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Home»Fan Fiction»A simple love story …A TS (shot-6)
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A simple love story …A TS (shot-6)

SairishBy SairishOctober 26, 201731 Comments4 Mins Read
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A mere thought of his liking me made me go mad . It couldn’t be true ..came as a second thought but he himself said so …
“huhh??..whatt??”
“yaa.. I mean you know I really love tiramisu and from the time I was 7 you have been making it for me..so I’m here to have it after a very long time. common make it na..I’m really hungry”he said
this shattered all of my dreams in a million pieces .
With a lot of disinterest i replied

“ohh..is that so..wait I’ll just prepare it in a bit”
HE sat on the dining chair while I was preparing the breakfast for we two . A not to serious problem was tickling me . My hairs which I had tied in a messy bun were coming out in small locks . It was irritating the hell out of me and was making it difficult for me to prepare the dough for tiramisu. For a fraction of second I saw him staring at me . I could be wrong,I’m not sure . but the moment our eyes lock though for a second he turned his head away.
awwee…he was feeling shy but his who knew his real feelings . I again concentrated on my dish.
We had quite a very comfortable breakfast together ,sharing each others instances that had happened in the past 20 years .
“amm…seriously Annika…you’rejust too awesome . I mean the breakfast was really delicious.”
HIS words made my face battle for a shade of Scarlett or rose .
I muttered a small thank you for my appreciation.
“by the way..what would you be doing today . Are you free?”
I was in a mood to have a bit fun
“well…that’s none of your business and May i know why do you want to know my schedule”
“to take you on a date” …
does he really mean his words or was just joking around . For minute i thought to say him yes and tell him that I was ready to go on a date with him . But to be on a safer side i plastered an expression of utmost shock on my face .
“whatt?? are you mad?..and by the way I’m busy today so I won’t be coming on a date with you”I said suppressing my smile with a wink
“heheh…very funny . firstly I’m not mad and secondly..I’m not going on any date with you..i just said it sarcastically”
“I know that..”…i said hiding my real feelings. “I’m going to temple today by the way so..I’m going to get ready. see you tomorrow”
without even listening to his reply I made my way for my room to get ready for the temple.
I wore another simple peach coloured anarkali for i favoured light colours.
After 30 minutes I came into hall and saw him sitting on the table. He didn’t went ?
“OY!..you’re here still”

“yaa..I’m accompanying you to the temple”
“really?”
“yes..now don’t argue and come with me”
without even hearing me he grabbed my hand and we made our way to his car.
the gentleman first offered me seat and then Sat himself .
we set off for our journey and admist the way he made an unusual move. he …..complemented me .
“waise…you look beautiful”
I instantly picked up a magazine and hid me face in it as it was all red due to heavy blushing.
I saw him grinning from the corner of my eyes and then again back to his driving.
▪▪▪▪▪▪▪▪▪
A big hello to the loveliest lot of people.
I guess this one was a bit boring .
I’m glad people came up with thier problems and shared with me . so..1st problem
1. I’ll try making the parts a bit longer. they may be short but I’ll be regular as studies are my priority as well and also cbse is too harsh on class 9 this year.
2. people asked me for shivaay’s pov.
for it i would like to say…
THODA SUSPENSE TO BANTA HAI NA!
please comment guys..
thanks for supporting me
much love
Sairish
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    31 Comments

    1. Niriha on October 26, 2017 8:38 am

      Awesome

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 12:38 am

        thanks niri di …
        next part posted might be publishing till morning
        LOVE
        Sairish

    2. fenil on October 26, 2017 10:42 am

      Awesome

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 12:39 am

        thanks a lot bhaiyyu. do read the next
        LOVE
        sissy

    3. alekhika20 on October 26, 2017 11:38 am

      Superb update

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 12:41 am

        thank you Alekhika di
        please read the next ..might be publishing till morning..have posted it
        love
        Sairish

    4. UF3355 on October 26, 2017 1:08 pm

      AWESOME EXCELLENT INTERESTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT SUPERB??????
      Take Care And Stay Safe?

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 12:42 am

        thanks a lot UF …really thankful
        lots of love
        Sairish

    5. VHM on October 26, 2017 4:08 pm

      Fab update once again…agree the shots are short…but can adjust and wait as STUDIES SHOULD BE THE PRIORITY….lovely write up…waiting for the next…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 12:44 am

        helllooo vhm di
        well…you’re too much for me .
        Seriously ..so understanding.
        yeahh…studies
        anyways …thanks you loads and love you tons
        Sairish here

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 1:01 am

        well…di..
        do read the next one.
        I have posted the 7th part and it’ll be publishing till morning early mrng though
        love you again
        Sairish here

    6. Ashwinee on October 26, 2017 5:39 pm

      super cute update sairish!!!

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 1:00 am

        hii ash di
        thank uuh for supporting me the way you do.
        please read the one too…ask me for link if you’re unable to find the 7th part
        lots of love
        Sairish here

    7. Aashi9 on October 26, 2017 6:29 pm

      Sweet update but you made a cliffhanger out of it ?? his slyness and the way he compliments ?? update soon

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 12:45 am

        Aashi di
        thanks a million times yaar..
        love the way you shower love on me
        do read next .
        Will be published by morning
        love
        Sairish

    8. Shivika on October 26, 2017 6:37 pm

      Awesome Update. Loved it ❤
      These 2 are just too adorable ?
      Can’t wait to read the nxt!
      BTW don’t worry Studies should always be your first priority 🙂

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 12:47 am

        rhea di
        thanks a lot genuinly
        means a lot to me
        do read the next . I have posted it
        might be publishing till morning
        love
        Sairish

    9. Hamna on October 26, 2017 7:25 pm

      That was just AWESOME ? waiting for the next one ?

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 12:48 am

        hamna aapi
        thank uuh sooo much
        well..I have posted the 7th part and it’ll be publishing till morning early mrng
        do read please
        love
        Sairish here

    10. Banita on October 26, 2017 9:32 pm

      Hii Sarish….
      I think for d first time I comment in this ff…. becz of my buzy shedul i couldnt comment here and Sorry for this yr…… BT read all d parts They r Superbbb….
      This one was Awesome dr….
      Waiting for next… Post soon….

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 12:50 am

        Banii di
        how’s you ??
        I missed you sooo much
        yepp..you’re commenting for the first time but nevermind ..
        I can completely understand.
        have posted the 7th part and it’ll be publishing till morning early mrng though
        do read
        love
        Sairish here

    11. SatyendraSharma on October 26, 2017 11:42 pm

      It was fabulous

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 12:52 am

        thank uhh ayushi di
        I have posted the 7th part and it’ll be publishing till morning early mrng
        do read
        love
        Sairish here

      • SatyendraSharma on October 28, 2017 11:45 am

        I will read and comment surely

    12. aaliya on October 27, 2017 1:17 am

      too good

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 12:54 am

        hello aaliya di
        well..firstly..thanks a lot for commenting.
        I’m soo glad you came up .
        well…if you liked it and want to read more from SOMETHING of my side .then the link is provided at the top of the chapter.
        and do read the next in please ..I’ll wait for your comment .
        I have posted the 7th part and it’ll be publishing till morning early mrng though.
        LOVE
        Sairish here

    13. prabha on October 27, 2017 4:24 pm

      awesome just read all in a go….keep going..

      • Sairish on October 28, 2017 12:58 am

        hello Prabha di
        firstly..thanks for COMMENTING.
        I’m soo happy you came up ..no longer a silent reader. please read the next one
        I have posted the 7th part and it’ll be publishing till morning early mrng though.
        keep supporting
        love
        Sairish here

    14. nikita_jai29 on October 28, 2017 12:20 pm

      It is lovely dear… Love you…

    15. qwerty123 on October 28, 2017 1:57 pm

      I saw ur 7th epi without without seeing 6th one so i got bit curiouse to know i went so back to see ur 6th epi

    16. Niyati on October 29, 2017 10:49 am

      Wow….amazing update sis….u nalied it seeetie….lots of love to u ??

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