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Home»Fan Fiction»I am sorry baby……swasan SS….part 5 and a note of sorry to sanswa…
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I am sorry baby……swasan SS….part 5 and a note of sorry to sanswa…

SRSLBy SRSLNovember 17, 201650 Comments4 Mins Read
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Guys I know I am extending this a bit too much..so I have changed it from os to ss…

Note to Sanswa…..

sanswa I am really sorry if I have hurt you by my comment…I never meant to do it….I did not insult you but just had asked you to give warning before mature scenes….I am really very sorry…I never thought you would be so insulted….I am so damn sorry….please concentrate on your exams and get good marks…if you forgive me then do I have the right to call you dii…again…please forgive me.I an younger to you right….and I am new to telly updates so please take it as a mistake off a small child..

Sanskaar was doing happy dance…
If someone would have seen him in this condition people would surely declare him mental…

Sanskaar-bhagwaaaan.. I love you.I love you.I love you…

Suddenly swara comes inside and sees him dancing like a mentally unstable person…she was shocked…as soon as he saw Swara he immediately put a break and due to the sudden break he fell down ….

Sanskaar still sitting on the floor-swara what are you doing here…I was just cleaning the floor…and starts to pick the things which he had dropped out of excitement…

Swara-from today onwards you will stay here and do all the tests I am going to give you…

Sanskaar-ok???

Swara-come with me..

Sanskaar goes with her…she takes him to the kitchen….

In kitchen..

Sanskaar saw almost 70-90 dirty utensils lying there….

Sanskaar-got it got it…you want me to inspect the servants and cgech whether they are doing properly…. You don’t take tension when sanskaar is here………arre where are all the servants…

Swara-hello Mr…don’t think too much wash all these utensils after that I will give your next job..

Sanskaar who still can’t digest the fact-kyaaaaa..

Swara-haan…

Sanskaar-arre I haven’t seen the kitchen in my house properly…I don’t know any thing…

Swara-you want forgiveness…

Sanskaar-maaaa. ??????

Swara goes…sanskaar does not understand from which place will he start…

He starts washing all the utensils…

After 5 hours..

We can see a man coming fro the kitchen crawling on his knees ….

Man- water water….

Swara comes and gives him water…

He is non another than sanskaar…it looked like he just had his bath…he was fully wet….

Swara-you have 10 minutes rest after that resume your work…

Sanskar-10 minutes!!!!!!!!?????after 5 hours of work…

Swara nodes and goes….sanskaar rushes to take rest..

After 10 minutes…

Swara-sanskaar ji….you next job is to wash all our clothes…

Ssnskaar-baap re….

Swara starts giving him clothes one by one and tells him to go wash it….she gives him a huge bunch of clothes.and shows him the washing stone….

Sanskaar starts washing all the clothes…its clearly seen that he is tired…..Swara felt very bad seeing him in this condition….but then she couldn’t forgive him for what he did…

After 4hours he finishes the job…and starts hanging them for drying….after another hour…. He finishs the job.

Again he was given 10 minutes to rest..

Swara-now your next job is to clean the entire house…

Sanskaar-swara gave some mercy yaar…even I am a human being…

Swara-you want forgiveness…

Sanskaar-?????

Sanskaar cleans the entire house…..

Sanskaar-swara please if you have ever loved me then don’t give me more job…

Sanskaar had played on her main weakness….swara just goes from there quietly…

Sanskaar goes to his room and freshens up…

He then jumps onto his bed and sleeps within 10 seconds.

Swara goes to him and starts carresing his hair ..

Swara-sorry ji…I know I have given you very tough jobs…but then what you did with us is also not forgivable…. How can you ask me about my love for you….even if you try to kill me still I will continue loving you….

Swara comes there with some food and wakes him up…she gives it to him…he was sleepy but due to hunger he starts eating it like a poor child getting food after days….swara’s eyes starts welling up….

She runs from there and goes to her room and cries her heart out….

Swara-sorry but I can’t forgive you soon…but what if he us saying the truth…I will have to find out the truth…

Episode ends with the determined face of Swara…..

Thanks for your comments….sorry if the episode was boring.. I was really stressed out while writing this…

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    50 Comments

    1. jjjjjj on November 17, 2016 10:13 pm

      awesome dear plz post next post on today

      • SRSL on November 17, 2016 11:52 pm

        Thanks dear…

    2. Akhi vkapoor on November 17, 2016 10:13 pm

      It’s short update tag but it’s okk nice part and plz sujji is truth shops come infront of sanky dear

      • SRSL on November 17, 2016 11:57 pm

        Thanks dear…will try…

    3. Akhi vkapoor on November 17, 2016 10:13 pm

      It’s short update tag but it’s okk nice part and plz sujji is truth shops come infront of sanky dear and next part should be bigg

      • SRSL on November 17, 2016 11:57 pm

        Thanks..

    4. hemanshi on November 17, 2016 10:15 pm

      Awesome SRSL……

      Awesome one no words….

      Sanswa pls forgive her….choti cute bhen hai humari?????????haina
      …….

      • SRSL on November 17, 2016 11:58 pm

        Thanks hemu di….muahhh…

    5. Simi on November 17, 2016 10:16 pm

      Baap re..poor sanskar

      • SRSL on November 17, 2016 11:59 pm

        Thanks simi di…

    6. Arshaanya on November 17, 2016 10:17 pm

      Nyc…
      Its serious issue he needs to apologise n convince swara…. bt it was lukin little funny..
      Plz try not to make it funny… want it intense emotional

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 12:00 am

        Thanks dear…I know but I was just trying to make it look funny cause I was kind of fed up with all serious updates…

    7. Simin on November 17, 2016 10:21 pm

      Awesome
      He deserves this

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 12:01 am

        Thanks Simon di….

    8. SHAN on November 17, 2016 10:31 pm

      Awesome

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 12:01 am

        Thanks dear….

    9. anu on November 17, 2016 10:33 pm

      nice update nxt part soon

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 12:02 am

        Thanks dear…..

    10. Febi on November 17, 2016 10:43 pm

      Awesome

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 12:02 am

        Thanks…..

    11. Rakiba on November 17, 2016 11:02 pm

      Sooooo gddd

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 12:02 am

        Thanks dear..

    12. s on November 17, 2016 11:14 pm

      nice..

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 7:58 am

        Thanks dear…..

    13. SwaSanFan.Goldie on November 18, 2016 3:15 am

      Awsum..loved it.plz.continue soon n want some happy swasan scns too

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 7:59 am

        Thanks diii….

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 7:59 am

        Thanks diii…

    14. Arunika on November 18, 2016 7:01 am

      Awesome….update the next part asap!!!!

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 8:58 am

        Thanks dear…

    15. sweeta on November 18, 2016 8:10 am

      Great part

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 8:59 am

        Thanks….

    16. deeksha on November 18, 2016 9:15 am

      Awesome dear….!!!!!!

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 4:23 pm

        Thanks dear…

    17. Soujanya on November 18, 2016 10:04 am

      Awesome….?

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 4:24 pm

        Thanks soujanya…

    18. Chinna on November 18, 2016 10:08 am

      Nice

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 4:24 pm

        Thanks…

    19. chanu on November 18, 2016 11:17 am

      Hee heeee…
      I ws laughing like a mad..
      awwwww..
      my poor sanky!! :-*
      He did all da wrk.. great job dr…
      bt hw cm a single house hs 90 utensils!! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
      10 mins rest.. haww… poor him.. :-*
      Keep writing
      be happy always
      dnt took soo much stress dr!!

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 4:25 pm

        Thanks…frankly speaking even I have no idea how this many utensils came there…

      • chanu on November 18, 2016 9:06 pm

        Hee hee..
        lols..
        ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜€
        I think swara ask 4m neighbours!!
        ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜›

    20. vyshu10 on November 18, 2016 1:22 pm

      nice

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 4:26 pm

        Thanks….

    21. ShonaaMishra on November 18, 2016 1:38 pm

      awsum di continue soon

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 7:11 pm

        Thanks shonaa???

    22. SNY on November 18, 2016 4:36 pm

      Awesome di…
      Nxt one soon…

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 7:11 pm

        Thanks dear ???

    23. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on November 18, 2016 7:36 pm

      Tch tch tch, bechara sanky, you deserve it baby…it’s so funny… Loved it… Keep it up.. Waiting for nxt..
      Take care
      Keep smiling?

      • SRSL on November 18, 2016 11:43 pm

        Thanks dear….??

    24. tani on November 20, 2016 8:06 pm

      Wonderful

      • SRSL on November 20, 2016 8:19 pm

        Thanks…

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