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Home»Fan Fiction»Siya ke ram supernatural (part 5)
Fan Fiction Siya Ke Ram

Siya ke ram supernatural (part 5)

AmanBy AmanMarch 22, 20175 Comments4 Mins Read
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The way opens. They get happy.
They see a room only with walls from the four sides and no way ahead.
Shurpanakha – now you can’t save your daughter. This is my black magic. She laughs.
Lakshman – what is this, how can we go ahead, what to do now
Urmila – sumitranandan, we should find the way
Lakshman – only little time is left, we have to do something
Ram – god, save my brother and sister in law, they can finish their work
Vashishtha – don’t worry Ram, everything will be fine
Ram – yes, gurudev, you are right
The pair is searching for the way, they move here and there

He says – I can’t understand, from where we can go out
She says – god, plz help both of us to find the way soon otherwise we both will loose our powers and our daughter life is in danger
He says – we should use divy drishti, it may help to find the way
He closes his eyes and saw a way at the place in the room
He opens his eyes, we found the way
She says – where
He says – let’s come

They move
They both arrive at a place
He uses his powers and a door opens from the earth
She says – now I understand
He says – that’s why I say I am more intelligent
She says – no need, I know you
He says – it’s ok, we should move now
They move
They keep walking ahead, they saw a woman sitting in the dark
They come near, that is Shurpanakha
Shurpanakha sees them.
She says – so, you reach here but it’s too late, now you can’t do anything
Lakshman says – stop this, otherwise I will kill you
Shurpanakha – no, I will not stop, you can’t stop me
She attacks both of them
Both of them fail her powers with their powers
Shurpanakha cuts a rope

She says – so sorry, I cut the rope, now your daughter will die, what you will do now
Somada started flying in the room from one corner to another
Ram says – gurudev, what is this
Vashishtha says – I think, Shurpanakha has done something
Ram – what we do now
Bharat says – -gurudev, save our daughter
Mandavi says- gurudev, do something
Ram says – yes, gurudev do something
Vashishtha says – they should search for the pot, only 5 minutes are left
They pray
Lakshman says – how should we stop her
Urmila says – we should search for the pot

Lakshman says – you are right
They search for the pot
Lakshman uses his divy drishti and saw the pot
They both come at the place where the pot is
Lakshman got less attentive and was about to take the pot when Shurpanakha attacks her and push him aside
She was about to use her powers on him
Urmila takes the pot and breaks it
She falls down

Lakshman gets up
Urmila says – sumitranandan, are you fine
Lakshman says – yes I am fine and you
She says – yes I am fine
He was about to kill Shurpanakha but she stops her
Shurpanakha says – please forgive me, I will not do this again
Lakshman says – I will not leave you, I will kill you , you are a woman but tadaka was also a woman, she was not spared, how can you
Urmila says-swami, plz leave her, if we do the same, what she had done, there will be no difference

He agrees
They left the place and reach Ayodhya and hugged their daughter who is fine, the daughter of 4 brothers – Somada
The end.

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    5 Comments

    1. pragyashree on March 22, 2017 3:39 pm

      very nice bhai. A happy ending. Please keep writing and return soon with another one

    2. Jayani on March 22, 2017 5:03 pm

      Dat was an asum ending bhaiya… But sad dat it got over within 5 epis?… Pls cum back wid a new ff soon bhaiya…

      Jai Siya Ram

    3. arnasharma26 on March 23, 2017 10:44 am

      Lovely bhaiya…..i will miss u …..pls keep writing n come back soon !!!!

    4. arnasharma26 on March 23, 2017 10:48 am

      Lovely bhaiya ….it was so good n even at the time of distress laksh was saying that he is very intelligent…lol…..i will miss u …..pls keep writing n come back soon !!!!

    5. Padmaja on March 24, 2017 10:04 pm

      A happy and nice ending… a totally different plot Bhaiyaa.. I loved it.. and even in the time of tension Lakshman is proving his intelligence ????…. come back soon with your next ff..

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