets proceed.. Piya ko meine dekha toh main bhaag jaavungi… Uss samay thumne Tanya ko dekha toh javo aur propose karo.. Tanya ne mujhe ab tak delha nahi na.. So u proceed with ur proposal ?,Raj is tat okay ??? Raj replies not okay it’s fabulous… And runs and turns back and asks ,Piya kaun hai??? Dhaakshi answers Dhaani. Thy r waiting for for Tanya and Piya… Dhaani shouts Piya and runs towards her…. Piya sees Dhaani and runs towards her.. Thy hug each other …. Dhaani gives her a kiss ? Piya also kisses ? Dhaani.. And says Tans Bathroom Mein gayi hai… Mujhe patha hai aapka agla sawaal vo hi hoga.. Chal,Mein tumhe aapne dosthoon se millathi hoon…. Lekin Tans aab tak aayi nahi! Thy wait for Tans.. Viplav,Raj and pankaj are looking for Tanya
Piya and Dhaani r talking.. Piya says Di,mera freedom ka din khatham.. Dhaani says Piya tumko patha hai Jab Mein Indore aayi toh mujhe bhi asa hi laga tha.. Lekin patha nahi kyun or keise or kab Mein Indore se pyaar karne lagi.. Di,what is the name of ur friends? She answers Viplav,Raj and pankaj.. A girl with brown eyeball,long hair wearing mini shorts and top is shown.. Pankaj shouts Tanya thr… Raj in a stern voice says go! Pankaj winks @ Viplav and thy bth move forward to Tanya.. Raj shouts NT THR GO AND HIDE!! Raj with his bouquet ? of flowers moves on.. Piya says Tans thr.. Dhaani says Tanya and goes and hug her.. Raj was about to propose her bt gt surprised seeing Dhaani hugging Tanya… Dhaani sees Raj and via eyes ? Dhaani asks him is this ur Tanya.. Raj nods.. Via eyes ? Dhaani says thn go 4 it!! Viplav is taking video of all this and looks at them in a surprising manner… Pankaj looks at Viplav.. Tanya was abt to hug Raj.. Raj says wait Tanya Sharma! Tanya looks at Raj in a weird manner and says tum kab se mujhe Tanya Sharma bolna shuru Hua.. He continues would u like to change ur surname Tanya looks in a confused manner and asks kya?? Bhuddu tum mujhse shaandi karna chahithi Ho kya?? Viplav and Raj laughs..?? Viplav says Raj ne aachi tareek ke se propose kiya and zooms the camera ? Tanya looks Raj in a surprised manner and answers yes?!!! Oh.. So.. Surname change kar na mathlab okay.. Ya ya I wish to change the surname… Piya says ye hai tumahara Raj.. Tanya hugs Raj and says Feeling excited ? Viplav and Pankaj comes runing from thr hiding place.. Pankaj asks tum hum sab ko bhul gayi kya?? She answers no!! Btt to be honest yes,ti be honest.. Maine kabhi nahi soocha tha Ki ye bhuddhu mujhe propose kareiga.. Iss stupid ne toh kneels down bhi nahi ki? Viplav says he is not ur stupid he is ur soul mate ? and thinks something.. Dhaani says Bhuddhu weds Stupid and laughs ? Viplav asks Dhaani that how come she knw Tanya?? Dhaani answers that Tanya is piya’s bst friend.. Piya looks at Viplav and looks at Dhaani.. Ohh!! Piya ye hai Viplav,Raj and Pankaj…she shakes her hand ✋ with pankaj..and bth have an eye ? lock… Everyone giggles… Viplav whispers in Dhaani’s ear ? tumhari Behan committed hogayi.. Dhaani asks Viplav how Come Tanya and u became childhood friends?? Y can’t we questions Viplav.. Dhaani says no u told u and Tanya are childhood friends bt Tanya toh Piya Ki age Ki hai na!! Tat means nearly 2-3 years younger than us… So hw come u became frnds… I meant childhood friends???? He replies bachpann Mein Jo bhi hamara dosth hai unsab ko childhood friends kahetha hai… And smiles ? Tanya is Raj’s neighbour so we knw her.. Raj interrupts them and asks Pankaj and Piya’s Jodi pakka and that I think now Ur’s too and laughs… Vidha have an eye ? lock… Ishq ishq plays.. Mere ishq ka rang safed hai… Come lets proceed….. So Dhaakshi and Dhaani will go by thr car ? and itgrs patha hai na, toh chalo!!! Pankaj says tonight I have arranged a party.. U’LL join us na… Raj says Party ? kahaan party… Mujhko toh kuch bhi nahi patha.. Pankaj says surprise ? party ? in my dad’s hotel ? Piya tum zaroor aavogi na?? Mera mathlab tum log aavoge na?? Dhaani says ab toh aana hi padeiga… Varna Piya zid kareigi.. Viplav says then let’s goo.. Thy bid goodbye ? ? ? ? ? and leaves…
Soo Tanya and piya Ki mystery enclose Hua na!! Happy.. Hw’s the mystery… Loved..
Raj-Tanya Jodi aacha laga?
Hope so…
Donot forgt to pt the cmnts ?
Last bt not the least.. Srry for updating soo late.. I am not getting enough time for writing both my ff.. Soo I’m updating slowly.. Hope my sweet readers have no problems ?
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No problem di. Take your own time. Well episode was superb. Excited to know what’s next for us.
Thanksss lols?
Will certainly give you a super epi nxt ?
Will be waiting for it
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Good shwetha..
I hope you wont mind if i will correct you. You are still very young and have a loong time to learn and improve yourself..
Just write it with a bit more clarity.. Some things dont get clear.
And try using less hindi.. I know hindi but not all the readers.. Hai na??
Srry? clarity I didn’t got?
And thankss for correcting my mistakes…? mistakes are the best teachers ?
Thankss Arshi di?
Will try not to use Hindi nxt time.. Or will use Hindi less and for those necessary Hindi I will give subtitles too.. Soo it’s ok ? na!!
Crazy l?lovely ?sweet?shwetha u wrote well finally unveiled the mystery of tanya n pia ??we thought them to be same?? looks next episode would be fun as party n now 3 couples VIDHANI ? RAJYA? PANIA????????????????
Thanksss Renu di?
Haha.. Yaa will certainly try to mix comedy elements too?
Happy that u loved RAJYA Jodi ?
@shanatics, I find it difficult to understand bcos of too much hindi but nonetheless it’s okay. Well done
Thanks aish for cmnting here ?
Aftr sooo lng time you cmnts.. Thanks ?
Sorry ? for using Hindi.. Will not use frm next epi onwards and if usd will surely give subtitles?
Swetha it was soooo cute darling 🙂 .. Raj proposed tanya in a unique style hayee !! and vidhani eyelock + ishq ishq song was as usually lovely. keep rocking like this
And we don’t have any problem as we all understand ur busy schedule .. studies comes first dear
Thanks maha di ?
Happy that u understand my busy schedule ?
Hahah.. Maha di?
Soo u enjoyed the unique style of proposing of Raj.. Haina!! ?
Yeah of course swetha .. tha he itna mast enjoy tw banta tha?
very good episode sis ..as all are saying use less Hindi ..use English ..but use Hindi in some comedy parts .. don’t tensed ..okay .. all also said to use less Hindi in my ff also .. so be chill … be happy ..
from which airport rocket launches ?? 😛 😛 ..you said airport and gave the sign of rocket 😛 😛 .. haha. .keep it up .. and explain all the scenes clearly and slowly …
and again don’t think much ..mere ff ke first episode me kitna galthi tha pata hae Jo sablog point out kiya tha—-
1. used too much Hindi
2.very short
3.did not explain all scenes clearly
4.jumping to next scenes soon
5.rushing
6.little childish writing
7.can’t feel any pinch of horror which is very much needed in a horror story
so see ..that’s so many problem I tried to overcome .. and I overcame little also ..
see I gave too much lecture also today 😛 😛 .. bye bye .. study well 🙂 🙂
Thanks bhaia?
Okay bhaia.. Will surely try using Hindi less?
Surely take up my mistakes and correct it… Yup.. I knw the joy of that moment?
Soo many mistakes ? bt happy that u overcame all the problems and gave us the BST ff?
yes ..too much mistakes ..I became mad for correcting those … but after correction all appreciated it .. that happiness was awesome ..so correct all ..you will be very happy ..
aj itna bak bak kyu kar raha hu ..chalo jane do … :P. hahaha 😛 😛 😛 all the best sis 🙂
Nice one Swetha ? Finally we know that both are not the same …
But i thought Tanya loves Viplav and that she was like a negative character. But thank God she isnt a burden into ViDha’s life now ??
Thankss shruthy di ?
Yeah.. No worries vidha will always be in the safe zone?
Haaan better they are ???
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Ya.. Bth r nt same…
It was nice keep it up loved this one❤
Thanksss lucky girl ?